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Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPV1NRA4V8FWA5VTKTSBJH
Run Details
Model:
Claude Opus 5
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
43.8s
Cost:
$0.087395
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
87.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
87.32%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
69.81%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
66.67%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
44.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
30.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
83.33%
Technical jargon density
(details)
95.59%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
88.8013%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Three deadbolts.
Rory drew them back one
at a time, slow, because the knock had come in that particular rhythm, two soft, one hard, and only one person in London used it.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
landing with rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit and his cane hooked over his forearm like an umbrella he'd forgotten to open. "You're dripping on Eva's mat," she said. "Eva's mat has survived worse." "So have I."
She didn't move out of
the doorway. Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles and made a low, interested noise, the traitor. "It's been six weeks." "Seven."
He tilted his head
.
The amber eye caught the
hallway bulb and held it.
The black one gave her
nothing, as always. "Forty-nine days. I counted on the way up the stairs. Slowly. There are a great many stairs." "You could have called." "I did. Twice. You let it ring out and then you turned the phone off, which I found rather eloquent."
Rory leaned on the door
frame, arms crossed, and
hated that her
pulse
had picked up the moment she heard the knock. Not fear. Fear would have been simpler. Fear she knew how to file away. "So you thought you'd turn up at eleven at night." "I thought," he said, "that a closed door is a conversation. And I dislike leaving conversations unfinished."
Curry smoke rose faintly through
the floorboards from downstairs, cumin and hot oil, the smell that clung to every jumper she owned in this flat.
Somewhere below, a man laughed
too loudly at the end of his shift.
She listened to it rather
than look at Lucien's mouth. "Say it from there, then." "Aurora." "Don't." "May I come in before your neighbours learn my business?"
He shifted his weight and
she caught it, the small hitch, the way he set the cane down before he needed to. Not affectation this time. "The stairs, as I mentioned." Damn him. She stepped back.
He crossed the threshold like
a cat testing water, careful, taking in everything at once.
Books stacked in towers against
the skirting.
A scroll weighted flat with
a mug and two tins of chickpeas.
Eva's research pinned to the
wall in a spidering mess of red string.
He looked at all of
it and said nothing, which was worse than commentary. "Tea,"
Rory said, because her hands
wanted something to do. "Or nothing. There's no wine." "There is wine. In the cupboard above the sink, behind the flour. Eva hides it from herself." "You've been in this flat once." "Once is generally sufficient."
She poured two glasses without
asking further, and the bottle knocked against the rim because her grip wasn't as steady as she wanted it.
He didn't comment on that
either.
He sat on the arm
of the sofa rather than the sofa itself, spine straight, both hands folded on the ivory handle. Poised as a photograph.
She'd learned to read that
stillness.
He held himself like that
when he'd already decided something and expected it to cost him. "Go on then," she said. "What's the job." "There's no job." "There's always a job." "Not tonight."
He turned the cane a
quarter of an inch. "Tonight there is only the thing I said to you at the Empress, and the way you looked at me afterwards, and seven weeks in which I have not been able to put either down." The wine went sour in her mouth. "You said I was a useful liability." "I said you were the most useful liability I had ever made the mistake of caring for. You left before the second half of the sentence, which was, I concede, a failure of pacing on my part." "That's not better, Lucien." "No." He exhaled. "It is, however, true. I have
very
little else to offer you." Rory set her glass down on a stack of Eva's notes and immediately moved it, because there was a water ring already and Eva would murder her. Small tasks. Small motions. Anything but the memory of the corridor behind the Golden Empress, steam venting from the kitchen extractor, his thumb against her jaw and her own shameful readiness to lean into it. "You handed me over," she said. His fingers stopped moving. "To Silas. You put my name in a room I wasn't in." "I put your name in a room where it would keep you alive." "You didn't ask me." "If I had asked, you would have refused, and then he would have found you anyway, and there would have been nothing I could do from the wrong side of that arrangement."
He looked up
. The amber eye had gone flat and hard. "I have done a great many things I would not survive confessing. That is not one of them." "You should have told me." "Yes." Just that. No parry, no French shrug. "I should have told you. I chose the outcome over the honesty. It is a habit of my father's people and I dislike finding it in myself." Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa arm beside him and Lucien, without breaking her gaze, scratched the cat behind the ear with one gloved knuckle. Rory watched that small automatic kindness and felt her anger slip a notch, which infuriated her more than the anger had. "I sat in Silas' bar for a month,"
she said, quieter
. "Every night. Waiting to hear what he'd bought." "He bought nothing. He acquired an obligation to protect you and he has honoured it, which I assure you cost him considerable pride." A pause. "I paid for it, Aurora. That is what I came to say. I have not come to be forgiven. I came so you would stop assuming you were currency." "What did you pay?" "That is not the interesting part of the story." "What did you pay." He stood.
It took him a fraction
longer than it should have, and she saw the
weight
go through the cane, and she understood before he said a word. "A year," he said. "Of service. And a thing that was mine."
He didn't gesture at the
leg. He didn't have to. "It grows back, more or less. Demon inheritance has some advantages, though the timetable is humiliating." The flat was too small. The books pressed in, the curry smoke, the rain against the window in fat impatient handfuls.
She crossed the two steps
between them without deciding to. "You idiot," she said. "Very likely." "You absolute, arrogant, French" "That last isn't an insult." She took his lapel in her fist. Wet wool, warm underneath. His breath changed, the first crack she'd heard in him all night, and he stayed where he was, which was the only thing he could have done that would have undone her. "Tell me to leave," he said. "I will. I have got quite good at stairs." "Shut up." "Aurora." "I said" the deadbolts rattled, all three at once, from the outside "shut up." Lucien had the blade half out of the cane before the door came off its hinges.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
17
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.288
leniency
0.576
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
87.32%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1183
totalAiIsmAdverbs
3
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
1
adverb
"very"
count
2
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
87.32%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1183
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"pulse"
count
1
1
word
"weight"
count
2
highlights
0
"pulse"
1
"weight"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
66
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
66
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
106
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
37
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1183
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
24
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
20
wordCount
673
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
0.74
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Eva"
discoveredNames
London
1
Moreau
1
Ptolemy
2
Curry
1
Lucien
4
Rory
5
Eva
3
Golden
1
Empress
1
French
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Ptolemy"
2
"Lucien"
3
"Rory"
4
"Eva"
places
0
"London"
1
"Curry"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
38
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1183
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
2
totalSentences
106
matches
0
"hated that her"
1
"read that stillness"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
60
mean
19.72
std
19.12
cv
0.97
sampleLengths
0
32
1
29
2
7
3
5
4
29
5
40
6
4
7
20
8
36
9
10
10
17
11
48
12
5
13
1
14
1
15
41
16
5
17
61
18
15
19
17
20
6
21
4
22
78
23
8
24
3
25
4
26
46
27
7
28
7
29
37
30
4
31
15
32
62
33
6
34
4
35
12
36
13
37
4
38
61
39
5
40
35
41
45
42
19
43
54
44
4
45
9
46
4
47
29
48
38
49
31
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
66
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
117
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
106
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
673
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
19
adverbRatio
0.02823179791976226
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.007429420505200594
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
106
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
106
mean
11.16
std
9.25
cv
0.829
sampleLengths
0
2
1
30
2
29
3
7
4
5
5
10
6
15
7
4
8
5
9
10
10
8
11
17
12
4
13
20
14
22
15
2
16
5
17
7
18
10
19
17
20
25
21
13
22
10
23
5
24
1
25
1
26
32
27
4
28
5
29
2
30
3
31
15
32
7
33
12
34
13
35
14
36
10
37
5
38
17
39
6
40
4
41
24
42
6
43
22
44
4
45
6
46
16
47
5
48
3
49
3
69.81%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
6
diversityRatio
0.4528301886792453
totalSentences
106
uniqueOpeners
48
66.67%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"Somewhere below, a man laughed"
ratio
0.02
44.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
22
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"She didn't move out of"
1
"He tilted his head"
2
"She listened to it rather"
3
"He shifted his weight and"
4
"She stepped back."
5
"He crossed the threshold like"
6
"He looked at all of"
7
"She poured two glasses without"
8
"He didn't comment on that"
9
"He sat on the arm"
10
"She'd learned to read that"
11
"He held himself like that"
12
"He turned the cane a"
13
"His fingers stopped moving."
14
"He looked up"
15
"she said, quieter"
16
"It took him a fraction"
17
"He didn't gesture at the"
18
"He didn't have to."
19
"She crossed the two steps"
ratio
0.44
30.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
43
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"Rory drew them back one"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2
"She didn't move out of"
3
"He tilted his head"
4
"The amber eye caught the"
5
"The black one gave her"
6
"Rory leaned on the door"
7
"Fear would have been simpler."
8
"Curry smoke rose faintly through"
9
"She listened to it rather"
10
"He shifted his weight and"
11
"She stepped back."
12
"He crossed the threshold like"
13
"Books stacked in towers against"
14
"A scroll weighted flat with"
15
"Eva's research pinned to the"
16
"He looked at all of"
17
"Rory said, because her hands"
18
"She poured two glasses without"
19
"He didn't comment on that"
ratio
0.86
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
50
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
83.33%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
24
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"Curry smoke rose faintly through the floorboards from downstairs, cumin and hot oil, the smell that clung to every jumper she owned in this flat."
1
"Rory watched that small automatic kindness and felt her anger slip a notch, which infuriated her more than the anger had."
95.59%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
17
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"she said, quieter"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
9
fancyCount
0
fancyTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
59
tagDensity
0.153
leniency
0.305
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
88.8013%