Run: 2026-07-09-01KX4175R9BEQ1C1APX9T0Z0E2

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.113885
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The dead man sat upright in a wooden ticket booth, one hand curled around a fistful of obsolete Underground tokens and the other nailed to the counter with a silver letter opener. Detective Harlow Quinn stopped three paces inside the abandoned station and listened. Water ticked onto the tracks. Old electrical cables hummed behind flaking tiles, though the station had been cut from the grid since 1974. Somewhere beyond the curve of the southbound tunnel, a woman laughed, low and delighted, followed by the chime of glass. The air smelled of wet brick, hot metal, incense, and something animal. This was not an abandoned station. Not tonight. Canvas awnings crowded the disused platform beneath signs whose station name had been scraped away. Lanterns burned with green flames. Vendors watched from behind counters heaped with stoppered bottles, tarnished surgical tools, bundles of black feathers, and pale roots shaped like human fingers. Customers pressed back to let Quinn through, many hiding their faces beneath veils or hoods. One man turned sideways, and Quinn saw that his shadow continued walking for two steps before noticing and sliding back under his boots. No one looked surprised by the corpse. That bothered her almost as much as the corpse itself. Quinn checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 02:17. The second hand jumped, paused, then jumped backward. She tapped the glass. The hand resumed its proper direction. “Detective.” The uniformed constable waiting beside the ticket booth was young enough to regard composure as a performance. His face shone with sweat under the brim of his helmet. “Name,” Quinn said. “PC Bell, ma’am.” “Who secured the scene?” His gaze drifted over the crowded platform. “Secured might be overstating it.” “Who tried?” “I did.” At least he knew the difference. Quinn stepped closer to the booth. “How did you get in?” Bell held up a small yellowed disc between his gloved fingers. It might once have been ivory, but the central hole revealed a honeycomb structure no ivory possessed. Bone. “Found that in the alley above,” he said. “A woman gave it to me.” “What woman?” “Red hair. Glasses. She said she’d called it in.” As if summoned, Eva Kowalski emerged from between two awnings, hugging her worn leather satchel against her coat. Her curly red hair had swollen in the damp, and the green lanterns turned her freckled complexion faintly sickly. Round glasses flashed as she looked from Quinn to Bell. “You came,” Eva said. Quinn watched her approach. Five foot four, practical boots, ink on two fingers. No visible blood. No obvious weapon. Nervous enough to tuck a curl behind her left ear. “I tend to do that when someone reports a murder,” Quinn said. “You made the call?” “Yes.” “Then disappeared into the crowd.” “I was finding out who he was.” “That’s usually our job.” “You wouldn’t have got his real name.” Quinn let the silence tighten. Eva glanced at the body. “His name was Silas Venn. He sold maps.” “What kind?” “The kind that don’t show places.” Bell shifted. Quinn ignored him. “Did you know the victim?” she asked. “No.” “You identified him quickly for a stranger.” “People here knew him.” “And they spoke to you.” “Some did.” “Why?” Eva’s fingers tightened on the satchel strap. “Because they know me.” There were six answers hiding inside that one. Quinn filed them away. She turned to the booth. Silas Venn appeared to be in his late fifties, though the skin around his eyes had the translucent, waxy quality of extreme age. He wore a dark green velvet coat with brass buttons and a cream shirt stained red from a narrow wound beneath the breastbone. His grey hair lay neatly combed. His boots did not touch the floor. The letter opener pinned his left hand. Its handle bore the Metropolitan Police crest. Bell cleared his throat. “That’s why the chief superintendent wants this quiet.” “Has he seen it?” “Photograph only.” “And already reached a conclusion. Efficient.” Quinn crouched outside the booth. Military habits survived long after barracks, long after the uniform changed. Heels aligned. Weight balanced. She let her gaze move systematically: ceiling, walls, body, floor, thresholds, bystanders. One entrance to the booth, a half door latched from within. A narrow hatch in the rear wall opened onto a tiled service corridor. The hatch was too small for an adult. Dust filmed its sill without disturbance. Blood had run down Venn’s shirt, pooled at his waistband, and soaked into his trousers. None had reached the booth floor. Wrong. A chest wound that bled so generously should have dripped from the chair, unless the cloth had absorbed every drop. But his clothes were damp only in a straight vertical band. No spreading at the sides. No saturation beneath him. Quinn leaned closer. “Don’t touch him,” Eva said. Quinn looked up. Eva tucked another curl behind her left ear. “I mean, until you understand what killed him.” “A sharp object entered his chest.” “That’s what it wants you to think.” Bell took a small step away from the booth. Quinn stood. “You said you had another interpretation.” Eva opened her satchel and removed a small brass compass. Verdigris mottled its casing. Protective sigils had been etched so densely across its face that Quinn could barely make out the cardinal points. The black needle shivered, spun once, and pointed not at the corpse but toward the dark southbound tunnel. “What is that?” Bell asked. “A very bad sign,” Eva said. Quinn held out a hand. Eva hesitated, then passed it over. The brass felt warm. The needle quivered toward the tunnel, swung toward the corpse, and returned to the tunnel. “A compass,” Quinn said. “A Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. It points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal.” Bell gave a brittle laugh. “Of course it does.” Quinn rotated the compass. The needle held steady relative to the station. She had spent eighteen years listening to lies. Good lies came dressed as facts. Bad lies demanded attention. Eva’s claim was so extravagant that dismissing it would be easy, and easy conclusions had buried more cases than incompetence ever had. Three years ago, DS Morris had vanished from a locked warehouse while Quinn stood outside the only door. They had found his blood in a circle on the ceiling. No ladder. No footprints. No body. She had rejected every impossible explanation. The possible ones had not brought him home. Quinn handed the compass back. “If it points to a portal, why did it swing toward Venn?” Eva’s expression sharpened. “It did?” “Briefly.” “It shouldn’t.” “Yet it did.” Quinn faced the dead man again. The silver letter opener had passed through the palm into the counter. There was almost no blood around the wound. The victim’s fingers were curled, but not with the rigid tension expected from pain. More like a hand shaped around an absent object. She bent near it without touching. A thin crescent of green residue marked the inside of his thumb. Verdigris. “Your compass,” Quinn said. “How common is it?” “Not very.” “Could Venn have owned one?” “He dealt in routes and thresholds. I’d be surprised if he didn’t.” “Then it’s missing.” Eva stared at the empty curl of his right hand. Quinn studied the counter. Obsolete Tube tokens spilled from Venn’s fist. They bore station names: Aldwych, Down Street, Brompton Road. Closed stations. Some were stamped in Latin. One displayed no name at all, only the impression of an open eye. “Why nail his hand down?” Bell asked. “Punishment?” “Or theatre,” Quinn said. She took a penlight from her coat and angled it across the body. Under raking light, the blood on Venn’s shirt gleamed strangely. Too glossy at the edges. She leaned close enough to smell it. Iron, yes. But beneath that, bitter almonds and lamp oil. “Pig’s blood?” Bell offered. “Not unless the pig was varnished.” Eva crouched beside her. “Alchemical binder.” “You can tell by smell?” “I can tell by the way it’s sitting on the fibres. It hasn’t soaked in. Someone painted it on.” Quinn nodded. “After dressing him.” Bell swallowed. “So the chest wound—” “May not be the fatal wound.” Quinn directed the light beneath Venn’s jaw. There. A thin grey line circled his throat, nearly hidden under his collar. Not bruising. Not a ligature mark. It looked like ash pressed into the skin. Eva went still. “You recognise it,” Quinn said. “I’ve seen drawings.” “Of what?” “Threshold deaths.” “Plain English.” Eva pushed her glasses up with one knuckle. “There are stories about people being killed halfway through a crossing. Not physically halfway. Ontologically.” Bell stared at her. She sighed. “Part of them arrives. Part doesn’t.” Quinn examined Venn’s face. The waxy skin. The aged eyes. Boots suspended above the floor. She stepped to the side and looked through the ticket booth window at his profile. “Bell,” she said, “come here. Tell me what’s wrong with the chair.” Bell approached reluctantly. “Nothing, ma’am.” “Look at its legs.” The chair was a heavy oak thing. All four legs rested squarely on the floor. Venn sat upright on its seat, yet his weight made no impression in the cracked leather cushion. His coat touched it. His body did not. Bell whispered, “Jesus.” Quinn moved the penlight behind Venn’s back. A narrow gap showed between him and the chair, no wider than a coin. “He isn’t sitting,” she said. “He’s suspended.” Eva raised the Veil Compass. This time the needle swung hard toward Venn and trembled. The laughter in the tunnel stopped. One by one, nearby vendors began extinguishing their green lanterns. Quinn noticed the change at once. “Why are they closing?” “They’re not closing,” Eva said. “They’re getting out.” A bell rang somewhere deeper in the market. Not loud. Three soft notes. The crowd moved. No panic, no shouting. A hundred people simply abandoned conversations and purchases and flowed toward the stairs. A woman left a cage full of whispering moths on her counter. A tall figure in a butcher’s apron pulled a curtain over rows of bottled teeth and vanished through a door that had not been in the tiled wall a moment before. Quinn caught Bell’s arm before the retreating crowd swept him away. “Keep the entrance open.” “With what?” “The token.” He looked at the bone disc in his hand. “If the door closes,” Eva said, “we’ll be trapped until the next full moon.” Bell went pale and pushed toward the stairs. Quinn disliked separating from uniformed support, but Bell would have been little use if the station ceased to have an exit. She focused on the booth. “Three notes,” she said. “Meaning?” “Breach.” “From the tunnel?” “The Compass says yes.” “It also says Venn.” Eva stared at the needle. “Two rifts.” “No. One rift with two ends.” The conclusion settled into place with the hard click of a loaded magazine. Quinn pointed to the dead man’s suspended boots. “He wasn’t killed here. He was pushed through whatever is in that tunnel. The crossing failed, or someone interrupted it. This is the part of him that arrived.” Eva looked at the narrow grey ring around his throat. “And the rest?” “Still at the other end.” The old cables in the wall gave a sudden violent thrum. Dust sifted from the vaulted ceiling. Venn’s tokens began to chatter in his fist. Quinn stepped back. The corpse moved. Not much. Its right index finger tightened by a fraction. Then again. Eva sucked in a breath. “He’s not dead.” “No pulse, no respiration, suspended above a chair with painted blood on his shirt. I’m comfortable retaining ‘dead’ as a working description.” “No, look.” The dead man’s finger moved in short, stiff jerks. Tap. Pause. Tap-tap. Pause. Three taps. One. Four. Quinn watched the pattern repeat. “Numbers,” Eva whispered. “Letters.” Tap-tap-tap. Pause. Tap. Pause. Tap-tap-tap-tap. C. A. D. Again. C. A. D. “No,” Quinn said. “Not a word. Initials.” A gust roared out of the southbound tunnel. The station lights flared a poisonous green. Venn’s coat snapped against his body, though nothing else in the booth stirred. His fist opened. The old tokens fell onto the counter and arranged themselves in a neat line. Down Street. Aldwych. Down Street. Brompton Road. Aldwych. Down Street. Eva read the first letters. “D-A-D-B-A-D.” “Not first letters.” Quinn studied the tokens. Their dates differed. 1907. 1905. 1907. 1934. 1905. 1907. “Numbers repeat. Seven, five, seven, thirty-four, five, seven.” “Coordinates?” “Or a key.” The letter opener bore the police crest. Not an imitation; Quinn recognised the design, the nick below the shield, the black enamel grip. Presentation issue. Senior officers received them on retirement or commendation. Morris had owned one. Her stomach went cold. She reached toward it, stopping just shy of the handle. A hairline scratch ran along the silver, beside the engraved crest. Three letters, worn shallow by years of handling. C. A. D. “Quinn?” Eva said. Quinn did not answer. She knew those initials. Commander Alistair Drake. Morris’s mentor. Quinn’s former commanding officer. The man who had stood beside her at the memorial and said there were some cases a person had to let go. The evidence had been staged to look like a killing. The police weapon, the chest wound, the locked booth. Every obvious detail pointed inward, toward institutional revenge or corruption. But the body pointed elsewhere. Quinn looked past Venn into the booth. On the rear wall hung an old network map beneath cloudy glass. Most of the lines had faded, but six pinpricks had been scratched through the surface. She aligned them mentally with the dates on the tokens, treating the old years as station grid references rather than chronology. A route emerged. Down Street to Aldwych. Back to Down Street. Then south-west to Brompton Road. Not coordinates. Instructions. A journey through stations that were closed to the public. A journey beginning with a police-owned blade and ending beneath one of London’s sealed tunnels. The wind from the southbound tunnel carried a new smell: scorched wool and aftershave. Quinn knew it. Morris had worn the same cedar aftershave every day for nine years. She had mocked him for buying it by the case. Something scraped in the darkness. Eva seized Quinn’s sleeve. “We need to leave.” Quinn raised the penlight. Far down the tunnel, beyond the reach of its beam, a man coughed. Once. Twice. Morris had coughed like that when he wanted her attention without alerting a suspect. Her body moved before thought. One step toward the platform edge. Eva planted herself in front of her. Her green eyes looked enormous behind her glasses. “That isn’t him.” “You don’t know who it is.” “Neither do you.” The voice came from the tunnel, faint and frayed by distance. “Harlow.” No one had called her that in this station. Bell knew her as ma’am. Eva called her Detective or Quinn. The vendors had avoided her altogether. “Harlow,” the voice repeated. “Don’t let him close it.” The Compass needle slammed against its glass. Behind them, Silas Venn’s nailed hand tore upward. The silver letter opener remained embedded in the counter. His palm split around it without blood. His arm extended, rigid, and his finger pointed not toward the tunnel but toward the stairs. Toward the exit. Toward Bell. Quinn understood. The bone token had not been lying in an alley. Eva had given it to Bell. But someone had given one to Eva, or she could never have entered. Someone wanted police inside the Market. Someone had supplied a police weapon, arranged a body, and built a trail through the closed stations. The crime scene was not designed to conceal the killer. It was designed to recruit the investigator. “Who gave you your token?” Quinn asked. Eva’s face drained of colour. Before she could answer, Bell screamed from the stairwell. Quinn drew her pistol and ran.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences119
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.454
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2648
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
2"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2648
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"efficient"
count1
4
word"aligned"
count2
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"comfortable"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"silence"
2"velvet"
3"efficient"
4"aligned"
5"weight"
6"etched"
7"quivered"
8"tension"
9"trembled"
10"pulse"
11"comfortable"
12"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences312
matches
0"looked surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences312
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences404
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2648
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Before she could answer, Bell screamed from the stairwell."
31.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions168
wordCount2111
uniqueNames28
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Underground1
Harlow1
Quinn50
Eva30
Kowalski1
Bell20
Venn13
Metropolitan1
Police1
Morris5
Tube1
Aldwych4
Street6
Brompton3
Road3
Latin1
Veil1
Compass2
Tap-tap-tap2
Alistair1
Drake1
London1
Detective2
Silas2
Market1
One6
Three4
Pause4
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Bell"
5"Venn"
6"Morris"
7"Alistair"
8"Drake"
9"Silas"
10"One"
places
0"Aldwych"
1"Street"
2"Brompton"
3"Road"
4"Latin"
5"London"
6"Market"
globalScore0.316
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences151
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like ash pressed into the skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.755
wordCount2648
matches
0"not at the corpse but toward the dark southbound tunnel"
1"not toward the tunnel but toward the stairs"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences404
matches
0"saw that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs226
mean11.72
std13.23
cv1.129
sampleLengths
032
112
255
38
481
57
610
719
810
91
1028
113
123
134
1412
152
162
1717
1828
191
2014
212
229
2347
244
2529
2616
271
285
297
304
317
325
3313
342
356
365
377
381
397
404
415
422
431
4411
4512
4664
4714
4812
494
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences312
matches
0"been scraped"
1"been etched"
2"were curled"
3"were stamped"
4"been staged"
5"been scratched"
6"were closed"
7"was designed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs349
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences404
ratio0.002
matches
0"Not an imitation; Quinn recognised the design, the nick below the shield, the black enamel grip."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2119
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount67
adverbRatio0.03161868806040585
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.008022652194431336
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences404
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences404
mean6.55
std5.34
cv0.815
sampleLengths
032
112
25
318
420
512
66
72
815
95
1023
1115
1223
137
1410
1510
161
178
184
196
201
2117
2211
233
243
254
267
275
282
292
306
316
325
3311
3417
351
368
376
382
399
4018
4119
4210
434
444
459
463
473
4810
4912
50.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.33753148614609574
totalSentences397
uniqueOpeners134
74.40% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences224
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the curve of"
1"At least he knew the"
2"More like a hand shaped"
3"Too glossy at the edges."
4"Then south-west to Brompton Road."
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences224
matches
0"She tapped the glass."
1"His face shone with sweat"
2"His gaze drifted over the"
3"It might once have been"
4"Her curly red hair had"
5"She turned to the booth."
6"He wore a dark green"
7"His grey hair lay neatly"
8"His boots did not touch"
9"Its handle bore the Metropolitan"
10"She let her gaze move"
11"She had spent eighteen years"
12"They had found his blood"
13"She had rejected every impossible"
14"She bent near it without"
15"They bore station names: Aldwych,"
16"She took a penlight from"
17"She leaned close enough to"
18"It looked like ash pressed"
19"She stepped to the side"
ratio0.165
64.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount177
totalSentences224
matches
0"The dead man sat upright"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stopped three"
2"Water ticked onto the tracks."
3"The air smelled of wet"
4"This was not an abandoned"
5"Canvas awnings crowded the disused"
6"Lanterns burned with green flames."
7"Vendors watched from behind counters"
8"Customers pressed back to let"
9"That bothered her almost as"
10"Quinn checked the worn leather"
11"The second hand jumped, paused,"
12"She tapped the glass."
13"The hand resumed its proper"
14"The uniformed constable waiting beside"
15"His face shone with sweat"
16"His gaze drifted over the"
17"Quinn stepped closer to the"
18"Bell held up a small"
19"It might once have been"
ratio0.79
44.64% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences224
matches
0"As if summoned, Eva Kowalski"
1"Before she could answer, Bell"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences80
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"As if summoned, Eva Kowalski emerged from between two awnings, hugging her worn leather satchel against her coat."
1"A tall figure in a butcher’s apron pulled a curtain over rows of bottled teeth and vanished through a door that had not been in the tiled wall a moment before."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Bell whispered (whisper)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
2"the voice repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences119
tagDensity0.202
leniency0.403
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.05
90.8794%