| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.344 | | leniency | 0.688 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 83.76% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "perfectly" | | 3 | "precisely" |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.76% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1539 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "resolving" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "footfall" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1554 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1330 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | January | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Eva | 7 | | Nyx | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "Road" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite meet itself" | | 1 | "Something like a lily, white and enormous, t" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1554 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 31.08 | | std | 28.14 | | cv | 0.905 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 58 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 105 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 63 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 83 | | 20 | 56 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 113 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 77 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 67 | | 39 | 41 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 35 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 63 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 61 |
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| 93.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "was frightened" | | 1 | "been collected" | | 2 | "were braided " |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | 0 | "was going" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.131 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the first thing Rory noticed, and the thing that bothered her most — that she'd walked past this exact spot in Richmond Park a hundred times on a hundred grey mornings, coffee going cold in her hand, and never once felt the air here go strange." | | 1 | "Nyx came out of the shadow of the left-hand oak the way ink comes out of water — a long smear of dark resolving upward into a shape, tall, shoulder-heavy, edges never quite finishing themselves." | | 2 | "They weren't stones at all, she saw now — that was just what the eye did with them at forty paces." | | 3 | "Between the two trunks, the air shimmered — a faint distortion, like the wobble over hot tarmac, except it was three degrees above freezing and the wobble had a seam in it, a vertical line where the world didn't quite meet itself." | | 4 | "She hadn't planned to; her legs simply took the decision before the rest of her could argue, the way they had the night she'd left Cardiff with a rucksack and eleven pounds in her account." | | 5 | "That was the part that undid her — the traffic hush from Richmond Road, the aeroplane grinding somewhere above the cloud, the wet-leaf squelch of Eva's boots behind her: all of it thinned to nothing between one footfall and the next, and into the silence came other sounds, in layers, arriving one at a time like instruments finding their places." | | 6 | "And underneath, so low she felt it in her teeth more than heard it, a hum — patient, enormous, the sound a cathedral bell makes for half a minute after it stops." | | 7 | "Not dramatically — that would have been easier." | | 8 | "The light had no source; it came up out of the ground as much as down from the sky, so that the undersides of leaves glowed and nothing cast a proper shadow." | | 9 | "Under the flowers, Rory's boots found stone — flat slabs, fitted close, a paved way so old that the meadow had swallowed all but the crown of it." | | 10 | "Beyond the hawthorns the meadow opened into a clearing, perfectly round, ringed by trees whose trunks were braided — genuinely braided, three and four boles wound into one another like rope, grown that way over centuries." | | 11 | "Rory closed her fist on it and felt it stutter, then settle, and then — she could have sworn it — turn in her palm, tugging like a compass needle towards the far side of the clearing." | | 12 | "The silence changed quality — the great low hum dropped a note, like a held breath." | | 13 | "The air in front of her folded, the way light folds on water, and a woman was standing in it — silver hair to her waist, unmoving in a wind that wasn't there, eyes the pale lavender of the sky above them — and behind her, in the flattened grass she had just walked through, there was not a single footprint." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 968 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "tall, shoulder-heavy, edges" | | 1 | "cross-examined over dinner," |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.027892561983471075 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006198347107438017 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 14.63 | | cv | 1.007 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 42 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 35 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 60 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 57 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 41 |
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| 70.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.4766355140186916 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, closer, and directly in" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "It was going strange now." | | 1 | "She said it flat, not" | | 2 | "She had it out of" | | 3 | "It had done nothing for" | | 4 | "Their eyes were two faint" | | 5 | "They weren't stones at all," | | 6 | "They were oaks, or had" | | 7 | "She hadn't planned to; her" | | 8 | "She opened her eyes." | | 9 | "She hadn't known she'd shut" | | 10 | "It was January." | | 11 | "It was the third of" | | 12 | "It was a deep, tender" | | 13 | "They went deeper." | | 14 | "She saw them stop at" | | 15 | "they said, and for the" | | 16 | "She jerked back." | | 17 | "she said, and her voice" | | 18 | "It cost her almost everything" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 86.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The gap between the two" | | 1 | "That was the first thing" | | 2 | "It was going strange now." | | 3 | "She said it flat, not" | | 4 | "She had it out of" | | 5 | "It had done nothing for" | | 6 | "Nyx came out of the" | | 7 | "Their eyes were two faint" | | 8 | "The voice arrived from no" | | 9 | "Eva made a small sound." | | 10 | "Rory chose not to look" | | 11 | "They weren't stones at all," | | 12 | "They were oaks, or had" | | 13 | "Something that was almost an" | | 14 | "The January cold had a" | | 15 | "Nyx said, and there was" | | 16 | "Rory went first." | | 17 | "She hadn't planned to; her" | | 18 | "Sound went last." | | 19 | "That was the part that" |
| | ratio | 0.747 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it beat against the" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the first thing Rory noticed, and the thing that bothered her most — that she'd walked past this exact spot in Richmond Park a hundred times on a hundr…" | | 1 | "That was the part that undid her — the traffic hush from Richmond Road, the aeroplane grinding somewhere above the cloud, the wet-leaf squelch of Eva's boots be…" | | 2 | "It was a deep, tender lilac shading to green at the edges, and there were three stars in it, low and fat and burning steady, and behind them the pale smear of a…" | | 3 | "Rory made herself catalogue things, because cataloguing was what she did when her hands wanted to shake: barrister's daughter, ten years of being cross-examined…" | | 4 | "She saw them stop at the edge of a stand of hawthorn and hold up one long hand, turning it, watching the dark that should have pooled beneath it and didn't." | | 5 | "Every dozen paces stood a post of the same silver-grey dead oak as the gate stones, waist-high, each one crowned with a shallow bowl, and each bowl held water t…" | | 6 | "In the trembling water she saw herself, which was ordinary, and then she saw herself in a corridor of black glass with something enormous coming up behind her, …" | | 7 | "At the centre a spring came up through white rock, silent, glass-smooth, spilling into a channel that ran off into the flowers and never seemed to arrive anywhe…" | | 8 | "The air in front of her folded, the way light folds on water, and a woman was standing in it — silver hair to her waist, unmoving in a wind that wasn't there, e…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.281 | | leniency | 0.563 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |