Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPVZ0AN2D373NXQEAF4N0X

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Duration:
45.2s
Cost:
$0.072025
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood in a ring, seven of them, grey and lichen-spotted, and the air between them rippled like the surface of a pond someone had just breathed on. "That's it?" Rory circled the nearest stone, boots crunching on frostbitten bracken. Richmond Park sprawled behind her — bare December trees, a distant dog barking, the flat grey light of a London afternoon dying at three o'clock. "I've cycled past this a hundred times." "You've cycled past where it hides." Nyx's voice came from the shadow at the base of the stone, thin as a draught under a door. "Not the same thing at all." "Right." She pressed her palm flat against the oak. It was warm. Not sun-warm — no sun had touched this place in weeks — but warm like skin, like the flank of a sleeping animal. She pulled her hand back and looked at her palm as though it might have changed colour. Behind her, Eva shifted her weight from foot to foot. "Rory. Rory, listen. I've got shift at six." "Then you'll be back by five." "You don't know that." "No," Nyx agreed, and poured themselves upward out of the stone's shade into something tall and roughly person-shaped, violet eyes hovering at the height where a face should be. "She doesn't." Eva said something in Polish that Rory had heard enough times to know it wasn't a blessing. The Heartstone sat cold against Rory's sternum. She'd worn it four months now and learned its moods: warm near the Camden rift, hot as a pressed iron when that thing came through the wall of the Golden Empress kitchen. Now — nothing. Indifferent as a pebble. Whatever waited past the stones, it wasn't Hel. She stepped through. The cold went first. Not gradually — it was there and then it wasn't, snuffed like a match, and in its place came air so soft and full it felt like drinking. She stopped with one foot forward and her mouth open, and something landed on her tongue that tasted of elderflower. Pollen. The whole clearing was thick with it, drifting gold in shafts of light that came from no sun she could find. Grass to her knees. Wildflowers — poppies and bluebells and cowslip and foxglove, things that had no business flowering in the same season, let alone the same month — spread out in a slope that dropped away farther than the ring of stones should have allowed. "That's not possible," she said. "Define your terms." Nyx came through behind her and staggered. Their shadow-form bled at the edges, wisped, thinned like ink in water, and for a moment Rory saw straight through their chest to the meadow beyond. They caught themselves against a stone. "Ah. That's — hm. Bright here." "Are you all right?" "I'm four hundred years of habit, Aurora. This place doesn't recognise the habit." They straightened, and the shadow knit itself back into something with shoulders. "I'll manage. Don't touch anything that looks pleased to see you." Eva came through last, and screamed. Rory had her arm before the sound finished — but Eva wasn't in danger, she was staring up, and Rory followed her gaze and forgot how to breathe. The sky was not a sky. It was layered, like looking up through water at another body of water above that: a pale green nearest, then a band of something bruise-purple, then, impossibly high, a scatter of stars burning in broad daylight. Between the layers, shapes moved. Long slow shapes, whale-huge, translucent, drifting with no more urgency than clouds. "What are they?" Eva whispered. "I don't know," Rory said, and found she was grinning, which was insane, which was possibly the only correct response. "God. I don't know." They went down the slope. The grass parted for them, and Rory noticed after twenty paces that it stood back up behind her without a single blade broken — that she was leaving no trail at all. She looked back at the ring of stones and they were farther away than twenty paces should have put them. She decided not to mention it. The sound came in pieces. First a hum, low, in the bones of her jaw, which she took for tinnitus until Eva rubbed her ear and frowned. Then water. Then, threaded through both, something that might have been singing if singing could be done without words or breath or any clear direction — it came from beneath, from the roots, from the ground pressing up through her soles. "The flowers," Eva said. They were. Each bloom, when Rory bent close, held a note. The foxgloves low and reedy. The poppies bright, almost brassy. She cupped a bluebell and it went silent under her hand, and the whole meadow's chord dropped a tone, and every stalk within ten feet turned its head towards her. She let go. The note came back. The flowers looked away. "Right," she breathed. "Right. Nothing pleased to see me. Understood." Nyx had drifted ahead, keeping to the long shadow of a rowan tree that grew alone in the middle of the meadow with fruit on it the colour of hot metal. "Aurora. Come and look at this." The tree had bark like braided rope, and set into the braid at eye height was a face. Not carved. Grown — the grain flowed into a brow, a closed eye, a mouth held in the particular slack shape of deep sleep. Beneath it, another. Then another, down the trunk and out along the roots, dozens of them, hundreds, receding into the earth. Eva took two steps back. "Are they alive?" "They're asleep," Nyx said. "That's not an answer." "It's the only one on offer." Their voice had gone flat. "Don't speak loudly here." Rory crouched by the roots. The nearest face was small — a child's, cheeks round, lashes rendered in fine splinters of wood. Water ran past it in a channel no wider than her hand, and the water was clear, and in the water, going the wrong way, upstream, swam three white leaves that folded and unfolded like breathing lungs. Her wrist itched. She looked down and the old crescent scar was pale and raised and cold, cold as the moonsilver at her hip, and when she pressed her thumb to it a shiver went up her arm and into her back teeth. "Nyx." She kept her voice down. "This place is reading me." "This place reads everything. It's what it's for." "For who?" "That," said a voice from the water, "is a better question than the one you came to ask." Eva made a small strangled noise. Rory stood slowly, hand moving to the dagger without ever quite reaching it, and turned. The stream ran up the slope behind her, which it had not been doing a moment ago, and where it pooled among the poppies a woman stood ankle-deep with silver hair to her waist and pale lavender eyes and no reflection whatsoever in the water beneath her. The flowers around her feet were singing a note Rory hadn't heard yet — high, and thin, and holding. "You brought a mortal, a shade, and a Fae blade into my grove," Isolde said, "and you knocked on nothing. Bold. Come and sit. The tree dislikes standing guests."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.441
leniency0.882
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
91.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1206
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"long shadow"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"long shadow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1037
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
December1
London1
Eva9
Polish1
Rory12
Heartstone1
Camden1
Golden1
Empress1
Hel1
Nyx5
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Heartstone"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Polish"
4"Camden"
globalScore0.921
windowScore0.833
95.65% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like drinking"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1220
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"broken — that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.73
std21.26
cv0.767
sampleLengths
030
144
231
352
418
56
64
731
817
954
103
1152
1268
135
1448
154
1636
176
1828
1959
205
2124
2263
2368
244
2551
2611
2710
2837
2963
308
314
324
3315
3459
3543
3611
378
382
3918
4021
4147
4219
4329
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was layered"
34.37% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs161
matches
0"was staring"
1"was grinning"
2"was leaving"
3"were singing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences94
ratio0.117
matches
0"Richmond Park sprawled behind her — bare December trees, a distant dog barking, the flat grey light of a London afternoon dying at three o'clock."
1"Not sun-warm — no sun had touched this place in weeks — but warm like skin, like the flank of a sleeping animal."
2"Now — nothing."
3"Not gradually — it was there and then it wasn't, snuffed like a match, and in its place came air so soft and full it felt like drinking."
4"Wildflowers — poppies and bluebells and cowslip and foxglove, things that had no business flowering in the same season, let alone the same month — spread out in a slope that dropped away farther than the ring of stones should have allowed."
5"Rory had her arm before the sound finished — but Eva wasn't in danger, she was staring up, and Rory followed her gaze and forgot how to breathe."
6"The grass parted for them, and Rory noticed after twenty paces that it stood back up behind her without a single blade broken — that she was leaving no trail at all."
7"Then, threaded through both, something that might have been singing if singing could be done without words or breath or any clear direction — it came from beneath, from the roots, from the ground pressing up through her soles."
8"Grown — the grain flowed into a brow, a closed eye, a mouth held in the particular slack shape of deep sleep."
9"The nearest face was small — a child's, cheeks round, lashes rendered in fine splinters of wood."
10"The flowers around her feet were singing a note Rory hadn't heard yet — high, and thin, and holding."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"whale-huge, translucent, drifting"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.030067895247332686
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005819592628516004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean12.98
std11.4
cv0.879
sampleLengths
030
112
225
37
425
56
69
73
823
917
1010
118
126
134
1429
152
1617
177
1832
193
204
218
223
234
2428
2520
261
2721
284
2942
305
3110
3226
336
346
354
3625
3711
386
3928
406
4136
425
4312
445
4520
464
475
4832
4920
61.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.425531914893617
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then, threaded through both, something"
1"Then another, down the trunk"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences66
matches
0"She pressed her palm flat"
1"It was warm."
2"She pulled her hand back"
3"She'd worn it four months"
4"She stepped through."
5"She stopped with one foot"
6"Their shadow-form bled at the"
7"They caught themselves against a"
8"They straightened, and the shadow"
9"It was layered, like looking"
10"They went down the slope."
11"She looked back at the"
12"She decided not to mention"
13"She cupped a bluebell and"
14"She let go."
15"Their voice had gone flat"
16"Her wrist itched."
17"She looked down and the"
18"She kept her voice down"
ratio0.288
58.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences66
matches
0"The oak stones stood in"
1"Rory circled the nearest stone,"
2"Richmond Park sprawled behind her"
3"Nyx's voice came from the"
4"She pressed her palm flat"
5"It was warm."
6"She pulled her hand back"
7"Nyx agreed, and poured themselves"
8"Eva said something in Polish"
9"The Heartstone sat cold against"
10"She'd worn it four months"
11"Whatever waited past the stones,"
12"She stepped through."
13"The cold went first."
14"She stopped with one foot"
15"The whole clearing was thick"
16"Grass to her knees."
17"Wildflowers — poppies and bluebells"
18"Nyx came through behind her"
19"Their shadow-form bled at the"
ratio0.803
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now — nothing."
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She pulled her hand back and looked at her palm as though it might have changed colour."
1"She stopped with one foot forward and her mouth open, and something landed on her tongue that tasted of elderflower."
2"Wildflowers — poppies and bluebells and cowslip and foxglove, things that had no business flowering in the same season, let alone the same month — spread out in…"
3"Then, threaded through both, something that might have been singing if singing could be done without words or breath or any clear direction — it came from benea…"
4"Nyx had drifted ahead, keeping to the long shadow of a rowan tree that grew alone in the middle of the meadow with fruit on it the colour of hot metal."
5"Water ran past it in a channel no wider than her hand, and the water was clear, and in the water, going the wrong way, upstream, swam three white leaves that fo…"
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory circled, boots crunching on frostbitten bracken"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"Nyx agreed (agree)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.235
83.8175%