Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPNPPS7NC4PDJJ2TS110A9

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48.4s
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$0.073885
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory worked it with the heel of her hand, swore at it, and pulled the door open with the chain still on because Eva had drilled that habit into her over six months of paranoid lectures. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain in his hair. Not dripping. Lucien didn't drip. But the platinum blond had darkened at the temples and a few strands had escaped the slick discipline he kept them in, and his charcoal suit showed damp across the shoulders like someone had breathed on it. He held the ivory-handled cane in both hands, in front of him, the way a schoolboy might hold a cap. "Ptolemy's on the stairs," he said. "I assume he's meant to be indoors." Rory looked past him. The tabby sat two steps down, tail curled over his feet, staring at Lucien with the flat contempt of a cat who had already made up his mind. "He does that." She didn't take the chain off. "It's half eleven." "I'm aware." "Eva's in Prague." "I know. That's rather the point." He glanced down at the chain, then back up at her, and the amber eye caught the stairwell light while the black one swallowed it whole. "May I come in, or shall we do this where the curry house can hear?" The curry house was shut. He knew that too. He knew the opening hours of every business on this street, probably the names of the owners' children, and he was giving her the excuse anyway because that's what Lucien did — he handed you a door and let you decide whether to walk through it. Rory slid the chain off. He stepped past her into the crowded dark of Eva's front room and stopped, because there was nowhere to go. Books on the sofa. Scrolls on the coffee table, weighted down with a chipped mug. A tower of photocopied journal articles on the one armchair, and Rory's own jacket over the back of it, still smelling of the sesame oil that lived permanently in the Golden Empress delivery bags. "She's got worse," he said. "She's got a thesis." Rory shut the door. Did the deadbolts, all three, because Eva would ask. "You're not here about Eva." "No." "Then say it and go, because I've got a six a.m. and Yu-Fei doesn't accept excuses that involve the word demon." Lucien set the cane against the arm of the sofa. He took off his gloves — thin black leather, absurd in June — and folded them, and slid them into his breast pocket, and did all of it slowly, and Rory understood she was watching a man buy himself eleven seconds. "Six weeks," she said. "Yes." "Six weeks, Lucien. Not a word. Not a note, and you love a note. And you turn up wet at half eleven and start on about the cat." "I was in Marseille." "Congratulations." "I was in Marseille," he repeated, and the accent thickened, which it did when he was tired or lying, and she'd never worked out which one this was, "because there was a man there who wanted very badly to know your name. He no longer wants that." Rory's stomach dropped about an inch. She kept her face still. She'd gotten good at that — cool-headed, her father used to say, like it was a diagnosis. "You went and did something stupid," she said. "I went and did something necessary. There's a distinction. It's fine, it's finished." He turned, finally, and looked at her properly, and she wished he hadn't, because he looked at her the way he looked at contracts — line by line, checking for what had changed since the last reading. "You've stopped sleeping." "You've stopped shaving." His hand went to his jaw before he could stop it. There was stubble there, faint and pale, and it made him look younger and worse. "That's fair," he said. "It's not fair, it's true. Sit down, you're making me nervous standing there like a bailiff." He moved the journal articles off the armchair with the care of a man handling relics and sat. His knees came up too high. It was such an undignified way for him to sit that Rory had to turn towards the kitchenette so she wouldn't laugh, or do something else, something with a worse aftermath. She put the kettle on because her hands needed a job. "You left before I woke up," she said, to the tap. Silence behind her. "I don't need an apology," she went on. "I'd like to be clear about that. I'm not fifteen. I'm not going to stand here and ask you why you didn't call. I've got a flat above a bar and a scar on my wrist and an ex who used to explain to me at length why I'd made him do things. I've got a very high tolerance for people leaving. I'd just — " The kettle started to tick. "I'd like to know if you meant it." "Which part." "Don't." "Aurora." He said it the full way, all four syllables, the way nobody else did. "Which part. Because I meant several things that night and only one of them was a mistake, and I would rather not apologise for the wrong one." She turned around. Leaned back against the counter, arms folded, because it put a metre of terrible little kitchen between them. "The mistake being?" "Telling you what I am before I told you that I wanted you." His mouth did something that wasn't a smile. "In that order. It was cowardly. I knew you'd take the first and be too polite to ask about the second." "Polite." Rory laughed, one syllable, no humour in it. "I asked you three times." "You asked me what I wanted from you. That's a different question. You'd been asked it by men before and you'd learned to get the answer early." He leaned forward, elbows on those high knees, hands loose. "I wanted nothing from you. That's what I couldn't say. I'm a man who is paid to want things from people, chérie. It's the entire architecture of me. And I sat on the edge of your bed at four in the morning and I could not find a single thing I wanted from you, and it frightened me so badly I put my shoes on and went to France." The kettle screamed. Rory didn't move for it. "Six weeks," she said again, quieter. "Six weeks." He didn't look away. "And a man in Marseille who no longer wants your name. And a note I wrote eleven times and burned eleven times, because every version of it read like a resignation letter." "That's the most romantic thing anyone's ever said to me and it's about arson." "You keep low standards. It's part of your charm." She reached blind behind her and clicked the kettle off. The silence rushed in. "Ptolemy's still on the stairs," she said. "Yes." "He'll come in when he's ready. He hates being carried." Rory pushed off the counter and crossed the metre, and stopped in front of the armchair, close enough that he had to tip his head back to keep her in view. Amber and black. Rain in his hair. "Stand up." He stood. She didn't touch him. Not yet. She looked at the damp across his shoulders and the escaped strand of blond and the stubble, and she thought about the eleven burned notes, and she felt the whole cramped room narrow to the eighteen inches between them. "Say the second thing," she said. "The one you got the order wrong on. Say it now, in the right order, and I'll put the kettle back on and you can tell me about Marseille and I won't ask you to promise me anything, because I don't think you can and I'd rather you didn't lie." Lucien Moreau, who spoke four languages fluently, took a moment to find any of them. "I want you," he said. "That's all. That's the whole of it. It's not useful to either of us and I've had six weeks to talk myself out of it and I've failed spectacularly." Rory nodded, slow, like she was taking a witness statement. Then she put her hand flat on his damp lapel, felt his heart going hard and quick underneath it — half-demon, apparently, and still just a heart — and left it there. "Right," she said. "Sit back down. You're getting the sofa, not the bed, and I'm serious about the six a.m." "Understood." "And you're going out on the landing in ten minutes to call that cat." "He hates me." "Everyone hates you, Lucien. Get in line."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He turned finally [finally]"
1"she said again [again]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.847
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.068
89.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"aftermath"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"aftermath"
2"silence"
3"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1459
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount789
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau2
Rory12
Lucien5
Golden1
Empress1
Did1
June1
Silence1
Amber1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Silence"
5"Amber"
places
0"Golden"
1"June"
globalScore0.74
windowScore0.833
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"— half-demon, apparently, and still just a h"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1459
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"drilled that habit"
1"sit that Rory"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean22.8
std23.08
cv1.013
sampleLengths
041
111
262
313
432
512
62
73
847
955
105
1169
125
1322
141
1521
1651
174
181
1928
204
211
2247
2328
248
2553
263
2726
284
2916
3055
3111
3211
333
3487
352
361
3742
3821
393
4042
4114
42106
438
446
4538
4614
479
4814
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs141
matches
0"was watching"
1"was taking"
32.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences104
ratio0.038
matches
0"He took off his gloves — thin black leather, absurd in June — and folded them, and slid them into his breast pocket, and did all of it slowly, and Rory understood she was watching a man buy himself eleven seconds."
1"She'd gotten good at that — cool-headed, her father used to say, like it was a diagnosis."
2"\"I went and did something necessary. There's a distinction. It's fine, it's finished.\" He turned, finally, and looked at her properly, and she wished he hadn't, because he looked at her the way he looked at contracts — line by line, checking for what had changed since the last reading."
3"Then she put her hand flat on his damp lapel, felt his heart going hard and quick underneath it — half-demon, apparently, and still just a heart — and left it there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount707
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.031117397454031116
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007072135785007072
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.03
std14.92
cv1.064
sampleLengths
05
136
211
32
43
537
620
76
87
94
1028
119
123
132
143
1532
1615
175
184
1946
205
2120
224
2311
2434
255
268
279
285
291
3021
3110
3241
334
341
3528
364
371
3847
396
405
4117
428
4350
443
453
4611
4715
484
4916
60.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.40384615384615385
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners42
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Then she put her hand"
ratio0.018
30.53% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences57
matches
0"He held the ivory-handled cane"
1"She didn't take the chain"
2"He glanced down at the"
3"He knew that too."
4"He knew the opening hours"
5"He stepped past her into"
6"He took off his gloves"
7"he repeated, and the accent"
8"She kept her face still."
9"She'd gotten good at that"
10"He turned, finally, and looked"
11"His hand went to his"
12"He moved the journal articles"
13"His knees came up too"
14"It was such an undignified"
15"She put the kettle on"
16"she said, to the tap"
17"she went on"
18"He said it the full"
19"She turned around."
ratio0.474
21.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences57
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory worked it with the"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"Lucien didn't drip."
4"He held the ivory-handled cane"
5"Rory looked past him."
6"The tabby sat two steps"
7"She didn't take the chain"
8"He glanced down at the"
9"The curry house was shut."
10"He knew that too."
11"He knew the opening hours"
12"Rory slid the chain off."
13"He stepped past her into"
14"Books on the sofa."
15"Scrolls on the coffee table,"
16"A tower of photocopied journal"
17"Rory shut the door"
18"Lucien set the cane against"
19"He took off his gloves"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The tabby sat two steps down, tail curled over his feet, staring at Lucien with the flat contempt of a cat who had already made up his mind."
1"A tower of photocopied journal articles on the one armchair, and Rory's own jacket over the back of it, still smelling of the sesame oil that lived permanently …"
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he repeated, and the accent thickened, which it did when he was tired or lying, and she'd never worked out which one this was,"
1"she said again, quieter"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"Rory laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.237
leniency0.475
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.068
83.0605%