Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR3DWREQWMMDR0FBP8T9CD

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Duration:
1m 4s
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$0.097300
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gate wasn't a gate. Rory had walked past that stand of oaks four times in daylight and counted nine trees. Tonight there were eleven, and two of them had no bark — just grey stone, split and pitted, with roots still gripping the frozen earth as if they hadn't yet noticed they'd stopped being wood. "That's new," she said. "That's old." Nyx drifted a pace ahead of her, their edges fraying into the dark between trunks. "Older than the park. Older than the city that grew up to look at it." Silas stopped at the treeline and put his hands in his coat pockets like a man refusing a drink. "I'll wait here." "You drove." "I drove. I never said I'd walk in." He nodded at the two stone oaks. "See how the frost stops? Look at the grass." She looked. Rime lay thick across the open ground behind them, silvering every blade, crunching under her boots for the last half mile. Between the standing stones it simply ended, a clean line as though someone had drawn it with a ruler, and past it the grass lay soft and green and moving in a wind Rory couldn't feel on her face. "Fine," she said. "Keep the engine warm." "Rory." Silas' jaw worked. "Whatever it offers you in there — food, drink, a favour, a name — you say no. Politely. Three times if you have to." "And if it offers information?" "Then you're already paying for it." Nyx laughed, a sound like a page turning. "He's not wrong. Come." She stepped through. The cold went out of her lungs. Not warmth exactly — the air simply stopped having opinions about her, sitting on her skin at exactly the temperature of her own blood, and the loss of the December ache made her stagger. Behind her, the park was still there. She could see the black slope of the hill, the sodium smear of Roehampton beyond it, Silas' silhouette by the stone. All of it soundless. She clapped her hands once and the noise came back to her flattened, as if the clearing had swallowed the echo and kept it. "Don't," Nyx murmured. "Not sound. Not here. It travels strangely and things listen." "Things." "Things." The grove ran downhill in a shallow bowl, wider than it had any business being. Richmond Park was flat here; she'd cycled it. This slope went down and down through waist-high growth, and every plant in it was blooming out of season and out of order. Foxgloves shoulder to shoulder with snowdrops. Bluebells nodding beside poppies gone fat and red as arterial spray. A rose bush had thrown out one white flower, one pink, one that was black at the centre and shading outward into gold, and when she leaned close it turned on its stem to follow her. "Nyx." "I saw." "It moved." "They all do. Slowly. Watch the ground rather than the flowers, Aurora, or you'll be here till Tuesday admiring a daisy." She watched the ground. Made herself count her steps out loud in her head, one two three, an anchor. The grass gave underfoot with no crackle, no give of frozen mud, and left no print behind her — nothing bent, nothing crushed, the whole path she'd walked erasing itself like water closing over a dropped stone. At the bottom of the bowl she found the stream. It ran uphill. Not fast. A slow clear ribbon about three feet across, climbing the slope toward the far rim in a way that made her stomach lurch when she tracked it too long, and along its bed lay round pale stones that were not stones. She crouched. Knucklebones. Hundreds of them, worn smooth, none of them from anything she could name — some too long, some hinged wrong, one the size of her fist with three sockets in it. "Do not drink," Nyx said, without turning around. "Wasn't going to." "Everyone says that. Then it's July and their mother's calling and they're on their knees with their face in it." They crossed the stream in one long step and their reflection didn't come with them. "Coming?" Her boots went into the water to the ankle and it felt like nothing at all — no wet, no chill, no drag. On the other side her socks were dry. The trees started properly then. Oak, mostly, but grown to a scale that made her think of cathedral pillars, and hung with something she took for mistletoe until she got closer and saw the tangles were made of hair. Braided. Ribbon-wrapped. Some plaits grey and brittle, some so black and glossy they might have been cut that morning, all of them knotted into the low branches with small objects tied in — a wedding ring, a bus ticket, a milk tooth, a key. "Offerings?" she asked. "Promises." Nyx's voice had gone flat and careful. "Payment left where the payer could find it again, if they ever came back with the rest." "Did they?" "Look at how much hair is here, and then ask me again." Rory put her hands behind her back like a child in a museum and kept walking. The light had no source. She'd assumed moon, and there was a moon, but it hung too low and too large and wore a ring of other lights around it — nine, ten, small hard points arranged in a slow circle, and none of them belonged to any constellation she'd ever traced from her parents' back garden in Cardiff. The glow they threw came in from all sides at once. Nothing cast a shadow. Not the trees, not her hand when she held it up, not Nyx. That was the thing that finally got under her ribs. "Nyx. You've got no—" "I know." Two words, clipped. Their form had thickened as they walked, silhouette hardening into something almost solid, almost man-shaped, and it moved with none of the liquid ease she'd got used to. "There's nowhere for me to go here. Nothing to step into. I'm as stuck in this shape as you are in yours." "That's a problem." "It's an inconvenience. It becomes a problem if we're not out before the light changes." They gestured at the ringed moon. "The Fae built this to be a doorstep, not a house. Nothing sleeps on a doorstep unless it's been invited." The Heartstone lay against her sternum under two jumpers, and she'd stopped noticing it somewhere around Kingston. She noticed it now, because it had gone cold. Not cool. Cold like a coin left on a windowsill in January, a hard little disc of ice sitting over her heart, and when she pulled it out on its chain the crimson had drained toward the edges of the gem and left the centre clear as glass. "It's never done that." Nyx bent to look, violet eyes narrowing to slits. "It's a Hel-thing. Dymasian work, if I had to guess — that colour, that warmth. Here it's a bell in a church that doesn't ring. Put it away." "Is it broken?" "It's outnumbered." She tucked it back under her collar and the cold went on spreading, a slow ache pushing out through her collarbones, and she decided she'd think about that later. Deeper in, the trees opened again. Toadstools ringed the clearing ahead in a circle forty feet across, each cap pale as bone and turned upward like a small dish, and each dish held a thimbleful of clear liquid that trembled though the air had gone still. Beyond them stood a single oak so vast that she had to walk her eyes up it in stages, and set into its trunk at head height was a door. Not a hollow. A door. Fitted, hinged, with a handle of dull green metal shaped like a leaping hare, and around the frame a band of carving worn nearly smooth by hands — letters, or something that wanted to be letters, curling in on themselves. "Don't touch the mushrooms," Nyx said. "Don't touch the door. Don't touch the—" "Hare?" "Especially the hare." Rory stopped a foot short of the ring and put her hands in her pockets, which was harder than it should have been. Something in her wrist itched — the old crescent scar, throbbing in time with nothing. "There's someone in the trees behind you," she said. "There's been someone in the trees behind me since the stream." Nyx didn't turn. "She's been letting us walk. That's either courtesy or curiosity, and with her kind it's usually both." The grass beyond the oak swayed and settled. No footprints. Not a single blade bent. "You came in by the wrong stones," said a voice like water over slate, "and you're still standing. Tell me which of you was lucky, and I'll tell you which of you was warned."
created_at"2026-07-25T13:40:43.039Z" 7/25/2026, 1:40:43 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.327
leniency0.653
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1467
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1467
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"echo"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"lurch"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"echo"
2"stomach"
3"lurch"
4"chill"
5"traced"
6"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1479
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount1101
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Nyx9
Silas1
Rory4
December1
Roehampton1
Park1
Heartstone1
Kingston1
January1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Kingston"
2"January"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like nothing at all — no wet, no c"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1479
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean25.95
std27.61
cv1.064
sampleLengths
056
14
232
322
42
524
662
77
828
95
106
1112
123
1397
1413
151
161
1799
181
192
202
2121
2256
2310
2480
258
263
2736
2831
2983
303
3125
322
3312
3416
3587
3610
374
3855
393
4041
4174
424
4337
443
452
4629
4776
4845
4913
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"were made"
1"got used"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was blooming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences112
ratio0.089
matches
0"Tonight there were eleven, and two of them had no bark — just grey stone, split and pitted, with roots still gripping the frozen earth as if they hadn't yet noticed they'd stopped being wood."
1"Not warmth exactly — the air simply stopped having opinions about her, sitting on her skin at exactly the temperature of her own blood, and the loss of the December ache made her stagger."
2"Richmond Park was flat here; she'd cycled it."
3"The grass gave underfoot with no crackle, no give of frozen mud, and left no print behind her — nothing bent, nothing crushed, the whole path she'd walked erasing itself like water closing over a dropped stone."
4"Hundreds of them, worn smooth, none of them from anything she could name — some too long, some hinged wrong, one the size of her fist with three sockets in it."
5"Her boots went into the water to the ankle and it felt like nothing at all — no wet, no chill, no drag."
6"Some plaits grey and brittle, some so black and glossy they might have been cut that morning, all of them knotted into the low branches with small objects tied in — a wedding ring, a bus ticket, a milk tooth, a key."
7"She'd assumed moon, and there was a moon, but it hung too low and too large and wore a ring of other lights around it — nine, ten, small hard points arranged in a slow circle, and none of them belonged to any constellation she'd ever traced from her parents' back garden in Cardiff."
8"Fitted, hinged, with a handle of dull green metal shaped like a leaping hare, and around the frame a band of carving worn nearly smooth by hands — letters, or something that wanted to be letters, curling in on themselves."
9"Something in her wrist itched — the old crescent scar, throbbing in time with nothing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount406
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03940886699507389
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.014778325123152709
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean13.21
std12.52
cv0.948
sampleLengths
05
116
235
34
417
515
619
73
82
915
109
112
1221
1339
143
154
164
1724
185
196
208
214
223
237
2434
257
2621
274
2824
293
3010
311
321
3315
348
3523
366
3711
3836
391
402
412
4221
434
4415
4537
4610
473
482
4941
89.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5625
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners63
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences63
matches
0"He nodded at the two"
1"She stepped through."
2"She could see the black"
3"She clapped her hands once"
4"She watched the ground."
5"It ran uphill."
6"They crossed the stream in"
7"Her boots went into the"
8"She'd assumed moon, and there"
9"Their form had thickened as"
10"They gestured at the ringed"
11"She noticed it now, because"
12"She tucked it back under"
ratio0.206
86.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences63
matches
0"The gate wasn't a gate."
1"Rory had walked past that"
2"Tonight there were eleven, and"
3"Nyx drifted a pace ahead"
4"Silas stopped at the treeline"
5"He nodded at the two"
6"Rime lay thick across the"
7"Nyx laughed, a sound like"
8"She stepped through."
9"The cold went out of"
10"She could see the black"
11"She clapped her hands once"
12"The grove ran downhill in"
13"Richmond Park was flat here;"
14"This slope went down and"
15"Foxgloves shoulder to shoulder with"
16"Bluebells nodding beside poppies gone"
17"A rose bush had thrown"
18"She watched the ground."
19"The grass gave underfoot with"
ratio0.746
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Tonight there were eleven, and two of them had no bark — just grey stone, split and pitted, with roots still gripping the frozen earth as if they hadn't yet not…"
1"Between the standing stones it simply ended, a clean line as though someone had drawn it with a ruler, and past it the grass lay soft and green and moving in a …"
2"A slow clear ribbon about three feet across, climbing the slope toward the far rim in a way that made her stomach lurch when she tracked it too long, and along …"
3"Oak, mostly, but grown to a scale that made her think of cathedral pillars, and hung with something she took for mistletoe until she got closer and saw the tang…"
4"Toadstools ringed the clearing ahead in a circle forty feet across, each cap pale as bone and turned upward like a small dish, and each dish held a thimbleful o…"
5"Fitted, hinged, with a handle of dull green metal shaped like a leaping hare, and around the frame a band of carving worn nearly smooth by hands — letters, or s…"
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their edges fraying into the dark between trunks"
1"Nyx said, without turning around"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.041
83.7763%