Run: 2026-07-09-01KX414CHRX01FTBY3CWX1TSGJ

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.036150
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The standing stones did not look like a door. That was the first thing Aurora thought as she followed Isolde between two blackened oaks and into the hidden hollow beyond. They were only stones: five immense slabs thrust from the earth at crooked angles, their surfaces furred with moss and carved with grooves that might have been writing or claw marks. Rain had darkened the grass. Richmond Park lay somewhere behind them, ordinary and wet and full of dog walkers who would never notice a girl with black hair slipping through the bracken after a silver-haired woman who left no prints. Then the Heartstone pendant struck against Aurora’s sternum and turned hot. She caught it through her jacket. The crimson stone pulsed beneath her palm, a tiny second heartbeat. “Rory,” Nyx whispered from the shadow beneath the nearest stone. Their violet eyes hung in the darkness, faint and watchful. The rest of them was suggested rather than seen: shoulders too broad, limbs made of layered night, a head inclined toward the space between the stones. “I know,” she said. The air there shimmered. It was not a dramatic thing. No blaze of light, no yawning arch. Just a thin distortion, like heat above summer pavement, except the afternoon was cold enough to numb her fingers. Through it, Aurora saw a slice of somewhere else: amber brightness, a staircase ascending through red-leaved vines, and a sky the colour of honey held to fire. Isolde stopped before the shimmer. Her waist-length silver hair lay smooth over a pale green coat that seemed woven from leaves. She looked at Aurora with those lavender eyes, calm as frost. “The road that feeds may also be fed upon,” she said. Aurora drew a breath. “That is meant to be reassuring, is it?” “It is meant to be true.” “Wonderful.” The seer’s mouth barely moved, but Aurora suspected amusement. Isolde had brought them here after the pendant had begun warming every night at precisely two minutes past three, no matter where Aurora slept. First in her flat above Silas’s bar, then on delivery runs through rain-slick London streets, then even inside the Tube, where the heat had risen so sharply Aurora had nearly torn the chain from her neck. Dymas, Isolde had called the place beyond the stones. A realm in Hel. A place where hunger wore silk gloves and served itself on gold plates. Aurora had expected hell to have more fire. Nyx emerged from the stone’s shadow, becoming solid by degrees. Their form gathered itself from darkness until they stood over her, tall and angular, their silhouette wearing the rough outline of a long coat. There was no face beyond the two violet lights, but Aurora had learned the slight shifts of their head meant more than most people’s expressions. “The passage is recent,” Nyx said. Their voice seemed to come from the wind in the branches. “Its edges have not settled.” “Can it close behind us?” Aurora asked. “Yes.” She looked at them. Nyx’s violet eyes narrowed slightly. “That was not reassurance either.” “Noted.” She pulled the Fae-forged blade from the sheath inside her jacket. The slender moonsilver dagger was cold enough to sting her palm, its leaf-shaped edge catching no light from the grey English afternoon. Isolde had pressed it into her hand three nights ago and said, A gift is also a question. Aurora still did not know what answer was expected. She stepped toward the distortion. The world resisted. For one breath, every part of her seemed caught in separate places. Her boots remained in wet grass. Her lungs filled with air that smelled of woodsmoke and sugar. A violent pressure squeezed behind her eyes, and the scar on her left wrist prickled as if it had just been made. Then she stumbled forward onto warm stone. The grove vanished. Aurora straightened slowly. A courtyard spread before her, vast enough to swallow a cathedral. Its floor consisted of square tiles in shades of cream, rust, and dark wine, polished so brightly that she could see her own startled face reflected in them. Beyond its far edge rose terraces planted with orchards. Trees heavy with fruit marched up hills that could not possibly have fitted behind the standing stones: branches bearing plums the blue-black colour of bruises, pears of translucent green, oranges like miniature suns. Silver irrigation channels ran between them, carrying liquid that flashed gold under the amber sky. The sky itself had no sun. It glowed everywhere, a warm, endless amber vaulted above a range of distant purple mountains. Thin clouds drifted beneath it in pale strips, not casting shadows so much as changing the colour of the land beneath them. Aurora stood very still. A bell rang somewhere far away. The sound was low and rich. It rolled over the orchards, and the leaves trembled in answer. Nyx came through behind her, their edges smoking away from them in wisps of shadow. For a moment they looked less substantial here, not weaker exactly, but pulled taut. They turned toward the open sky. “This place presses,” they said. “On you?” “On all the spaces between things.” Isolde crossed the threshold last. The shimmer folded shut behind her with the small, neat sound of a page turning. Aurora spun. Where the way home had been, there stood only a wall of pale stone covered in flowering vines. “Isolde.” “The door has gone to sleep,” the seer said. “You said we were coming to find out why this thing keeps trying to cook me from the inside. You did not mention the door going to sleep.” “I mentioned that roads may be fed upon.” Aurora stared at her. Nyx placed one shadowed hand near Aurora’s shoulder without quite touching. “The way remains. It has simply… moved.” “That is somehow worse.” The pendant throbbed against her chest, warm but no longer burning. It pulled her attention toward a broad avenue leading away from the courtyard. At either side stood statues of enormous, fat-bodied figures reclining on couches, mouths open in expressions of ecstasy or agony. Grapes spilled from stone hands. One statue had seven arms. Another wore a crown of forks. At the avenue’s end, she could see roofs: copper domes, red tile, towers made of what looked like stacked porcelain bowls. Smoke curled from hundreds of chimneys, carrying scents that made her stomach tighten despite herself. Roasting garlic. Cinnamon. Charred meat. Fresh bread. Something sweet and floral, like honey mixed with roses. She had eaten before leaving London. Toast, two boiled eggs, and a banana she’d grabbed from the bowl in the bar’s kitchen. Yet the smell entered her like a hand. A hunger rose in her, immediate and precise. She wanted a bowl of thick stew with a crust of bread floating on top. She wanted butter melting into it. She wanted it so badly her mouth flooded. Aurora clenched her teeth. “Don’t breathe too deeply,” Isolde said. “That would have been useful advice thirty seconds ago.” “The fruit here remembers every mouth that has wanted it.” Isolde gestured toward the orchards. “And wants to be remembered in return.” A breeze moved through the nearest trees. The fruits knocked softly against one another. In that sound Aurora heard something almost like whispers. Mum used to make— Only a trick of the wind. It had to be. She forced her gaze away. A small animal darted across the courtyard tiles: something fox-shaped, but with two heads and a coat of iridescent blue feathers. It stopped in the middle of the avenue and looked at them with four black eyes. Then it opened both mouths and gave a child’s delighted laugh before vanishing into a hedge of glossy red leaves. Aurora could not help it. A laugh escaped her, thin with nerves. Nyx’s head turned toward her. “You find it amusing?” “It laughed.” “It has teeth.” “So do you.” Nyx went quiet. Then, in their whispering voice, “Fair.” They followed the avenue. The tiles gave off a gentle heat through Aurora’s boots. Along the way, she noticed details that made the place seem older than its glittering surfaces first suggested. The statues had cracks running through their bellies. Black roots had worked their way between the courtyard stones. At intervals, tall bronze braziers lined the path, each full not of flame but of glowing coals shaped like tiny human hearts. They beat in slow, uneven rhythms. Aurora did not ask. Ahead, an archway opened onto a market square. The city beyond had been built for appetites rather than people. Balconies bulged with flowering vines. Buildings leaned toward one another, their upper stories connected by bridges draped in banners. Every banner bore the same emblem: a black mouth open against a field of gold. The square should have been crowded. Stalls stood ready beneath awnings of striped silk, piled high with produce in impossible colours: spiralled cucumbers of violet and white, bundles of pale mushrooms that exhaled blue spores, fish with glass-clear flesh swimming in shallow dishes of water. One stall displayed cakes under crystal domes, each iced with the face of a sleeping child. But there were no merchants. No shoppers. Only the soft clatter of wooden signs swinging in the breeze and the distant sound of knives chopping in perfect, tireless rhythm. Chop. Chop. Chop. Aurora slowed. “This is Dymas?” she asked. “Yes,” Isolde said. “It feels abandoned.” “An empty plate is not an abandoned plate.” A shape moved in the window above the cake stall. Aurora’s hand closed around the dagger. At first she saw only a pale oval floating in darkness. Then the oval resolved into a face. A man, perhaps, pressed close to the glass. His cheeks were hollow enough to show the shape of his teeth beneath the skin. His lips moved soundlessly. He raised one hand. The window was too high for Aurora to see clearly, but his palm was flattened against the pane. A silver ring gleamed on one finger. Around his wrist, a chain ran upward into the dark. He pointed at her pendant. The Heartstone flared. Heat lanced through Aurora’s chest. She gasped and bent over. The crimson gem shone through her closed fingers, bright as a coal. The man in the window opened his mouth. This time she heard him. “Run,” he rasped. The market square erupted. Every awning snapped outward at once. Fruit burst from its baskets and struck the paving stones, not splattering but unfolding. Pomegranates opened into rows of wet teeth. The pale mushrooms leapt from their crates on dozens of rootlike legs. From every alley came the scrape of claws on stone. Nyx seized Aurora by the elbow, their hand cold and insubstantial around her sleeve. “Behind me.” The Fae blade was already in her other hand. Aurora straightened through the pain, staring at the alley mouths as shadows gathered there. From the nearest one came a scent of hot sugar and rot. Then something stepped into the amber light, smiling with far too many mouths.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1838
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"sharply"
2"slightly"
3"slowly"
4"very"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1838
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"porcelain"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"shimmered"
2"silk"
3"trembled"
4"throbbed"
5"porcelain"
6"stomach"
7"crystal"
8"perfect"
9"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1838
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1664
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora28
Isolde9
Park1
Heartstone2
Silas1
London2
Tube1
Hel1
Fae-forged1
English1
Fae2
Nyx9
Chop3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Heartstone"
3"Silas"
4"Nyx"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Tube"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.659
windowScore0.333
81.19% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences109
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed woven from leaves"
1"seemed caught in separate places"
2"looked like stacked porcelain bowls"
36.78% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.632
wordCount1838
matches
0"not weaker exactly, but pulled taut"
1"not of flame but of glowing coals shaped like tiny human hearts"
2"not splattering but unfolding"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs104
mean17.67
std20.62
cv1.167
sampleLengths
09
192
211
317
410
536
64
74
859
932
1011
1112
126
131
1469
1526
168
1759
1822
197
201
214
2210
231
2460
255
263
2751
287
293
303
3196
326
3337
344
356
3617
3735
385
392
406
4120
4220
431
449
4528
468
474
4818
494
94.69% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences166
matches
0"was suggested"
1"been made"
2"been built"
3"been crowded"
4"was flattened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs268
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences189
ratio0.005
matches
0"Mum used to make—"
93.46% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1674
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"enormous, fat-bodied figures"
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.04062126642771804
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.010752688172043012
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean9.72
std7.39
cv0.76
sampleLengths
09
121
231
35
435
511
66
711
810
910
1026
114
124
136
147
1519
1627
175
1816
1911
2011
214
228
236
241
259
2624
2736
289
294
3013
318
3210
3324
3425
356
3611
375
387
391
404
415
425
431
4411
4522
4618
479
485
493
59.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3862433862433862
totalSentences189
uniqueOpeners73
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences147
matches
0"Then the Heartstone pendant struck"
1"Just a thin distortion, like"
2"Then she stumbled forward onto"
3"Only a trick of the"
4"Then it opened both mouths"
5"Then, in their whispering voice,"
6"Only the soft clatter of"
7"Then the oval resolved into"
8"Then something stepped into the"
ratio0.061
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences147
matches
0"They were only stones: five"
1"She caught it through her"
2"Their violet eyes hung in"
3"It was not a dramatic"
4"Her waist-length silver hair lay"
5"She looked at Aurora with"
6"Their form gathered itself from"
7"Their voice seemed to come"
8"She looked at them."
9"She pulled the Fae-forged blade"
10"She stepped toward the distortion."
11"Her boots remained in wet"
12"Her lungs filled with air"
13"Its floor consisted of square"
14"It glowed everywhere, a warm,"
15"It rolled over the orchards,"
16"They turned toward the open"
17"It pulled her attention toward"
18"She had eaten before leaving"
19"She wanted a bowl of"
ratio0.218
79.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount112
totalSentences147
matches
0"The standing stones did not"
1"That was the first thing"
2"They were only stones: five"
3"Rain had darkened the grass."
4"Richmond Park lay somewhere behind"
5"She caught it through her"
6"The crimson stone pulsed beneath"
7"Nyx whispered from the shadow"
8"Their violet eyes hung in"
9"The rest of them was"
10"The air there shimmered."
11"It was not a dramatic"
12"Isolde stopped before the shimmer."
13"Her waist-length silver hair lay"
14"She looked at Aurora with"
15"Aurora drew a breath."
16"The seer’s mouth barely moved,"
17"Isolde had brought them here"
18"Dymas, Isolde had called the"
19"A realm in Hel."
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Richmond Park lay somewhere behind them, ordinary and wet and full of dog walkers who would never notice a girl with black hair slipping through the bracken aft…"
1"Her waist-length silver hair lay smooth over a pale green coat that seemed woven from leaves."
2"Her lungs filled with air that smelled of woodsmoke and sugar."
3"Trees heavy with fruit marched up hills that could not possibly have fitted behind the standing stones: branches bearing plums the blue-black colour of bruises,…"
4"Silver irrigation channels ran between them, carrying liquid that flashed gold under the amber sky."
5"Smoke curled from hundreds of chimneys, carrying scents that made her stomach tighten despite herself."
6"Along the way, she noticed details that made the place seem older than its glittering surfaces first suggested."
7"Stalls stood ready beneath awnings of striped silk, piled high with produce in impossible colours: spiralled cucumbers of violet and white, bundles of pale mush…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.056
86.3794%