| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.571 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 72.74% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throb" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | | |
| 97.74% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 55 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 22 | | totalWords | 1293 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "never turn round twice for the same noise, love, once is curiosity, twice is an invitation" | | 1 | "I know you're there," | | 2 | "—until," | | 3 | "Caught." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 1234 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.65 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 8 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 98.98% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1293 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 29.39 | | std | 24.96 | | cv | 0.849 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 26 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 70 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 49 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 56 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 58 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 63 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 17 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.24% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 214 | | matches | | 0 | "was breathing" | | 1 | "was doing" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was pulsing" | | 4 | "was already writing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park after midnight was bigger than it had any right to be — the gates locked at dusk, the deer moved like rumours through the bracken, and the city glow hung above the treeline in a dirty orange band that never got closer no matter how long she walked." | | 1 | "She'd been watching the ground, picking her way over roots, and when she lifted her head they were simply there — five oak trunks, dead a thousand years by the look of them, grey and fissured and standing in a ring like a jaw with teeth missing." | | 2 | "Not gradually — it dropped off her like a coat sliding from a chair, and the air on the other side was mild and thick and smelled of cut grass and something sweeter underneath, honeysuckle or rot, she couldn't decide which." | | 3 | "The clearing lay open and pale under a sky the colour of old milk — no stars, no moon, and she hadn't clocked that until now, hadn't registered that there was light here and nothing making it." | | 4 | "Faint, so faint she thought it was her own blood in her ears — a high thin note, like a wet finger dragged round the rim of a glass, and it rose and fell with a rhythm she recognised before she could name it." | | 5 | "That was the whole trick, that was what Silas had told her — *never turn round twice for the same noise, love, once is curiosity, twice is an invitation* — and she walked with her hands loose at her sides and her jaw locked so hard it ached." | | 6 | "*—until,* said the grove, closer now, and this time it wasn't quite her voice." | | 7 | "The pendant went hot again — properly hot, a coin fresh from a fire — and she gasped and hauled it out from under her jumper on its chain." |
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| 99.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1226 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.040783034257748776 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008156606851549755 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.19 | | std | 14.18 | | cv | 1.075 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 50 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 37 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 44 |
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| 65.31% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.42857142857142855 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Just there, three paces off," | | 1 | "Then she named it and" | | 2 | "Then, very quietly, from every" |
| | ratio | 0.042 | |
| 90.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "It sat warm against her" | | 1 | "She'd doubled back three times." | | 2 | "She'd come for answers." | | 3 | "She'd been watching the ground," | | 4 | "Her breath went out of" | | 5 | "she said, and hated how" | | 6 | "She stepped between two of" | | 7 | "She stood very still and" | | 8 | "It came out of her" | | 9 | "Her heart argued with her" | | 10 | "She counted them." | | 11 | "She'd counted five coming in." | | 12 | "She was almost certain she'd" | | 13 | "She didn't turn round." | | 14 | "She stood in the enormous" | | 15 | "She looked away." | | 16 | "*I know you're there,* said" | | 17 | "She kept her hand on" | | 18 | "Her voice cracked in the" | | 19 | "It had the shape of" |
| | ratio | 0.324 | |
| 72.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "The satnav gave up two" | | 1 | "It sat warm against her" | | 2 | "She'd doubled back three times." | | 3 | "Richmond Park after midnight was" | | 4 | "She'd come for answers." | | 5 | "That was the whole of" | | 6 | "Silas had said the grove" | | 7 | "The standing stones came up" | | 8 | "That was the first wrong" | | 9 | "She'd been watching the ground," | | 10 | "Her breath went out of" | | 11 | "she said, and hated how" | | 12 | "She stepped between two of" | | 13 | "The cold went." | | 14 | "Wildflowers came up to her" | | 15 | "Foxglove, cornflower, campion, poppies, all" | | 16 | "The grass moved." | | 17 | "She stood very still and" | | 18 | "The line reached the middle" | | 19 | "The word didn't carry." |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "When she was steady she" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the whole trick, that was what Silas had told her — *never turn round twice for the same noise, love, once is curiosity, twice is an invitation* — and …" | | 1 | "It had the shape of her voice but the mouth was wrong, too many consonants for the space they had to live in, and she heard the wet click of a tongue that was t…" | | 2 | "The five stones, still five, and between two of them the black slot of the gap she'd come through, and she thought about running for it and knew, with a certain…" | | 3 | "Six, seven feet up, directly over her head, a long soft breath that stirred her fringe and smelled of turned earth and iron, and Rory did not look up, would not…" | | 4 | "She was proud of that, in some cold clerical corner of her mind that was already writing this down for later, if there was a later." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |