Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPQ6H4SVC19KG3SNZN8S57

Run Details

Duration:
44.9s
Cost:
$0.067660
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did in wet weather, and Aurora had to lean her shoulder into the door before it gave. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain flattening his platinum hair against his skull, which she'd never seen before and had assumed impossible. Water ran off the ivory handle of his cane. His charcoal suit had gone black across the shoulders. "You've a leak in your stairwell," he said. "I've a leak in every part of my life." She kept one hand on the door. "It's half eleven." "Twenty past. I counted the walk from Aldgate East." He shifted his weight. Beneath him, the curry house extractor fan pushed cumin and hot oil up through the floorboards, and it mixed with the smell of him — cedar, something colder underneath. "May I come in, or shall we do this where your neighbours can enjoy it?" Aurora didn't move. Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles and made a sound like a kettle deciding against it. "Four months," she said. "Fifteen weeks and three days." "You counted that too." "I count everything. It's a tedious habit and it hasn't served me." Rain hit the window at the end of the landing in a fistful. His amber eye caught the hallway bulb; the black one gave back nothing at all. "Rory." She hated that it worked. She stepped aside. He came in the way he came into everywhere — assessing, cataloguing, the cane tapping once on the threshold as though testing whether the floor would hold him. Books stacked three deep along the skirting board. Eva's scrolls fanned across the kitchen table, weighted down with a chipped mug and a stapler. A cardboard delivery bag from the Golden Empress slung over the back of a chair. "You're living out of a takeaway satchel." "I'm working. There's a difference, though I grant it's subtle." She shut the door. Slid the first bolt. Considered the other two and left them. "Sit down. You're dripping on Eva's Aramaic." "It's Ugaritic." "Then it can take a bit of water." He didn't sit. He set the cane against the arm of the sofa, shrugged out of the suit jacket, and hung it — with obscene care — over the back of the chair. The shirt underneath had gone translucent at the shoulder blades. Aurora looked at the kettle instead, filled it, switched it on, and stood with her back to him while it began to tick. "Say it," she said. "Say what?" "Whatever you walked from Aldgate East in the rain to say. You don't do social calls. You don't do anything that isn't a transaction." The floorboard behind her complained. He'd come closer. Not close — Lucien had a talent for the exact distance that made her aware of her own skin. "That's not entirely fair." "No," she agreed. "It's about eighty per cent fair. I'm being generous because you're wet." A sound from him, low, that she refused to categorise as a laugh. "I came because a man named Ostrow has been asking after you in the Vaults. Twice this week. He described your scar." A pause. "The wrist. He knew about the wrist, Rory, which means he's spoken to someone who has seen you close enough to know." The kettle rose towards its scream. She turned the switch off before it got there and stood with her hand on the cool plastic. "That's the transaction, then." "That's the warning." "There's a difference?" "There's an enormous difference and you know it perfectly well." His voice had lost its polish, just at the edges. "I don't want anything. I have nothing to sell you. I came because I could think of no arrangement under which someone else would tell you in time, and I have spent fifteen weeks being told by every reasonable part of myself that this was no longer my concern." She turned around. He looked terrible. That was the thing she hadn't let herself see in the doorway — not the rain, but underneath it. Grey under the eyes. A cut healing badly along his jaw, the sort you got from something with an opinion. "Who cut you?" "That's not—" "Who cut you, Lucien." "A man who is no longer in a position to cut anyone." He touched it, absently, the way people touch things they've forgotten are there. "It isn't relevant." "It's relevant to me." The words came out before she'd approved them, and she watched him hear it, watched the amber eye go very still. "Don't," he said. "Don't what?" "Don't be kind. You were kind in October and I made a considerable mess of it and I have neither the constitution nor the vocabulary for a second attempt." Aurora crossed the two metres of Eva's carpet before she'd decided to. Stopped near enough to see rain still caught in his eyelashes. "You left," she said. "That's the entire text of it. There was a night, and it was — " She stopped. Started again, flatter. "And in the morning you'd gone, and there was a note, and the note said *I have business in Marseille*, in French, as though I wouldn't be able to read it." "You read it." "I made Eva translate it. She laughed for a quarter of an hour." "It was cowardice," he said. "I'd like to offer you something more interesting, some obligation of blood or a debt to a creditor in Avaros, and there are those, and they'd be true, and they'd also be a lie in the shape of the truth." He breathed out. "I was frightened. I found that I had begun to arrange my week around a woman who delivers noodles, and I have survived thirty-two years by arranging my week around nobody, and it seemed simpler to be on a train." "Simpler." "Cheaper. Faster. Every commercial virtue." His mouth twisted. "I've been miserable since Boxing Day and it has cost me a great deal of money." She should have laughed. She wanted to. Something hot and unhelpful pressed at the back of her throat instead. "You could have written," she said. "Properly. In English." "I did. Eleven times." He reached into the jacket hanging over the chair, and out came a folded envelope, soft at the creases, the ink on the front bled to a bruise by the rain. "This is the twelfth. I intended to post it and then I found myself at Aldgate East and then I found myself outside a curry house at twenty past eleven, and I discovered that I would rather you tore it up in front of me than never received it at all." Aurora took it. The paper was warm from being inside his coat. "What does it say?" "Read it." "Tell me." He looked at her, and for once didn't have four languages ready. "It says that I am not a good bet," he said. "It says that I know it. It says that if you would allow me to walk you to the Golden Empress in the mornings, I would consider it the single most extravagant thing I have ever been given, and I once owned a house in Aix." A muscle went in his jaw. "It says I'm sorry. Twice. The second time in French, because I couldn't stand to see it again in English." The rain went on against the window. Ptolemy jumped onto the table and sat down squarely on the Ugaritic. Aurora put the envelope on the counter, unopened, and pressed her palm flat over it. "The kettle's boiled," she said. "You're staying until it stops raining." "It's forecast until Thursday." "Then you'd better sit down."
created_at"2026-07-25T13:16:33.705Z" 7/25/2026, 1:16:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1276
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"see"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1284
ratio0.004
matches
0"I have business in Marseille"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount634
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Rain1
Golden1
Empress1
Slid1
Lucien2
Eva2
Started1
Ugaritic1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rain"
4"Lucien"
5"Eva"
6"Started"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though testing whether the floor would hold him"
44.24% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.558
wordCount1284
matches
0"not the rain, but underneath it"
1"neither the constitution nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences105
matches
0"hated that it"
1"low, that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean21.4
std23.49
cv1.097
sampleLengths
025
142
28
319
457
520
64
75
84
941
108
1167
127
1332
142
158
1666
174
182
1924
2027
214
2215
2359
2424
254
263
273
2869
293
3042
313
322
334
3428
3525
363
372
3829
3923
4055
413
4213
4388
441
4524
4619
479
4886
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences105
ratio0.057
matches
0"Beneath him, the curry house extractor fan pushed cumin and hot oil up through the floorboards, and it mixed with the smell of him — cedar, something colder underneath."
1"His amber eye caught the hallway bulb; the black one gave back nothing at all."
2"He came in the way he came into everywhere — assessing, cataloguing, the cane tapping once on the threshold as though testing whether the floor would hold him."
3"He set the cane against the arm of the sofa, shrugged out of the suit jacket, and hung it — with obscene care — over the back of the chair."
4"Not close — Lucien had a talent for the exact distance that made her aware of her own skin."
5"That was the thing she hadn't let herself see in the doorway — not the rain, but underneath it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount628
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.028662420382165606
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004777070063694267
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean12.23
std11.42
cv0.934
sampleLengths
025
124
29
39
48
516
63
713
829
915
103
1117
124
135
144
1525
1615
171
185
193
2028
218
2216
2315
247
2514
264
277
287
292
308
313
3230
3310
3423
354
362
3724
385
393
4019
414
423
4312
4413
4524
4622
476
4818
494
59.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.04% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences54
matches
0"His charcoal suit had gone"
1"She kept one hand on"
2"He shifted his weight"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"She hated that it worked."
5"She stepped aside."
6"He came in the way"
7"She shut the door"
8"He didn't sit."
9"He set the cane against"
10"He'd come closer."
11"She turned the switch off"
12"His voice had lost its"
13"She turned around."
14"He looked terrible."
15"He touched it, absently, the"
16"He breathed out"
17"His mouth twisted"
18"She should have laughed."
19"She wanted to."
ratio0.407
43.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences54
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"Water ran off the ivory"
3"His charcoal suit had gone"
4"She kept one hand on"
5"He shifted his weight"
6"Aurora didn't move."
7"His amber eye caught the"
8"She hated that it worked."
9"She stepped aside."
10"He came in the way"
11"Books stacked three deep along"
12"Eva's scrolls fanned across the"
13"A cardboard delivery bag from"
14"She shut the door"
15"He didn't sit."
16"He set the cane against"
17"The shirt underneath had gone"
18"Aurora looked at the kettle"
19"The floorboard behind her complained."
ratio0.833
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He came in the way he came into everywhere — assessing, cataloguing, the cane tapping once on the threshold as though testing whether the floor would hold him."
1"Not close — Lucien had a talent for the exact distance that made her aware of her own skin."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she agreed (agree)"
1"He breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.177
leniency0.355
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.065
80.9433%