Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41EKZM1G11N2GV970MFHEK

Run Details

Duration:
14.4s
Cost:
$0.015476
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones formed a crooked doorway beneath the oaks. Aurora had passed them twice without seeing anything except weathered grey rock furred with moss. On the third pass, Isolde lifted one pale hand and pressed two fingers against the nearest stone. The air folded. Not split. Folded—like a sheet of dark silk pinched between invisible fingers. The trees beyond the stones stretched thin, their trunks bending towards a point that did not exist. Amber light spilled through the gap. Aurora’s hand closed around the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. The crimson gem held a pulse of warmth against her palm. “That was not there before,” she said. “Nothing is there before it opens,” Isolde replied. Silver hair slid over her shoulder as she turned. The moonlight caught in it, though the grove had no moon. Wildflowers crowded the grass around her bare feet, their petals brushing her ankles without bending beneath her weight. Nyx stood at the edge of the stones, six feet of darkness shaped into a person. Their violet eyes watched the opening. The amber glow sank into their outline, staining the edges with a dull bronze. “The door leads to Hel,” they whispered. Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade from the sheath at her hip. The leaf-shaped dagger gave off a thin blue-white gleam. Its cold travelled through the leather grip and settled in her fingers. “Does it lead where we need to go?” Isolde’s pale lavender eyes rested on the pendant. “It leads where the heart remembers.” “That sounded like a yes.” “It was not a no.” Aurora glanced at Nyx. “You hear that?” “I hear the dark laughing.” A gust slipped through the stones. It smelled of bruised grapes, hot metal, and something sweet enough to turn the stomach. The wildflowers around Aurora’s boots shivered. Far beyond the opening, something rang—a clear note, as delicate as a glass struck with a spoon. Aurora stepped through. Heat struck her first. It pressed against her face and filled her lungs, thick with the scent of fruit and burning wood. Her boots landed on black soil that gave beneath her weight, soft as ash. Behind her, the passage remained open. The Fae Grove waited on the other side, its ancient oaks standing in cool green shadow. Ahead, a valley unfolded beneath a warm amber sky. No sun hung above it. The entire firmament glowed, coloured like honey held over a flame. Long clouds drifted across the brightness, purple at their edges and red in their depths. Hills rolled away beneath them, covered in vineyards that climbed terraces of pale stone. Their leaves shone silver-green. Clusters of grapes hung from the vines, each one larger than a plum, each one glowing faintly from within. Aurora took another step. Something snapped beneath her boot. She looked down. A white stem curled from the soil, its flower shaped like a mouth. The petals clenched around the leather, then released it with a wet click. “Watch the flowers,” Isolde murmured as she crossed the threshold. “Useful advice would have been better before I stood on one.” “Before is a door that only opens from one side.” Nyx drifted through last. The amber landscape showed through their ribs for a moment before their body thickened into shadow again. The portal narrowed behind them, its edges trembling. A low chime rolled through the valley. The pendant warmed against Aurora’s chest. She pulled it free of her collar. The deep crimson stone glowed beneath its silver chain, beating with a faint inner light. Nyx turned towards it. “Something has noticed us.” “Something?” Aurora asked. “Several things.” The portal sealed. One instant, the stones and the dark mouth of the grove stood behind them. The next, a wall of twisted vines covered the place. Tiny red fruits bulged along the branches. One split open, revealing a row of wet black seeds arranged like teeth. Aurora slid the pendant beneath her shirt. “Wonderful,” she said. Isolde looked across the valley. Her expression held no fear, but her fingers had tightened around the staff she carried—a pale branch carved with knots and narrow runes. “Dymas welcomes hunger,” she said. “What is Dymas?” “The cup that never empties. The table that never clears.” “That still wasn’t an answer.” “It was the first course.” Nyx’s head tilted. Their voice reached Aurora as a breath against her ear, though they stood several paces away. “Gluttony.” The word seemed to stir the land. Vines rustled on the terraces. Somewhere among the orchards, hundreds of leaves turned at once. The sound travelled towards them in a long silver wave. Aurora raised the blade. The dagger’s edge shone brighter. It cast no light on her hand, but the darkness along the ground recoiled from it. “Where do we go?” Isolde pointed to a road descending through the vineyards. White stones lined its edges. Their surfaces bore carvings of open mouths, full plates, and crowned figures raising goblets. The road vanished between rows of trees whose branches sagged under the weight of strange fruit. “Down.” “Down to what?” “The first gate.” “Who built it?” “The hungry.” Aurora looked at the road, then at the terraces rising on either side. The grapes swelled as she watched. One cluster trembled. A single fruit detached itself and rolled through the dust until it touched her boot. She nudged it with the blade. The skin split. Dark juice spread across the road, steaming. Nyx crouched beside it. Their shadowed fingers hovered over the stain without touching. “It has a heartbeat.” The earth gave a soft thud beneath them. Aurora drew back. Another pulse followed. Then another, deeper and slower, moving through the soil beneath the road. The vineyards leaned towards the sound. Every grape turned on its stem. Isolde started down the slope. Aurora caught her sleeve. The cloth felt cool and smooth beneath her fingers. “Could we avoid the road?” “We could.” “Should we?” “No.” Isolde slipped free and continued walking. Nyx followed Aurora’s shoulder, their presence lowering the heat around her. She could feel cold along her left side, as if she walked beside a river in winter. “You trust her?” Aurora asked. “No.” “You’re following her.” “I trust the road less.” “That makes three of us.” They descended. The soil changed beneath their boots from black ash to pale gold dust. It rose around their ankles with every step and clung to Aurora’s trousers. The air grew thicker. She tasted sugar, salt, and smoke. Her stomach tightened though she had eaten only an hour earlier. The vineyards stretched farther than they had from the ridge. Their rows curved in impossible patterns, spiralling around low hills and dipping beneath the ground before emerging again. Between the vines stood scarecrows dressed in formal coats. Their heads consisted of polished silver plates. Each plate reflected Aurora’s face with a different expression: smiling, weeping, baring her teeth. One wore her face with a crescent scar on its wrist. Aurora stopped. The scarecrow’s silver head turned. “Don’t look at it,” Isolde said. Aurora kept her eyes on the ground. “It looks like me.” “Many things here wear what they desire.” “That wasn’t comforting.” “Comfort fattens the soul.” A bell rang from the valley. The scarecrow beside them lifted one arm. Straw spilled from its sleeve. Its silver face opened down the middle, revealing a black cavity lined with small human teeth. Nyx moved first. Their body flowed across the road, broadening into a wall of shadow. The scarecrow lunged. Its arm stretched, joints bending in the wrong direction, fingers scraping across Nyx’s chest. The Fae blade flashed. Aurora stepped around Nyx and cut through the scarecrow’s wrist. The moonsilver edge passed through straw, bone, and the invisible force holding the thing upright. The severed hand struck the dust and began crawling towards the vines. The scarecrow made no sound. Its silver head turned towards Aurora. Inside the open mouth, the teeth clicked together. She drove the blade into its chest. Cold burst through the hilt. Frost raced across the scarecrow’s coat, sealing the straw beneath a shell of white. The silver face dimmed. Its body folded in on itself and collapsed into a heap of dry reeds. The vineyards went still. Aurora yanked the dagger free. Its blade remained spotless. Nyx reformed beside her. A long tear ran from their shoulder to their hip, showing the amber sky through their body. Darkness knitted the gap closed. “You cut quickly,” they murmured. “I had a good target.” “Everything in this place is a target.” Isolde examined the ruined scarecrow. “That one guarded the road.” “Past tense?” “It guards the road differently now.” Aurora stared at the reeds. “How many more?” Isolde’s gaze travelled down the winding path. The scarecrows stood in rows among the vines. Hundreds of them. Some wore soldiers’ uniforms, others silk robes, others plain shirts and work boots. Their silver faces reflected the amber sky. One by one, they turned towards Aurora. The pendant burned against her chest. At the base of the nearest hill, an archway rose from the earth. It had not been there a moment ago. Two enormous stone pillars supported a lintel carved with a feast: roast beasts, towers of bread, bowls overflowing with jewels. A dark opening waited beneath it. Warm golden light leaked from the threshold. Music drifted up the road. Flutes. Drums. Laughter. Then a voice called from beneath the arch. “Late guests.” Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger. A figure stepped into view. He wore a green velvet coat embroidered with crimson thread, and a silver mask covered the upper half of his face. His mouth remained bare, wide and wet, with a smile that reached almost to his ears. He held a tray piled with steaming pastries. Each pastry had a tiny face pressed into its crust. Isolde stopped three steps ahead of them. The masked figure bowed. “Come,” he called. “The prince has set another place.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.415
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silk"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"weight"
count3
4
word"stomach"
count2
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"desire"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"velvet"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"pulse"
2"warmth"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"depths"
6"trembled"
7"could feel"
8"desire"
9"comforting"
10"raced"
11"velvet"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences172
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences214
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1658
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1431
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Isolde12
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Silver1
Aurora27
Fae-forged1
Nyx11
Fae3
Grove1
One5
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Nyx"
4"One"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.557
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1658
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences214
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs128
mean12.95
std14.45
cv1.115
sampleLengths
010
132
23
335
421
57
68
738
836
97
1032
118
128
136
145
155
167
175
1844
193
204
2154
229
2368
244
255
2629
2710
2811
2910
3029
317
326
3322
344
354
363
372
383
3944
407
413
4228
435
443
4510
465
475
4819
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences214
ratio0.014
matches
0"Folded—like a sheet of dark silk pinched between invisible fingers."
1"Far beyond the opening, something rang—a clear note, as delicate as a glass struck with a spoon."
2"Her expression held no fear, but her fingers had tightened around the staff she carried—a pale branch carved with knots and narrow runes."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1271
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thin blue-white gleam."
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.015735641227380016
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0015735641227380016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences214
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences214
mean7.75
std4.75
cv0.614
sampleLengths
010
115
217
33
42
510
617
76
810
911
107
118
129
1311
1418
1516
166
1714
187
1911
209
2112
228
238
246
255
265
274
283
295
306
3115
326
3317
343
354
3618
3714
386
3916
409
415
4211
4315
4414
454
4619
474
485
493
59.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37383177570093457
totalSentences214
uniqueOpeners80
64.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences155
matches
0"Somewhere among the orchards, hundreds"
1"Then another, deeper and slower,"
2"Then a voice called from"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences155
matches
0"Their violet eyes watched the"
1"Its cold travelled through the"
2"It smelled of bruised grapes,"
3"It pressed against her face"
4"Her boots landed on black"
5"Their leaves shone silver-green."
6"She looked down."
7"She pulled it free of"
8"Her expression held no fear,"
9"Their voice reached Aurora as"
10"It cast no light on"
11"Their surfaces bore carvings of"
12"She nudged it with the"
13"Their shadowed fingers hovered over"
14"She could feel cold along"
15"It rose around their ankles"
16"She tasted sugar, salt, and"
17"Her stomach tightened though she"
18"Their rows curved in impossible"
19"Their heads consisted of polished"
ratio0.206
37.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount131
totalSentences155
matches
0"The standing stones formed a"
1"Aurora had passed them twice"
2"The air folded."
3"Folded—like a sheet of dark"
4"The trees beyond the stones"
5"Amber light spilled through the"
6"Aurora’s hand closed around the"
7"The crimson gem held a"
8"The moonlight caught in it,"
9"Wildflowers crowded the grass around"
10"Nyx stood at the edge"
11"Their violet eyes watched the"
12"The amber glow sank into"
13"Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade"
14"The leaf-shaped dagger gave off"
15"Its cold travelled through the"
16"Isolde’s pale lavender eyes rested"
17"Aurora glanced at Nyx."
18"A gust slipped through the"
19"It smelled of bruised grapes,"
ratio0.845
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Wildflowers crowded the grass around her bare feet, their petals brushing her ankles without bending beneath her weight."
1"Her boots landed on black soil that gave beneath her weight, soft as ash."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
93.40% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.208
leniency0.415
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.113
88.1539%