| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.215 | | leniency | 0.431 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2028 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2028 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "lurched" | | 8 | "wavering" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "clenched fist" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 195 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 246 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2026 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 72 | | wordCount | 1647 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.94 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Aurora | 32 | | Heartstone | 4 | | December | 1 | | Varga | 1 | | Nyx | 12 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 15 | | Fae | 3 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Varga" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.529 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 121 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared above the path ahead" | | 1 | "seemed pale beside it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2026 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 246 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 145 | | mean | 13.97 | | std | 14.8 | | cv | 1.059 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 72 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 65 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 195 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 273 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 246 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "It wrapped the creature’s arm, and for an instant Aurora saw a man’s hand within the darkness—pale, ink-stained, shaking with strain—before shadow swallowed it again." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1659 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "clear over round stones," |
| | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.027727546714888487 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0024110910186859553 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 246 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 246 | | mean | 8.24 | | std | 5.84 | | cv | 0.709 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 48.10% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3008130081300813 | | totalSentences | 246 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wind had changed." | | 1 | "Only her own face stared" | | 2 | "Then it came again: a" | | 3 | "Then another scent pushed through" | | 4 | "Then the grove exhaled." | | 5 | "Somewhere far off, a bird" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 33 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "It smelled of crushed mint," | | 1 | "Its crimson centre beat once," | | 2 | "She stepped through." | | 3 | "It moved through the wildflowers" | | 4 | "It felt warm." | | 5 | "Her voice travelled farther than" | | 6 | "She wore a gown the" | | 7 | "Its surface shone like wet" | | 8 | "Their wings bore patterns like" | | 9 | "Its eyes shone gold." | | 10 | "They reached a stream that" | | 11 | "It ran clear over round" | | 12 | "Her reflection did not crouch" | | 13 | "Her bright blue eyes looked" | | 14 | "It looked no wider than" | | 15 | "Its fingers had too many" | | 16 | "Her hunger rose without permission," | | 17 | "She had eaten lunch an" | | 18 | "Her body did not care." | | 19 | "It wanted the fruit." |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 57.63% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 136 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Aurora stopped with one boot" | | 2 | "A curtain of warmth brushed" | | 3 | "It smelled of crushed mint," | | 4 | "Nyx stood behind her, their" | | 5 | "Violet eyes hovered in the" | | 6 | "Aurora looked back." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant pressed against" | | 8 | "Its crimson centre beat once," | | 9 | "She stepped through." | | 10 | "The grove swallowed the sound" | | 11 | "It moved through the wildflowers" | | 12 | "A crescent moon floated near" | | 13 | "Aurora touched the stone at" | | 14 | "It felt warm." | | 15 | "A slow tremor climbed through" | | 16 | "Her voice travelled farther than" | | 17 | "The name rang between the" | | 18 | "A laugh drifted from somewhere" | | 19 | "Aurora’s fingers closed over the" |
| | ratio | 0.805 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 169 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Tiny yellow blooms pushed through velvet-black soil and turned their faces towards a sky that did not match the one she had left behind." | | 1 | "When Aurora met its gaze, it lowered its head in something that resembled a bow before it stepped backwards into a tree trunk and disappeared." | | 2 | "Trees bent under fruit the size of human heads: purple pears, blue pomegranates, oranges with skins that gleamed like polished copper." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.46% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 3 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.123 | |