Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41K91HGK661V98CTKKSBXZ

Run Details

Duration:
29.4s
Cost:
$0.035398
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone began to throb against Aurora’s sternum before the old oak stones came into view. Each pulse pushed heat through her shirt, a small fist of fire beneath the silver chain. Richmond Park lay behind them in a grey smear of rain and bare branches, but the gap between the standing stones held no weather. Amber light poured through it. Nyx stopped at Aurora’s shoulder. Their tall outline drank the darkness around the stones, though no darkness remained inside the opening. Violet eyes hovered in a face without features. “That was not there yesterday.” Isolde’s silver hair hung straight down her back, untouched by the wind. Wildflowers crowded around her bare feet: bluebells, foxgloves, tiny red poppies, all blooming through winter mud. “Yesterday had manners,” she replied. “Tonight it had hunger.” Aurora gripped the Fae-forged blade beneath her coat. The moonsilver dagger chilled her palm through its leather sheath. She had brought it because Isolde had pressed it into her hand before they left the grove, and because Isolde rarely gave anything without making it sound like a warning. The portal made no noise. It looked like someone had cut a doorway from the night and filled it with a sunset. Beyond the stones, terraces rolled beneath a warm amber sky. Vines climbed white arches taller than houses. Golden fruit swelled among black leaves. In the distance, towers rose from a city of pale stone, their roofs shaped like overturned goblets. Smoke drifted above them in long blue ribbons. The air carried roasted spice, crushed grapes, sugar, woodsmoke, and something rich enough to make Aurora’s empty stomach clench. “Dymas,” Isolde murmured. Aurora looked at her. “You’ve been?” “I have seen it from a great many places.” “That wasn’t what I asked.” “No.” Nyx moved one long hand towards the portal. Shadow curled from their fingers and vanished in the amber light. “The Veil had split wider than a rift,” they whispered. “This was a gate.” “Can it close behind us?” “It could.” Aurora glanced over her shoulder. The grove waited on the other side: the rain, the black branches, the London sky. Her flat above Silas’s bar felt very far away. So did the Golden Empress, Yu-Fei shouting at delivery drivers who crushed the cartons, the greasy warmth of the kitchen, the familiar shriek of buses on wet roads. The Heartstone kicked once against her chest. A pulse answered from the other side. She stepped through. Heat wrapped around her face and hands. Her boots struck pale gravel, dry and warm. The portal snapped shut behind her with the sound of a wineglass breaking. Aurora spun. There were only standing stones now, but not the oak pillars from Richmond. These stood smooth and white, veined with crimson. Each had been carved into the shape of a giant gnawed bone. Vines crawled over their bases, heavy with purple grapes. Nyx appeared beside her without crossing the ground between. Their body lost its solidity at the edges, where their shadow bled into the gravel. Isolde followed last. Her feet touched down without leaving a mark. “Well,” Aurora muttered. “That felt welcoming.” A low bell sounded somewhere over the hills. The note rolled across the vineyards, deep enough to vibrate in Aurora’s teeth. All along the terraces, things moved. At first she took them for workers. Figures bent between the vines in loose white shirts and dark trousers, carrying baskets balanced on their hips. Then one straightened. His face had no eyes. Smooth skin stretched from brow to cheekbones, unbroken except for a mouth that opened too wide as he smiled at them. Purple juice ran down his chin. He lifted a hand in greeting and went back to picking grapes. Aurora’s hand tightened around the dagger. “That one didn’t look contracted,” Nyx whispered. “What did it look like?” “A warning with a basket.” Isolde walked towards a narrow path cut between the vines. “Do not eat anything offered here.” Aurora followed. “That rule came out fast.” “Food built Dymas. Food ruled Dymas before Prince Belphegor put a crown on it.” A grape fell from the vine and burst at Aurora’s feet. Its skin split. Inside sat a tiny pearl-coloured tooth. She stepped around it. The path took them downhill. Vines brushed Aurora’s sleeves, their leaves broad and dark as polished leather. The clusters overhead changed as they passed: green grapes that glowed from within; fruit shaped like small hearts; pale berries with thin human fingers growing from their stems. A breeze rustled the vineyard, but the leaves whispered words instead of brushing together. Hungry. Hungry. Hungry. Aurora stopped. The whispering stopped with her. Nyx’s violet gaze turned towards the vines. “They knew you listened.” “Brilliant.” “You should not answer them.” “I wasn’t planning a conversation with produce.” The path opened onto an orchard. Trees rose from black soil in rows that disappeared into amber haze. Their trunks twisted like braided muscle. Fruit hung low enough to touch: gold pears with glassy centres, pomegranates that clicked their seeds against their skins, red apples covered in tiny closed eyelids. One apple opened every eye at once. Aurora took a step back. A little girl sat beneath the tree. She wore a dress of stitched yellow petals and held a silver platter in her lap. On it rested a cake the size of a dinner plate, iced in cream so white it hurt to look at. “Guests,” the girl sang. Her voice carried no child’s softness. It scraped like a knife drawn over a bowl. Aurora kept walking. The girl appeared in front of them. No footsteps. No rustle of fabric. One moment she sat beneath the tree, the next she blocked the path. “Guests eat.” Isolde raised her pale lavender eyes. “Children should not stand in roads.” “I am older than roads.” “Then you should know better.” The girl’s smile collapsed. Her lips peeled back from rows of brown, uneven teeth. “Eat.” The scent of the cake reached Aurora. Vanilla. Butter. Burnt sugar. Then another smell slid beneath it, sharp and familiar: chips wrapped in paper, vinegar soaking through the bag. She saw herself at nineteen on a Cardiff pavement, Evan beside her, his hand locked around her wrist hard enough to leave bruises. The crescent scar on her left wrist prickled. She drew the Fae blade. Moonlight did not touch Dymas, yet the dagger gave off a thin silver glow. The little girl recoiled. Her petal dress browned at the edges. “That wasn’t an offer,” Aurora told her. “That was bait.” The child hissed. Her body unfolded, limbs stretching until her head rose above the lowest branches. Her face split from chin to forehead. Inside the dark opening, Aurora saw a throat lined with teeth. Nyx poured across the ground. Their shadow climbed the creature’s legs, wrapped its arms, filled the open mouth. The thing thrashed. Fruit tumbled from the trees and cracked against the soil. A pomegranate split open, spilling not seeds but tiny black beetles that scattered beneath Aurora’s boots. “Go,” Nyx breathed. Aurora did not need asking twice. They ran through the orchard while something behind them choked on darkness. Isolde glided ahead, silver hair streaming behind her like a banner. The orchard gave way to terraces lined with fountains. Wine poured from the mouths of marble lions into broad basins. The liquid steamed when it struck the surface. Aurora slowed at the first fountain. A man stood waist-deep in the wine, scooping it into his mouth with both hands. He wore a waiter’s black waistcoat over a shirt stained purple. His cheeks sagged. His stomach bulged against the water, swollen beyond any human shape. “Sir?” Aurora called before she could stop herself. The man froze. Slowly, he turned. His eyes were human. Grey. Bloodshot. Horrified. “Don’t drink,” he rasped. His hands plunged into the fountain again. He drank. Wine ran from the corners of his mouth, down his throat, over his chest. Aurora stepped towards the basin. Isolde caught her elbow. Her fingers felt cool and dry. “He has a contract.” “He needs help.” “He needs a price paid. Help does not reach him from here.” The man looked at Aurora as if he had heard every word. “London?” he asked. Aurora’s throat closed. “What’s your name?” He laughed once, a broken sound. “Forgot it. Forgot my wife. Forgot the bloody—” His hands hauled another flood of wine into his mouth. Nyx’s shadow widened over the gravel. “We had been noticed.” The bell sounded again. This time it rang three times. Across the terraces, workers stopped harvesting. The eyeless figures stood between the vines. Orchard trees turned their branches towards the path. In the far city, a thousand windows brightened, one after another, until the pale towers watched them with gold-lit eyes. The Heartstone burned. Aurora pulled it free from her shirt. The crimson gem glowed in her palm, its inner light beating in time with something far below the ground. A crack opened in the terrace wall. It began as a hairline between two blocks of white stone. Then it widened with a groan, dropping chips of masonry into darkness. Cold air rose from it, carrying none of the orchard’s sweetness. It smelled of wet iron and ashes. A stairway curled down beneath the vineyard. Carved into the first step sat the same symbol that marked the Heartstone: a circle split by a jagged red line. Isolde’s expression sharpened. “The stone remembered its road.” Aurora stared into the dark. “You knew it could do that?” “I knew it might.” “That word does a lot of work in your vocabulary.” Behind them, the man in the wine fountain began to scream. Not in pain. In warning. From the city, something answered him. A horn blasted across Dymas. The note dragged through the terraces, and every vine bowed towards the stair. Nyx stood at the opening, their violet eyes fixed on the depths. “Below,” they whispered, “something had been waiting for the Heartstone.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.511
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1664
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"chilled"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"streaming"
count1
8
word"marble"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"pulse"
2"chilled"
3"stomach"
4"warmth"
5"familiar"
6"footsteps"
7"streaming"
8"marble"
9"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences173
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences173
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences208
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1664
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions73
wordCount1455
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Aurora28
Park1
Fae-forged1
Isolde10
London1
Silas1
Golden2
Empress1
Yu-Fei1
Richmond2
Cardiff1
Evan1
Fae2
Dymas2
Nyx9
Vines3
Hungry3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Nyx"
6"Vines"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Cardiff"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.538
windowScore0.5
83.04% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences112
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like someone had cut a doorway fro"
1"appeared beside her without crossing the ground between"
2"appeared in front of them"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.601
wordCount1664
matches
0"not seeds but tiny black beetles"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences208
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs120
mean13.87
std14.34
cv1.034
sampleLengths
016
145
229
35
428
59
648
722
848
919
103
116
129
135
141
1519
1614
175
182
1957
207
217
223
2328
242
2542
2624
2711
286
298
3013
316
3228
335
3439
356
367
375
385
3916
407
4114
4220
434
4459
451
461
471
482
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs240
matches
0"were only standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences208
ratio0.005
matches
0"The clusters overhead changed as they passed: green grapes that glowed from within; fruit shaped like small hearts; pale berries with thin human fingers growing from their stems."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1460
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tiny pearl-coloured tooth."
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.024657534246575342
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.002054794520547945
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences208
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences208
mean8
std5.59
cv0.699
sampleLengths
016
116
224
35
45
516
68
75
812
916
105
114
128
1310
1430
155
1617
1710
187
196
2017
218
2219
233
244
252
269
275
281
298
3011
3110
324
335
342
355
3615
379
3828
397
407
413
427
438
4413
452
4613
478
4812
499
60.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences208
uniqueOpeners80
89.49% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences149
matches
0"Then one straightened."
1"Then another smell slid beneath"
2"Slowly, he turned."
3"Then it widened with a"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences149
matches
0"Their tall outline drank the"
1"She had brought it because"
2"It looked like someone had"
3"Her flat above Silas’s bar"
4"She stepped through."
5"Her boots struck pale gravel,"
6"Their body lost its solidity"
7"Her feet touched down without"
8"His face had no eyes."
9"He lifted a hand in"
10"Its skin split."
11"She stepped around it."
12"Their trunks twisted like braided"
13"She wore a dress of"
14"Her voice carried no child’s"
15"It scraped like a knife"
16"Her lips peeled back from"
17"She saw herself at nineteen"
18"She drew the Fae blade."
19"Her petal dress browned at"
ratio0.228
47.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences149
matches
0"The Heartstone began to throb"
1"Each pulse pushed heat through"
2"Richmond Park lay behind them"
3"Amber light poured through it."
4"Nyx stopped at Aurora’s shoulder."
5"Their tall outline drank the"
6"Violet eyes hovered in a"
7"Isolde’s silver hair hung straight"
8"Wildflowers crowded around her bare"
9"Aurora gripped the Fae-forged blade"
10"The moonsilver dagger chilled her"
11"She had brought it because"
12"The portal made no noise."
13"It looked like someone had"
14"Vines climbed white arches taller"
15"Smoke drifted above them in"
16"The air carried roasted spice,"
17"Aurora looked at her."
18"Nyx moved one long hand"
19"Shadow curled from their fingers"
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"So did the Golden Empress, Yu-Fei shouting at delivery drivers who crushed the cartons, the greasy warmth of the kitchen, the familiar shriek of buses on wet ro…"
1"Smooth skin stretched from brow to cheekbones, unbroken except for a mouth that opened too wide as he smiled at them."
2"The clusters overhead changed as they passed: green grapes that glowed from within; fruit shaped like small hearts; pale berries with thin human fingers growing…"
3"Trees rose from black soil in rows that disappeared into amber haze."
4"Carved into the first step sat the same symbol that marked the Heartstone: a circle split by a jagged red line."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
1.06% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"the girl sang (sing)"
5"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
6"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.234
leniency0.468
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.298
85.4450%