Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR250PQD89C9A97F2SS4GD

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56.6s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had got into the seams of the delivery bag, and the bag had got into Rory's jacket, so that when she pushed through the door of the Nest she brought the smell of wet nylon and five-spice with her. Silas didn't look up from the glass he was drying. "Cheung's has you out in that?" "Cheung's has me out in worse." She dumped the bag by the end of the bar, where it slumped like something shot. "Two orders to Meard Street. Same building, different floors, neither of them would come down." "And the tip?" "A packet of crisps and a sincere apology." She climbed onto the stool nearest the till, the one with the split in the leather she'd been picking at since March. "Whatever's open." He poured her a glass of the red he kept for himself and set it down without ceremony, then went back to the far end where a man in a courier's fleece was working through a crossword he had no intention of finishing. The green neon threw its usual sick light across the front windows. On the wall above the optics, a photograph of Trieste in 1974 had come slightly loose from its pin and hung at an angle nobody but Rory ever noticed. The door went again. Cold came in first, then a black wool coat with the collar up, then a woman shaking water off an umbrella that actually worked. Rory knew the walk before the face. Heel-toe, quick, like the pavement owed her money. "Nia." The umbrella stopped mid-shake. For a second neither of them did anything, and the bar went on around them, the crossword man's pen scratching, Silas sliding a bottle into the rack. "Aurora Carter." Nia's mouth did something complicated. "In a basement in Soho. Of course." "It's a ground floor." "It smells like a basement." She came over. She was thinner than Rory remembered, or the coat was better cut, and her hair had gone from the mad Cardiff frizz to something smooth and expensive that ended in a blunt line at her collarbone. She put the umbrella in the stand by the door like a person who had used an umbrella stand before. "God. Six years?" "Seven in February." "You'd know." Nia sat. She looked at the split leather, then sat anyway. "You always kept the calendar." Silas materialised. "What can I get you?" "Gin and tonic. Whatever the gin is, I don't care." She turned back to Rory while he moved off. "You look—" "Don't." "I was going to say you look like you've been rained on." "I have been rained on." "Well then." A laugh came out of her, half a note of the old one. "Are you working? Is this—" Her eyes went to the thermal bag, the branding on the side, the taped-over corner. "Are you doing food?" "I deliver for a restaurant three days a week." Rory drank. "Golden Empress. Best sweet and sour in the postcode and I'll take that to arbitration." "Rory." "There it is." "There's what?" "The voice. My mother does it on the phone. Two syllables and an entire cross-examination." Rory turned the glass by its base. "What are you doing here? You've never been north of the M4 in your life without a reason." "I've been here four years." That landed somewhere under the ribs. Rory kept her face still, the way she'd learned to. "Four." "Chambers took me on after pupillage. Crown Office Row, then I moved. Regulatory, mostly. It's dull and it pays." Nia accepted her glass and held it without drinking. "I did look for you. At the start. Your Facebook died. Eva blocked me." "Eva blocks everybody. It's a hobby." "She sent me a message first. Do you know that?" "No." "It said, *don't.*" Nia set the drink down. "One word, lowercase, no punctuation. I read it about forty times on the Tube." The crossword man got up, left coins on the wood, and went out into the rain. Silas collected the glass and the coins and drifted towards the back, and the bookshelf door, and left them the length of the bar. "She was looking after me," Rory said. "I know she was." "You could have written anyway." "You could have picked up in Bristol." "That's not—" Rory stopped. Started again, lower. "That's not the same thing and you know it isn't." Nia's thumb went along the edge of the bar, back and forth, a habit from the old flat on Colum Road where the kitchen table had a lip of chipped Formica. "You had a mock trial the week after," she said. "Bell was going to put you up for the Inns scholarship. He told me. He came and asked me where you were, and I stood in the corridor outside the moot room and told him you were unwell, and he looked at me like I was six years old." "I was unwell." "You had a burn on your forearm in the shape of a hair straightener." "Jesus, Nia." "You wore that grey cardigan for eleven days in June." Rory looked at the optics. The Trieste photograph, hanging crooked. The lettering on the mirror, reversed. "Twelve," she said. "It was twelve." Nia's hand went flat on the wood and stayed there. "I said," she began, and then went round it, "I said he was under pressure. About his upgrade. I said he was under pressure and you two just needed—" "A holiday. You said a holiday. Tenby." "Tenby." Nia laughed, and it came out wrong, cracked in the middle. "I said Tenby." "You did." "I was twenty-one and reading about *intention* and I couldn't recognise it standing in my own kitchen." She lifted the gin, drank properly this time, put it down. "I've had clients since. Regulatory, like I said, so nothing like — but I've sat across from people and watched them explain themselves and I keep thinking, I know this. I've had this conversation with the toaster on. And I said Tenby." "You were my friend, not my brief." "I was supposed to be better than that." "So was I." Rory turned on the stool to face her properly. "I stayed nineteen months after that conversation. Nineteen. That's not a thing you did to me, Nia. That's mine." "I'm not trying to take it off you." "You're carrying it round like a receipt." "What am I supposed to do with it?" Nia's voice went up, and she pulled it back down, glancing at the empty room out of a reflex she'd probably picked up in some panelled corridor. "Every February I think about phoning your mother. Every February. I got as far as the last digit twice." "She'd have talked to you. She likes you. She thinks you're the version of me that came out properly." "Don't do that." "I'm not being poisonous, I'm quoting." "She said that?" "She said, *Nia's got herself sorted.*" Rory shrugged. "Which is true. You've got a coat that repels water. That's more sorted than anyone in my building." Nia looked at her for a long moment. Under the good haircut and the good wool there was still the girl who'd eaten cereal at eleven at night and cried at snooker documentaries. "You'd have been good," she said. "That's the thing I can't put down. You'd have been so good at it. You could see round corners. Bell said it, everyone said it—" "Everyone said a lot of things." "—and now you're carrying sweet and sour up four flights for a bag of crisps." "Two orders," Rory said. "Same building, different floors."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.025
96.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1272
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords1272
ratio0.005
matches
0"don't."
1"intention"
2"Nia's got herself sorted."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount625
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Nest1
March1
Trieste2
Silas4
Cardiff1
Nia9
Started1
Colum1
Road1
Formica1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Nia"
places
0"Trieste"
1"Cardiff"
2"Colum"
3"Road"
globalScore0.38
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1272
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean17.92
std18.08
cv1.009
sampleLengths
040
116
237
33
432
584
628
715
81
94
1027
1114
124
1367
143
1518
167
1721
181
1912
205
2139
2226
231
243
252
2640
275
2816
291
3042
316
3210
331
3422
3540
367
374
385
397
4017
4131
4259
433
4414
452
4610
4716
486
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs106
matches
0"was drying"
1"was working"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences108
ratio0.009
matches
0"\"—and now you're carrying sweet and sour up four flights for a bag of crisps.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount630
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.03015873015873016
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007936507936507936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean11.78
std10.55
cv0.896
sampleLengths
040
110
26
322
415
53
630
72
843
912
1029
114
1224
137
148
151
164
1727
187
197
204
218
2236
2320
243
253
264
279
285
292
305
3119
322
331
3412
355
3615
3720
384
3911
4015
411
423
432
4422
4518
465
476
4810
491
62.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4351851851851852
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences42
matches
0"She dumped the bag by"
1"She climbed onto the stool"
2"He poured her a glass"
3"She came over"
4"She was thinner than Rory"
5"She put the umbrella in"
6"She looked at the split"
7"She turned back to Rory"
8"Her eyes went to the"
9"she began, and then went"
10"She lifted the gin, drank"
ratio0.262
19.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences42
matches
0"Rain had got into the"
1"Silas didn't look up from"
2"She dumped the bag by"
3"She climbed onto the stool"
4"He poured her a glass"
5"The green neon threw its"
6"The door went again."
7"Rory knew the walk before"
8"Heel-toe, quick, like the pavement"
9"The umbrella stopped mid-shake."
10"Nia's mouth did something complicated"
11"She came over"
12"She was thinner than Rory"
13"She put the umbrella in"
14"She looked at the split"
15"She turned back to Rory"
16"A laugh came out of"
17"Her eyes went to the"
18"Rory turned the glass by"
19"That landed somewhere under the"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"For a second neither of them did anything, and the bar went on around them, the crossword man's pen scratching, Silas sliding a bottle into the rack."
1"Under the good haircut and the good wool there was still the girl who'd eaten cereal at eleven at night and cried at snooker documentaries."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nia laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.074
leniency0.148
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.025
84.5924%