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Run: 2026-07-09-01KX417JPPCX9EPCXRYEHH5V82
Run Details
Model:
GPT-5.6 Terra
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
30.1s
Cost:
$0.037340
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
70.24%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
65.08%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.38%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
35.76%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
30.30%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
91.5253%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The first deadbolt slid free
beneath Aurora’s fingers when Ptolemy launched himself at the door and snarled. Not his usual offended chirp.
A deep, torn sound from
a tabby who had spent years judging humanity from Eva’s sofa and had finally reached a verdict.
Aurora froze with her hand
on the second lock. “Ptolemy?”
The cat arched at her
ankles, every stripe along his spine sharp. Three bolts separated her from whoever stood in the narrow hall outside, and Eva’s rules had been clear since the first night Aurora slept here. Never open the door without asking. Aurora leaned towards the wood. “Who is it?” “Lucien Moreau.”
The name struck with the
clean force of a slap.
She kept her hand where
it was.
The flat seemed to shrink
around her, books stacked in unstable towers along the walls, loose pages crawling over the kitchen table, tea mugs crowded beside Eva’s magnifying lens.
The curry house below sent
up a warm tide of cumin and scorched onion.
It belonged to a normal
world, or close enough. Lucien never did. “What do you want?” “An invitation inside would be civil.” “You’ve never confused civility with effort.” A pause.
Then the soft tap of
ivory against the floorboards beyond the door. “Ah,” Lucien said. “There she is.”
Aurora shut her eyes for
one breath.
She had left him in
a warehouse beside the Lea with blood on his white cuff and a lie lodged between them like a blade.
He had watched her walk
away. He had not followed. Six weeks of
silence
had taught her that absence could have teeth. “Go away.” “I would adore that option.”
Something scraped against the outer
door. Not Lucien’s cane. This had
weight
. Claws, perhaps.
The sound travelled through the
locks and into her palm. Ptolemy hissed. Lucien’s voice lost its
silk
. “Open the door, Rory.” “No.” “Then they will open it for us.” The third deadbolt came free. Aurora yanked the chain across,
flicked
the latch, and pulled the door back two inches. Lucien filled the gap in charcoal wool and pale hair.
His tailored suit had seen
better rooms than this stairwell, but it carried dark smears across one shoulder. Blood, she thought. Not much, yet.
His platinum hair had loosened
from its sleek line, a single strand lying against his brow. One eye burned amber. The other gave nothing back.
His cane stood braced in
his left hand.
His right hand pressed flat
against his ribs. Aurora saw the blood under his fingers.
Then she saw the thin
red line painted along the wall behind him. “Your blood?” “No.” “Comforting.” “Not meant to be.” A shadow pooled at the far end of the hall, thick as spilled ink.
It climbed the wallpaper in
tendrils. The light over the stairs
fluttered
. One moment the corridor lay empty. The next, a thing unfolded from the black.
It had a man’s height
and too many joints.
Its head bowed beneath the
low ceiling, skin stretched grey over a narrow skull.
Its mouth opened down the
centre of its face. Ptolemy hurled himself against Aurora’s shin. “Chain,” Lucien said. Aurora did not need the order twice.
She slammed the door, shot
the bolts home, and heard claws rake the other side. The frame shuddered. Lucien stepped past her without waiting for permission.
He hooked the ivory handle
of his cane against the door and twisted. A narrow blade slid free with a bright
whisper
. “Eva has wards.” “Eva has academic wards. Admirable penmanship, dreadful survival rate.” “Don’t insult her spellwork in her own flat.” “I am complimenting its optimism.” Another blow hit the door. Books fell from a shelf. Ptolemy fled beneath the sofa, his tail a furious bottle brush. Aurora backed from the entrance, eyes on Lucien.
He moved with the polished
control she remembered, even while blood darkened the side of his suit. The blade looked delicate in his hand, almost ornamental.
It had opened a hellhound’s
throat once.
She had watched him clean
it with a linen handkerchief after. “What followed you?” “Something called a husk.” “That explains nothing.” “It wears the shape of whatever it devours.” The door buckled inward. Aurora snatched a brass paperweight from Eva’s desk. A useless weapon, but the
weight
steadied her grip. Lucien noticed. One corner of his mouth moved. “You still pick up the nearest object and announce war.” “You still arrive bleeding and act as if it’s an inconvenience to your tailoring.” The husk slammed against the door again. The chain groaned. Lucien’s gaze sharpened. “You have not changed.” “Neither have you. You didn’t answer the question.” “I offended people.” “Your usual hobby.” “This time, they sent a collector.” Aurora held his stare. “Who?” “The House of Vey.” The name left a sour taste in her mouth.
Even Eva spoke it in
a lower voice. The House dealt in favours, curses, secrets, and people who had signed the wrong paper in the wrong room. Lucien knew their ledgers better than anyone in London. “You worked for them.” “I brokered information.” “You sold information.” “A distinction with legal significance.” “Not if the person buying it uses it to put a knife in someone.” Lucien looked at the door rather than at her. The movement was small, but it exposed the sharp angle of his cheekbone.
His fingers tightened around the
cane blade. “You’re correct.” The reply robbed her of the next insult. A crack split through the lock plate. The third bolt flew free and clattered across the floor. Lucien raised his blade. “No,” Aurora snapped.
His black eye flicked to
hers. “Don’t start cutting things open in Eva’s hall.” “Rory, my dear, it is already cutting its way in.” She crossed to the kitchen counter, shoved aside a heap of photocopied manuscripts, and found the packet of salt Eva kept beside the kettle. Sea salt, black pepper, and something that
smelled like burnt rosemary
. Aurora had asked once. Eva had said it made unwanted things regret their choices. “Buy me ten seconds.” “I can offer seven.” “Then stop talking.” Aurora tore open the packet and ran to the doorway. She scattered a thick line across the floor, over the threshold, and along the cracked wood. Her left wrist burned where grains caught in the crescent scar. The husk struck the door. The chain snapped. The door burst inward, banging against the wall hard enough to tear a framed print from its hook. The creature spilled through the gap in a rush of cold rot. It crossed the threshold and hit the salt. Smoke curled from its long feet. Its skin blistered. The mouth in its face widened. Lucien moved first. His blade flashed up beneath its jaw. Black fluid splashed across the cream wallpaper, and the husk folded in a way bones should not allow. It seized his wrist. Lucien’s amber eye flared. The room stank of iron and singed sugar. Aurora grabbed the fallen print, smashed its glass against the counter, and drove the jagged frame into the creature’s shoulder. It turned towards her. For an instant, the blank grey face shifted. Evan’s mouth appeared on it. Not his whole face.
Only that mouth, pale lips
curved in the cruel half-smile Aurora knew too well. You always make such a mess, Rory. Her hand locked around the frame. The husk lunged. Lucien rammed it sideways into the wall. Plaster burst. He drove the thin blade down through its throat, once, twice, then a third time with enough force to punch through the creature and sink into the skirting board. The husk shrieked through Evan’s borrowed mouth. Lucien leaned close to it. His voice stayed calm, almost courteous. “You chose the wrong memory.” The thing clawed at him. He caught its wrist, and the human shape split beneath his grip. Shadows poured from the wound, writhing over the floor towards Aurora’s bare feet. She stamped through the salt line, grabbed the kettle, and flung the boiling water across them. The shadows screamed. So did Lucien. The husk collapsed into a pile of steaming black ash. Its smell clung to the back of her throat, rancid and sweet. Lucien staggered away from the wall, his right sleeve soaked through. Water had splashed his hand. Red welts climbed his knuckles where human skin met something else. Aurora stared at him. “You’re hurt.” “Yes.” “You said it wasn’t your blood.” “It wasn’t, at the time.” He pulled his blade free from the skirting board. Black residue hissed along the metal before vanishing. The front door hung crooked on one hinge. A cold draught crept through the hall. Ptolemy poked his head from under the sofa, saw Lucien, and resumed hissing. Aurora’s
pulse
hammered in her ears. She set the empty kettle down before she dropped it. “You brought that here.” “I led it away from your building for three streets.” “And then?” “And then it acquired an interest in your name.” Her head snapped up. “How?” Lucien’s expression changed. Not enough for a stranger to notice. Aurora had spent too many nights studying every controlled shift in that beautiful, guarded face. His jaw set. His gaze went distant for half a heartbeat, as if he had already weighed the lie and found it elegant. She moved closer. “Lucien.” “I found a ledger.” “What ledger?” “Vey’s private accounts. Payments, names, old claims. Things they prefer to bury under more fashionable crimes.” “And my name was in it.” “No.” The answer came too fast. Aurora laughed once, without humour. “That was poor.” “Your name was absent. Your mother’s maiden name was not.” The floor tilted beneath her. “Ellis?” “A file marked Jennifer Ellis. Cardiff. Twenty-three years ago.” He reached inside his jacket with his uninjured hand and withdrew a folded square of thick cream paper. Its edge bore a wax seal, dark red and stamped with a symbol like an open eye. “Vey dispatched the husk after the file disappeared.” Aurora did not take it. “My mother was a teacher.” “Your mother had a life before you learned her handwriting.” “That’s not an answer.” “No. It is the beginning of one.” His words landed with infuriating care. Lucien always spoke as if language were a locked room and he held every key.
Once, Aurora had liked that
about him.
Once, she had mistaken the
thrill of being let in for safety. She snatched the paper from his hand. The seal felt warm. “What does it say?” “I cannot read it.” “You read four languages.” “I read four human languages.” Her
eyes narrowed
. “And the other ones?” “Those tend to read the speaker first.” Something moved beneath the wax. Aurora dropped the paper on the kitchen table. The seal cracked with a wet pop. Ink crawled across the page, arranging itself into narrow, hooked lines. She watched it form,
stomach
tightening. Then the message changed. The letters straightened into English. COME HOME, MALPHORA. The lights died. From the broken doorway, a woman’s voice drifted up the stairwell, soft enough to sound intimate. “Aurora Carter,” it called. “Open the door.”
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response_cache_source_id
(null)
data_region
"global"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
80
tagDensity
0.063
leniency
0.125
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1848
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
70.24%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1848
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"weight"
count
2
2
word
"silk"
count
1
3
word
"flicked"
count
2
4
word
"comforting"
count
1
5
word
"fluttered"
count
1
6
word
"whisper"
count
1
7
word
"pulse"
count
1
8
word
"stomach"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"weight"
2
"silk"
3
"flicked"
4
"comforting"
5
"fluttered"
6
"whisper"
7
"pulse"
8
"stomach"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
174
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
174
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
249
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
29
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1848
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
13
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
65.08%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
69
wordCount
1472
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.7
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora
25
Ptolemy
5
Eva
7
Lea
1
Lucien
22
House
1
London
1
Rory
1
Evan
2
English
1
One
3
persons
0
"Aurora"
1
"Ptolemy"
2
"Eva"
3
"Lea"
4
"Lucien"
5
"House"
6
"Rory"
7
"Evan"
places
0
"London"
1
"English"
2
"One"
globalScore
0.651
windowScore
0.667
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
113
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"smelled like burnt rosemary"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1848
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
249
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
158
mean
11.7
std
13.38
cv
1.144
sampleLengths
0
17
1
27
2
9
3
1
4
37
5
6
6
5
7
3
8
2
9
10
10
62
11
4
12
6
13
6
14
14
15
6
16
42
17
12
18
2
19
5
20
24
21
2
22
5
23
4
24
1
25
7
26
20
27
59
28
16
29
7
30
13
31
2
32
1
33
1
34
4
35
40
36
32
37
6
38
3
39
22
40
3
41
30
42
3
43
9
44
8
45
5
46
21
47
52
48
3
49
4
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
174
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
244
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
249
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1473
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
41
adverbRatio
0.027834351663272233
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.002036659877800407
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
249
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
249
mean
7.42
std
5.25
cv
0.707
sampleLengths
0
17
1
5
2
22
3
9
4
1
5
12
6
25
7
6
8
5
9
3
10
2
11
10
12
7
13
29
14
14
15
9
16
3
17
4
18
6
19
6
20
2
21
12
22
3
23
3
24
7
25
25
26
6
27
4
28
12
29
2
30
5
31
6
32
3
33
3
34
2
35
10
36
2
37
5
38
4
39
1
40
7
41
5
42
15
43
10
44
18
45
3
46
3
47
16
48
4
49
5
44.38%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
14
diversityRatio
0.26104417670682734
totalSentences
249
uniqueOpeners
65
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
6
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"Then the soft tap of"
1
"Then she saw the thin"
2
"Only that mouth, pale lips"
3
"Once, Aurora had liked that"
4
"Once, she had mistaken the"
5
"Then the message changed."
ratio
0.036
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
47
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"She kept her hand where"
1
"It belonged to a normal"
2
"She had left him in"
3
"He had watched her walk"
4
"He had not followed."
5
"His tailored suit had seen"
6
"His platinum hair had loosened"
7
"His cane stood braced in"
8
"His right hand pressed flat"
9
"It climbed the wallpaper in"
10
"It had a man’s height"
11
"Its head bowed beneath the"
12
"Its mouth opened down the"
13
"She slammed the door, shot"
14
"He hooked the ivory handle"
15
"He moved with the polished"
16
"It had opened a hellhound’s"
17
"She had watched him clean"
18
"His fingers tightened around the"
19
"His black eye flicked to"
ratio
0.285
35.76%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
140
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"The first deadbolt slid free"
1
"A deep, torn sound from"
2
"Aurora froze with her hand"
3
"The cat arched at her"
4
"Aurora leaned towards the wood."
5
"The name struck with the"
6
"She kept her hand where"
7
"The flat seemed to shrink"
8
"The curry house below sent"
9
"It belonged to a normal"
10
"Lucien never did."
11
"Aurora shut her eyes for"
12
"She had left him in"
13
"He had watched her walk"
14
"He had not followed."
15
"Something scraped against the outer"
16
"This had weight."
17
"The sound travelled through the"
18
"Lucien’s voice lost its silk."
19
"The third deadbolt came free."
ratio
0.848
30.30%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
165
matches
0
"Even Eva spoke it in"
ratio
0.006
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
54
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Sea salt, black pepper, and something that smelled like burnt rosemary."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
5
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Aurora snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences
80
tagDensity
0.05
leniency
0.1
rawRatio
0.25
effectiveRatio
0.025
91.5253%