Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41AQ6TB9XMB7J11SBCAWBN

Run Details

Duration:
1m 13s
Cost:
$0.115085
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn descended into the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden with one hand skimming the wet tiled wall and the other free near her coat pocket. The stairwell dropped farther than the street plan allowed. At the top, a rusted sign had read STAFF ONLY. Thirty-seven steps later, she had passed a second sign for a line London Transport had closed before the war. After another fifty-two, music began to seep through the brickwork: a thin scrape of strings, then a drumbeat that vanished whenever she stopped walking. She checked her worn leather watch. 2.13 a.m. At the bottom, a uniformed constable waited beside an iron gate. Blood striped one sleeve of his fluorescent jacket. Quinn halted three steps above him. “Yours?” The constable glanced at his sleeve as though seeing it for the first time. “No, ma’am. Victim’s. I checked for a pulse.” “Name?” “PC Hall.” “Where’s your partner, Hall?” His mouth tightened. “On the platform. She won’t come back through the gate.” “Why?” “She says the tunnel moved.” Quinn studied him. His skin had the grainy pallor of a man close to vomiting, but his pupils matched, his breathing held steady, and no drink fogged his voice. “Did it?” “I don’t know how to answer that.” “Start with yes or no.” “Yes.” Quinn descended the remaining steps. The gate stood open. A chalky white disc rested in a shallow slot beside the lock. At first glance it resembled a gambling chip. A hole pierced its centre, and tiny letters circled the rim. She reached for it. Hall caught his breath. “I wouldn’t.” Quinn withdrew her fingers, not from his warning but from the object’s texture. The disc had pores. Bone, polished smooth. “Who opened the gate?” “A woman in red glasses. She pressed that token into the slot.” “Red frames?” “Red hair. Round glasses.” “Where is she?” “Platform.” Quinn stepped through. The station beyond the gate should have stunk of mould, rat droppings and stagnant drains. Instead, the air carried burnt cloves, hot metal and the bitter medicinal reek of camphor. Lamps hung from cables along the vaulted ceiling. Their flames burned blue inside glass bulbs, though no gas pipes ran to them. Dozens of stalls crowded the old ticket hall. Canvas awnings sagged over empty counters. Labels marked shelves where goods had been removed in haste: MEMORY, FIRST QUALITY; CURSES, DOMESTIC; SAINTS’ TEETH, ASSORTED. A brass cage held three black feathers. They struck the bars whenever Quinn passed. Detective Sergeant Owen Leach emerged from between two stalls, overshoes flapping around his brogues. Sweat shone across his broad forehead. “You took your time.” “The station wasn’t on the station map.” “That excuse will delight the superintendent.” Leach lifted the scene log. A tremor travelled through the pages. Quinn nodded towards it. “How many inside?” “Two uniforms, photographer, pathologist, me. One witness. One body.” “And the people who ran this place?” “Gone. Hall reckons we interrupted a market.” “A market selling what?” Leach looked at the row of jars behind him. Each contained a pale object curled in yellow fluid. One tapped the glass with a fingernail. “Counterfeit medical specimens.” The object tapped again. Leach moved away from the shelf. Quinn’s gaze stayed on him. “You believe that?” “I believe London has no shortage of deranged collectors.” He led her through the ticket hall. Boot prints crossed the dust, cluttered and fresh, but bare patches showed where tables, crates and cabinets had stood until minutes ago. Whoever had emptied the place had taken stock worth hauling, yet they had left purses, loose coins and a silver-handled knife on the floor. Quinn crouched beside the knife. “No evidence marker.” “Pathologist wanted us on the body first.” “Who moved it?” “No one.” “The dust beneath the hilt has been disturbed.” Leach bent closer. A clean line ran from the blade to the edge of a rectangular bare patch. “Dragged when they cleared the stall.” “The knife moved towards the stall, not away from it.” Quinn rose and continued towards the platform. The station name had been scraped from the tiled wall. Beneath the gouges, blue lettering showed in fragments: MORN—. No such stop existed on any line she knew. A dead man lay across the yellow platform edge with his head towards the tunnel. He wore an evening suit, though the jacket had split beneath one arm and coal dust coated his knees. His right fist clutched a wad of banknotes. His left hand rested open on his chest. Dr Farah Basu knelt beside him. Her gloved fingers worked around a wound beneath his ribs. “Single puncture,” she announced. “Narrow blade. Upward angle. Likely reached the heart.” Leach pointed back towards the ticket hall. “Silver-handled knife fits.” “Does it?” Quinn moved to the body’s feet. The soles of his patent shoes had worn smooth. Mud clung around the heels in thick grey cakes, but the platform remained clean. Basu looked up. “Don’t tread on the marks.” “What marks?” “Exactly.” Quinn squatted. The dead man’s trousers had ridden above his socks. A dark ring circled each ankle, narrow as twine. The skin around the marks had blistered. “Bound?” Leach crouched opposite her. “Marks are too thin for rope. Wire, perhaps.” “No cuts.” “He didn’t struggle.” “Then why bind him?” Leach’s eyes travelled to the banknotes. “Robbery went wrong. He paid, changed his mind, drew the knife. Stallholder killed him.” “And returned the money to his hand?” “He grabbed it.” “After a blade entered his heart?” “People do odd things while dying.” Quinn looked at Basu. “How long would he remain capable of gripping anything?” “With this wound, seconds. If the blade reached the heart.” Quinn examined the fingers. The notes sat folded rather than crushed. Blood had dried beneath the nails, but none stained the money. She peeled back the top note with a pen. A portrait of Queen Victoria stared from the paper. The Bank of England inscription named a denomination of seven pounds. Leach gave a short laugh without humour. “Novelty currency.” “Printed on rag paper. Watermarked.” “A clever novelty.” Quinn took in the corpse again. Clean cuffs. Mud on heels. Coal on knees. Burns around the ankles. A fatal stab that had spilled little blood onto the shirt. Money placed into a dead or dying hand. “What did the witness see?” “Claims she found him like this.” “Claims?” “She also claims this place is called the Veil Market and moves every full moon.” Leach pointed to a bench beneath an enamel advertisement for Pears soap. A young woman sat with her worn leather satchel hugged against her stomach. Curly red hair spilled around her round glasses, and freckles stood stark against bloodless skin. She tucked a coil behind her left ear, noticed Quinn watching, then gripped the satchel again. Quinn walked over. “Eva Kowalski?” The woman’s green eyes widened. “How did you know?” “Your British Museum identification card is hanging out of your pocket.” Eva pushed it back inside. “I’m Detective Quinn. Open the satchel.” “No.” Leach stopped beside the bench. “She refused me too.” Quinn held out her hand. “This platform now forms part of a murder scene. Open it, or I’ll do it at the station after your arrest.” Eva’s fingers found the brass clasps. “You can’t take the books out.” “I can take you out.” “That isn’t what I meant.” Eva opened the bag. Books packed it from seam to seam, their cracked spines lettered in Greek, Latin and alphabets Quinn did not recognise. Bundles of notes filled the gaps. On top sat a small brass compass, green with verdigris. Protective sigils crowded its face. Its needle quivered towards the tunnel. Quinn reached for it. Eva snapped the satchel half-shut. “Don’t turn it over.” “Why?” “There’s a loose screw.” Quinn caught Eva’s left wrist. Black residue marked the pads of her thumb and forefinger. “Coal dust?” “Lampblack.” “From what?” “I was copying an inscription.” “Where?” Eva glanced towards the corpse. “On his back.” Leach pulled the satchel from her lap. “You touched the body.” “I rolled him over. He was face down when I arrived.” Every head turned towards the dead man. Basu stood. “He wasn’t rolled. Not recently.” “I did it before I called the police.” “You called from where?” Quinn released Eva’s wrist. “The emergency phone upstairs.” “The cable was cut decades ago.” “It rang.” Leach removed the compass and held it between two fingers. “And this?” “Put it down.” “What is it?” “A compass.” “I can see that.” “Then put it down before you damage it.” The needle swung away from the tunnel and fixed on the corpse. No one spoke. Leach tilted the casing. The needle followed the movement, then jerked back towards the man’s chest. “A magnet.” Eva rose from the bench. “It doesn’t point north.” “Clearly.” “It points towards the nearest rift.” Leach’s mouth twisted. “Rift in what?” Eva looked at Quinn rather than him. “In places.” Quinn took the compass. Its brass casing felt warm, almost skin-warm. The needle settled towards the corpse, but not at the wound. It aimed lower, towards his open left hand. She walked around the body. The needle tracked the hand from every angle. “Empty his palm.” Basu turned it over. A small round indentation pressed into the flesh, its edges patterned with tiny letters. Quinn looked back towards the gate. “Bone token.” Eva pushed her glasses up her nose. “Yes.” “Where is his?” “I don’t know.” “The token in the gate. Did you bring it?” “Yes.” “Yours?” Eva paused. “No.” Leach stepped closer. “Whose?” “I bought it.” “From whom?” “Someone who knew the Market would be here.” Quinn crouched by the body again. She aligned her pen with the round mark on the palm. Same size as the gate slot. The dead man had held a token long enough for the rim to stamp his skin, yet it had vanished before rigor fixed his fingers. She turned his left cuff back. A speck of blue wax clung to the seam. “Photographer.” The crime-scene photographer approached with his camera. “Close shot of this.” The flash lit the platform. Quinn inspected the shirt wound. The cloth had parted in a neat slit, but the edges bore no blood. She unfastened two buttons and drew the fabric aside. Beneath it, blood had spread across the skin in a dark, glossy fan. The puncture sat below the ribs. Around it, someone had painted a ring of blue wax no wider than a matchstick. Basu leaned close. “That wasn’t visible before.” “It was visible. We looked at the tear instead.” Leach pointed towards the ticket hall. “Wax on one of the stalls. Ritual supplies, candles, whatever else these people peddle.” Quinn pressed two fingers against the shirt, careful not to touch the wound. “The slit doesn’t align.” Basu shifted to Quinn’s side. The puncture entered beneath the left ribs. The slit in the shirt lay three centimetres higher. “He was stabbed without the shirt,” Basu murmured. “Then dressed,” Quinn replied. Leach shook his head. “Why dress a corpse and dump him on a platform? It complicates the murder for no gain.” “Only if the killer wanted the body found.” Eva’s gaze dropped to the blue wax. “That isn’t candle wax.” Leach rounded on her. “You’ve withheld enough.” “It’s sealing compound. Traders used it on containers that couldn’t cross the threshold loose.” “What containers?” Eva tucked her hair behind her left ear. “Bodies, sometimes.” Quinn studied the dead man’s evening clothes. The split jacket. The spotless cuffs. Mud applied to the heels but absent from the soles. Coal pressed into the knees though the trousers showed no abrasion. Not a man who had walked into the station. Not a man who had knelt. A parcel made to resemble one. “Someone brought him through the gate dead.” Hall’s voice came from the platform entrance. “Can’t have, ma’am.” Quinn turned. The constable stood beyond the line of lamps, refusing to enter their blue light. “Why not?” “The woman’s token only opened it once. Gate shut behind her. Before that, it hadn’t opened all night. We checked the dust on the stairs.” Leach spread his hands. “There. He died inside.” “No.” Quinn pointed to the corpse’s ankles. “Those aren’t binding marks. They’re burns from the sealing compound. It ran down while he hung upright.” Basu touched the back of one heel with a swab. “The mud covers the burns.” “Applied afterwards.” Quinn looked at the ceiling above the body. A cable crossed the vault, supporting three blue lamps. Between them, a brass pulley turned in a hook. Unlike the rest of the fittings, its groove shone clean. She followed its line down. A severed cord lay curled behind the bench where Eva had sat. The cut end bore a dark blue crust. Leach stared from the cord to the corpse. “They lowered him onto the platform.” “From where?” Quinn raised the Veil Compass. The needle no longer pointed at the corpse’s hand. With the body shifted by Basu, it aimed past him, into the tiled wall opposite the tracks. Quinn crossed the platform. Layers of old posters covered the tiles: seaside excursions, patent tonics, recruitment notices. She held the compass against them. The needle struck the glass hard enough to click. “Get these off.” Leach tore down the top poster. Damp paper peeled away in strips. Hall joined him from the edge of the light, using an evidence ruler to lift the corners. Under the final layer, a narrow iron door appeared flush with the tiled wall. No handle broke its surface. A round slot sat at shoulder height. The same size as a bone token. Eva closed her satchel. “That door wasn’t there when I came in.” Quinn examined the floor beneath it. No dust gathered at the seam. A single wet print marked the tile, narrow at the heel, with five long toe impressions. It faced outwards. Leach bent beside it. “Bare foot.” “No arch,” Quinn replied. “Too long for the victim. And he wore shoes.” The print glistened. Quinn touched the edge with a swab. The liquid looked black against the cotton. Basu took it, sniffed, then frowned. “Not blood. Not water.” Eva stepped closer despite Leach’s arm barring her way. “Don’t let it touch your skin.” Quinn held the swab towards her. “You recognise it.” “I recognise the smell.” “Name it.” Eva’s nostrils pinched. “River silt.” “We’re nowhere near the river.” “Not the Thames.” Quinn checked her watch. The second hand had stopped at 2.13. She tapped the glass. Nothing. Around them, the blue lamps leaned towards the iron door, each flame stretched sideways within its bulb. Quinn placed the Veil Compass in Eva’s open palm. “Tell me how to open it.” Eva stared at the round slot. “We need the token from the dead man’s hand.” “Then we find who took it.” Quinn turned towards the scattered boot prints crossing the platform, the clean groove in the pulley, and the silver knife dragged against the flow of the fleeing market. One track cut beneath all the others: a straight pair of narrow heel marks that began at the iron door and ended beside the ticket-hall stall. She pointed to them. “Photograph those before anyone moves.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences158
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.101
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2539
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2539
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"quivered"
count1
4
word"aligned"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"stomach"
2"stark"
3"quivered"
4"aligned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences219
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences219
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences370
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2539
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions123
wordCount1770
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity2.49
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn44
Tube1
Camden1
London1
Transport1
Sergeant1
Owen1
Leach24
Farah1
Basu11
Queen1
Victoria1
Bank1
England1
Pears1
Greek1
Latin1
Eva19
Veil2
Compass2
Hall3
Mud3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Transport"
3"Sergeant"
4"Owen"
5"Leach"
6"Farah"
7"Basu"
8"Queen"
9"Victoria"
10"Eva"
11"Hall"
12"Mud"
places
0"London"
1"England"
2"Greek"
globalScore0.257
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences145
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though seeing it for the first time"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.394
wordCount2539
matches
0"not from his warning but from the object’s texture"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences370
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs272
mean9.33
std10.79
cv1.155
sampleLengths
036
153
28
319
46
51
614
78
81
92
104
113
1210
131
145
1529
162
177
185
191
205
2135
224
234
242
2520
264
2712
282
294
303
311
323
3352
3446
3520
364
377
386
3911
404
413
429
437
447
454
4625
473
484
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences219
matches
0"been removed"
1"been scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs290
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences370
ratio0.005
matches
0"Labels marked shelves where goods had been removed in haste: MEMORY, FIRST QUALITY; CURSES, DOMESTIC; SAINTS’ TEETH, ASSORTED."
1"Beneath the gouges, blue lettering showed in fragments: MORN—."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"other free near her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.014666666666666666
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences370
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences370
mean6.86
std4.91
cv0.716
sampleLengths
027
19
210
319
424
56
62
711
88
96
101
1114
128
131
142
154
163
1710
181
195
203
2126
222
237
245
251
265
274
2812
298
3011
314
324
332
3413
354
363
374
3812
392
404
413
421
433
4415
4515
468
4714
488
496
51.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3216216216216216
totalSentences370
uniqueOpeners119
16.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences208
matches
0"Instead, the air carried burnt"
ratio0.005
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences208
matches
0"She checked her worn leather"
1"His mouth tightened."
2"His skin had the grainy"
3"She reached for it."
4"Their flames burned blue inside"
5"They struck the bars whenever"
6"He led her through the"
7"He wore an evening suit,"
8"His right fist clutched a"
9"His left hand rested open"
10"Her gloved fingers worked around"
11"She peeled back the top"
12"She tucked a coil behind"
13"Its needle quivered towards the"
14"Its brass casing felt warm,"
15"It aimed lower, towards his"
16"She walked around the body."
17"She aligned her pen with"
18"She turned his left cuff"
19"She unfastened two buttons and"
ratio0.12
51.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount170
totalSentences208
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn descended into"
1"The stairwell dropped farther than"
2"She checked her worn leather"
3"Blood striped one sleeve of"
4"Quinn halted three steps above"
5"The constable glanced at his"
6"His mouth tightened."
7"Quinn studied him."
8"His skin had the grainy"
9"Quinn descended the remaining steps."
10"The gate stood open."
11"A chalky white disc rested"
12"A hole pierced its centre,"
13"She reached for it."
14"Hall caught his breath."
15"Quinn withdrew her fingers, not"
16"The disc had pores."
17"Quinn stepped through."
18"The station beyond the gate"
19"Lamps hung from cables along"
ratio0.817
24.04% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences208
matches
0"Whoever had emptied the place"
ratio0.005
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"After another fifty-two, music began to seep through the brickwork: a thin scrape of strings, then a drumbeat that vanished whenever she stopped walking."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she announced (announce)"
1"Basu murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences158
tagDensity0.025
leniency0.051
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.025
88.1314%