Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPQBD1YCA2W4MEBSE8GTT3

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Duration:
52.9s
Cost:
$0.079000
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones leaned like drunks at closing time, five of them, grey and furred with lichen, and Rory felt the air change the moment she stepped between two of them. One breath she'd been on wet January grass in Richmond Park, the sky the colour of dishwater. The next, warmth pressed against her face like an open oven door, and the smell of crushed thyme filled her nose. "Christ." She stopped dead. "Nyx. Nyx, look at the sky." The Shade poured through the gap behind her, reassembling from a smear of dark into something with shoulders and a suggestion of a head. Their violet eyes lifted. "I see it." It was noon and it was midnight at once. Directly overhead, a hard blue brightness. But at the edges, where the tops of the oaks should have met the horizon, the blue bled to indigo and then to a black crowded with stars — great fat stars, low enough to feel personal, arranged in constellations Rory had never seen in twenty-five years of looking up. "That's not the sky over London." "No." Nyx drifted forward, and where they passed, the wildflowers turned their heads. Not toward the light. Toward the shadow. "It is the sky over here. Whatever here is." Behind them came the crunch of boots, then a curse, then Marcus Okonjo shouldering through the standing stones with his rucksack snagging on stone. He got two steps into the clearing and dropped the bag. "No," he said. "Marcus—" "No. My phone says half four. It said half four twenty minutes ago and it says half four now. The seconds aren't moving." He held it up like evidence at trial. "Rory, the seconds aren't moving." "Isolde said time was strange in here." "Strange is a fifteen-minute delay on the Circle line. This is—" He turned the phone over, looked at the back of it, as if the answer might be printed there. "This is broken." Rory tucked the Heartstone back under her collar. It had gone quiet the moment they crossed the boundary — no warmth, no pulse, just a cold lump of crimson stone against her sternum. That bothered her more than the sky. The grove opened ahead of them, wider than the clearing had looked from outside. Grass so short and even it might have been cropped by something patient. Wildflowers everywhere, and that was the second wrong thing: cornflowers next to foxgloves next to snowdrops next to a spray of poppies, all of them blooming at once, all of them impossible in the same month, let alone the same square metre. "Don't pick anything," Rory said. "Wasn't going to." "I'm saying it out loud so it's said." They walked. The ground gave slightly underfoot, springy, and Rory realised after fifty paces that she couldn't hear her own footsteps. Or Marcus's. His boots were size twelve and he walked like a man carrying furniture, and there was nothing. Just the wind, which moved the flower heads and the grass and did not touch her hair at all. "Nyx." She kept her voice low. "The wind." "Yes." "It's not touching us." "It is not for us." Nyx had gone thin and long, stretched toward something at the far end of the clearing. "It is for them." Rory followed the line of their attention. At the grove's heart stood a tree. She had seen big trees. There was an oak in Bute Park her mother used to walk her round as a child, four grown adults with arms outstretched to circle it, and she'd thought that was the upper limit of what a tree could be. This thing made that oak a sapling. Its trunk was a wall, a cliff, split and re-fused a dozen times over centuries into ropes of wood thick as her waist, and the bark was pale — not birch-pale, bone-pale, and it caught the strange half-light and threw it back. The branches went up and up and then didn't stop where they should have. They went into the black part of the sky. Rory watched a limb pass in front of a star and thought her ribs might crack from the pressure of trying to fit that into her head. "Marcus." "I see it. I've been seeing it for a minute. I've been standing here deciding whether to see it." The leaves were the wrong colour. Silver on the underside, and when the wind that wasn't for them ran through, the whole canopy turned over at once with a sound like rain on a conservatory roof, or coins, or applause. It went on for a long time and then stopped all together, every leaf, as if a conductor had cut them off. "Right," Marcus said. "Right. And Isolde lives here." "Somewhere." "Somewhere. Marvellous. Bit of a garden." They went closer. The grass gave way to moss, and in the moss Rory started noticing things half-swallowed: a wheel rim of rusted iron, the arch of a stone doorway with nothing behind it, a boot, brown leather, curled and cracked, buckle green with age. Then another boot. Then a third, and no fourth, and she stopped counting because the counting was making her feel unwell. "People come here," Marcus said. "People come here." Rory crouched by the doorway. Carvings ran up the jamb — not letters, or not letters she knew, but something spiralling and organic, more like the pattern of veins in a leaf than writing. She reached out and stopped herself an inch short. "Nyx. Can you read this?" The Shade coiled down beside her. For a moment they went almost solid, and Rory caught what they used to be — the ghost of a jaw, a nose, the shape of a man who'd been in a room in 1643 doing something monumentally stupid. "Fragments." Their voice came from everywhere and nowhere, a whisper on that wind. "This is old Court script. Older than the Courts, some claim." A pause. "It says *thresholds are honest*. Or *doorways do not lie*. The grammar is not — the grammar does not work as ours does. It also says something about payment." "Payment." "I would not walk through it." "I wasn't going to walk through it." "You were considering it." Rory stood and brushed the moss from her palms. "I was considering it." The light shifted. Not gradually — it stepped, the way a lamp steps when someone changes the bulb, and the whole grove went from blue-white to honey-gold. Rory's own shadow swung around her feet like a compass needle finding north, and pointed at the tree. So did Marcus's. So did the shadow of every flower, every stone, every rusted wheel rim. All of them, pointing the same way, at the same time, regardless of where the light was coming from. "Nyx," Rory said. "I am aware." Nyx's own shadow — the Shade cast one, which she'd never quite got used to — had not moved. "Something has noticed us." "Something good?" "Something interested." Marcus laughed, and it came out wrong, too high. "You know what I love about you two? The optimism." Rory started walking toward the tree. It was the only thing to do; you didn't get to the middle of a mystery and then stand about admiring the wallpaper. The moss deepened until it went over her ankles, cool and clinging, and she felt something under it — regular ridges, a spacing too even for roots. Steps. There were steps buried under here, a path, and it ran straight and true toward the pale trunk. Halfway there she found the water. A pool, perfectly round, no more than a metre across, black as a pupil. No ripples. When she looked in she saw the star-sky reflected, all of it, the entire crowded black of it compressed into that little circle, and no reflection of her face at all. "Don't," she said, before Marcus could crouch. "Don't look in it." He straightened up so fast his knees clicked. "Why?" "Because it doesn't look back." Somewhere above them, high in the silver canopy, something laughed — a short, bright, delighted sound, entirely female, entirely wrong to hear a hundred feet in the air. The leaves turned over all at once.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1364
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1364
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"footsteps"
3"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1375
ratio0.005
matches
0"thresholds are honest"
1"doorways do not lie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1127
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
January1
Richmond1
Park2
Shade3
Marcus7
Okonjo1
Heartstone1
Nyx3
Bute1
Carvings1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Shade"
2"Marcus"
3"Okonjo"
4"Heartstone"
5"Nyx"
6"Carvings"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Bute"
globalScore0.879
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
54.55% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.455
wordCount1375
matches
0"not letters, or not letters she knew, but something spiralling"
1"not letters she knew, but something spiralling"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences112
matches
0"made that oak"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean25
std24.51
cv0.98
sampleLengths
069
110
228
33
465
56
629
735
83
91
1036
117
1233
1340
1469
155
163
178
1859
198
201
214
2225
2314
2494
2550
261
2719
2862
298
301
316
3266
335
3451
3545
3655
371
386
397
404
4113
4245
4335
443
4526
462
472
4819
4975
96.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences79
matches
0"been cropped"
1"got used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was making"
1"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences112
ratio0.089
matches
0"But at the edges, where the tops of the oaks should have met the horizon, the blue bled to indigo and then to a black crowded with stars — great fat stars, low enough to feel personal, arranged in constellations Rory had never seen in twenty-five years of looking up."
1"It had gone quiet the moment they crossed the boundary — no warmth, no pulse, just a cold lump of crimson stone against her sternum."
2"Its trunk was a wall, a cliff, split and re-fused a dozen times over centuries into ropes of wood thick as her waist, and the bark was pale — not birch-pale, bone-pale, and it caught the strange half-light and threw it back."
3"Carvings ran up the jamb — not letters, or not letters she knew, but something spiralling and organic, more like the pattern of veins in a leaf than writing."
4"For a moment they went almost solid, and Rory caught what they used to be — the ghost of a jaw, a nose, the shape of a man who'd been in a room in 1643 doing something monumentally stupid."
5"Not gradually — it stepped, the way a lamp steps when someone changes the bulb, and the whole grove went from blue-white to honey-gold."
6"\"I am aware.\" Nyx's own shadow — the Shade cast one, which she'd never quite got used to — had not moved."
7"It was the only thing to do; you didn't get to the middle of a mystery and then stand about admiring the wallpaper."
8"The moss deepened until it went over her ankles, cool and clinging, and she felt something under it — regular ridges, a spacing too even for roots."
9"Somewhere above them, high in the silver canopy, something laughed — a short, bright, delighted sound, entirely female, entirely wrong to hear a hundred feet in the air."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1125
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.036444444444444446
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0071111111111111115
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean12.28
std11.27
cv0.918
sampleLengths
031
117
221
34
46
524
64
73
89
96
1050
116
1213
134
143
159
1624
1711
183
191
2031
215
227
2330
243
258
2625
277
2814
2913
3042
315
323
338
342
3519
362
3717
3819
396
402
411
424
4321
444
457
467
475
4840
497
67.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4642857142857143
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences69
matches
0"Directly overhead, a hard blue"
1"Just the wind, which moved"
2"Then another boot."
3"Then a third, and no"
4"Somewhere above them, high in"
ratio0.072
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences69
matches
0"She stopped dead"
1"Their violet eyes lifted."
2"It was noon and it"
3"He got two steps into"
4"He held it up like"
5"He turned the phone over,"
6"It had gone quiet the"
7"His boots were size twelve"
8"She kept her voice low"
9"She had seen big trees."
10"Its trunk was a wall,"
11"They went into the black"
12"It went on for a"
13"They went closer."
14"She reached out and stopped"
15"Their voice came from everywhere"
16"It was the only thing"
17"she said, before Marcus could"
18"He straightened up so fast"
ratio0.275
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences69
matches
0"The oak stones leaned like"
1"The next, warmth pressed against"
2"She stopped dead"
3"The Shade poured through the"
4"Their violet eyes lifted."
5"It was noon and it"
6"Nyx drifted forward, and where"
7"He got two steps into"
8"He held it up like"
9"He turned the phone over,"
10"Rory tucked the Heartstone back"
11"It had gone quiet the"
12"That bothered her more than"
13"The grove opened ahead of"
14"Grass so short and even"
15"Wildflowers everywhere, and that was"
16"The ground gave slightly underfoot,"
17"His boots were size twelve"
18"She kept her voice low"
19"Nyx had gone thin and"
ratio0.696
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Behind them came the crunch of boots, then a curse, then Marcus Okonjo shouldering through the standing stones with his rucksack snagging on stone."
1"Silver on the underside, and when the wind that wasn't for them ran through, the whole canopy turned over at once with a sound like rain on a conservatory roof,…"
2"For a moment they went almost solid, and Rory caught what they used to be — the ghost of a jaw, a nose, the shape of a man who'd been in a room in 1643 doing so…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.245
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.8664%