| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 153 | | tagDensity | 0.026 | | leniency | 0.052 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 97.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2041 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.40% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2041 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "trembled" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 150 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 299 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 61 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2040 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 28 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 61 | | wordCount | 1249 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.08 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 26 | | Silas | 1 | | Aurora | 26 | | Marseille | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Aurora" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.459 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 74.24% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 99 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile" | | 1 | "seemed smaller with him inside" | | 2 | "circle that seemed to swallow the lamplight around it" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.49 | | wordCount | 2040 | | matches | | 0 | "not her wrist this time, but her fingers" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 246 | | mean | 8.29 | | std | 9.63 | | cv | 1.162 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 63 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 299 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "One eye gleamed amber in the weak light; the other held no colour at all, black from iris to pupil." | | 1 | "It held the shape of old rooms: the back booth at Silas’s bar after closing, his cane propped beside the table, Aurora leaning across to steal olives from his plate; a hotel room in Marseille with rain crawling down the windows; his hand at the nape of her neck as she told him not to promise anything he could not keep." | | 2 | "The amber eye held hers; the black one gave nothing back." | | 3 | "Lucien caught her hand—not her wrist this time, but her fingers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1251 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.026378896882494004 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 299 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 299 | | mean | 6.82 | | std | 5.93 | | cv | 0.869 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 44.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.21739130434782608 | | totalSentences | 299 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 94.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere below, a pipe groaned" | | 1 | "Just a smooth circle that" | | 2 | "Then the anger had settled" | | 3 | "Then she lifted her gaze" |
| | ratio | 0.028 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "Her gaze dropped to the" | | 1 | "His platinum hair remained slicked" | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 3 | "He wiped his shoes against" | | 4 | "It had always been crowded:" | | 5 | "His gaze lingered there for" | | 6 | "His eyes lifted." | | 7 | "She turned from him and" | | 8 | "She killed the flame, lifted" | | 9 | "She reached for a mug," | | 10 | "Her hand stopped above the" | | 11 | "She set it on its" | | 12 | "He did not sit." | | 13 | "He stood beside the research" | | 14 | "It held the shape of" | | 15 | "She blinked, and the flat" | | 16 | "She caught the nearest brass" | | 17 | "His fingers stopped." | | 18 | "He withdrew a folded envelope" | | 19 | "She studied the envelope." |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 16.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 125 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened three inches," | | 1 | "Aurora Carter’s bright blue eyes" | | 2 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 3 | "Aurora stared at him." | | 4 | "The door began to close." | | 5 | "Lucien caught it with the" | | 6 | "The chain rattled against the" | | 7 | "Her gaze dropped to the" | | 8 | "His platinum hair remained slicked" | | 9 | "Aurora looked over his shoulder." | | 10 | "The stairwell stood empty." | | 11 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 12 | "Lucien’s mouth shifted, not quite" | | 13 | "The chain came free." | | 14 | "Aurora opened the door wide" | | 15 | "Lucien glanced down at his" | | 16 | "Something in her voice erased" | | 17 | "He wiped his shoes against" | | 18 | "The flat seemed smaller with" | | 19 | "It had always been crowded:" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He stood beside the research notes, scanning the diagrams and loose pages with the practised eye of a man who made a living from other people’s secrets." | | 1 | "Books shifted in their towers as if something beneath the floor had drawn breath." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 153 | | tagDensity | 0.02 | | leniency | 0.039 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |