| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.12% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 84.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1290 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 92 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 65 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 12 | | totalWords | 1299 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "June" | | 1 | "Payment" | | 2 | "For answers. She doesn't set the price. The grove does." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1132 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.15 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | August | 1 | | Roehampton | 1 | | Eva | 11 | | Rory | 13 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.926 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like nothing" | | 1 | "quite trees" | | 2 | "seemed worse" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1299 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 59 | | mean | 22.02 | | std | 24.99 | | cv | 1.135 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 83 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 97 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 59 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 68 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 84 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 65 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 46 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 90.01% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "were lit" | | 1 | "been carved" | | 2 | "were worn" | | 3 | "was crouched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 186 | | matches | | 0 | "was like pushing" | | 1 | "was pulsing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "The park noise — a plane, a dog somewhere barking itself hoarse — and then, under it, a second sound she'd been hearing all evening without noticing, the way you don't notice a fridge until it stops." | | 1 | "It was like pushing through a beaded curtain made of nothing — a drag across her face, a pop in both ears, and warmth." | | 2 | "She stood ankle-deep in cow parsley and something purple with a throat like velvet, and above her the sky held two colours at once — a deep evening blue, and threaded through it a green that shifted when she moved her head, like petrol on water." | | 3 | "Nine standing stones ringed the meadow at intervals — oak, not rock, ancient enough to have gone grey and hard, roots still gripping the earth in fists." | | 4 | "Under her boots the ground gave off heat and a smell she couldn't place at first — bread, maybe, or the inside of a greenhouse, sweet and mineral." | | 5 | "They stood at the mouth of a path that hadn't existed a breath earlier — two ranks of pale trunks leaning together overhead, and between them a floor of moss so deep it swallowed sound." | | 6 | "The sound came back thirty paces later — first her own breathing, loud enough to startle her, then water." | | 7 | "Rory came out from under the leaning trunks and had to put a hand up against the light, because there was more of it here than the sky had been giving anywhere else — a pool of it, gathered and held over a hollow where a spring came up through white gravel and turned it over and over without ever pushing a grain past the rim." |
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| 99.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1126 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.04085257548845471 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0053285968028419185 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 10.92 | | std | 10.82 | | cv | 0.991 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 43 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 37 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 37 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 46 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 69.47% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.4369747899159664 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 43.29% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she stopped dead." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice came from the" | | 1 | "It sat behind her sternum" | | 2 | "She stepped forward with her" | | 3 | "It was like pushing through" | | 4 | "She opened her eyes." | | 5 | "She stood ankle-deep in cow" | | 6 | "They had bark, they had" | | 7 | "They'd been carved once." | | 8 | "They walked in." | | 9 | "She kept walking." | | 10 | "They stood at the mouth" | | 11 | "She said Eva's name and" | | 12 | "They lifted one long hand" | | 13 | "She doesn't set the price." | | 14 | "It was pulsing now, quick" | | 15 | "Their heads moved in a" | | 16 | "It was cold." |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 70.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "The gap between the two" | | 1 | "Rory had walked past it" | | 2 | "Their voice came from the" | | 3 | "Eva made a noise in" | | 4 | "Rory shut them anyway." | | 5 | "The park noise — a" | | 6 | "It sat behind her sternum" | | 7 | "She stepped forward with her" | | 8 | "It was like pushing through" | | 9 | "She opened her eyes." | | 10 | "The frost had gone." | | 11 | "She stood ankle-deep in cow" | | 12 | "Eva came through behind her," | | 13 | "The clearing ran maybe eighty" | | 14 | "They had bark, they had" | | 15 | "They'd been carved once." | | 16 | "Nyx unfolded out of the" | | 17 | "Rory had never seen them" | | 18 | "Eva was crouched over the" | | 19 | "Eva stood and wiped her" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the carvings were worn" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 74.83% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood ankle-deep in cow parsley and something purple with a throat like velvet, and above her the sky held two colours at once — a deep evening blue, and th…" | | 1 | "Rory had never seen them so nearly solid: a tall silhouette with a proper outline, violet eyes set in a face that was almost a face." | | 2 | "They stood at the mouth of a path that hadn't existed a breath earlier — two ranks of pale trunks leaning together overhead, and between them a floor of moss so…" | | 3 | "They lifted one long hand and beckoned, and Rory followed, because standing still in a place that ate voices seemed worse." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.222 | | leniency | 0.444 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |