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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

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Three deadbolts. She'd thrown all three, and he still had the gall to knock like a man expected for supper. Rory knew that knock. Two raps, a pause, a third. Polite as a guillotine. She could have left him standing there. She thought about it while Ptolemy wound around her ankles, purring like a traitor, and while the curry house below sent up its evening fog of cumin and hot oil through the floorboards. Instead her hands moved, bolt after bolt, and the chain last of all, and she opened the door only as far as the chain allowed. Lucien Moreau filled the gap in charcoal wool. Not a thread out of place, not a hair loose from that slicked platinum. The ivory handle of his cane rested against his thigh. Behind him the stairwell bulb flickered, and his mismatched eyes caught it differently, the amber one warming, the black one swallowing it whole. "Aurora." "There's a bell." "You disconnected it in March. I assumed on purpose." A pause. "May I?" "No." "Ah." He didn't move. He never moved when he didn't want to. "Then I shall say it through four inches of door, and your neighbours may make of it what they will. Someone has been asking after you by name." The chain suddenly felt like a joke. She unhooked it and stepped back, and he came in the way water comes in, finding every low place at once. The flat was worse than usual. Eva's research had metastasised; scrolls unfurled across the sofa, three open books stacked spine-up on the arm, a mug of cold tea growing a skin on the window ledge. Lucien took it all in without appearing to look at any of it, and set his cane against the bookcase with a soft click. "Yu-Fei says you've been working doubles," he said. "Yu-Fei talks too much." "Yu-Fei says nothing she doesn't intend to. She wanted me to know." He turned. "You've lost weight." "You've lost the right to notice." That landed. She saw it land, a small tightening at the corner of his mouth, gone before it fully arrived. He unbuttoned his jacket, one button, the way he did when he wanted his hands free, and then seemed to reconsider and left it hanging open. Ptolemy leapt onto the table and sat down squarely in the middle of a fifteenth-century map. Lucien reached over and scratched the cat's chin, and the cat, shameless, tipped its head into his fingers. "Traitor," Rory said. "He remembers who brings the sardines." "He remembers who left without a word for eleven weeks." "Eleven weeks and four days," Lucien said. "You may as well be accurate." "Oh, you counted." "I count everything. It's the only skill I have that pays." She folded her arms. It was that or reach for him, and she knew which of the two she'd regret less in an hour and which she'd regret more at three in the morning. "Who's asking after me?" "We'll come to that." "No. We'll come to it now, because that's the only reason you're standing in my friend's kitchen instead of on the pavement, and once we've come to it you can leave." "Aurora." "Don't." "You say my name like it's a bill you refuse to pay," he said. "Fair enough. I have a great deal owing." He crossed to the window, and the movement carried him within a foot of her. Close enough that she caught it, the bergamot and cold iron and something underneath, something warm and not entirely human, the scent she had spent eleven weeks and four days trying to scrub out of her memory with cheap detergent and long shifts. She stayed where she was. That felt like victory until she realised she'd stopped breathing. "Marseille," he said, to the glass. "What about it?" "That's where I went. My father sent word." He turned the ivory handle over in his hand, though the cane still stood by the bookcase; his fingers had gone to it out of habit and found nothing, and he closed them on empty air. "Not a request. Demons don't request. My mother's grave had been disturbed." Rory's arms loosened at her sides. "Disturbed how?" "Emptied." He said it the way he'd say a train time. "Someone wanted proof of what she carried. Which means someone wanted proof of me. Which means, in the small hideous arithmetic of that city, that someone wanted leverage. I spent eleven weeks finding out who, and then rather longer than I like to admit ensuring they will not be asking again." The clock over the sink ticked. Below, someone dropped a pan and swore in Bengali. "You could have told me." "I could have." "One text. Three words. *Gone. Not dead.*" "And you would have followed me." "You don't know that." "I know you," he said, and for the first time he looked directly at her, both eyes, and it was like being caught between a candle and a well. "You'd have been on the Eurostar within a day. You'd have talked your way into that house, because you talk your way into everything, and my father would have looked at you the way a man looks at a lit match near his curtains. He'd have used you to hold me. He'd have been very kind about it, and very patient, and it would have taken him perhaps a fortnight." "So you made the choice for me." "Yes." "You don't get to do that." "I'm aware." "No, you're not," she said, and her voice came out lower than she wanted, rougher. "You think you took a bullet for me. You didn't. You left me sitting in this flat googling French mortuary records, ringing every number you'd ever given me, going to that awful club in Shoreditch three nights running because it was the last place anyone had seen you, and having a man with no thumbs tell me you'd probably been rendered down for parts." Lucien said nothing. "Do you know what I did on the fourth night?" "Tell me." "I stopped looking." Her throat clicked. "I decided you were dead, because that was easier than the other thing." "What other thing?" "That you'd got bored." He moved then. Not fast, but with none of the theatre he usually carried, and his hand came up and stopped a breath from her cheek, hovering, waiting for permission that she absolutely was not going to give. "Bored," he repeated. "You collect people, Lucien. You use them and file them and you're always so *charming* about it." "I have never in my life been bored by you." His hand still hung there. "I have been frightened by you. There's a difference, and you'd know it if you'd ever once been on the other side of yourself." "That's not an apology." "No. Would you take one?" "No." "Then I'll save it." Slowly, he let his hand drop. "Which brings us to the reason I'm here rather than on your pavement, since you asked so nicely. The man I dealt with in Marseille had a ledger. Names and prices, the way they all keep them. My mother's grave was one line. Three lines below it, someone had written yours." The floor seemed to tilt very slightly. "Mine." "*Malphora*," he said. "Written in a hand I recognise. Priced considerably higher than I was." "That's not my name." "It's the one they're using. Someone in that city knows something about you that you don't, Aurora, and they were willing to pay in blood for confirmation." He picked up his cane at last, and the thin blade inside gave the faintest whisper as he settled it. "So. You may throw me out. It's your right, and I'll go, and I'll stand under your window all night like a fool, because that is the arrangement I've made with myself. Or you can put the kettle on and let me tell you the rest." Rory looked at him. At the immaculate suit, the flicker in the amber eye, the hairline tremor in the hand around the ivory. She reached for the kettle. Three sharp knocks came at the door. Two, a pause, a third. Lucien went very still. "That's my knock," he said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Slowly he let [Slowly]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.029
74.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count4
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1377
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"grave"
count2
3
word"ensuring"
count1
4
word"absolutely"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"weight"
2"grave"
3"ensuring"
4"absolutely"
5"whisper"
6"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
96.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen70
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords5
totalWords1377
ratio0.004
matches
0"Gone. Not dead."
1"charming"
2"Malphora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount693
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Moreau1
Lucien6
Rory4
Bengali1
Slowly1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Bengali"
globalScore1
windowScore1
11.11% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a joke"
1"felt like victory until she realised sh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.726
wordCount1377
matches
0"Not fast, but with none of the theatre he usually carried"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"knew that knock"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean18.61
std23.07
cv1.24
sampleLengths
020
114
265
355
41
53
613
71
840
928
1059
118
124
1317
146
1546
1634
173
186
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2013
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2211
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244
254
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271
281
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3058
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326
333
3456
356
362
3762
3815
395
403
417
426
434
4499
457
461
476
482
4979
99.51% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"being caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
90.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences110
ratio0.018
matches
0"Eva's research had metastasised; scrolls unfurled across the sofa, three open books stacked spine-up on the arm, a mug of cold tea growing a skin on the window ledge."
1"\"That's where I went. My father sent word.\" He turned the ivory handle over in his hand, though the cane still stood by the bookcase; his fingers had gone to it out of habit and found nothing, and he closed them on empty air."
99.75% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount695
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.04028776978417266
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.015827338129496403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean12.52
std13.87
cv1.108
sampleLengths
02
118
24
36
44
57
633
725
88
914
1010
1123
121
133
1411
152
161
174
188
1928
207
2121
226
2329
2424
258
264
2714
283
296
302
3118
3226
3316
3418
353
366
3710
387
396
403
4111
424
4330
444
454
4631
471
481
4914
68.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.45454545454545453
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"Instead her hands moved, bolt"
1"Slowly, he let his hand"
ratio0.04
44.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences50
matches
0"She'd thrown all three, and"
1"She could have left him"
2"She thought about it while"
3"He didn't move"
4"He never moved when he"
5"She unhooked it and stepped"
6"She saw it land, a"
7"He unbuttoned his jacket, one"
8"She folded her arms."
9"It was that or reach"
10"He crossed to the window,"
11"She stayed where she was."
12"he said, to the glass"
13"He turned the ivory handle"
14"He said it the way"
15"he said, and for the"
16"she said, and her voice"
17"Her throat clicked"
18"He moved then."
19"His hand still hung there"
ratio0.44
80.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences50
matches
0"She'd thrown all three, and"
1"Rory knew that knock."
2"She could have left him"
3"She thought about it while"
4"Lucien Moreau filled the gap"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"He didn't move"
7"He never moved when he"
8"The chain suddenly felt like"
9"She unhooked it and stepped"
10"The flat was worse than"
11"Eva's research had metastasised; scrolls"
12"Lucien took it all in"
13"She saw it land, a"
14"He unbuttoned his jacket, one"
15"Ptolemy leapt onto the table"
16"Lucien reached over and scratched"
17"She folded her arms."
18"It was that or reach"
19"He crossed to the window,"
ratio0.76
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Not fast, but with none of the theatre he usually carried, and his hand came up and stopped a breath from her cheek, hovering, waiting for permission that she a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.162
leniency0.324
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.029
87.8439%