Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPMKCX91XC4Z524W330TP0

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Duration:
48.5s
Cost:
$0.071060
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt was the one that stuck, and Rory had to shoulder the door twice before it gave, which meant that by the time she got it open she was already annoyed, already braced for a delivery driver or Eva's landlord or one of the Bengali kids from downstairs asking if the cat had been in their bins again. It was Lucien Moreau. He stood on the landing in charcoal wool with the shoulders damp from rain, one gloved hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, and he looked at her the way he had always looked at her — like she was a document he'd already read and was rereading for pleasure. The amber eye caught the bare bulb over the stairwell. The black one gave her nothing. "Aurora," he said. She shut the door. She stood with her palm flat against the wood, heart going like a sparrow in a jar, and listened to him not leave. He didn't knock. He didn't say her name again. He simply waited, and she could feel him waiting, the way you feel weather coming. Ptolemy wound around her ankles and mrrped, and she said, "Don't," and the cat looked up at her with flat gold contempt. Forty seconds. She counted them. Then she slid the deadbolts and opened the door again, and Lucien had not moved a centimetre, had not so much as shifted his weight, and the small satisfied line at the corner of his mouth made her want to break something. "Two minutes," she said. "You're generous." "I'm curious. It's a character flaw. Wipe your feet." He did, meticulously, and stepped past her into the flat, and the smell of him came with him — cedar and cold rain and something underneath it that wasn't anything she could name, that had never had a name, that she had once fallen asleep breathing in the back of a car outside a warehouse in Deptford. He took in the room with a single unhurried sweep: the towers of books, the scrolls unrolled across the table and pinned flat with mugs, the whiteboard with Eva's handwriting climbing up it like ivy, the pile of blankets on the sofa where Rory had been sleeping for eleven days. "Cosy," he said. "Eva's a scholar. Scholars are horizontal filers." "I meant you." He turned. "Sleeping on a sofa in a flat with three deadbolts. Six weeks since anyone's seen you at the Golden Empress. Yu-Fei is worried, incidentally. She's replaced you with a boy who cannot find Whitechapel." "Yu-Fei could find me in about four minutes if she wanted." "Yes." He set the cane against a bookcase, which she noted, because he never let go of the cane. "So could I. I didn't." "You're here." "Six weeks later." Something moved through his voice, quick and gone, like a fish under ice. "You'll grant that's restraint." Rory crossed to the kitchen alcove because it was two steps further from him and because her hands wanted something to do. She filled the kettle. She was aware of her hair, unwashed, tucked behind her ears; of the jumper with the hole in the cuff; of the crescent scar on her left wrist, pale and old and utterly unremarkable, which she nonetheless pulled her sleeve down over. "You told me," she said to the kettle, "that I was a liability. Your exact word. Liability. In front of Silas and half his bar." "I did." "You said it like you were reading a stock report." "That was deliberate." "Oh, well, God, that's so much better—" "Aurora." He said it quietly, and she hated how it landed. Nobody said her whole name. Her mother said Rory. Eva said Rors. Evan had said babe, and then other things. Lucien Moreau said Aurora like it was a word in one of his four languages and each syllable had to be paid for. "The room was full. Half of it was listening for a price. If I had said what I wanted to say, you would have had a value by morning, and by evening someone would have collected." She turned around. "So you humiliated me for my own good." "I made you worthless." A muscle moved in his jaw. "It's the only protection I had to offer that didn't require me to be standing next to you. And I couldn't be standing next to you." "Because I'm a liability." "Because I am." The words came out with an edge she'd never heard on him, and for one instant the amber eye was not amber but something hotter, and then it was amber again. He looked away, at the whiteboard, at nothing. "There. Two minutes. Do you want the rest, or shall I go and let you go on being angry, which I'd understand, and which you've earned, and which I would frankly enjoy watching—" "Sit down." He sat. In Eva's terrible armchair with the sprung seat, ankle crossed over knee, spine straight as a rule, and it was so absurd — the Frenchman in his four-hundred-pound coat perched in a chair with foam coming out of it, a tabby cat immediately and treacherously arranging itself on his shin — that Rory laughed. It came out wrong, ragged at the edges, and she pressed the back of her hand to her mouth to stop it turning into anything worse. Lucien watched her do it. He didn't offer a handkerchief. That, she thought, was the closest thing to kindness he knew how to give: he let her have the moment without witnessing it aloud. "Tea," she said. "Then talk." "Coffee, if the flat runs to it." "The flat runs to a jar of instant that predates the Blitz." "Then tea." She made two mugs badly and handed him one and he took it without comment, holding it in both hands like a man warming himself, and she sat on the arm of the sofa with her knees together and her mug against her sternum. "Say it," she said. "You'll interrupt." "Almost certainly." He looked at her over the rim. "My father's people have a word for what I am. It isn't flattering. It means the thing that stands in the doorway — neither in nor out. Half of Avaros considers me a defect. The other half considers me an opportunity. In six weeks I have had three offers for the location of a young woman with black hair and blue eyes who was seen in my company in April, and every one of those offers came from someone who believed I would take money for her. Because that is what I am, Aurora. I take money for people. It is my entire trade." "And did you?" "No." "Why not?" The pause went on long enough that the rain came up loud on the window. "Because," Lucien said, "somewhere between Deptford and the Isle of Dogs I stopped being able to think of you as information." Rory set her mug down on the floor very carefully, because her hands weren't reliable. "That's a terrible thing to say to someone," she said. "Yes." "You can't just — turn up, and be honest at me, and expect—" "I expect nothing." He said it flatly, and then, more quietly, in French, something she didn't catch, and when she raised her eyebrows he shook his head. "A bad habit. My mother's language runs ahead of my sense." "Translate." "No." "Lucien." He looked at her. The black eye was unreadable, as always, but the amber one had gone soft and terrible and human, and she thought: oh, that's the trick of him, that's the whole trick, one eye you can never see into and one you can see all the way down, and he lets you choose which to believe. "It means," he said, "that six weeks was a very long time and I did not do well at it." She got up. She crossed the two metres of Eva's ruined carpet and stood in front of the armchair, close enough that Ptolemy grumbled and relocated, and Lucien did not stand, did not reach, only tipped his head back to keep her in view. "Say the thing you didn't say in Silas' bar," Rory said. "There's nobody listening but the cat." Somewhere below, the curry house extractor fan shuddered on, and the whole floor hummed with it, and Lucien Moreau set down his tea.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:15:08.59Z" 7/25/2026, 1:15:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.679
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"very"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1400
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"could feel"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"could feel"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen103
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount930
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Eva5
Bengali1
Lucien7
Moreau3
Deptford1
Rors1
Aurora1
Frenchman1
French1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Bengali"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Deptford"
1"French"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
57.75% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.422
wordCount1406
matches
0"not amber but something hotter"
1"neither in nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean23.43
std27.89
cv1.19
sampleLengths
060
14
268
33
44
547
622
747
84
92
109
11107
123
137
1439
1511
1624
172
1820
1968
2025
212
2210
233
247
2590
2611
2736
284
2975
302
3182
3234
335
347
3512
362
3744
384
392
402
41111
423
431
442
4515
4621
4715
4810
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was rereading"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"He stood on the landing in charcoal wool with the shoulders damp from rain, one gloved hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, and he looked at her the way he had always looked at her — like she was a document he'd already read and was rereading for pleasure."
1"He did, meticulously, and stepped past her into the flat, and the smell of him came with him — cedar and cold rain and something underneath it that wasn't anything she could name, that had never had a name, that she had once fallen asleep breathing in the back of a car outside a warehouse in Deptford."
2"She was aware of her hair, unwashed, tucked behind her ears; of the jumper with the hole in the cuff; of the crescent scar on her left wrist, pale and old and utterly unremarkable, which she nonetheless pulled her sleeve down over."
3"In Eva's terrible armchair with the sprung seat, ankle crossed over knee, spine straight as a rule, and it was so absurd — the Frenchman in his four-hundred-pound coat perched in a chair with foam coming out of it, a tabby cat immediately and treacherously arranging itself on his shin — that Rory laughed."
97.28% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.04310344827586207
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011853448275862068
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.12
std17.82
cv1.179
sampleLengths
060
14
252
310
46
53
64
723
83
96
1015
1122
122
133
1442
154
162
179
1857
1950
203
217
225
2334
2411
2519
265
272
2816
294
3022
314
3242
3325
342
3510
363
377
3811
395
404
413
428
4323
4436
453
468
4710
4826
494
63.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.43010752688172044
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences46
matches
0"Then she slid the deadbolts"
1"Somewhere below, the curry house"
ratio0.043
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences46
matches
0"It was Lucien Moreau."
1"He stood on the landing"
2"She shut the door."
3"She stood with her palm"
4"He didn't knock."
5"He didn't say her name"
6"He simply waited, and she"
7"She counted them."
8"He did, meticulously, and stepped"
9"He took in the room"
10"He set the cane against"
11"She filled the kettle."
12"She was aware of her"
13"she said to the kettle"
14"He said it quietly, and"
15"Her mother said Rory."
16"She turned around."
17"He looked away, at the"
18"It came out wrong, ragged"
19"He didn't offer a handkerchief."
ratio0.565
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences46
matches
0"The third deadbolt was the"
1"It was Lucien Moreau."
2"He stood on the landing"
3"The amber eye caught the"
4"The black one gave her"
5"She shut the door."
6"She stood with her palm"
7"He didn't knock."
8"He didn't say her name"
9"He simply waited, and she"
10"Ptolemy wound around her ankles"
11"She counted them."
12"He did, meticulously, and stepped"
13"He took in the room"
14"He set the cane against"
15"Something moved through his voice,"
16"Rory crossed to the kitchen"
17"She filled the kettle."
18"She was aware of her"
19"she said to the kettle"
ratio0.935
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He did, meticulously, and stepped past her into the flat, and the smell of him came with him — cedar and cold rain and something underneath it that wasn't anyth…"
1"The black eye was unreadable, as always, but the amber one had gone soft and terrible and human, and she thought: oh, that's the trick of him, that's the whole …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.245
leniency0.491
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8172%