Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPPZQPM3RHAX4QTWE6422B

Run Details

Duration:
46.3s
Cost:
$0.066135
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did in damp weather, and Rory had to shoulder the door before it gave. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain in his hair. Not much of it — he'd have taken a cab to the corner and walked the last twenty feet, because he was the sort of man who calculated how wet he was willing to become. The platinum blond had darkened at the temples. Water beaded on the shoulders of his charcoal suit like the fabric refused to absorb anything it hadn't approved. "Hello, Aurora." "No." She started to close the door. He put the ivory handle of his cane against the frame, not pushing, just there, and looked at her over it with that mismatched gaze — amber on the left, black on the right, the black one always seeming to know more than the other. "You haven't heard what I've come to say." "I've heard you say things before. That's rather the problem." "Ptolemy," he said, "is on the stairs behind me, and he has been menacing my ankles for four minutes. I would like to come in before he commits." Rory leaned past him. The tabby sat three steps down, tail thrashing, staring up at Lucien with the flat murderous patience of a cat who'd been fed too well to need to hurry. "He's a good judge of character." "He is a mercenary. I brought him salmon in March and he purred like a boiler." Lucien lowered the cane. Rain ticked against the stairwell window. "Six minutes. That is what I am asking for. You may time me." Rory stepped back and let the door swing. The flat smelled of cardamom from the curry house below and old paper from everywhere else. Eva's research had colonised the place in the two weeks she'd been in Prague — scrolls unrolled and pinned with mugs, three books open face-down on the arm of the sofa, sticky notes crawling up the wall beside the window in an order only Eva understood. Rory had cleared exactly enough space to sit and eat. Lucien took it all in with one sweep and said nothing about it, which was worse than if he had. "Sit," Rory said. "Don't move anything." He sat on the edge of the sofa, cane across his knees, spine straight as a plumb line. She stayed standing, arms folded, hip against the kitchen counter that doubled as the dining table and the desk and, on bad nights, the pillow. "Five minutes fifty," she said. "You look tired." "That's four seconds you'll never get back." "You look tired," he repeated, "and there is a bruise under your jaw that you have covered badly, and the bar downstairs has been shut for nine days. Silas does not shut. Silas did not shut during the Blitz." He let the words settle. "I did not come here to sell you anything, Aurora. I came because I heard your name in a room where I did not want to hear it." Rory's fingers found the crescent scar on her wrist and pressed. An old habit. She made herself stop. "Whose room?" "That is the sixth minute." "Then stop wasting it on my jaw." Something moved through his face — not a smile. The thing that happened just before he decided to let her win. He set the cane down against the sofa, and the ivory handle knocked wood, and the sound was too loud in the small room. "There is a broker in Bermondsey named Ossian who buys names," he said. "Not people. Names. He was reading yours from a list of four. He was reading it aloud to a woman who does not exist, which is to say she has three faces and I have met two of them, and she asked whether you were still living above the bar." "And what did you say?" "I said I had not seen you since May." "That's true." "Yes." His hands rested on his knees, unmoving. "It cost me nothing to be honest, which is a rare and pleasant thing. Then I went out into the street and stood in the rain for some time, and then I came here." "May," Rory said. "May." The rain filled the gap. Below them, someone in the curry house dropped a tray and swore in Sylheti, and someone else laughed. "You left a note," she said. "I did." "In French." "You told me you were learning." "I was learning to order coffee, Lucien. I had to take a photograph of it and send it to a woman in Lyon who thought I was being blackmailed." Rory pushed off the counter and crossed to the window, because standing still had become intolerable. The glass was cold. The street below shone. "Do you know what it actually said? She translated it. *You will be safer with distance between us. Do not look for me.* And then you signed it. With a flourish. You put a flourish on it." "I have signed my name that way since I was fourteen." "You could have said it out loud." She turned. "You were standing in my kitchen at two in the morning. You'd bled on my floor and I'd stitched it and you drank my whisky and you told me about your mother's garden in Marseille, and then you waited until I fell asleep and you wrote me a note like a man cancelling a dinner reservation." His jaw worked once. "Yes," he said. "That's it? Yes?" "You are correct. I would prefer to argue with you, but you are correct, and I have had five months to find a way for that not to be true, and I have failed." He stood. He didn't come closer, which she noticed, and hated noticing. "May I tell you the reason? It is not a good reason. I want to be clear that I know it is not a good reason." "Go on." "Because if I had said it aloud you would have talked me out of it." Rain light moved on the wall behind him. "You have a way of being reasonable that is very difficult to survive. You would have asked me three questions and I would have stayed, and staying would have put you in a room with people who buy names, and I found that I could not — " He stopped. Started again, lower. "I found that I could not think about it. So I wrote a sentence in a language you did not speak and I left before I could hear your voice." "Coward." "Comprehensively." "You don't get to be charming about it." "I am not being charming. I am being French, which people confuse." But there was nothing light under it, and he heard that himself, and he looked away toward the sticky notes crawling up the wall. "I thought of you daily. That is not an offering. It is simply information." Rory found she'd crossed the room. She didn't remember choosing to. Close enough to see the rain still sitting in his hair, close enough to smell wet wool and cedar and the faint iron under it that she'd never once asked about. "The bar's shut because someone put a hand through Silas' front window on the tenth," she said. "Not a fist. A hand. Open. Reached in and took the ledger off the bar and left. I've been sleeping here since." Her voice stayed level, which took work. "So your name-buyer isn't wrong. And I've been sitting in this flat for nine days with a cat and a cricket bat, and every time the stairs creaked I thought — " She didn't finish it. Lucien's hand came up. Stopped. Hovered an inch from the bruise under her jaw, close enough that she felt the warmth off his palm. "May I?" "You've had eleven minutes." "I am aware." "That wasn't a no," Rory said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.339
leniency0.679
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1321
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
92.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1321
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords13
totalWords1329
ratio0.01
matches
0"You will be safer with distance between us. Do not look for me."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount606
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Moreau1
Lucien5
Rain2
Prague1
Eva2
Sylheti1
Started1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rain"
4"Eva"
places
0"Prague"
1"Sylheti"
globalScore0.675
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1329
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"heard that himself"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean22.91
std27.3
cv1.191
sampleLengths
022
173
22
31
451
58
610
728
833
96
1039
118
1272
1320
146
1543
165
173
187
1972
2018
212
225
237
2445
2563
265
279
282
2942
303
311
3223
336
342
352
366
3790
3811
3965
404
413
423
4372
442
45106
461
471
488
4950
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"been fed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs116
matches
0"was willing"
19.97% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences93
ratio0.043
matches
0"Not much of it — he'd have taken a cab to the corner and walked the last twenty feet, because he was the sort of man who calculated how wet he was willing to become."
1"He put the ivory handle of his cane against the frame, not pushing, just there, and looked at her over it with that mismatched gaze — amber on the left, black on the right, the black one always seeming to know more than the other."
2"Eva's research had colonised the place in the two weeks she'd been in Prague — scrolls unrolled and pinned with mugs, three books open face-down on the arm of the sofa, sticky notes crawling up the wall beside the window in an order only Eva understood."
3"Something moved through his face — not a smile."
98.72% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount603
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.04145936981757877
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003316749585406302
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean14.29
std13.89
cv0.972
sampleLengths
022
111
235
38
419
52
61
76
845
98
1010
1128
124
1329
146
1520
166
1713
188
1916
2046
2110
2220
233
243
2518
2625
275
283
297
3044
3128
3211
333
344
352
365
377
389
3912
4024
4113
4250
435
449
452
468
4734
483
491
68.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.44086021505376344
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
99.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences43
matches
0"She started to close the"
1"He put the ivory handle"
2"He sat on the edge"
3"She stayed standing, arms folded,"
4"he repeated, He let the"
5"She made herself stop."
6"He set the cane down"
7"His hands rested on his"
8"His jaw worked once."
9"He didn't come closer, which"
10"She didn't remember choosing to."
11"Her voice stayed level, which"
12"She didn't finish it."
ratio0.302
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"The platinum blond had darkened"
3"Water beaded on the shoulders"
4"She started to close the"
5"He put the ivory handle"
6"Rory leaned past him."
7"The tabby sat three steps"
8"Lucien lowered the cane"
9"Rain ticked against the stairwell"
10"Rory stepped back and let"
11"The flat smelled of cardamom"
12"Eva's research had colonised the"
13"Rory had cleared exactly enough"
14"Lucien took it all in"
15"He sat on the edge"
16"She stayed standing, arms folded,"
17"he repeated, He let the"
18"Rory's fingers found the crescent"
19"An old habit."
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Not much of it — he'd have taken a cab to the corner and walked the last twenty feet, because he was the sort of man who calculated how wet he was willing to be…"
1"The tabby sat three steps down, tail thrashing, staring up at Lucien with the flat murderous patience of a cat who'd been fed too well to need to hurry."
2"She stayed standing, arms folded, hip against the kitchen counter that doubled as the dining table and the desk and, on bad nights, the pillow."
98.68% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His hands rested, unmoving"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.357
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.036
83.7050%