Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41KBNWSG8X5ASFRQE580PC

Run Details

Duration:
35.9s
Cost:
$0.044050
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon raven above the door threw a sickly wing across the wet pavement. Aurora stood beneath it with a stack of empty tonic bottles tucked against her hip, watching a woman across the road argue with a taxi driver. The woman jabbed one finger at the meter. “You took me through bloody Regent Street.” The driver leaned across his seat and pointed at the roadworks ahead. “Regent Street was moving.” “You could have told me.” “You could have walked.” Aurora tipped the bottles into the recycling crate by the alley wall. Glass knocked against glass. The woman turned at the sound. For a second, neither of them moved. Then the taxi pulled away, spraying gutter water over the woman’s bright red boots. “Aurora?” Rory’s hand closed around the neck of an empty bottle. The woman had cut her hair. That was the first thing. Eva’s dark curls had once reached the middle of her back, a thick untameable curtain that carried the scent of cigarettes, hair oil, and whatever cheap perfume she’d found in a corner shop. Now her hair sat in a sharp blond crop, exposing the pale line of her throat. She wore a camel coat over a black suit, a leather case tucked beneath one arm. Gold flashed at her ears. But her mouth still tilted at one corner before she smiled, as if she had a private joke waiting behind her teeth. “Oh, God,” Eva breathed. “It is you.” Rory set the bottle down. “You’ve gone blond.” Eva laughed once, then stopped when Rory did not join her. “You’ve gone black.” “It’s my natural colour.” “Since when?” “Since I stopped bleaching it in your bathroom sink.” Eva crossed the road without looking for traffic. A motorbike tore past her knee. The rider swore. Eva did not flinch. “I thought you were still in Cardiff.” “I thought you were dead.” “That was dramatic.” “You vanished.” A group of smokers spilled from the Nest’s doorway behind Rory, wrapped in wool coats and alcohol. Someone held the door open. Bass and glassware clattered from inside. Eva looked up at the raven sign. “You own this place?” “I lived upstairs.” “Above a bar?” “Rent had advantages.” “That wasn’t an answer.” “It was the available answer.” Eva’s smile changed shape. The first shock left her face and something more careful took its place. She looked at Rory’s black jeans, the faded Golden Empress jacket tied around her waist, the small crescent scar visible where her sleeve had ridden back. “You worked here?” “I helped out.” “You used to hate bars.” “I hated the sort where men in rugby shirts spilled lager on your shoes and asked why you looked miserable.” “You punched one of them.” “He called you a slut.” “He called both of us sluts.” “You cried in the toilets.” “I had contact lenses in. It could have been anything.” Rory pulled the door open. “Come in or stand under the neon until it turned you green.” The Raven’s Nest held its breath around them. Old maps overlapped on the walls: trade routes, colonial borders, railway lines that ended in names no one used anymore. Black-and-white photographs hung between them, framed faces at embassy dinners, soldiers on airfields, women in hats outside buildings with no signs. Lamps pooled amber light over scarred tables. At the far end of the bar, Silas polished a tumbler with a white cloth. His hazel eyes moved from Rory to Eva and back. He did not ask a question. “Whisky,” Eva called, lifting two fingers. “Something expensive enough to disguise my terrible choices.” Silas placed the tumbler down. “Your friend drank?” “She drank anything put in front of her,” Rory answered. Eva looked at her. “That sounded less fond than you meant it to.” “I meant it exactly.” Silas took down a bottle from the top shelf. His silver signet ring clicked against the glass neck. “Two?” he asked Rory. “No.” “Tea, then.” Rory slid onto a stool at the end of the bar. Eva took the stool beside her, then shifted her leather case off her shoulder and set it between them. The case had a brass clasp. Her thumbnail tapped against it. Silas poured the whisky and pushed it across. Eva held the glass but did not drink. “I came in because of the sign,” she said. “I remembered a place in Soho with a green bird over the door. I didn’t expect…” Her gaze settled on Rory again. “What did you expect?” “Someone else.” “That happened.” Eva’s jaw tightened. “You did leave, then.” Rory watched Silas fill the kettle behind the bar. “You sent one text.” “I sent six.” “Not to me.” “I did.” “Not to my number.” Eva stared at her whisky. “I had your number.” “You had Evan’s number. You kept calling his phone.” “He told me you’d changed it.” “He told you?” “He picked up. I asked for you. He said you didn’t want to hear from anyone. He said you were dealing with things.” The kettle began to hiss. Rory rubbed the scar on her wrist with her thumb. “And you believed him.” Eva put both hands around her glass. “I’d met him twice.” “You saw him grab my arm at your birthday.” “I saw you pull away.” “He left marks.” “You covered them.” “You knew I covered them.” Silas set a mug of tea before Rory. Steam softened the hard planes of his face. He looked at Eva without warmth. “You had a message for the lady, you should have found the lady.” Eva lifted her eyes. “I was twenty-two.” “So was she.” The bar door opened. Cold air swept across the room with two men in office shirts and loosened ties. One pointed at the map of Eastern Europe and began explaining it incorrectly to the other. A woman at a corner table laughed into her phone. Eva drank. Her face pinched at the burn. “I did find you,” she said. Rory’s fingers stopped against the mug. “When?” “Three years ago. I went to Cardiff first. Your mother gave me this look like I’d set fire to the house.” Eva pressed her lips together. “Your father told me you were in London. He wouldn’t give me an address.” “He liked you.” “I know. That made it worse.” “He hated Evan.” “Everyone hated Evan once they had a reason. Before that, people thought he was charming.” “People thought Ted Bundy was charming.” Eva’s gaze flicked up. “There she was.” “Who?” “The girl who used to make me laugh in seminars.” Rory picked up her tea, though it was too hot to drink. “That girl spent three years answering questions about legal theory while her boyfriend checked the mileage on her car.” Eva’s hand went still around the glass. “I should have come to Cardiff.” “You had a job.” “I had a graduate scheme at a consultancy. I had a boss who wore trainers with suits and called women ‘rock stars’ when he wanted them to stay past midnight. I thought being busy made me important.” “It made you busy.” “It made me absent.” Rory looked at the map behind Silas. Thin red lines crossed oceans as if a ruler had solved every distance. “Why were you in Soho three years ago?” Eva opened the leather case. Inside lay a tablet, a notebook, charging cables arranged in elastic loops, and a folded piece of paper gone yellow at the creases. She took out the paper and placed it on the bar. Rory recognised her own handwriting before she read the words. EVA—IF YOU’RE STILL IN LONDON, RING ME. DON’T RING EVAN. JUST ME. Below that sat a number Rory had not used in four years. “You wrote this?” “I found it in my old copy of Woolf. You left it there after that fight at uni.” “I don’t remember.” “You’d been crying.” “I did that a lot.” “You told me Evan didn’t like you seeing me.” Rory folded the note once. Then again. “You told me he sounded controlling.” “I told you he sounded possessive.” “That was a polite word.” “I didn’t know how to say it.” “You always knew how to say things.” Eva gave a small, brittle smile. “I knew how to say things that made me sound clever.” The office men ordered pints. Silas moved down the bar with his limp barely visible unless someone looked for it. Rory had noticed it on her first night in the flat above the Nest, when he had carried her suitcase up two flights of stairs and refused her hands on the heavier end. Eva reached for the folded note. Rory did not let go. “I called that number,” Eva said. “A man answered.” “Silas.” “He asked who I was.” “And?” “I told him Eva Morgan.” Rory looked towards the back bar. Silas had heard. Of course he had heard. He lined up three clean glasses and kept his back to them. “What did he say?” “He said, ‘She knows where to find you if she wants you.’” Rory’s tea had cooled enough to drink. She took a mouthful. “That sounded like him.” “I hated him.” “Most people did, at first.” “I asked if you were safe.” “And?” “He told me safety was a word people used when they wanted a clean answer.” Rory’s mouth tightened despite herself. Eva picked up the whisky, then put it back down untouched. “I wanted to come here. I stood outside. I saw the sign. I saw a delivery bike pull up, and I thought, no. I thought if you were inside, you’d tell me to leave. If you weren’t, I’d look pathetic.” “You did look pathetic.” “I know.” “You still left.” “I did.” Rory folded the note into a small square and slipped it into the pocket of her jacket. Eva watched the movement. “I got married,” she said. Rory looked at the gold band on Eva’s left hand. She had missed it at the door. “To the man with the terrible trainers?” “His name was Paul. His trainers improved.” “That wasn’t the important detail.” “No.” Eva rolled the ring beneath her thumb. “He was kind. That was the whole problem.” Rory waited. “He wanted a house in Surrey. A dog. Children once we had enough savings, though the number changed each year. He wanted Sunday lunches with his parents and holidays where nothing unexpected happened. I kept waiting for him to become someone I needed to escape.” “And he didn’t.” “He bought me a coffee machine for our anniversary.” “That was grounds for divorce.” “I laughed when I opened it. He looked at me like I’d slapped him.” “What happened?” “I left.” The words landed without drama. Eva’s face remained composed, but her hand covered the ring. “Did you leave a note in a book?” Rory asked. Eva exhaled through her nose. “No. I sat him down at the kitchen table. He made tea. I told him I couldn’t be his wife anymore.” “And?” “He asked if there was someone else.” “There wasn’t?” “No.” Eva met Rory’s eyes. “There was nobody. That made it uglier.” Silas returned, placed a fresh napkin beneath Eva’s glass, and looked at the ring. “You paid for that drink?” Eva blinked. “I hadn’t.” “Then you could afford another.” Rory reached for the bottle behind the bar. Silas caught her wrist with two fingers, gentle but firm. His signet ring pressed cold against her skin. “You didn’t work here tonight.” “She’s my guest.” “She arrived from a taxi dispute. That made her a weather event, not a guest.” Eva’s laugh came out rough. This time Rory felt one pull at her own mouth. Silas released her wrist and poured Eva a second measure. He set the bottle down between them. Eva looked at Rory over the rim of her first glass. “I searched for you because I wanted to apologise.” “That sounded exhausting.” “It was.” “Then don’t.” Eva’s brow creased. “Don’t apologise?” “Not yet.” “What did you want instead?” Rory turned the tea mug between her palms. Beyond the window, the rain had thinned to a silver mesh over Soho. The green raven trembled in the reflected glass above Eva’s cropped blond hair, above the expensive coat draped over her stool, above the old note hidden in Rory’s pocket. “I wanted you to tell me why you came back.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences151
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.159
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2066
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2066
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"flicked"
2"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences268
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2065
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions38
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions95
wordCount1120
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity3.48
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Rory35
Nest3
Golden1
Empress1
Raven1
Silas12
Eva39
Eastern1
Europe1
Soho1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nest"
2"Raven"
3"Silas"
4"Eva"
places
0"Eastern"
1"Europe"
2"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2065
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences268
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs208
mean9.93
std11.7
cv1.179
sampleLengths
041
18
27
312
44
55
64
722
87
914
101
1110
1281
1322
147
155
163
1711
183
194
202
219
2221
237
245
253
262
2728
287
294
303
313
323
334
345
3543
363
373
385
3920
405
415
426
435
4410
455
4612
4771
4816
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs194
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences268
ratio0.004
matches
0"EVA—IF YOU’RE STILL IN LONDON, RING ME."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1123
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02404274265360641
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0026714158504007124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences268
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences268
mean7.71
std6.6
cv0.857
sampleLengths
015
126
28
37
412
54
65
74
812
94
106
117
1214
131
1410
156
165
1733
1816
1916
205
2122
224
233
245
253
2611
273
284
292
309
318
326
333
344
357
365
373
382
3917
405
416
427
434
443
453
463
474
485
494
45.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.23507462686567165
totalSentences268
uniqueOpeners63
56.98% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences117
matches
0"Then the taxi pulled away,"
1"Of course he had heard."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences117
matches
0"She wore a camel coat"
1"She looked at Rory’s black"
2"His hazel eyes moved from"
3"He did not ask a"
4"His silver signet ring clicked"
5"he asked Rory"
6"Her thumbnail tapped against it."
7"Her gaze settled on Rory"
8"He looked at Eva without"
9"Her face pinched at the"
10"She took out the paper"
11"He lined up three clean"
12"She took a mouthful."
13"She had missed it at"
14"His signet ring pressed cold"
15"He set the bottle down"
ratio0.137
24.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount102
totalSentences117
matches
0"The green neon raven above"
1"Aurora stood beneath it with"
2"The woman jabbed one finger"
3"The driver leaned across his"
4"Aurora tipped the bottles into"
5"Glass knocked against glass."
6"The woman turned at the"
7"Rory’s hand closed around the"
8"The woman had cut her"
9"That was the first thing."
10"Eva’s dark curls had once"
11"She wore a camel coat"
12"Gold flashed at her ears."
13"Rory set the bottle down."
14"Eva laughed once, then stopped"
15"Eva crossed the road without"
16"A motorbike tore past her"
17"The rider swore."
18"Eva did not flinch."
19"A group of smokers spilled"
ratio0.872
42.74% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now her hair sat in"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Eva’s dark curls had once reached the middle of her back, a thick untameable curtain that carried the scent of cigarettes, hair oil, and whatever cheap perfume …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Eva pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences151
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.132
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.026
88.7484%