Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41JCP3WXW0HC8VE2FMY4TF

Run Details

Duration:
17.0s
Cost:
$0.017420
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones had not been there when Aurora entered the grove. She remembered the clearing as a ring of ancient oaks and waist-high wildflowers, with Isolde’s cottage crouched beneath the branches. Now seven slabs of black stone rose from the earth, each one taller than Aurora and slick with silver veins. Their surfaces held no carvings, yet the longer she looked, the more they seemed to shift beneath her gaze. The air between them bent. Aurora touched the Heartstone pendant at her throat. The crimson gem pressed warm against her skin, pulsing in time with something beyond the stones. Nyx stood at the edge of the clearing in solid form, a tall silhouette cut from darkness. Their faint violet eyes watched the space between the monoliths. “Tell me that is not a door,” Aurora said. Isolde’s silver hair spilled over one shoulder as she studied the stones. Her bare feet hovered a finger’s breadth above the grass. Not a single flower bent beneath her. “A door is a mouth that has learned manners,” she murmured. “This one has forgotten both.” “That sounds like a yes.” “It is a yes.” Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade from its sheath at her hip. The moonsilver dagger caught the weak daylight and gave off a pale gleam. Cold climbed through her fingers. Beyond the stones, the world rippled like water disturbed by a falling leaf. Through the distortion she saw a slope covered in red vines, a sky the colour of old amber, and trees with pale trunks twisted into shapes that resembled grasping hands. Then the image vanished. Aurora glanced towards the oak canopy. The grove’s light had changed. Richmond Park lay beyond the trees, full of distant traffic and winter-grey branches, but the sounds seemed muffled beneath thick cloth. Even the wind had stopped. “How long will we be gone?” she asked. Isolde tilted her head. “Long enough for bread to rise, short enough for a kingdom to fall.” “That is not useful.” “It is the truest answer I have.” Nyx’s shadow stretched across the grass, sliding towards the stones. “We should cross before the door closes.” Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger. “And if it does?” “Then we find another way out.” “From where?” Nyx turned their violet gaze on her. “Wherever it takes us.” The Heartstone flared against Aurora’s chest. Heat spread beneath her collarbone. The distortion between the stones widened, revealing a landscape that could not belong beneath any earthly sky. Rows of dark trees climbed distant hills. Their branches carried clusters of glassy fruit, each one glowing from within. Rivers of golden liquid wound through the valleys. Far away, something vast moved behind a ridge, its outline breaking the amber horizon. Aurora swallowed. “I’m going first.” Isolde’s pale eyes sharpened. “The first foot leaves the old road. The second foot belongs to the place.” “Then I’ll keep both feet moving.” She stepped between the stones. The world folded. For one breath, Aurora felt every part of herself pulled in a different direction. Her bones seemed to stretch through miles of darkness. Her teeth rang. The pendant burned hot enough to hurt. Then her boots struck stone. She stumbled forwards, caught herself on one knee, and dragged in a breath that tasted of honey, smoke, and ripe fruit left too long in the sun. Nyx emerged behind her without a sound. The shadow of their body thinned at the edges, leaking across the ground before pulling itself back into a humanoid shape. Isolde followed last. Her silver hair lifted in a wind Aurora could not feel. When she crossed the threshold, the standing stones vanished behind her. Aurora spun around. No grove waited on the other side. A wall of red stone rose ten paces behind them, smooth and unbroken. Thin golden lines ran through it like veins. “The door moved,” Aurora said. “Doors enjoy a change of scenery,” Isolde replied. The ground beneath Aurora’s boots consisted of dark, polished stone. It stretched into a broad terrace carved into the side of a hill. Beyond the terrace, the land rolled down towards a valley filled with vineyards. The vines grew as tall as houses. Their trunks twisted around one another, black and glossy, while their leaves flashed between green, purple, and a deep blue that hurt the eyes. Clusters of grapes hung beneath the leaves, each fruit the size of a plum. Some glowed amber. Others contained tiny flickering shapes that darted behind their skins. Aurora took a step closer. One of the grapes split open. A pale insect unfolded from the pulp, its wings wet and translucent. It crawled over the skin, shook itself dry, and flew into the warm air. Aurora stopped. Nyx leaned towards the vine. Their shadow stretched across the roots. “Do not touch the fruit.” “I wasn’t going to.” “You were thinking about it.” “I was looking.” “Looking becomes touching when hunger enters the conversation.” Aurora glanced at the pendant. Its crimson glow had faded to a low, steady pulse. The warmth remained. “What is this place?” Isolde moved to the terrace edge. She looked across the valley without leaving a footprint in the dust. “Where hunger wears a crown and every feast keeps a ledger.” “Hel?” “Not all of it. One mouth. One appetite. One prince who learned to make a kingdom from wanting.” Aurora stared at the vineyards. “Dymas.” Isolde inclined her head. The name seemed to thicken the air. A low vibration travelled through the stone beneath their feet. It rose through Aurora’s boots and settled behind her ribs. Across the valley, the vines shuddered. Fruit knocked against fruit with a sound like distant applause. The sky burned above them, warm amber from horizon to horizon. No sun hung in it. Instead, broad ribbons of light moved across the heavens, slow and liquid, as though something stirred fire beneath a sheet of glass. Aurora searched for shadows. The trees cast them, but they pointed in different directions. One vineyard fell eastward. Another stretched its darkness towards the sky. A third had no shadow at all. “This place has no sun,” she said. “It has plenty of light,” Nyx replied. “Light does not require honesty.” “That sounded like experience.” “I have met many kinds of light.” Their voice came as a whisper riding the wind, though no breeze touched Aurora’s face. A path descended from the terrace. It had been paved with flat pieces of ivory, each one marked by a thumb-sized indentation. When Aurora looked closer, the marks resolved into faces. Hundreds of them. Some smiled. Some screamed. Some stared up at her with closed eyes. She drew back. The nearest face opened its mouth. A thin breath escaped the stone. Aurora’s hand went to the Fae blade. Isolde caught her wrist before she could strike. Her fingers felt cool and strong. “Do not cut what remembers being whole.” The face in the path closed its mouth. Aurora pulled free. The crescent scar on her left wrist flashed white beneath the skin. “Does everything here talk?” “Only what has been made to listen.” “By whom?” “By the hand that pours the wine, and the hand that counts the cups.” Nyx stepped onto the path. The ivory faces remained still beneath their feet. “Come.” Aurora followed, keeping her eyes on the ground. The path curved down through the vineyard. Heat gathered between the towering vines. It clung to her neck and settled beneath her clothes, carrying the scents of cinnamon, wet earth, burnt sugar, and meat roasting somewhere out of sight. The deeper they went, the louder Dymas became. At first Aurora heard only the scrape of leaves. Then came the clatter of metal, the distant crash of crockery, and bursts of laughter that rose and fell across the valley. Pipes played a winding melody from somewhere ahead. Every few notes, another instrument joined in: drums, bells, a plucked string that sounded like a harp played underwater. The vines leaned over the path. One tendril curled around Aurora’s shoulder. She slashed it with the moonsilver blade. The cut opened with a hiss. Thick red sap spilled over the stone and smoked. The whole vineyard fell silent. Aurora held the dagger in both hands. “Keep walking,” Nyx whispered. The vines withdrew. Something moved behind the leaves. Dozens of small points of light blinked between the branches. Eyes, perhaps. Or lamps. One by one, they vanished. Isolde looked back at the severed tendril. “Silver remembers the moon,” she said. “Dymas remembers the wound.” “Will it hold a grudge?” “Fruit ripens. Debts do not.” “That one I understood.” The path opened into a garden. Aurora stopped so fast Nyx nearly passed through her. Terraces spread across the hillside, each one planted with a different kind of impossible crop. A grove of white trees carried pears that dripped blue flame. Low bushes bore red flowers with tiny golden teeth. A pond brimmed with black water, and pale fish swam through it with human hands instead of fins. At the centre of the garden stood a fountain shaped like a woman kneeling beneath the weight of an enormous bowl. Wine poured from the bowl in three colours—ruby, gold, and a dark violet that seemed to swallow the amber light. A cluster of figures gathered around it. They wore aprons stained with sauces, wine, ash, and blood. Some had human faces. Others had snouts, horns, or smooth masks without features. One broad-shouldered man had six arms, each holding a different knife. He carved a roasted bird while it flapped on the platter. The bird screeched. The cooks laughed. Aurora’s stomach tightened. A smaller figure noticed them. It had the body of a child and the head of a fox, with black eyes and a red tongue that hung almost to its chest. It pointed one claw towards Aurora’s pendant. “Fresh course,” it called. The others turned. The sound of their attention pressed against Aurora’s skin. Nyx moved in front of her. Their body lost its solid edges, spreading into a wall of black mist. The fox-headed creature bared its teeth. “Shade.” “Kitchen rat,” Nyx breathed. The creature’s grin widened. Isolde stepped beside Nyx, her silver hair lifting in the still air. “We have not come to dine.” The fox-headed creature sniffed. “No one comes here for the conversation.” Aurora kept the dagger low. “We need to reach the palace.” The six-armed cook paused with one knife halfway through the bird. The garden seemed to lean closer. “Everyone needs to reach the palace,” the cook said. “The question is what they will bring to the table.” Aurora looked beyond the garden. Far across the valley, a structure rose from the amber haze. It had towers shaped like overturned goblets and walls layered with balconies, terraces, and vast open windows. Bridges connected its upper floors. Smoke curled from chimneys in fragrant ribbons. At the highest point, a dark crown of stone surrounded a single red light. The Heartstone answered with a warm pulse. The cook followed her gaze and gave a wet chuckle. “Ah. You already carry a serving.” Aurora’s fingers closed around the pendant. “What do you know about this?” The cook lifted all six knives. The roasted bird screamed beneath the blade. “In Dymas, little mortal, nothing enters the palace without a price.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1888
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
78.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1888
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"resolved"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"resolved"
4"weight"
5"stomach"
6"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences183
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences183
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences228
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1887
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.11% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1564
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora35
Isolde11
Heartstone3
Fae-forged1
Park1
Nyx12
Fae2
Dymas1
One5
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
4"Dymas"
5"One"
places
0"Park"
1"Fae"
globalScore0.381
windowScore0.5
88.52% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences122
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed muffled beneath thick cloth"
1"sounded like a harp played underwater"
2"violet that seemed to swallow the amber light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1887
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences228
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs137
mean13.77
std14.3
cv1.038
sampleLengths
012
159
25
324
427
59
629
716
85
94
1029
1143
124
1337
148
154
1613
174
187
1910
207
2111
226
232
247
254
266
2763
282
293
3018
316
325
333
3433
355
3627
3728
3825
393
4028
415
428
4336
4458
455
466
4726
482
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences183
matches
0"been paved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs251
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences228
ratio0.004
matches
0"Wine poured from the bowl in three colours—ruby, gold, and a dark violet that seemed to swallow the amber light."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1573
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"seemed muffled beneath thick cloth."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.01652892561983471
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0019071837253655435
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences228
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences228
mean8.28
std5.26
cv0.636
sampleLengths
012
120
220
319
45
58
616
717
810
99
1012
1110
127
1311
145
155
164
1711
1813
195
2013
2130
224
236
245
2521
265
278
284
2913
304
317
3210
337
347
354
366
372
387
394
406
415
4217
437
4412
458
4614
472
483
494
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35964912280701755
totalSentences228
uniqueOpeners82
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences166
matches
0"Then the image vanished."
1"Even the wind had stopped."
2"Then her boots struck stone."
3"Instead, broad ribbons of light"
4"Then came the clatter of"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences166
matches
0"She remembered the clearing as"
1"Their surfaces held no carvings,"
2"Their faint violet eyes watched"
3"Her bare feet hovered a"
4"Their branches carried clusters of"
5"She stepped between the stones."
6"Her bones seemed to stretch"
7"Her teeth rang."
8"She stumbled forwards, caught herself"
9"Her silver hair lifted in"
10"It stretched into a broad"
11"Their trunks twisted around one"
12"It crawled over the skin,"
13"Their shadow stretched across the"
14"Its crimson glow had faded"
15"She looked across the valley"
16"It rose through Aurora’s boots"
17"Their voice came as a"
18"It had been paved with"
19"She drew back."
ratio0.175
50.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences166
matches
0"The standing stones had not"
1"She remembered the clearing as"
2"Their surfaces held no carvings,"
3"The air between them bent."
4"Aurora touched the Heartstone pendant"
5"The crimson gem pressed warm"
6"Nyx stood at the edge"
7"Their faint violet eyes watched"
8"Isolde’s silver hair spilled over"
9"Her bare feet hovered a"
10"Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade"
11"The moonsilver dagger caught the"
12"Aurora glanced towards the oak"
13"The grove’s light had changed."
14"Richmond Park lay beyond the"
15"Isolde tilted her head."
16"Nyx’s shadow stretched across the"
17"Aurora tightened her grip on"
18"Nyx turned their violet gaze"
19"The Heartstone flared against Aurora’s"
ratio0.819
30.12% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences166
matches
0"Now seven slabs of black"
ratio0.006
86.17% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Through the distortion she saw a slope covered in red vines, a sky the colour of old amber, and trees with pale trunks twisted into shapes that resembled graspi…"
1"The distortion between the stones widened, revealing a landscape that could not belong beneath any earthly sky."
2"Others contained tiny flickering shapes that darted behind their skins."
3"Instead, broad ribbons of light moved across the heavens, slow and liquid, as though something stirred fire beneath a sheet of glass."
4"It clung to her neck and settled beneath her clothes, carrying the scents of cinnamon, wet earth, burnt sugar, and meat roasting somewhere out of sight."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.105
90.6340%