Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCQSRYT7BG9BJY3971GBWEQ

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1m 1s
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$0.090660
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Amazon Bedrock

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory had to lift the door on its hinges with her hip while she turned it, which meant that by the time she got it open she was already annoyed, already half-braced for the mailman or Mrs. Hafiz from downstairs complaining about the smell of Eva's incense competing with the curry house. It was neither. Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell with rain in his platinum hair, one gloved hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, looking at her the way a man looks at a door he has knocked on for a long time. "Bonsoir," he said. Rory kept her hand on the edge of the door. Behind her, Ptolemy made a low interrogative noise from the top of a stack of Eva's grimoires. "Eleven weeks," she said. "Eleven weeks and four days." His voice was the same. That was the unfair part. Everything about him was the same — the charcoal suit, the way he stood as though the stairwell were a lobby he had paid for, the mismatched eyes, amber and black, catching the bad hallway light differently. "May I come in?" "I'm still deciding." "Take your time. I have bled on worse landings." She looked down. He had his left arm tucked close to his side in a way she had first read as elegance, because everything he did read as elegance, and now saw for what it was: a man holding himself together. There was a dark seam along the sleeve of his jacket, and under his shoe, a small wet bloom on the concrete that was not rain. "Oh, for—" Rory stepped back and pulled the door wide. "Get in." "You're too kind." "I'm not being kind. I just cleaned that landing." He came in slow, and the flat shrank around him. It was already cramped — one bedroom over the curry house, every surface furred with paper, Eva's research notes fanned across the table in an order Rory was forbidden to disturb, scrolls leaning in the corner like bad umbrellas. Lucien stood in the middle of it with his cane and his ruined sleeve and did not once look at the mess, which was its own kind of tact. Rory shut the door. Deadbolt, deadbolt, deadbolt. She took her time with the third. "Sit," she said. "Not on the notes." "I would not dare." She got the tin down from above the sink — Eva's tin, the good one, gauze and antiseptic and a curved needle that Rory had learned to use in a night she still didn't like to think about. When she turned back he had shed the jacket and draped it over the chair back with a care that suggested the jacket had cost more than her month's rent, which it had. His shirt was white and the left side of it was not. "Talk," she said, kneeling. "About what?" "Anything. It'll stop me thinking about how much I'd like to hit you." "Ah." He tipped his head. "Then I will tell you about the weather in Marseille." She cut the shirt. Under it, along the ribs, a clean shallow slice that had bled a great deal and threatened nothing. Half-demon healing would close it in a day. He hadn't needed her. He had needed a reason, and he'd chosen a knife wound, and she hated that she understood him well enough to know it. "This is nothing," she said. "It is a scratch." "You climbed three flights to have me look at a scratch." "I climbed three flights," Lucien said, "because I could not think of a lie good enough to justify the visit, and I have found that a small honest wound will do the work of a large dishonest story." Rory pressed the antiseptic pad down harder than strictly necessary. He hissed through his teeth, and something ugly and satisfied uncurled in her chest. "You left," she said. "Yes." "You didn't leave a note. You didn't leave a *word*. You made a bargain with a thing from Avaros using my name as collateral — my *name*, Lucien, not a favour, not money, my name — and then you were gone before I woke up, and I found out what you'd done from *Silas*, who told me while pouring a pint, like it was football scores." "I told him to tell you gently." "He said, and I quote, 'Your Frenchman sold your name to buy your life, and he's not coming back.'" She sat back on her heels. Her hands were steady. She was proud of her hands. "Was he right? About the second part." Lucien looked at the window. Rain came down over Brick Lane in long grey sheets, and somewhere below them a delivery scooter whined past. "I intended him to be," he said. "Why?" "Because I could not stand in a room with you and not tell you what I had done. And I could not tell you what I had done and remain in the room." He said it evenly, as if reading terms off a contract. "So I removed the room." "That's cowardice dressed as manners." "Yes." He turned back to her. One eye amber, one black, both of them entirely on her. "I am extremely well-dressed." Rory laughed. She didn't mean to. It came out of her cracked and startled, and she pressed her wrist to her mouth to stop it, and that was a mistake, because his gaze dropped to the small crescent scar there, white against her skin. He had traced it once. Eleven weeks and four days ago, in the rain, in the alley behind the Golden Empress with the smell of ginger and wet brick around them, he had lifted her hand and put his thumb against that scar and said *what happened here* in a voice that had made the question sound obscene, and she had told him about the bicycle and the garden wall when she was seven, and then she had kissed him, and he had kissed her back like a man breaking a rule he had written himself. And then he'd walked into a bargain with a demon and traded her true name for her breathing heart, and vanished. "Don't," she said. "I have not moved." "You were about to." "I was." He set his hand flat on his knee instead, deliberate. "Aurora. May I say the thing I came to say, and then you may throw me down your stairs, and I will consider the evening a success." She began winding the gauze. It gave her somewhere to put her eyes. "Say it." "I did not sell your name." Her hands stopped. "I bought it back," Lucien said. "That is what eleven weeks buys, when a man has no money and only reputation to spend. I went to Avaros. I found the thing that held it. I gave it something it wanted more." He said this the way he said everything — light, dry, as though discussing a table at a restaurant. "It has your name no longer. Nothing there does. You are simply Aurora Carter of Cardiff, who delivers noodles, and no one in the nine realms owns a single syllable of you." Rory found she had stopped breathing. The rain filled in for her. "What did you give it," she said. "Something I wanted less than I want you safe." "That's not an answer." "No," he agreed, "it is not." She tied the gauze off. Her fingers brushed the warm skin above his hip and neither of them acknowledged it, and that was somehow worse than if they had. "You could have written," she said. Her voice had gone thin. "One line. *Gone to fix it. Don't hate me yet.* Four words, Lucien. You speak four bloody languages, you had one to spare." "I did write." He reached — slowly, telegraphing it — into the jacket over the chair and drew out an envelope, soft-cornered, carried too long. Her name on it in that spidery continental hand. "Sixty-one times. I posted none of them. If I had posted one, you would have waited, and I could not promise to come back." Rory took the envelope. It weighed nothing. It weighed everything. "And now?" "Now I am on your floor bleeding on Eva's carpet," Lucien said, "with no bargain left to make and no reason to be here except the one I have been avoiding for eleven weeks and four days." Ptolemy chose that moment to step off the grimoires onto the table and knock a scroll to the floor. Neither of them looked away from the other. "Say it out loud," Rory said, "or get out." He leaned forward. Close enough that she could smell the rain on him, and under it cedar and iron. "I came back for you," he said. "That is all. That is the whole of it. I have no cleverness left." Rory looked at him for a long moment — at the platinum hair darkened at the temples, at the shirt she'd ruined, at the mouth she'd kissed in an alley and thought about every night since. Then she stood, took the tin to the sink, and set it down. "There's tea," she said, without turning round, and her voice only shook a little. "You'll have to move the notes yourself. And you're not sleeping in the bed." Behind her, very quietly, she heard him let out a breath he had clearly been holding since Marseille. "D'accord," said Lucien Moreau.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
68.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
1"She sat back [back]"
2"He turned back [back]"
3"He reached — slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.82
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.131
90.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences85
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen91
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords14
totalWords1591
ratio0.009
matches
0"word"
1"name"
2"Silas"
3"what happened here"
4"Gone to fix it. Don't hate me yet."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1032
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.16
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Mrs1
Eva4
Moreau2
Rory12
Ptolemy2
Lucien7
Brick1
Lane1
One1
Golden1
Empress1
Marseille1
persons
0"Mrs"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Lucien"
6"One"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.919
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reading terms off a contract"
1"as though discussing a table at a restaurant"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1591
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences119
matches
0"hated that she"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean23.06
std26.24
cv1.138
sampleLengths
057
13
242
33
427
54
656
73
89
967
1012
113
129
1378
1414
157
164
1783
184
192
2013
2115
2257
235
244
2511
2638
2724
284
291
3066
317
3242
3324
347
351
3649
375
3821
39140
4021
413
424
434
4439
4515
466
473
4892
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was forbidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs182
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences119
ratio0.05
matches
0"Everything about him was the same — the charcoal suit, the way he stood as though the stairwell were a lobby he had paid for, the mismatched eyes, amber and black, catching the bad hallway light differently."
1"It was already cramped — one bedroom over the curry house, every surface furred with paper, Eva's research notes fanned across the table in an order Rory was forbidden to disturb, scrolls leaning in the corner like bad umbrellas."
2"She got the tin down from above the sink — Eva's tin, the good one, gauze and antiseptic and a curved needle that Rory had learned to use in a night she still didn't like to think about."
3"\"That is what eleven weeks buys, when a man has no money and only reputation to spend. I went to Avaros. I found the thing that held it. I gave it something it wanted more.\" He said this the way he said everything — light, dry, as though discussing a table at a restaurant."
4"\"I did write.\" He reached — slowly, telegraphing it — into the jacket over the chair and drew out an envelope, soft-cornered, carried too long."
5"Rory looked at him for a long moment — at the platinum hair darkened at the temples, at the shirt she'd ruined, at the mouth she'd kissed in an alley and thought about every night since."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1028
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03404669260700389
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008754863813229572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean13.37
std14.55
cv1.089
sampleLengths
05
137
215
33
442
53
610
717
84
910
105
1137
124
133
149
153
1638
1726
1810
192
203
219
2210
2339
2429
254
263
277
283
294
304
3138
3233
3312
344
352
3613
375
3810
394
4018
418
424
4323
445
454
4611
4738
4810
4914
71.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44537815126050423
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners53
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Then she stood, took the"
ratio0.014
5.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences69
matches
0"It was neither."
1"His voice was the same"
2"She looked down."
3"He had his left arm"
4"He came in slow, and"
5"It was already cramped —"
6"She took her time with"
7"She got the tin down"
8"His shirt was white and"
9"she said, kneeling"
10"He tipped his head"
11"She cut the shirt."
12"He hadn't needed her."
13"He had needed a reason,"
14"He hissed through his teeth,"
15"She sat back on her"
16"Her hands were steady."
17"She was proud of her"
18"He said it evenly, as"
19"He turned back to her"
ratio0.536
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory had to lift the"
2"Hafiz from downstairs complaining about"
3"It was neither."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"Rory kept her hand on"
6"His voice was the same"
7"That was the unfair part."
8"Everything about him was the"
9"She looked down."
10"He had his left arm"
11"Rory stepped back and pulled"
12"He came in slow, and"
13"It was already cramped —"
14"Lucien stood in the middle"
15"Rory shut the door."
16"Deadbolt, deadbolt, deadbolt."
17"She took her time with"
18"She got the tin down"
19"His shirt was white and"
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Hafiz from downstairs complaining about the smell of Eva's incense competing with the curry house."
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the stairwell with rain in his platinum hair, one gloved hand resting on the ivory head of his cane, looking at her the way a man looks a…"
2"Everything about him was the same — the charcoal suit, the way he stood as though the stairwell were a lobby he had paid for, the mismatched eyes, amber and bla…"
3"There was a dark seam along the sleeve of his jacket, and under his shoe, a small wet bloom on the concrete that was not rain."
4"When she turned back he had shed the jacket and draped it over the chair back with a care that suggested the jacket had cost more than her month's rent, which i…"
5"Under it, along the ribs, a clean shallow slice that had bled a great deal and threatened nothing."
6"Eleven weeks and four days ago, in the rain, in the alley behind the Golden Empress with the smell of ginger and wet brick around them, he had lifted her hand a…"
65.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He said, as if reading terms off a contract"
1"He set, deliberate"
2"she said, without turning round, and her voice only shook a little"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.311
leniency0.623
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.033
77.3972%