| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.372 | | leniency | 0.744 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "completely" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 82.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1430 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "resolved" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1441 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1208 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.24 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | December | 2 | | May | 1 | | Eva | 9 | | Nyx | 9 | | South | 1 | | Circular | 1 | | Halfway | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.879 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1441 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 25.73 | | std | 25.65 | | cv | 0.997 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 93 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 73 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 60 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 77 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 89 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 86 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 74 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 20 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 72 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 41 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 52 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.085 | | matches | | 0 | "Not winter-green, not the dull olive of a park lawn in the dark months — green like May, thick with clover, and threaded through with small yellow flowers she had no name for." | | 1 | "Sound came apart and reassembled itself — the drone of the South Circular, the dogs, the distant clatter of the city all fell away in the space of one breath, and what filled the hole was birdsong." | | 2 | "Not the sun — this one sat low and fat and rose-coloured in the west, and the shadows it threw pointed the wrong way, east to west, toward the light instead of away." | | 3 | "\"No.\" Nyx stood beside her, and their shadow — Rory checked twice — didn't exist at all." | | 4 | "Wildflowers everywhere, and not in patches; in bands, in deliberate arcs, blue running into white running into a violent orange, as though someone had laid them out with a plan and then walked away for three centuries." | | 5 | "Twenty-two steps in, she looked back and the stones stood a hundred yards off, easily, and the frost beyond them had gone completely — just green, all the way to a horizon that hadn't been there ten minutes ago." | | 6 | "Not hollowed and holding rainwater — full, the wood open along its length like a cut fruit, and the water inside stood in it dark and perfectly level and deeper than the trunk was thick." | | 7 | "Nothing had ever grown inside it, by the look of the soil — no roots, no stems, no seed heads." | | 8 | "Colder than the frost outside, cold enough that her fingertips went numb, and under the cold, very faint, something turned over — a pressure, a slow beat, like a hand knocking on a door from a long way underneath." | | 9 | "The rose-coloured sun didn't move, but the shadows swung, all of them at once, sweeping around like the spokes of a wheel until every dark line in the clearing pointed at the swept circle — at the path — at the three of them." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1205 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.038174273858921165 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004979253112033195 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 12.32 | | std | 11.23 | | cv | 0.911 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 72.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.47863247863247865 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 87.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Too much of it, and" | | 1 | "Then it turned its head" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd learned what its warmth" | | 1 | "They walked down." | | 2 | "They had the shape of" | | 3 | "She felt heat, and then" | | 4 | "Her reflection leaned back." | | 5 | "She stepped back so fast" | | 6 | "Her heart hammered" | | 7 | "She made herself breathe." | | 8 | "She turned instead toward the" | | 9 | "It was cold." |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 78.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva crouched and pressed her" | | 1 | "Nyx flowed past them both," | | 2 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 3 | "Rory put her hand near" | | 4 | "Someone had carved a spiral" | | 5 | "The spiral had grown, the" | | 6 | "Nyx's voice arrived from a" | | 7 | "Eva looked up." | | 8 | "Rory went between the fourth" | | 9 | "The cold left her like" | | 10 | "Sound came apart and reassembled" | | 11 | "Layers of it." | | 12 | "The pendant against her breastbone" | | 13 | "That, at least, was a" | | 14 | "She'd learned what its warmth" | | 15 | "Eva's voice cracked" | | 16 | "The sky over the grove" | | 17 | "Rory watched her own shadow" | | 18 | "Nyx stood beside her, and" | | 19 | "The clearing sloped down into" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers everywhere, and not in patches; in bands, in deliberate arcs, blue running into white running into a violent orange, as though someone had laid them…" | | 1 | "Bluebells, in December, next to poppies, next to something with black petals and a throat full of small pale seeds that clicked when the air moved." | | 2 | "Twenty-two steps in, she looked back and the stones stood a hundred yards off, easily, and the frost beyond them had gone completely — just green, all the way t…" | | 3 | "All of it, every layer, cut clean, and the silence that dropped into the grove was so complete that Rory heard the seeds clicking in the black flowers thirty fe…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.256 | | leniency | 0.512 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.047 | |