Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPN26GSP6V1TB97YD937F4

Run Details

Duration:
39.9s
Cost:
$0.063885
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts. Rory drew them back one at a time, and the sound of it filled the stairwell like a countdown. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain still beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit. He'd propped the ivory handle of his cane against his hip, hands loose, the picture of a man who had all night. Behind him the stairwell light buzzed and flickered, catching the platinum of his hair. "You're wet," Rory said. "It's London. It rains." One corner of his mouth moved. "Are you going to let me in, or would you prefer to conduct this from opposite sides of a doorframe? I have done stranger things." "I'm considering it." "Consider faster. The curry house downstairs is closing and the owner has decided I'm loitering." She didn't move. Ptolemy threaded between her ankles, tail up, and shoved his head against Lucien's trouser leg — the traitor. Lucien looked down at the cat with something close to fondness and then back at her, and the amber eye caught the bad light and glowed like a coal, and Rory hated that her stomach dropped the way it did. "Six weeks," she said. "Seven." "You counted." "I count everything. It's my profession." He shifted his weight onto the cane. "Aurora." Nobody used her full name. Eva called her Rory. Yu-Fei called her *girl* and *late*. Her mother called her *love* down a crackling phone line from Cardiff. Lucien said *Aurora* like it was a French word he'd taken the trouble to pronounce properly, and the sound of it went through her ribs and out the other side. She stepped back from the door. He came in the way he came into everywhere — slowly, cataloguing. The stacks of Eva's books on the floor. The scroll pinned flat under a bowl of soy sauce packets. The mug of cold tea from that morning on the windowsill, growing a skin. "She's not here," Rory said. "Eva. If that's who you came for." "It isn't." "Then you came for the cat." "Ptolemy and I have an understanding." Lucien set the cane against the arm of the sofa, precise about it, and turned to face her. Rain had darkened the ends of his hair. "You didn't answer my letters." "You sent one letter." "I sent four. Which means three were intercepted, and I know exactly who by, and that's a conversation for another evening." He unbuttoned his jacket, then seemed to reconsider and left it hanging open. "But you got one. So you knew where I was." "I knew where you were." Rory crossed to the kettle because her hands wanted something. "Didn't mean I wanted to go there." "No." He watched her fill it. "You wanted me to come here." "Don't do that." "Do what?" "Tell me what I want. You're very good at it and it's unbearable." She heard the smile in his silence. The kettle started its rumble, and she stood with her back to him and her palms flat on the counter, and counted the tiles on the splashback the way she'd counted the deadbolts. "You left me on a bridge," she said. "I did." "At three in the morning. With a broken hand and someone else's blood on my jacket, and you said — what was it you said?" "I said it was better." "You said it was *cleaner*." She turned round. "Like I was a stain." The buzzing kettle filled the room and then clicked off, and the quiet after it was worse. Lucien didn't flinch. That was the thing about him; he never gave her the mercy of a flinch. But something moved behind his face, a shutter opening a half-inch. "There were people looking for you," he said. "There are still. Attached to me you were a liability with an address. Detached, you were a delivery girl on a bicycle who nobody had reason to look at twice." "So you decided." "Someone had to." "You decided *for* me." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "That's the part. Not the bridge. Not the blood. You made me a problem you solved, and then you *solved* me, and you didn't ask." "If I'd asked you'd have said stay." "Yes." "Aurora—" "I'd have said stay," she said, "and I'd have been right, and you knew that, and that's why you didn't ask." His jaw set. He looked, for a moment, remarkably like a man who wanted to break something, and then he crossed the small ruined room and stopped an arm's length from her, and the smell of him came with — rain, cedar, the faint char underneath that she'd never asked about and had once fallen asleep breathing. "I sat on that bridge for two hours after you'd gone," he said. "I want you to know that. I'm not offering it as a defence. It isn't one. But I sat there until the sun came up over Southwark and I couldn't feel my hands, and I have not had one clean night since, so you may take the word *cleaner* and do with it what you like." Rory's throat worked. "That's not an apology." "No. I'm terrible at those. I could do it in French, it sounds better." "Lucien." "*Je suis désolé.*" He said it quietly, without any of the performance. "There. Ruined by translation." She laughed — one broken note of it, awful — and put her hand over her mouth. He didn't touch her. That was almost the worst part; he stood close enough that she could see the rain drying on his collar, and he kept his hands to himself like a man observing a treaty. "I'm angry with you," she said. "Good. Stay angry. It suits your bone structure." "I'm going to be angry with you for a long time." "Then I'll be here for a long time." He tilted his head. "Unless you throw me out. Which is your right, and which I'd advise, and which I'll fight, because I'm inconsistent." Rory looked at him. At the mismatched eyes, amber and black, and the small vertical line between his brows that only appeared when he was telling the truth and hated it. "Sit down," she said. "You're dripping on Eva's floor." "That's a yes." "That's a *sit down*." He sat. He sat on the edge of Eva's terrible sofa with his back very straight, and Ptolemy landed in his lap and began to knead his thigh with the confidence of the recently fed, and Lucien laid a hand on the cat and looked up at her, and waited. Rory made two cups of tea. She got the milk wrong in his on purpose — too much, the way he loathed — and handed it over, and watched him drink it without a single word of complaint. "You still take it like a barbarian," he said finally. "You still drink it." "I drink whatever you put in front of me. It's a character flaw." He set the mug down on a stack of Eva's research notes, and she moved it onto a coaster, and their fingers touched for a half-second on the ceramic. Neither of them pulled away first.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:15:23.735Z" 7/25/2026, 1:15:23 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.689
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.033
87.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1192
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"stomach"
2"weight"
3"silence"
4"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
94.43% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords13
totalWords1200
ratio0.011
matches
0"girl"
1"late"
2"love"
3"Aurora"
4"cleaner"
5"for"
6"solved"
7"cleaner"
8"Je suis désolé."
9"sit down"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount709
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
One1
Lucien7
Rory9
Cardiff1
French1
Eva4
Rain1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Rain"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.865
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something close to fondness and then back at her"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1200
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"hated that her"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean19.35
std18.67
cv0.964
sampleLengths
021
153
24
335
43
515
661
74
81
92
1014
1157
126
1345
1412
152
166
1737
184
1944
2022
2112
223
232
2413
2540
268
272
2825
295
3013
3117
3229
3338
343
353
3637
377
381
391
4021
4157
4269
437
4414
451
4616
4754
486
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs123
matches
0"was telling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles, tail up, and shoved his head against Lucien's trouser leg — the traitor."
1"He came in the way he came into everywhere — slowly, cataloguing."
2"That was the thing about him; he never gave her the mercy of a flinch."
3"He looked, for a moment, remarkably like a man who wanted to break something, and then he crossed the small ruined room and stopped an arm's length from her, and the smell of him came with — rain, cedar, the faint char underneath that she'd never asked about and had once fallen asleep breathing."
4"She laughed — one broken note of it, awful — and put her hand over her mouth."
5"That was almost the worst part; he stood close enough that she could see the rain drying on his collar, and he kept his hands to himself like a man observing a treaty."
6"She got the milk wrong in his on purpose — too much, the way he loathed — and handed it over, and watched him drink it without a single word of complaint."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount705
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.032624113475177303
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009929078014184398
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean12.12
std11.83
cv0.976
sampleLengths
02
119
217
322
414
54
610
725
83
915
103
1118
1240
134
141
152
1613
171
185
194
206
2112
2230
236
2412
258
2611
2714
285
297
302
316
3224
338
345
354
3634
3710
3815
397
406
416
423
432
4413
457
4633
478
482
4925
62.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42424242424242425
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences48
matches
0"He'd propped the ivory handle"
1"She didn't move."
2"He shifted his weight onto"
3"Her mother called her *love*"
4"She stepped back from the"
5"He came in the way"
6"He unbuttoned his jacket, then"
7"He watched her fill it"
8"She heard the smile in"
9"She turned round"
10"Her voice came out steadier"
11"His jaw set."
12"He looked, for a moment,"
13"He said it quietly, without"
14"She laughed — one broken"
15"He didn't touch her."
16"He tilted his head"
17"He sat on the edge"
18"She got the milk wrong"
19"he said finally"
ratio0.438
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences48
matches
0"Rory drew them back one"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"He'd propped the ivory handle"
3"She didn't move."
4"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles,"
5"Lucien looked down at the"
6"He shifted his weight onto"
7"Nobody used her full name."
8"Eva called her Rory."
9"Yu-Fei called her *girl* and"
10"Her mother called her *love*"
11"Lucien said *Aurora* like it"
12"She stepped back from the"
13"He came in the way"
14"The stacks of Eva's books"
15"The scroll pinned flat under"
16"The mug of cold tea"
17"Lucien set the cane against"
18"Rain had darkened the ends"
19"He unbuttoned his jacket, then"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He'd propped the ivory handle of his cane against his hip, hands loose, the picture of a man who had all night."
1"He looked, for a moment, remarkably like a man who wanted to break something, and then he crossed the small ruined room and stopped an arm's length from her, an…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.18
leniency0.361
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.4028%