Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR0MX8GDC00FP16MT5E2W2

Run Details

Duration:
47.6s
Cost:
$0.069535
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts, one after the other, and Rory had the chain still hooked when she pulled the door back four inches. Lucien stood on the landing with rain in his hair. The platinum had gone dark at the temples, flattened where he'd pushed it off his forehead, and the shoulders of his charcoal jacket held water in beads that hadn't soaked through yet. Good wool. He held the cane loose in his left hand, tip against the floorboards, and he didn't say anything at all for the length of three breaths. "No," Rory said. "You haven't heard the question." "I don't need to." She shifted her weight so her foot braced the bottom of the door. Below them the curry house was mid-service and the stairwell smelled of cumin and hot oil and the vinegar someone had thrown at the steps that morning. "Whatever it is, the answer's already no, and I've got a kettle on." "Then invite me in for tea and I'll leave the question in my pocket." "You've never left anything in your pocket in your life." His mouth moved — not a smile, the thing that came before one, the crease at the corner. Rain slid down the side of his neck and into his collar and he let it. "Six weeks," he said. "Seven." "Seven." He tipped his head. "You counted." She hated that. She hated the ease of it, how he could find the loose thread in a sentence and pull it before she knew she'd left one hanging. Ptolemy came round her ankles, tail up, and shoved his skull against the door frame to look at the visitor, because the cat had no sense and never had. "You're dripping on Ravi's landing," she said. "He'll charge you for the mop." "I'll pay him." "You'd pay him and he'd still hate you." "Most people manage both." Lucien lifted the cane an inch and set it down again. "Aurora. There's a man across the road in a green Vauxhall who has been there since four o'clock and he isn't waiting for a curry." Her stomach dropped a floor. She didn't move her face. That was the one thing she'd got good at, over the years, with Evan and after — the not-moving of the face. "So you came to warn me." "I came to sit in a warm room and drink whatever terrible tea Eva keeps, and to be visible in the window for approximately four minutes." He said it like a shopping list. "After which he will make a phone call, and someone will tell him to go home, and you will sleep. That's the entire favour. You don't have to speak to me while I do it." Rory looked at him. The chain was cold against her knuckles. "You're bleeding," she said. He glanced down at his own cuff, where the white shirt had gone rust-coloured from the wrist to the base of the thumb, and his eyebrows went up as if he'd found a stranger's blood on him. "Ah." "Is it yours?" "Mostly." She unhooked the chain. He came in and she got the door shut and all three bolts across, one two three, and the sound of them was louder than it should have been in a room stacked to the ceiling with paper. Eva's flat allowed one clear path — door to kitchenette to the sofa — and everything either side of it was books, some of them open and face-down and spine-broken in ways that would have made her mother weep. Lucien stood in the middle of the path and looked around and Rory watched him take an inventory he'd deny taking. "Sit down. Not on the blue chair, that's where the scrolls go. Sofa." "Yes." "And don't get blood on Eva's cushions, she'll skin us both and use the—" "—the hide for a binding, yes, she's told me." He sat. He set the cane against the arm of the sofa within reach of his right hand, which she noticed, because she noticed everything about him and had given up pretending otherwise around week three. She got the first aid tin off the top of the fridge and the good scissors out of the drawer and put both on the coffee table on top of a stack of photocopied Latin. Then she stood there with her arms folded. "Cuff," she said. "I can do it." "Not with one hand you can't." He undid the button himself, one-handed, slowly, to prove something, and then he lost the fight with the fabric where the blood had dried into the weave and he stopped and put his hand palm-up on his knee and said nothing. The concession cost him. She could see the cost. Rory knelt on the floorboards. It put her lower than him, closer, her shoulder between his knees, and the heat came off him the way it always did — a few degrees hotter than a person should be, the demon half running warm. She'd known that heat in the dark of a stairwell in Whitechapel and she'd known it with his mouth on her jaw and his hand flat between her shoulder blades and then she'd known it going out of a room, going away, the door closing. "Hold still." The scissors went through the cuff. The cut underneath ran from the base of his thumb to the heel of his palm, deep enough to want stitches and old enough to have stopped arguing about it. She poured antiseptic on it without warning him. He inhaled through his teeth. "You enjoyed that." "I did, actually." "Do it again, then." "Don't push it." She pressed the gauze down and held it. Under her fingers his pulse went on doing its steady stupid work. "Who?" "Not relevant." "Lucien." "A man who is no longer in a position to do it twice." He watched her hands. "Your wrist." She glanced down at the crescent scar on her left wrist, white and small, and she moved the sleeve of her jumper over it without deciding to. "You used to talk about that," he said. "I told you about it once." "Twice. In the car, going to Camden, and again at four in the morning in my kitchen, when you'd stolen my shirt." "Borrowed." "Kept." "Still got it," she said, and then wished she hadn't, and put the tape on too tight so he'd have something else to think about. He let the silence go on long enough that she had to fill it, which was a trick and she walked into it anyway. "You left," she said, to the bandage. "You didn't even do it badly. You did it like it was a scheduled appointment. Very polite. Very French." "I know." "That's it?" "I knew what was coming through the door of my life in October." His voice stayed level and that was worse. "I made an arrangement to be alone when it arrived." "You made an arrangement." Her hands had stopped moving. "You decided. On your own, about the both of us, and then you told me at half seven on a Tuesday and you'd already called me a cab." "Yes." "You could have asked." "You'd have said stay." "Yes," she said. "I'd have said stay." Rain hit the window in a handful, thrown. Downstairs a pan went onto a burner and someone shouted in Bengali and laughed. Ptolemy jumped onto the sofa, stepped across Lucien's thigh, and sat down on the arm with his back to the both of them. Lucien turned his hand over in hers and looked at the tape. "It's a good bandage," he said. "It's a very good bandage." "You've had practice." "I've had practice," she agreed, and did not look up, and did not let go of his fingers either.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:39:11.92Z" 7/25/2026, 1:39:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.635
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"stomach"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1305
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount903
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.55
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Lucien5
Evan1
Latin1
Whitechapel1
Rain2
Bengali1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
3"Rain"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"Bengali"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences39
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1305
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"known that heat"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean19.48
std22.13
cv1.136
sampleLengths
021
170
23
35
457
514
610
738
81
97
1058
1113
123
138
1440
1532
166
1768
1811
194
2038
213
221
234
2498
2513
261
2714
2845
2943
303
314
326
3350
3488
352
3644
378
383
394
4024
412
421
4319
4427
458
466
4722
481
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
5.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences104
ratio0.048
matches
0"His mouth moved — not a smile, the thing that came before one, the crease at the corner."
1"That was the one thing she'd got good at, over the years, with Evan and after — the not-moving of the face."
2"Eva's flat allowed one clear path — door to kitchenette to the sofa — and everything either side of it was books, some of them open and face-down and spine-broken in ways that would have made her mother weep."
3"\"—the hide for a binding, yes, she's told me.\" He sat."
4"It put her lower than him, closer, her shoulder between his knees, and the heat came off him the way it always did — a few degrees hotter than a person should be, the demon half running warm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount573
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.02617801047120419
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017452006980802793
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.55
std11.57
cv0.922
sampleLengths
021
110
232
32
426
53
65
717
827
913
1014
1110
1218
1316
144
151
165
172
183
1926
2029
217
226
233
248
2515
2625
275
285
2922
306
3133
3235
334
347
354
3637
371
383
391
404
4138
4239
4321
4413
451
4614
4711
4834
4935
66.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4423076923076923
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners46
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"Then she stood there with"
ratio0.019
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences52
matches
0"He held the cane loose"
1"She shifted her weight so"
2"His mouth moved — not"
3"He tipped his head"
4"She hated that."
5"She hated the ease of"
6"Her stomach dropped a floor."
7"She didn't move her face."
8"He said it like a"
9"He glanced down at his"
10"She unhooked the chain."
11"He came in and she"
12"He set the cane against"
13"She got the first aid"
14"He undid the button himself,"
15"She could see the cost."
16"It put her lower than"
17"She'd known that heat in"
18"She poured antiseptic on it"
19"He inhaled through his teeth."
ratio0.558
8.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences52
matches
0"Lucien stood on the landing"
1"The platinum had gone dark"
2"He held the cane loose"
3"She shifted her weight so"
4"His mouth moved — not"
5"Rain slid down the side"
6"He tipped his head"
7"She hated that."
8"She hated the ease of"
9"Ptolemy came round her ankles,"
10"Lucien lifted the cane an"
11"Her stomach dropped a floor."
12"She didn't move her face."
13"That was the one thing"
14"He said it like a"
15"Rory looked at him."
16"The chain was cold against"
17"He glanced down at his"
18"She unhooked the chain."
19"He came in and she"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He glanced down at his own cuff, where the white shirt had gone rust-coloured from the wrist to the base of the thumb, and his eyebrows went up as if he'd found…"
1"Eva's flat allowed one clear path — door to kitchenette to the sofa — and everything either side of it was books, some of them open and face-down and spine-brok…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"she agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.206
leniency0.413
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.063
83.3622%