Run: 2026-07-09-01KX419VWHE7XKY77EK8Q34XAW

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.044603
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt scraped back. Then the second. Then the third. Aurora opened the door with one hand wrapped around the chain, her other gripping the steak knife she had taken from Eva’s kitchen drawer. Ptolemy pressed against her bare ankle, a striped lump of outrage. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing beneath the weak yellow bulb, rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit. His platinum hair had lost its careful sweep. One strand hung across his forehead. His ivory-handled cane rested against the stair rail, and his face held none of its usual polished amusement. Aurora left the chain where it was. “You had better be dying.” Lucien looked at the knife, then at her face. “Bonjour to you too, Rory.” “Don’t call me that.” “You opened the door.” “I opened it enough to see whose teeth I was about to knock down your throat.” The smell of wet pavement and old cooking oil drifted up from the curry house below. Somewhere on Brick Lane, a bottle smashed. Ptolemy gave a low, suspicious growl at Lucien’s shoes. Lucien bent, his amber eye catching the light while the black one swallowed it. “Your cat remembered me.” “My cat had better standards.” “That hurt.” “Good.” His mouth almost moved into a smile. It died before it formed. Aurora noticed the blood then. It had soaked through the left side of his jacket beneath the ribs, black against charcoal, and dripped from his fingertips onto Eva’s frayed welcome mat. She tightened her grip on the knife. “Who did that?” “People with poor manners.” “Lucien.” “The answer changed nothing.” “It changed whether I shut this door in your face.” “You would not.” Her jaw clenched. He leaned a little more weight onto his cane. Not a performance. His knuckles had gone pale around the ivory handle. “Fine,” he muttered. “A hunter from Whitechapel. He carried iron rounds and a crucifix big enough to sink a fishing boat.” “Why were you near Whitechapel?” “I was leaving a meeting.” “That was not an answer.” “It was the only one I had prepared.” Aurora stared at him through the narrow gap. Four months had passed since she had watched him walk from Silas’s bar without turning around. Four months since he had placed an envelope on the counter, full of information about Evan and the men Evan had paid to find her. Four months since Lucien had told her, in that cool Marseille voice, that he had made a bargain behind her back. For her protection. As though protection had not been the word every controlling man in her life used before he closed a hand around her throat. Rainwater ran from Lucien’s sleeve and formed a dark line between the cracks in the landing tiles. “You knew I was here,” Aurora said. “I knew Eva was here.” “Eva’s in Leeds.” “Yes.” “And you came anyway.” His mismatched eyes held hers. No flirtation. No smoke and mirrors. Just pain, and something worse beneath it. “I had nowhere else that would let me in.” “You had your club.” “They followed me there.” “Silas.” “They followed Silas too.” Her fingers tightened around the knife handle. “Followed you?” Lucien looked down the stairwell. His head tilted, listening. Aurora heard nothing except the pipes knocking inside the walls. “May I come in?” he asked. The question struck harder than it should have. Lucien never asked for anything. He traded. He bargained. He placed choices in front of people until they picked the one he wanted. Aurora closed the door. Lucien’s face went still. Then she slid the chain free, yanked all three deadbolts open, and stepped aside. “Bleed on Eva’s floor and she’ll haunt you while she’s still alive.” He entered with a limp he had failed to show on the landing. Ptolemy shot beneath the kitchen table, fur puffed along his spine. Lucien closed the door with care, then turned the locks one by one. Aurora watched his hands. Long fingers. Blood under the nails. A thin tremor ran through his wrist before he tucked it into his sleeve. “You knew the locks,” she said. “Eva showed me.” “When?” “Last autumn.” “You came here last autumn?” “You were asleep upstairs.” The knife pointed at his chest before she thought about it. Lucien raised both hands. “I did not come in. Eva and I spoke on the landing.” “About me.” “Yes.” “Of course you did.” “She wanted to know why you had begun checking every mirror in the flat before bed.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “And what did you tell her?” “The truth.” She laughed once. It came out sharp. “You did not know the truth if it had climbed into your lap.” “I told her you had lived through someone who made danger feel ordinary.” The room seemed smaller. Books crowded the shelves, stacked in leaning towers beside rolled maps and open notebooks. Eva had pinned scraps of paper across one wall with red thread weaving between them. The kettle sat cold beside a pile of takeaway menus. Aurora had slept on the sofa the night before, unable to bear the quiet of her own flat above Silas’s bar. Lucien’s blood pattered onto the floorboards. Aurora pointed the knife towards the kitchen chair. “Sit.” “Commanding.” “Sit before you collapse and ruin the rug.” “It is an ugly rug.” “It was a gift from Eva’s aunt.” “Then it has survived enough.” He lowered himself into the chair. His cane leaned against his knee. His face had lost colour beneath the faint bronze of his skin. Aurora set the knife on the counter, keeping it within reach. She dragged the first-aid tin from beneath the sink and shoved a heap of books off the table. “Take off your jacket.” Lucien looked at her. “Rory—” “Do not make me ask twice.” His mouth pressed into a line. He eased the jacket from his shoulders. The shirt beneath had been cut open from his side to his hip. Blood had soaked the white fabric and turned it pink at the edges. The wound itself ran between his ribs, a narrow black slash that smoked faintly. Aurora stopped. “That was not a bullet.” “No.” “Iron rounds do not make wounds smoke.” “The crucifix did the decorative work.” “Take the shirt off.” “Your bedside manner remained charming.” She stepped closer and seized the buttons herself. Her fingers worked fast, stripping the shirt open. His chest rose beneath her hands. Old scars crossed his skin: pale lines, puckered burns, one round scar near his collarbone. She knew some of them. Not their stories, but their shapes. Once, on a night that had started with whiskey and ended with both of them pressed against the wall outside Silas’s office, she had traced the scar over his heart with her thumb. He had caught her hand and kissed the inside of her wrist, directly over the crescent scar Evan had once called ugly. Aurora pulled her hand back. Lucien watched her. “You should clean it,” he said. “I know.” She poured antiseptic into a bowl, grabbed gauze, and knelt beside him. The flat smelled of sharp alcohol, rain, and the citrus cologne that clung to Lucien even beneath blood. He hissed when she pressed the gauze to the wound. “Hold still.” “I am holding still.” “You are crushing the chair.” “The chair had a weak spirit.” “Talk less.” “I came here to talk.” “You came here to drip demon blood on Eva’s furniture.” His black eye shifted towards the window. The amber one stayed on her. “They knew you were at Silas’s.” Aurora paused. “What?” “The hunter had a photograph.” The gauze slipped in her hand. Lucien reached for her wrist. His fingers closed around it before he seemed to remember himself. He released her at once. “A photograph from Golden Empress,” he continued. “You stood by the delivery bikes. Yu-Fei was in the doorway.” Cold spread through Aurora’s chest. “You saw it?” “I took it from his pocket after he stopped breathing.” “You killed him.” “He had iron in his veins and a blade in my side. I did not send him home with flowers.” Aurora stood so quickly the bowl rattled against the table. “What else was on him?” “A name.” “Whose?” “Evan’s.” The room fell silent except for Ptolemy’s claws ticking across the floor. The cat had emerged from under the table and now sat beside the hall doorway, staring at Lucien with the hatred of a tiny landlord. Aurora turned to the counter. Her hands shook as she reached for the bandages. “Evan did not know about this world.” “No,” Lucien replied. “But someone knew him.” “He’s in Cardiff.” “He was in Cardiff.” She swung around. Lucien’s expression did not change, but his grip tightened on the edge of the chair. “I had someone check after I found the photograph. His flat was empty. His phone was gone. His car was abandoned near the M4.” “You had someone check.” “Yes.” “You did not call me.” “I came here.” “You could have called.” “Your phone was off.” “I turned it off because I did not want to hear from you.” “I understood that.” “No, you did not.” Aurora threw the bandage roll onto the table. “You never understood it. You decided what I needed. You made deals with people I did not know. You put a demon’s mark on my door without telling me, and when I asked why, you looked at me as though I should thank you.” Lucien stared at the blood on his palm. “I did not expect thanks.” “You expected me to accept it.” “I expected you to remain alive.” “You do not get to use Evan to win this argument.” His face snapped up. “I would never use him against you.” “Then do not stand in Eva’s kitchen and tell me you harmed people for my sake as if that made it noble.” For a moment, he looked less like the man who ran half the supernatural back rooms in London and more like someone caught without a weapon. “I did not come for forgiveness,” he said. “Why did you come?” He looked towards the locked door. “Because the person who hired that hunter had your photograph, your workplace, and an old address in Cardiff. Because he believed you mattered to me.” Aurora’s breath caught. Lucien continued before she could speak. “He was correct.” His words sat between them, plain and unprotected. She looked down at the wound in his side. Blood still seeped through the gauze. She had wanted him to say something like that for months. Not tonight. Not while fear crawled through the cracks of Eva’s flat and Evan’s name sat on the table like a loaded gun. “You should have told me,” she said. “I should have.” “You should have trusted me with my own life.” “I should have.” The answer had no defence inside it. That made it worse. Aurora picked up the bandage and returned to his side. She wrapped it around his torso, close enough to feel the heat of his body beneath her knuckles. Lucien held the end of the gauze when she passed it behind him. His breath brushed her hair. “You cannot stay here,” she said. “No.” “Eva will be back tomorrow.” “Then I will be gone before she returns.” “You cannot go to Silas.” “No.” “You cannot go to your club.” “No.” He gave the smallest lift of one shoulder, then flinched at the movement. Aurora tied the bandage off. Her hands remained against his ribs for a beat too long. Lucien looked down at them. “You could come to mine,” she said. He went still. “My flat is above Silas’s bar,” Aurora added. “You said they followed him.” “They watched the building, not every room inside it. Your entrance is through the alley. Different staircase.” “You had that mapped too?” “Yes.” “Of course you did.” “I can find somewhere else.” “No.” She stepped back and reached for the knife. “You came here because you had nowhere else. I am not leaving you to die in a stairwell because you made a mess of us.” “Rory.” “Do not.” His lips closed. She pulled her coat from the hook beside the door, then lifted Lucien’s jacket from the chair. The weight of it dragged at her arm. “You need stitches,” she said. “I need ten minutes without anyone attempting to put iron through my heart.” “You can have both.” Lucien took his cane and pushed himself upright. His hand found the edge of the table. Aurora caught his elbow before he hit it. He looked down at her fingers against his sleeve. “I thought you would slam the door,” he said. “I considered it.” “And yet.” “And yet you were bleeding on the mat.” A faint warmth entered his amber eye. “Romance lives.” “Keep talking and I’ll reopen the wound.” He took his jacket, draped it over one shoulder, and reached for the door. Aurora stopped him with a hand against his chest. “Wait.” Lucien looked at her. She unlocked the first deadbolt, then the second. Before she reached the third, his head turned sharply towards the window. The rain tapped against the glass. Aurora heard it then: the soft scrape of a shoe on the fire escape outside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences146
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.219
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.014
95.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2219
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2219
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"weight"
2"traced"
3"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"room fell silent"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"The room fell silent"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences160
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences290
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2219
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1380
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.88
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien26
Aurora26
Silas3
Evan4
Marseille1
Cold1
Ptolemy4
London1
Four3
Blood3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Blood"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
globalScore0.558
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences99
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like that for months"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.451
wordCount2219
matches
0"Not their stories, but their shapes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences290
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs216
mean10.27
std12.47
cv1.214
sampleLengths
011
135
251
37
45
59
65
74
84
916
1032
1114
124
135
142
151
1612
1731
187
193
204
211
224
2310
243
253
2621
2721
285
295
305
318
3270
333
3423
3517
367
375
383
391
404
4118
429
434
444
451
464
479
4819
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences160
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs231
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences290
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1382
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.027496382054992764
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00361794500723589
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences290
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences290
mean7.65
std6.13
cv0.801
sampleLengths
05
13
23
324
411
519
68
76
818
97
105
119
125
134
144
1516
1616
177
189
1914
204
215
222
231
247
255
265
2726
287
293
304
311
324
3310
343
353
369
373
389
393
4018
415
425
435
448
458
4616
4725
4821
493
44.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.23103448275862068
totalSentences290
uniqueOpeners67
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences139
matches
0"Then the second."
1"Then the third."
2"Somewhere on Brick Lane, a"
3"Just pain, and something worse"
4"Then she slid the chain"
5"Once, on a night that"
ratio0.043
73.24% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences139
matches
0"His platinum hair had lost"
1"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
2"His mouth almost moved into"
3"It died before it formed."
4"It had soaked through the"
5"She tightened her grip on"
6"Her jaw clenched."
7"He leaned a little more"
8"His knuckles had gone pale"
9"His mismatched eyes held hers."
10"Her fingers tightened around the"
11"His head tilted, listening."
12"He placed choices in front"
13"He entered with a limp"
14"She laughed once."
15"It came out sharp."
16"He lowered himself into the"
17"His cane leaned against his"
18"His face had lost colour"
19"She dragged the first-aid tin"
ratio0.367
31.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount119
totalSentences139
matches
0"The first deadbolt scraped back."
1"Aurora opened the door with"
2"Ptolemy pressed against her bare"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"His platinum hair had lost"
5"His ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"Aurora left the chain where"
7"Lucien looked at the knife,"
8"The smell of wet pavement"
9"Ptolemy gave a low, suspicious"
10"Lucien bent, his amber eye"
11"His mouth almost moved into"
12"It died before it formed."
13"Aurora noticed the blood then."
14"It had soaked through the"
15"She tightened her grip on"
16"Her jaw clenched."
17"He leaned a little more"
18"His knuckles had gone pale"
19"Aurora stared at him through"
ratio0.856
71.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"As though protection had not"
1"Before she reached the third,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
1"he continued (continue)"
2"Aurora added (add)"
dialogueSentences146
tagDensity0.096
leniency0.192
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.041
91.8611%