| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.245 | | leniency | 0.49 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.61% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1854 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.37% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1854 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "trembled" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "lurched" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "flicked" | | 12 | "glistening" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 194 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 231 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1851 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1620 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 11 | | Aurora | 31 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Brendan | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Dymas | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Jennifer" | | 7 | "Brendan" | | 8 | "One" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.543 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 84.78% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 115 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a second heartbeat against he" | | 1 | "appeared stretched and distorted, their branches bending toward an unseen center" | | 2 | "as if remembering muscles" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.54 | | wordCount | 1851 | | matches | | 0 | "not as panic, but as a clear, cold understanding" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 231 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 141 | | mean | 13.13 | | std | 14.28 | | cv | 1.088 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 49 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 49 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 63 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 47 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 96.22% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 194 | | matches | | 0 | "was shaped" | | 1 | "been expected" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "being consumed" | | 4 | "been invited" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.38% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 231 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "A cluster of flowers grew beside the ledge—petals translucent and blue, each one shaped like a tiny open mouth." | | 1 | "Laughter followed—too loud, too numerous, rising and falling in waves." | | 2 | "One wore a crown of antlers; the other had a mouth split down the length of his face." | | 3 | "Aurora’s fear arrived then—not as panic, but as a clear, cold understanding." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1626 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 51 | | adverbRatio | 0.03136531365313653 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004305043050430504 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 231 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 231 | | mean | 8.01 | | std | 5.36 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 53.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.354978354978355 | | totalSentences | 231 | | uniqueOpeners | 82 | |
| 58.14% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the fruit opened." | | 1 | "At least, Aurora thought it" | | 2 | "Somewhere, a choir sang in" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "They rose from the bracken" | | 1 | "It felt like a second" | | 2 | "Their shadow stretched across the" | | 3 | "She had no footprints in" | | 4 | "She never did." | | 5 | "She had learned, since leaving" | | 6 | "Her stomach lurched as if" | | 7 | "She landed on black soil." | | 8 | "They stood on a broad" | | 9 | "Its roofs shone red and" | | 10 | "It streamed sideways, flattening itself" | | 11 | "Their shadow spilled onto the" | | 12 | "It was black, though flecks" | | 13 | "They whispered as the wind" | | 14 | "Their violet eyes narrowed." | | 15 | "She pulled out the Heartstone." | | 16 | "They began down the path." | | 17 | "It wound through the vineyards," | | 18 | "She kept her balance by" | | 19 | "It stopped against her boot." |
| | ratio | 0.186 | |
| 58.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 138 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones did not" | | 1 | "They rose from the bracken" | | 2 | "Moonlight silvered their shoulders." | | 3 | "Aurora Carter stopped at the" | | 4 | "The Heartstone answered with a" | | 5 | "It felt like a second" | | 6 | "Their shadow stretched across the" | | 7 | "Violet eyes glimmered within it." | | 8 | "Isolde stood to Aurora’s left," | | 9 | "She had no footprints in" | | 10 | "She never did." | | 11 | "Isolde’s pale lavender eyes remained" | | 12 | "Nyx’s voice drifted over Aurora’s" | | 13 | "The pendant pulsed again." | | 14 | "Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade" | | 15 | "The slender dagger was shaped" | | 16 | "The chill was clean and" | | 17 | "Isolde glanced at it." | | 18 | "Aurora looked at the wavering" | | 19 | "The shimmer resembled heat over" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 29.07% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 172 | | matches | | 0 | "Even at this distance, Aurora" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 66 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Their shadow stretched across the grass despite the moon being behind them, a long, liquid shape that gathered itself into the suggestion of a six-foot-tall per…" | | 1 | "The bones were too large to belong to any animal Aurora recognized, and they flexed slightly beneath her boots as if remembering muscles." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.245 | | leniency | 0.49 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.082 | |