Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41E67S194YA7SC1H0XED3J

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Duration:
52.6s
Cost:
$0.081516
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain tightened around Aurora’s throat as something beneath the roots pulled the Heartstone towards the earth. She caught the pendant in one fist and stumbled back. The deep crimson gem kicked against her palm with a second pulse, warm and deliberate. Not a tremor. A heartbeat. “Point taken.” Her voice fell flat among the trees. Rory loosened the chain and checked the ground. Nothing had caught it. No bramble, hook or grasping hand, which would have ranked low on her list of acceptable explanations but high on honesty. Ancient oak standing stones ringed the clearing. Their twisted trunks rose from the soil without branches or leaves, each one cut flat at the top and scarred with symbols. They looked less like trees than bones planted upright. Beyond them, Richmond Park lay under darkness, hidden behind a screen of ash and hawthorn. It should have remained visible. She turned towards the gap she had entered through. The gap had gone. Wildflowers crowded the boundary instead, their yellow, white and violet heads open to a night that offered them no light. Rory crossed to them and pushed aside the waist-high stems. More flowers waited beyond. Then more, stretching between the black trunks until distance swallowed their colour. “No. Absolutely not.” She took out her phone. Eva’s last message filled the screen. If the pendant gets hot, leave. Do not investigate. Do not touch anything. For once in your life, Rory, treat those as instructions and not a personal attack. Beneath it sat Rory’s reply. You had me at do not investigate. The message carried no delivery mark. She checked the signal. Four bars. Good. One ordinary thing. Rory called Eva. The line connected before the first ring. Breathing answered. “Eva?” A soft exhale brushed the speaker. Slow. Wet. Rory lowered the phone and checked the name. EVA CALLING glowed above the timer, though Rory had made the call. “Cute trick. Put Eva on.” The breathing stopped. Something clicked its tongue three times. The call ended. Her screen returned to Eva’s message. A delivery mark appeared beside Rory’s reply, followed by a timestamp. Tomorrow, 03:17. Rory locked the phone. The clearing had seemed small when she entered. Twenty paces across, no more. Now the farthest standing stones hovered at the edge of sight. Darkness pooled between them, dense enough to hide shape and depth. The flowers gave off a faint scent of honey and bruised apples. Beneath it lurked another smell. Cold ash. The Heartstone pulsed again. It had begun warming near the park wall, just as Eva had warned. That warmth had led Rory through a gap between two old oaks and into the Grove. She had come because the anonymous note in her delivery bag contained three things no stranger should have known: the shape of the scar on her left wrist, the address of the flat above Silas’ bar, and the name Malphora. The note had ended with a promise. Come alone to Isolde’s grove. Bring the Heartstone. Learn what followed you from Cardiff. She should have burnt it. Instead, she had folded it into quarters and brought it along. Rory slipped two fingers into her coat pocket. The paper remained there, crisp against her knuckles. She pulled it out and unfolded it. The writing had changed. YOU BROUGHT IT HOME. The original message had vanished. A sound travelled through the flowers. Snip. Rory folded the note. Snip. Metal shears, closing on a stem. Snip. The sound came from behind the nearest standing stone. “Whoever’s gardening has picked an ambitious shift.” Silence answered. The sort that pressed against the ears. Rory stepped sideways. The stone blocked her view of whatever stood behind it. Its bark held dozens of shallow marks. At first they resembled a script, all hooked lines and narrow loops. Up close, they formed names. MARGARET EVANS, 1891 THOMAS REED, 1914 AMINA KHAN, 1978 The names continued down the trunk. Some had dates. Others ended in a blank cut. Near the base, fresh sap gleamed inside a new carving. AURORA CARTER, No date. Not yet. She backed away without touching it. A pale shape crossed between two trees at the edge of the clearing. Too tall for a deer. Too narrow for a person. Rory kept her gaze on the place where it had vanished. Her left hand found the small crescent scar on her wrist and rubbed it through the coat cuff. Nothing moved. She opened the compass on her phone. The needle spun clockwise, stopped, then spun the other way. Each turn matched the pendant’s pulse. Tick-tock. Warm, cold. Tick-tock. Near, far. The needle fixed on the standing stone with her name. Rory crouched beside a patch of blue flowers. Her boots had left shallow prints in the soft earth. She followed the trail with her eyes, searching for the route she had taken into the Grove. A second set of prints overlapped hers. Bare feet. Long toes. Deep impressions at the heel. They followed her in. None led out. She rose. The flowers rustled near her knee though she no longer touched them. A ripple passed through the clearing. Stems bowed in a narrow line, one patch after another, as if an unseen body crawled towards her. Rory moved left. The ripple changed course. “So you can see me.” The flowers stopped. A laugh sounded behind her. Her own laugh. It came out wrong, stretched thin and lifted at the end. Rory had made that sound once, years ago, while Evan blocked the door and asked why she looked frightened. A laugh used as a shield. A lie shaped like amusement. The Grove had no business knowing it. She turned. A woman stood beside the stone bearing Rory’s name. Straight shoulder-length black hair hid her face. She wore Rory’s dark coat, right down to the frayed seam at the pocket. One hand hung at her side. The other gripped a crimson pendant. Rory’s own Heartstone burned against her chest. The woman lifted her head. No face waited beneath the hair. Only smooth skin, pale and taut, with a crescent-shaped cut where the mouth should have been. Rory ran. Flowers whipped her legs. She aimed for the widest gap between the standing stones, keeping her eyes on the boundary. The gap stayed fixed ahead, ten strides away. Ten strides became twenty. Her lungs tightened. She counted every footfall. Twenty-seven. Twenty-eight. Twenty-nine. The stones drew no closer. Behind her, bare feet slapped the earth in perfect rhythm with her boots. Left. Right. Left. Right. When Rory slowed, the second gait slowed. When she stopped, it stopped. She faced it. The clearing lay empty. Her footprints cut a straight path through the flowers, yet the stone with her name stood a few feet behind her. The fresh carving had grown. AURORA CARTER, 1999– The final stroke ended in wet sap. “Not tonight.” Rory took the pendant from beneath her jumper. Its deep crimson surface held a faint inner glow. A thin shadow moved inside the gem, circling like a hooked finger behind glass. The unknown benefactor had given it to her without explanation. An envelope at the Golden Empress. No return address. No note. Only the silver chain, the thumbnail-sized stone, and a smell of smoke that had clung to her hands for hours. Now the gem pulled towards the soil again. Rory let the chain hang loose. The pendant swung north, then east, then down. Its point settled over a cluster of white flowers near the centre of the clearing. She approached them. Their petals had the waxy colour of old teeth. Each flower turned as she passed, tracking her with its dark centre. “Do that again and I’m buying weedkiller.” The blooms shivered. At the centre of the cluster, a narrow seam split the earth. No grass crossed it. No roots bound it. The crack ran in a perfect circle, wide enough to mark a buried lid. Cold ash thickened in the air. Rory knelt but kept her hands clear. The Heartstone flared, painting her fingers red. Beneath the soil came a faint scraping. Not claws. A pen. Scratch, pause, scratch. Someone writing. Her phone buzzed. A photograph from Eva appeared on the locked screen. Rory opened it. The image showed her flat above Silas’ bar. Her bed, her lamp, her discarded trainers beside the wardrobe. A figure sat on the mattress with its back to the camera. Black hair touched its shoulders. Another message followed. Found you. Rory called Eva again. The line opened at once. “Eva, get out of my flat. Don’t go near the woman on the bed.” Breathing filled the call. Then Eva’s voice, faint and fractured. “Rory?” “Where are you?” “The Grove.” Rory’s grip tightened on the phone. “No, you’re not.” “I came after you. You never came home.” “I arrived five minutes ago.” A sob caught in Eva’s throat. “You’ve been gone six days.” The scraping beneath the ground stopped. Rory looked at the circular seam. “Eva, listen to me. Can you see the standing stones?” “I can see you.” A twig cracked behind Rory. She turned in stages. No one stood there. On the phone, Eva whispered. “Don’t turn round.” “I already did.” “That isn’t you.” The call erupted into static. Beneath the hiss, Rory heard dozens of voices reciting names. Margaret Evans. Thomas Reed. Amina Khan. Each voice spoke from a different distance, some buried deep, some close enough to breathe against her ear. Then her father’s voice joined them. “Aurora.” She ended the call. The circular patch of earth rose by an inch. Soil trickled from its edge. White flowers bent and snapped as the buried lid pushed higher. The Heartstone’s heat sank through Rory’s jumper and scorched her skin. She stepped back. The lid rose again. No hinges. No handle. Only packed earth lifting as one solid piece. A hand slid through the gap. It looked human until the fingers unfolded. Six of them, each jointed twice too many times. Black soil packed the nails. A silver chain wound around the wrist, and a deep crimson stone dragged behind it. Rory snatched a fallen branch from beside the flowers. She jammed it beneath the earthen lid and drove her weight down. The hand caught the branch. Wood groaned. “Not yours.” The thing beneath the ground spoke in Rory’s voice. A second hand emerged. Then a third. They gripped the edge and heaved. The lid tilted, exposing a shaft lined with roots. A dull red light pulsed far below. With each pulse, the roots tightened around shapes embedded in the walls. Faces. Eyes closed. Mouths full of soil. Rory retreated until bark struck her shoulders. The standing stone with her name pressed cold against her coat. Fresh cuts opened beneath the unfinished date. Lines carved themselves into the wood with the patient scrape of an unseen blade. MALPHORA RETURNED. Every flower in the Grove turned towards her. The faceless woman stepped from behind the raised lid. Its sealed mouth split along the crescent scar, and something inside began to sing with Eva’s voice. The standing stones moved at once. Their roots tore free of the ground. The ring contracted, dragging walls of earth behind it, while pale hands poured from the open shaft and raced across the flowers on their fingertips. The Heartstone cracked against Rory’s chest. From within the gem, something knocked back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.087
leniency0.174
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1899
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"absolutely"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"footfall"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"raced"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"absolutely"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"silence"
5"footfall"
6"perfect"
7"fractured"
8"weight"
9"raced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences265
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences265
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences288
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1899
ratio0
matches(empty)
41.67% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"On the phone, Eva whispered."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1792
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Heartstone7
Richmond1
Park1
Rory36
Eva10
Grove4
Isolde1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Evans1
Reed1
Khan1
Snip3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Evans"
6"Reed"
7"Khan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
3"Isolde"
4"Cardiff"
5"Golden"
globalScore0.496
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences139
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared beside Rory’s reply, followed by a timestamp"
1"seemed small when she entered"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1899
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences288
matches
0"made that sound"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs187
mean10.16
std11.82
cv1.164
sampleLengths
018
130
22
37
433
553
65
79
84
946
103
115
126
1328
145
157
166
176
184
1910
202
211
228
2320
245
253
266
273
2817
292
304
3152
322
334
3469
357
3614
375
3811
3923
404
414
425
436
441
454
461
476
481
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences265
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs293
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences288
ratio0.003
matches
0"AURORA CARTER, 1999–"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount521
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.023032629558541268
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003838771593090211
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences288
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences288
mean6.59
std4.96
cv0.753
sampleLengths
018
110
215
33
42
52
67
78
84
921
107
1122
129
1315
145
159
164
1720
1810
194
2012
213
225
236
246
253
264
2715
285
297
306
314
322
331
343
353
367
372
381
396
401
411
428
4312
445
453
466
473
486
4911
51.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences288
uniqueOpeners96
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount10
totalSentences219
matches
0"Then more, stretching between the"
1"Instead, she had folded it"
2"Too tall for a deer."
3"Too narrow for a person."
4"Only smooth skin, pale and"
5"Only the silver chain, the"
6"Then Eva’s voice, faint and"
7"Then her father’s voice joined"
8"Only packed earth lifting as"
9"Then a third."
ratio0.046
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences219
matches
0"She caught the pendant in"
1"Her voice fell flat among"
2"Their twisted trunks rose from"
3"They looked less like trees"
4"It should have remained visible."
5"She turned towards the gap"
6"She took out her phone."
7"You had me at do"
8"She checked the signal."
9"Her screen returned to Eva’s"
10"It had begun warming near"
11"She had come because the"
12"She should have burnt it."
13"She pulled it out and"
14"YOU BROUGHT IT HOME."
15"Its bark held dozens of"
16"She backed away without touching"
17"Her left hand found the"
18"She opened the compass on"
19"Her boots had left shallow"
ratio0.201
87.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount163
totalSentences219
matches
0"The silver chain tightened around"
1"She caught the pendant in"
2"The deep crimson gem kicked"
3"Her voice fell flat among"
4"Rory loosened the chain and"
5"Nothing had caught it."
6"Their twisted trunks rose from"
7"They looked less like trees"
8"It should have remained visible."
9"She turned towards the gap"
10"The gap had gone."
11"Wildflowers crowded the boundary instead,"
12"Rory crossed to them and"
13"She took out her phone."
14"Eva’s last message filled the"
15"You had me at do"
16"The message carried no delivery"
17"She checked the signal."
18"Rory called Eva."
19"The line connected before the"
ratio0.744
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences219
matches
0"If the pendant gets hot,"
1"Now the farthest standing stones"
2"Now the gem pulled towards"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"No bramble, hook or grasping hand, which would have ranked low on her list of acceptable explanations but high on honesty."
1"Wildflowers crowded the boundary instead, their yellow, white and violet heads open to a night that offered them no light."
2"Only the silver chain, the thumbnail-sized stone, and a smell of smoke that had clung to her hands for hours."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.8741%