Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPN5KX9219RDK9T4V41BJF

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Duration:
49.5s
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$0.072225
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of wet chalk and old copper. Quinn ducked under the tape at the top of the service stairs, and the constable holding the torch didn't ask for her warrant card. He knew her. Everyone knew her, which was less a compliment than a warning. "Watch the third step from the bottom, ma'am. It's gone soft." "Everything down here's gone soft." She tested it anyway, felt the tile give like a rotten tooth, and stepped over. The platform opened out ahead of her, a long throat of Victorian brick with the rails ripped out sometime during the eighties and never replaced. Sleepers still ran along the trackbed, timber blackened, and between them somebody had swept the gravel into neat lanes. Not the forensics team. The sweeping was old — a week, two weeks, dust already settling back into the grooves. Somebody had been keeping this place tidy. DS Pryor crouched at the far end of the platform under a work lamp, his coat pooled around his knees. Beyond him, on the tiles, lay the body. "Harlow." Pryor didn't look up. "You didn't have to come. Overdose, or as good as." "Then why did you call me?" "Because I know you." He stood, knees popping, and handed her a pair of gloves. "And because it's odd, and odd goes to Quinn. Male, thirties, no ID, no phone, no keys. Marks on his arms." He held up an evidence bag. Inside, a syringe, still capped. "Nothing in it. Nothing on him either, no wrap, no burnt foil, no spoon. So he shot up somewhere else and staggered down here to die, which is what people do. They go somewhere quiet." Quinn pulled the gloves on and crouched. The dead man's face had the waxy inwardness of all dead faces, mouth slightly open, eyes half-lidded. Thirty-five, maybe. Clean-shaven that morning — she could see the razor line along his jaw, sharp and recent. His nails were trimmed. His shirt collar had been ironed. "He came down four flights of broken stairs in the dark," she said. "So?" "Show me the soles of his shoes." Pryor sighed, but he knelt and tilted the body's heel. The soles were brown leather, barely scuffed. No brick dust. No plaster. No grit from the stairs she'd nearly gone through. "He was carried," Pryor said slowly. "Or he came another way." Quinn stood up and turned a slow circle, the beam of her torch riding the tiles. The station had one entrance, sealed by TfL with a hoarding the constables had cut through this evening. Two ventilation shafts, both grilled. A tunnel mouth at either end of the platform, one bricked flat, the other open into black. "Tunnel's collapsed forty metres in," Pryor said, following her look. "Uniform checked." "Then he came through the wall." She said it flatly, which was the only way to say a sentence like that. Pryor laughed. "Right." She walked the platform's length, keeping her light low. The chalk smell got stronger toward the bricked-up tunnel mouth, and she found out why. The brick had been marked. Not graffiti — no tags, no aerosol. Somebody had drawn on it in something white and greasy, a lattice of lines and small closed shapes, and then somebody else had rubbed most of it away with a cloth, leaving a smeared halo. Whoever wiped it had been thorough at chest height and careless at ankle height, where a full sigil survived, complete, no bigger than her palm. Quinn photographed it. She thought, for one unwanted second, of DS Morris and the wall of a lock-up in Hackney three years ago, and a mark just like this that she had written up as gang-related and then never mentioned again to anyone, because the alternative had no box on the form. "Pryor. Come look." He came. He looked. He shrugged with his whole body. "Kids. There's always kids down here. Urbexers, drill videos, ghost hunters." "Kids leave cans." "Then squatters." "Squatters leave everything." She swept the torch across the platform. "Where's the rubbish? A station's been sealed since '87. There isn't a crisp packet down here. There isn't a rat dropping. Someone cleans this place, and they cleaned it recently, and they cleaned it well enough that the only thing left is a dead man and a syringe that's never been used." Pryor's jaw shifted. "So the mates who dumped him had a tidy-up." "Then they missed something." She went to the trackbed and dropped down into it, boots crunching, and walked the swept lanes. The gravel between the sleepers had been raked into channels — but not evenly. The channels converged. She followed them to a point about six feet from the platform edge, and there, where the lines met, the gravel had been pressed into a shallow bowl, glazed as though it had been very hot and very briefly. She touched it. Warm. Not fire-warm — blood-warm, the temperature of a hand. "Pryor." "I'm not getting in the pit, Harlow." "You'll want to." She crouched and lifted a piece of the fused gravel free. It came away in a curved shard, and its underside was smooth as glass and faintly, sickeningly, iridescent. "Feel it." He hesitated at the platform lip, then jumped down. He took the shard, turned it, and his face did something Quinn had never seen it do in eleven years of shared shifts: it emptied. "Some sort of chemical burn," he said. "On loose gravel. In a straight line." "Then a lighting rig, a—" He stopped. He gave the shard back. "Say what you're thinking." She wasn't going to. Not with a constable at the top of the stairs. So she gave him the shape of it instead, the version that would survive a courtroom. "Two vehicles' worth of people were down here in the last fortnight. Not one man dying alone." She pointed with the torch. "That corner — the tiles are worn pale, a patch two metres by three, as if something heavy stood there for days and was dragged out. That wall has thirty nail holes in a straight line, all fresh, all the same gauge. A stall. Stalls, plural. There are twenty of those patches along this platform, and somebody scrubbed the brick above every one of them." Pryor turned, following her light. She watched him count. "A market," he said. "An indoor market with no permit, no power, no water, in a sealed station, that packed up and vanished." Quinn crossed back to the body and knelt, and this time she pushed the dead man's cuff up past the crook of his elbow. The marks weren't track marks. They were too neat, too shallow, and they ran in a ring around the arm rather than up the vein — twelve small punctures, evenly spaced, like the bite of something with a circular mouth. "That's not a needle," Pryor said. "No." She turned the wrist over. Beneath the watch strap, which was leather, worn, and not his — the tan line on the skin said he'd worn a metal bracelet for years and this strap for hours — something had been slipped between skin and leather. She eased it out with tweezers. A small brass disc, green-crusted at the edges, its face cut with the same closed shapes as the sigil on the wall. A compass. The needle was spinning, slow and steady, and it wasn't pointing north. It was pointing at the bricked-up tunnel mouth, and it stayed there when she turned it in her hand, and it stayed there when she stood, and it stayed there when she walked ten paces down the platform and turned again. "Harlow," Pryor said quietly. "Get the constable off the stairs," she said. "And don't log this yet."
created_at"2026-07-25T13:15:27.546Z" 7/25/2026, 1:15:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Pryor said slowly [slowly]"
1"Quinn crossed back [back]"
2"Pryor said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
84.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1294
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1303
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount928
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.08
worstName"Pryor"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Pryor"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Victorian1
Pryor10
Quinn6
TfL1
Morris1
Hackney1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Pryor"
2"Quinn"
3"Morris"
places
0"Hackney"
globalScore0.961
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1303
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"shaven that morning "
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean28.33
std27.92
cv0.986
sampleLengths
051
111
220
364
47
528
615
76
882
952
1013
111
127
1331
146
1561
1612
1721
183
1996
2052
213
2221
233
242
2562
2612
2777
2813
291
307
3134
3234
337
347
3516
3630
3787
389
394
4083
416
4252
4377
444
4513
84.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences83
matches
0"been ironed"
1"been marked"
2"been raked"
3"been pressed"
4"been slipped"
30.15% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs157
matches
0"wasn't going"
1"was spinning"
2"wasn't pointing"
3"was pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"The sweeping was old — a week, two weeks, dust already settling back into the grooves."
1"Clean-shaven that morning — she could see the razor line along his jaw, sharp and recent."
2"Not graffiti — no tags, no aerosol."
3"The gravel between the sleepers had been raked into channels — but not evenly."
4"Not fire-warm — blood-warm, the temperature of a hand."
5"They were too neat, too shallow, and they ran in a ring around the arm rather than up the vein — twelve small punctures, evenly spaced, like the bite of something with a circular mouth."
6"Beneath the watch strap, which was leather, worn, and not his — the tan line on the skin said he'd worn a metal bracelet for years and this strap for hours — something had been slipped between skin and leather."
99.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount930
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.04086021505376344
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.012903225806451613
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.53
std12.32
cv0.984
sampleLengths
013
124
23
311
411
520
625
719
84
916
107
1120
128
135
1410
156
1615
1727
185
1935
207
2117
222
2316
244
256
2613
271
287
2910
307
313
322
339
346
3521
3618
375
3817
3910
402
4121
422
431
449
4515
465
477
4835
4925
66.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences70
matches
0"He knew her."
1"She tested it anyway, felt"
2"He stood, knees popping, and"
3"He held up an evidence"
4"His nails were trimmed."
5"His shirt collar had been"
6"She said it flatly, which"
7"She walked the platform's length,"
8"She thought, for one unwanted"
9"He shrugged with his whole"
10"She swept the torch across"
11"She went to the trackbed"
12"She followed them to a"
13"She touched it."
14"She crouched and lifted a"
15"It came away in a"
16"He hesitated at the platform"
17"He took the shard, turned"
18"He gave the shard back."
19"She wasn't going to."
ratio0.371
52.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences70
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Quinn ducked under the tape"
2"He knew her."
3"Everyone knew her, which was"
4"She tested it anyway, felt"
5"The platform opened out ahead"
6"Sleepers still ran along the"
7"The sweeping was old —"
8"Somebody had been keeping this"
9"DS Pryor crouched at the"
10"Pryor didn't look up"
11"He stood, knees popping, and"
12"He held up an evidence"
13"Quinn pulled the gloves on"
14"The dead man's face had"
15"His nails were trimmed."
16"His shirt collar had been"
17"Pryor sighed, but he knelt"
18"The soles were brown leather,"
19"Pryor said slowly"
ratio0.814
71.43% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Whoever wiped it had been"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Everyone knew her, which was less a compliment than a warning."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He stood, knees popping, and handed her a pair of gloves"
1"Quinn stood up, the beam of her torch riding the tiles"
2"She went, boots crunching, and walked the swept lanes"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.8058%