| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said carefully [carefully]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.067 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 91.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 83.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1207 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "absolutely" | | 2 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 73 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1220 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 969 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.44 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 14 | | November | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 3 | | English | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Bute | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Bute" |
| | globalScore | 0.778 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like glee — that the grass didn't" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.82 | | wordCount | 1220 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the wet-mud green of English woodland but something sharper, sweeter, like biting the stem of a flower" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 25.96 | | std | 25.8 | | cv | 0.994 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 38 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 44 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 56 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 103 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 80 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 59 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 78 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 81 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 28 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 |
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| 96.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was running" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood taller than Rory expected — three of them, grey and lichen-crusted, leaning inward like old men sharing a secret." | | 1 | "Behind her, Richmond Park went on being Richmond Park — the far-off thump of a football, a woman shouting at a spaniel, the grey plate of the sky pressing down." | | 2 | "She'd walked the perimeter of those stones — maybe twenty feet across, thirty at the outside." | | 3 | "\"There isn't one.\" Isolde was walking, and Rory noticed — because she'd been told to notice, because Nyx had warned her in the bar last night with something like glee — that the grass didn't bend behind her." | | 4 | "Water first — a stream running somewhere left, close enough that she should have seen it." | | 5 | "Rory made herself stop counting the impossibilities after the sixth — a stag standing motionless in the middle distance whose antlers held small white flowers growing out of the bone; a stone bench sunk into the turf, its seat worn hollow by centuries of sitting, in a clearing where no one had ever come; the way her own shadow lay in a different direction from Nyx's, and both were wrong for the light." | | 6 | "These were oaks the way a whale is a fish — the same shape, the wrong order of magnitude." | | 7 | "Not sun-warm — blood-warm, and beneath it, faint and enormous and unmistakably slow, something moved." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 877 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.0330672748004561 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0068415051311288486 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 11.73 | | std | 10.44 | | cv | 0.89 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 83.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5192307692307693 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 46.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Then birds, though the calls" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 1 | "She stood in the long" | | 2 | "She stepped through." | | 3 | "It wasn't warmth exactly, more" | | 4 | "She breathed in and her" | | 5 | "She turned in a slow" | | 6 | "She'd walked the perimeter of" | | 7 | "It closed over where she'd" | | 8 | "They went down into the" | | 9 | "She kept turning to look" | | 10 | "They were still there, twenty" | | 11 | "She'd got used to it" | | 12 | "She wasn't sure whether that" | | 13 | "She let it go." | | 14 | "She stopped dead." | | 15 | "She pulled her fingers out" | | 16 | "They followed the stream uphill." | | 17 | "She knew oaks." | | 18 | "Her mother had made her" | | 19 | "Its bark had cracked into" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 57.22% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood taller" | | 1 | "Nyx flowed past her, a" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 3 | "Isolde had already crossed." | | 4 | "She stood in the long" | | 5 | "Rory looked down at her" | | 6 | "She stepped through." | | 7 | "The cold went out of" | | 8 | "It wasn't warmth exactly, more" | | 9 | "The air tasted green." | | 10 | "She breathed in and her" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted at her shoulder" | | 12 | "She turned in a slow" | | 13 | "The clearing shouldn't have fit." | | 14 | "She'd walked the perimeter of" | | 15 | "Wildflowers grew everywhere in impossible" | | 16 | "Bluebells beside sunflowers." | | 17 | "Snowdrops shouldering up through a" | | 18 | "Spring and high summer and" | | 19 | "Isolde was walking, and Rory" |
| | ratio | 0.806 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The grass came to Rory's thigh and dragged at her jeans, releasing little clouds of seed that hung in the air behind her rather than falling." | | 1 | "Then birds, though the calls were wrong, too long, too musical, phrases that repeated with variations like something practising." | | 2 | "The trees, when they reached them, were the thing that stopped her breath properly." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |