| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva turned slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "Eva said quickly [quickly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 74.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "quickly" | | 5 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "wavering" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "the last thing" | | 4 | "unsettled" | | 5 | "lurch" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1381 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1066 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Two | 2 | | Eva | 7 | | December | 4 | | Rory | 13 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Kingston | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Orion | 1 | | Plough | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" | | 3 | "Kingston" |
| | globalScore | 0.89 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 45.83% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite committed to being dead" | | 1 | "something like a foxglove but wrong in the t" |
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| 55.18% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.448 | | wordCount | 1381 | | matches | | 0 | "not the pulse it gave near a rift, not that awful hot heartbeat, but a steady low warmth, like a mug of tea held against the ribs" | | 1 | "not that awful hot heartbeat, but a steady low warmth, like a mug of tea held against the ribs" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 26.06 | | std | 24.43 | | cv | 0.937 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 80 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 66 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 70 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 85 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 88 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 70 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 53 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 50 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 46 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 60 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "been braced" | | 1 | "was lit " | | 2 | "was crouched" | | 3 | "being projected" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was doing" | | 1 | "were introducing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead of her, four trunks stood in a rough square — massive, blackened at the base, their crowns lopped off by lightning or age or something less explicable." | | 1 | "It had been warm all the way from Kingston — not the pulse it gave near a rift, not that awful hot heartbeat, but a steady low warmth, like a mug of tea held against the ribs." | | 2 | "It was the absence of the argument between her skin and the air — as though her body had been braced against December for weeks and someone had simply switched December off." | | 3 | "Not the green of grass; the green of a bitten stem, of crushed leaf, sweet and bitter and faintly metallic at the back of the throat." | | 4 | "That was the first impossible thing — a whole meadow of them, knee-high, and not one species doing what it should." | | 5 | "The clearing was lit — softly, generously, gold at the edges — and there was a sky above, deep and dusk-blue and full of a slow drift of stars, and the stars were not any stars she'd ever seen." | | 6 | "Not gusts — currents." | | 7 | "That was the strangest part, later, when she tried to describe it — how quickly a place like that became a place you walked through." | | 8 | "Rory felt it in the small bones of her feet before she heard it, and when she did hear it she recognised it with a lurch — it was the same note the Heartstone made when it woke." | | 9 | "And ahead of them, coming down from the trees to meet them, silver hair to her waist and bare feet in the wet flowers, walked a woman who left the grass entirely undisturbed — no crush, no gleam of dew displaced, nothing at all, as though she were being projected onto the meadow rather than standing in it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1060 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.038679245283018866 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01509433962264151 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 13.28 | | std | 12.03 | | cv | 0.906 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 39 |
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| 62.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a wide unfamiliar spill" | | 1 | "Then birdsong, high and looping," | | 2 | "Then, faint under everything, a" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "They weren't trees anymore." | | 1 | "They were posts." | | 2 | "Their voice came from her" | | 3 | "It had been warm all" | | 4 | "She'd never worked out which" | | 5 | "It wasn't warmth exactly." | | 6 | "It was the absence of" | | 7 | "Her lungs pulled in something" | | 8 | "She opened her eyes onto" | | 9 | "she said, eventually" | | 10 | "She kept her voice level" | | 11 | "She was crouched at the" | | 12 | "It sat in the grass," | | 13 | "They walked faster." | | 14 | "She stopped, turned, and looked" |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 82.95% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks were the first" | | 1 | "Rory noticed it about twenty" | | 2 | "They weren't trees anymore." | | 3 | "They were posts." | | 4 | "Their voice came from her" | | 5 | "Rory had mostly stopped flinching" | | 6 | "The shadow beside her thickened," | | 7 | "Eva had her arms crossed" | | 8 | "Rory pressed her hand flat" | | 9 | "It had been warm all" | | 10 | "Reassurance or warning." | | 11 | "She'd never worked out which" | | 12 | "Nyx flowed between the two" | | 13 | "That was the last thing" | | 14 | "Rory stepped through and the" | | 15 | "It wasn't warmth exactly." | | 16 | "It was the absence of" | | 17 | "Her lungs pulled in something" | | 18 | "She opened her eyes onto" | | 19 | "That was the first impossible" |
| | ratio | 0.754 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 43.65% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Standing stones that had once been living wood and hadn't quite committed to being dead." | | 1 | "The meadow sloped gently down towards a stand of trees that weren't oaks and weren't willows and had bark like poured pewter, and as they went the sounds arrive…" | | 2 | "Water first: a stream somewhere off to the right, but the note of it wrong, too many tones, as if it fell through bells." | | 3 | "And that was when Rory understood the other thing that had been bothering her, the low itch at the base of her skull since they'd crossed the oaks." | | 4 | "And ahead of them, coming down from the trees to meet them, silver hair to her waist and bare feet in the wet flowers, walked a woman who left the grass entirel…" |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.256 | | leniency | 0.513 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |