Run: 2026-07-09-01KX41MTA7PSWN71HF05CEQKTZ

Run Details

Duration:
17.4s
Cost:
$0.015887
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rift hung between two ancient oak stones, thin as a scratch in glass. Aurora stood before it with one hand around the Fae-forged blade and the other pressed against the Heartstone Pendant beneath her coat. The pendant pulsed against her sternum, warm enough to feel through the fabric. Across the clearing, wildflowers bowed beneath a wind that touched nothing else. Nyx occupied the shadow beneath the left standing stone. Their tall silhouette had no clear edges. Violet eyes watched the rift without blinking. Isolde combed her silver hair over one shoulder. Moonlight caught in the strands, though no moon showed above the grove. “Once we cross, we cannot assume the ground will remember our feet,” she murmured. Aurora glanced at her. “That’s not useful.” “Useful words are little boats. They carry truth across shallow water and sink in deep seas.” “Try again.” Isolde smiled with one corner of her mouth. “Do not step where the path looks hungry.” Aurora looked at the rift. The distortion trembled between the stones. Beyond it, darkness rippled with a warm amber glow. Shapes moved behind the shimmering surface—long branches, perhaps, or fingers. A smell seeped through: ripe fruit, hot iron, wine, and something sweet enough to turn the stomach. Nyx slid from the stone. Their shadow stretched across the grass and climbed the rift. “The passage is open,” they whispered. Their voice moved like air through dead leaves. “It will not remain patient.” “Will it close behind us?” Aurora asked. “It may.” “Can you bring us back?” Nyx’s violet eyes narrowed. “I can find a shadow.” “That wasn’t my question.” “No.” The answer landed cleanly. Aurora tucked the pendant beneath her jumper and tightened her grip on the dagger. Its moonsilver hilt chilled her palm. Isolde had warned her never to draw it without a reason. Aurora had found that advice easier to follow when demons stayed out of her life. She stepped between the stones. The world folded. For one breath, Aurora felt every part of herself pulled in a different direction. Her bones stretched into silver threads. Her teeth rang. The crescent scar on her left wrist burned beneath her sleeve. Then her boots struck stone. Heat rolled over her. Aurora staggered forward, caught herself, and found the ground beneath her feet black and polished like volcanic glass. The rift shimmered behind them, framed by no stones at all. It floated in open air, a vertical tear edged with pale light. Nyx emerged without a sound. Their shadow poured out of the opening and gathered into a six-foot silhouette. Isolde crossed last. Her boots touched the glass without making a mark. The rift snapped shut. A low note travelled through the land. Aurora turned. They stood on a causeway suspended above a valley. Amber light filled the sky from horizon to horizon, with no sun anywhere in sight. Clouds hung in vast curled bands, coloured like bruised honey. Below, vineyards covered the slopes in ordered rows, but the vines did not climb wooden frames. They twisted around pale stone pillars shaped like ribs. Fruit swelled among the leaves. Some of it resembled plums. Some wore translucent skins and glimmered from within. One cluster hung like polished teeth. Another beat with a slow, wet rhythm. Aurora took a step closer to the edge. The valley answered with a roar. Something large moved through the vines. Leaves burst upward in a green wave, then settled. A flock of birds rose from the far slope. Their wings flashed silver. Their bodies had the round, featherless shape of human hearts. Aurora stepped back. Nyx tilted their head. “The air carries old names,” they murmured. “Do any belong to us?” “Not yet.” Isolde rested one hand on the standing-stone pendant at her throat. “A feast waits for every mouth, though not every mouth may leave with its tongue.” Aurora stared at her. “You know, when you phrase things like that, people get nervous.” “The tongue is a poor candle. It lights what lies nearest and leaves the greater dark untouched.” “That didn’t help.” They moved along the causeway. The black stone felt warm through Aurora’s boots. Fine lines ran beneath its surface, glowing amber and red. They pulsed in a pattern like veins. Each time Aurora’s heel landed, a different line brightened and carried light towards the valley. The path ended at a gate formed from two enormous jaws. Ivory teeth rose on either side, each one taller than Aurora. The gums had petrified into dark red stone. Between them waited a road of pale soil. A bell rang somewhere below. The gate opened. No mechanism moved. The teeth simply drew apart, grinding against the sky. Beyond the gate, Dymas unfolded in impossible layers. Gardens spread across terraces suspended in the air. Waterfalls rose from lower levels and streamed upward into floating basins. Orchards grew upside down from the undersides of cliffs. Towers of glazed ceramic leaned over the valley, their windows lit by blue and green flames. Between the terraces ran narrow bridges braided from vines, bone, and gleaming wire. Music drifted over the gardens. Flutes played a tune that kept losing its final note. Drums answered from somewhere inside the ground. Aurora felt wonder lift her chest before unease pressed it down again. People worked among the vines. At first she mistook them for statues. Then one bent to cut a cluster of black grapes, and a chain clattered from its ankle. Another knelt beside a bed of crimson flowers, its hands raw and pale, its face hidden beneath a hood. A third carried a tray of steaming dishes through a row of apple trees. The tray tipped. A single golden pastry rolled onto the soil. The gardener nearest it dropped its shears and lunged. A second figure seized the pastry first. They fought without a sound. Their bodies struck the earth, knocking up clouds of ochre dust, while the vines curled towards them. Aurora stopped. “Are they—” “Bound,” Isolde replied. “Souls?” “The dead wear many uniforms.” One of the figures turned towards the causeway. Its hood slipped back. The face beneath belonged to an old man with no eyes. His mouth opened wider than any human jaw should allow. A thin line of steam escaped between his teeth. Aurora’s fingers closed around the Fae blade. The blind man sniffed the air. “Fresh,” he croaked. The word travelled through the vineyard. Heads lifted. Faces turned. Some had eyes. Some had too many. One woman stared at Aurora with a mouth sewn shut by silver thread. Nyx’s shape lengthened across the road. The workers dropped their gazes. “Keep walking,” Nyx whispered. Aurora did not ask why. She walked. Isolde moved beside her, leaving no footprints in the pale soil. Aurora’s boots sank half an inch with each step, and the ground clung to the soles as if it wanted to keep them. She had to wrench one foot free. The scent changed as they descended. Fermented berries gave way to hot sugar, scorched herbs, and the metallic tang of blood. Steam drifted through the orchard in low ribbons. It curled around Aurora’s knees, warm and damp. Something brushed her calf. She spun. A vine recoiled into the soil. “Plant,” Aurora muttered. Isolde looked down at it. “A root remembers every hand that fed it.” “That one touched me.” “Then it remembers you now.” “That’s worse.” The path curved around a basin filled with liquid gold. Fish swam beneath the surface, their scales stamped with tiny letters. They opened and closed their mouths as the group passed. Their voices came out of the water in fragments. “—owe—” “—contract—” “—seven years—” “—salt—” Aurora leaned over the basin despite herself. The closest fish turned its head. A human eye stared from either side of its silver face. “Don’t read them,” Isolde warned. Aurora straightened. “I wasn’t.” “You were looking.” “There’s a difference.” “In Dymas, looking is often the first bite.” Across the basin, a gatehouse rose from the garden. Its walls consisted of stacked wine casks, each bound with black iron. Red liquid seeped between them and ran in narrow channels along the floor. A pair of figures stood outside. They wore white aprons stained with every colour of fruit. Their heads were covered by masks shaped like smiling pigs. One held a ladle. The other held a cleaver. Aurora’s hand tightened around her dagger. The masked figure with the ladle approached. Its boots splashed through the red channels. “Visitors,” it called. “Unseasoned visitors.” Nyx stepped in front of Aurora. Their form became denser, edges sharpening into a figure cut from midnight. The cleaver bearer lifted its weapon. Isolde touched Aurora’s elbow. “Do not offer them fear,” she whispered. “They season with it.” Aurora’s pulse thudded against the pendant. The Heartstone answered with a faint crimson glow beneath her coat. At once, the masked figures turned towards her. The ladle dipped. “Ah,” it breathed. “A little ember from home.” Aurora drew the Fae-forged blade. Cold flashed along her wrist and up her arm. The moonsilver dagger gave off a pale sheen beneath the amber sky. The two masked figures recoiled as if she had opened a furnace. The ladle clanged against the ground. “Court-metal,” the cleaver bearer hissed. Nyx’s shadow spread over the red channels. The liquid darkened wherever it touched them. Isolde stood with her silver hair drifting in a wind that had not reached Aurora. Her pale lavender eyes fixed on the gatehouse. “We came to pass,” she told the masked figures, “not to dine, and not to be eaten.” The ladle bearer’s mask tilted. “Everyone passes through the kitchen.” “Then open the door.” “Who paid for your passage?” “No one.” The cleaver bearer gave a harsh laugh. “No one enters Dymas unpaid.” Isolde’s expression did not change. “The road beneath us has already accepted a price.” Aurora glanced at the glowing lines in the black stone. The amber veins ran from the causeway into the garden, beneath the basin, beneath the gatehouse. The path had fed on their footsteps. With each step, the light had brightened. The ladle bearer followed her gaze. Aurora raised the blade. “Your road took payment,” she told it. “If you want more, come collect it.” The masked figure stared at the dagger. Behind it, the cask wall shuddered. One of the barrels split open, and a flood of purple wine poured across the floor. The cleaver bearer stepped aside. The gatehouse doors swung inward, revealing a passage lit by hanging lanterns made from transparent fruit. Within each lantern, a small flame curled around a dark seed. From deeper inside came the clatter of knives, the crash of heavy pots, and hundreds of voices reciting the same words in a rhythm that made Aurora’s teeth ache. “Salt the wound. Slice the debt. Serve the name.” Nyx crossed the threshold first. Their shadow swallowed the lantern light. Aurora followed, the blade cold in her hand, while Isolde entered behind her and the gatehouse shut out the amber sky.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1837
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1837
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"chilled"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"trembled"
2"stomach"
3"chilled"
4"shimmered"
5"gleaming"
6"pulse"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences197
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences239
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1836
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.46% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1569
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae-forged2
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Aurora35
Nyx10
Isolde13
Dymas1
One5
Fae3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Dymas"
5"One"
places(empty)
globalScore0.385
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences131
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1836
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences239
matches
0"found that advice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs140
mean13.11
std13.87
cv1.058
sampleLengths
014
147
223
320
414
57
616
72
88
98
105
1142
1215
1319
147
152
165
174
185
194
201
2150
225
233
2434
255
264
2741
2818
2912
304
317
322
3359
345
3526
368
376
3838
393
404
417
425
432
4426
4515
4617
473
485
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences197
matches
0"were covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs281
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences239
ratio0.004
matches
0"Shapes moved behind the shimmering surface—long branches, perhaps, or fingers."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1574
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02096569250317662
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0012706480304955528
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences239
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences239
mean7.68
std4.54
cv0.59
sampleLengths
014
122
213
312
49
57
67
78
812
914
104
113
1216
132
148
158
165
176
189
1910
2017
215
2210
236
248
255
267
272
285
294
305
314
321
334
3414
356
3611
3715
385
393
4014
416
423
4311
445
454
4618
4711
4812
495
56.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3598326359832636
totalSentences239
uniqueOpeners86
37.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences178
matches
0"Then her boots struck stone."
1"Then one bent to cut"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences178
matches
0"Their tall silhouette had no"
1"Their shadow stretched across the"
2"Their voice moved like air"
3"Its moonsilver hilt chilled her"
4"She stepped between the stones."
5"Her bones stretched into silver"
6"Her teeth rang."
7"It floated in open air,"
8"Their shadow poured out of"
9"Her boots touched the glass"
10"They stood on a causeway"
11"They twisted around pale stone"
12"Their wings flashed silver."
13"Their bodies had the round,"
14"They moved along the causeway."
15"They pulsed in a pattern"
16"They fought without a sound."
17"Their bodies struck the earth,"
18"Its hood slipped back."
19"His mouth opened wider than"
ratio0.185
38.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount150
totalSentences178
matches
0"The rift hung between two"
1"Aurora stood before it with"
2"The pendant pulsed against her"
3"Nyx occupied the shadow beneath"
4"Their tall silhouette had no"
5"Violet eyes watched the rift"
6"Isolde combed her silver hair"
7"Moonlight caught in the strands,"
8"Aurora glanced at her."
9"Isolde smiled with one corner"
10"Aurora looked at the rift."
11"The distortion trembled between the"
12"Shapes moved behind the shimmering"
13"A smell seeped through: ripe"
14"Nyx slid from the stone."
15"Their shadow stretched across the"
16"Their voice moved like air"
17"Nyx’s violet eyes narrowed."
18"The answer landed cleanly."
19"Aurora tucked the pendant beneath"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences178
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"From deeper inside came the clatter of knives, the crash of heavy pots, and hundreds of voices reciting the same words in a rhythm that made Aurora’s teeth ache…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"he croaked (croak)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
6"Isolde warned (warn)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
8"it breathed (breathe)"
9"the cleaver bearer hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.351
84.8899%