Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCPYJDH31PNATRPHE3R9R7S

Run Details

Duration:
45.5s
Cost:
$0.067020
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain came down like it had a grudge against Camden. Quinn had been standing in it for forty minutes outside the Raven's Nest, watching that green neon bleed across the wet pavement, and her coat had given up somewhere around minute fifteen. Water ran off the back of her collar and down between her shoulder blades. She didn't move. Then the side door opened and Tomás Herrera came out fast, hood up, and turned left instead of right. Left was wrong. Left was away from the Tube, away from the night bus, away from the flat in Kentish Town she'd already pulled the lease on. Left meant he had somewhere else to be. Quinn pushed off the wall. She stayed on the far side of the road for the first three hundred metres, keeping a van and then a skip between them, her boots finding the quiet parts of the pavement out of eighteen years of habit. Herrera moved like a man who'd been taught to look over his shoulder but hadn't been taught to do it well. He checked behind him at every second corner. Predictable. She timed her steps to his rhythm and let the rain cover the rest. At Kentish Town Road he stopped under the awning of a shuttered kebab shop and took something from his jacket. Small. Pale. He turned it over in his fingers like a man counting rosary beads, and the streetlight caught it — not plastic, not metal. Yellowish. Porous at the edges. Bone, Quinn thought, and something cold walked up her spine that had nothing to do with the weather. Three years ago they'd pulled Morris out of a stairwell in Deptford with his eyes open and no mark on him anywhere, and in his fist, so tight they'd had to break two fingers to get it out, a little disc of bone with a symbol scratched into it. She'd filed it. She'd asked questions. She'd been given a bereavement leave form and a number for the counselling service. Herrera pocketed the token and started walking again. Quinn crossed. She closed to thirty metres. Then twenty. Water sheeted off a broken gutter and she went through it without slowing, and maybe that was the mistake — the splash, the sound of a footfall that wasn't rain — because Herrera's head came round and this time he didn't just look. He saw her. For half a second neither of them moved. Under the hood his face was all planes and shadow, olive skin gone grey in the sodium light, and she watched the calculation happen behind his eyes. Then he ran. "Police!" Quinn shouted, and hated herself for it, because the word only ever made them faster. "Herrera! Stop —" He was quick. Paramedic quick, the kind of fitness that came from years of carrying dead weight up narrow stairs, and he knew the ground. He went off the pavement into a service alley behind the pound shops and Quinn went after him, shoulder clipping a wheelie bin, the lid clanging behind her like a starting gun. Puddles exploded under her feet. Her lungs began their protest at the second corner and she told them what she always told them, which was later. "You'll want to think about this," she called. Save the breath, some part of her said, but talking was pressure and pressure made men stupid. "There's nothing on you yet. Nothing that sticks. You stop now, you're a witness." His answer was a fire escape. He hit it at speed, hauled himself up two rungs, then dropped back down and cut right instead — a feint, and a good one; she'd already committed her weight towards the ladder and lost a full second recovering. Right took them out onto a stretch of hoarding where the council had been promising a development for six years. Plywood, graffiti, a gap where two boards had been prised apart and never fixed. Herrera went through it sideways without slowing. Quinn followed and came out into what used to be a station forecourt. She knew this place. Everyone knew this place. Disused since the fifties, sealed, condemned, and photographed by every urban explorer with a blog. The tiling above the boarded arch still said the old name in cream and oxblood, half of it lost behind a crust of moss. The rain drummed on corrugated iron and the whole yard smelled of rust and wet brick and something sweeter underneath, like sugar burning. Herrera had stopped at a maintenance door set into the arch. Not stopped to surrender. Stopped to open it. "Herrera." Quinn slowed to a walk. Twelve metres. Ten. Her hand went to her belt out of instinct and found her radio, her cuffs, her torch, and nothing else, because this was supposed to be a surveillance shift. "Tomás. Look at me." He looked. He was breathing hard, one hand flat against the door, and he was frightened — but not of her. That was the thing that landed wrong. He kept glancing past her, up, at the rooflines and the gaps in the hoarding, like the rain might be carrying something. "Go home, detective." His accent thickened when he was winded. "Please. Go home and write that you lost me." "Can't do that." "You don't know what this is." "Then tell me." "I am telling you." He pressed the pale disc against a plate beside the handle and Quinn heard something in the door move that no lock in her experience had ever sounded like — a long soft grinding, like teeth. "I'm telling you the only useful thing anyone will ever tell you. Go home." He went through. The door swung shut, and she got one glimpse of what was on the other side: not the black of a derelict stairwell but a warm crawling amber, like firelight, going down. Quinn reached the door in four strides and it was already sealed. No handle her side. She put her shoulder into it anyway, twice, and got nothing but a bruise. She stood in the rain with her palms flat on the wood and made herself think. Protocol was simple. Withdraw. Call it in. Request a unit, request a warrant, request a structural assessment for an unsecured Victorian station box, and by the time any of that arrived Herrera would be in Seville or worse, and whatever was down those stairs would be a rumour again, and DS Morris would stay filed under unexplained. She'd done it the right way once. She'd sat in that inquest room and watched a coroner write *misadventure* in a hand that never shook. The rain kept coming. Somewhere under her feet, faint through brick and clay, something was playing music — a thin reeded thing with too many notes in it. Quinn crouched and ran her fingers along the base of the door. Grit. A gap of maybe two centimetres. And wedged in the corner where the frame met the sill, catching the light, something small and pale. She worked it out with her fingernails. A bone token. Chipped along one edge, warm, which made no sense in weather like this, and scratched with a symbol she'd last seen prised from a dead man's fist. Quinn looked at it a long moment. Then she stood, wiped the rain out of her eyes, and pressed it to the plate. The door made its grinding sound. She turned her radio off before she went in — because a signal was a leash and a leash could be pulled — and then she stepped through onto the top of a staircase that smelled of tallow and cardamom, and the door shut behind her, and the amber light went down and down and down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.46% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1287
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"predictable"
count1
1
word"footfall"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"predictable"
1"footfall"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1296
ratio0.001
matches
0"misadventure"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1225
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Raven1
Nest1
Tomás1
Herrera7
Tube1
Kentish2
Town2
Road1
Quinn12
Morris2
Deptford1
Save1
Twelve1
Victorian1
Seville1
Left3
persons
0"Nest"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Quinn"
4"Morris"
5"Left"
places
0"Raven"
1"Tube"
2"Kentish"
3"Town"
4"Road"
5"Deptford"
6"Seville"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like — a long soft grinding, like"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.772
wordCount1296
matches
0"not the black of a derelict stairwell but a warm crawling amber, like firelight, going down"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean32.4
std22.51
cv0.695
sampleLengths
060
119
235
35
483
550
618
769
88
92
1050
113
1238
1319
1483
1539
1645
1741
1813
1970
2019
2142
2250
2319
243
256
263
2754
2835
2930
3016
3157
3225
3328
3437
357
3630
3723
386
3956
82.13% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences91
matches
0"been taught"
1"been taught"
2"been given"
3"been prised"
4"was supposed"
5"was frightened "
6"was winded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences99
ratio0.071
matches
0"He turned it over in his fingers like a man counting rosary beads, and the streetlight caught it — not plastic, not metal."
1"Water sheeted off a broken gutter and she went through it without slowing, and maybe that was the mistake — the splash, the sound of a footfall that wasn't rain — because Herrera's head came round and this time he didn't just look."
2"He hit it at speed, hauled himself up two rungs, then dropped back down and cut right instead — a feint, and a good one; she'd already committed her weight towards the ladder and lost a full second recovering."
3"He was breathing hard, one hand flat against the door, and he was frightened — but not of her."
4"\"I am telling you.\" He pressed the pale disc against a plate beside the handle and Quinn heard something in the door move that no lock in her experience had ever sounded like — a long soft grinding, like teeth."
5"Somewhere under her feet, faint through brick and clay, something was playing music — a thin reeded thing with too many notes in it."
6"She turned her radio off before she went in — because a signal was a leash and a leash could be pulled — and then she stepped through onto the top of a staircase that smelled of tallow and cardamom, and the door shut behind her, and the amber light went down and down and down."
92.83% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount498
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.04819277108433735
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004016064257028112
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean13.09
std12.18
cv0.931
sampleLengths
011
132
214
33
419
53
624
78
85
939
1021
118
121
1314
1420
151
161
1723
181
194
2018
2149
223
233
2414
258
262
275
282
2943
303
318
3227
333
3416
353
363
3722
3832
395
4021
418
4217
4314
446
4539
4620
4714
487
4913
75.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.5050505050505051
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"Then the side door opened"
1"Then he ran."
2"Somewhere under her feet, faint"
3"Then she stood, wiped the"
ratio0.051
78.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences79
matches
0"She didn't move."
1"She stayed on the far"
2"He checked behind him at"
3"She timed her steps to"
4"He turned it over in"
5"She'd filed it."
6"She'd asked questions."
7"She'd been given a bereavement"
8"She closed to thirty metres."
9"He saw her."
10"He was quick."
11"He went off the pavement"
12"Her lungs began their protest"
13"His answer was a fire"
14"He hit it at speed,"
15"She knew this place."
16"Her hand went to her"
17"He was breathing hard, one"
18"He kept glancing past her,"
19"His accent thickened when he"
ratio0.354
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences79
matches
0"The rain came down like"
1"Quinn had been standing in"
2"Water ran off the back"
3"She didn't move."
4"Quinn pushed off the wall."
5"She stayed on the far"
6"Herrera moved like a man"
7"He checked behind him at"
8"She timed her steps to"
9"He turned it over in"
10"She'd filed it."
11"She'd asked questions."
12"She'd been given a bereavement"
13"Herrera pocketed the token and"
14"She closed to thirty metres."
15"Water sheeted off a broken"
16"He saw her."
17"Quinn shouted, and hated herself"
18"He was quick."
19"He went off the pavement"
ratio0.696
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn had been standing in it for forty minutes outside the Raven's Nest, watching that green neon bleed across the wet pavement, and her coat had given up some…"
1"She stayed on the far side of the road for the first three hundred metres, keeping a van and then a skip between them, her boots finding the quiet parts of the …"
2"Paramedic quick, the kind of fitness that came from years of carrying dead weight up narrow stairs, and he knew the ground."
3"Her lungs began their protest at the second corner and she told them what she always told them, which was later."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn shouted (shout)"
1"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.308
86.2521%