Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR3NXP8GAT3QG7MNAAY8BM

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.095110
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory had to shove her shoulder into the door to work it free, and that was how she opened it — off balance, hair falling out of its knot, a Sharpie clamped between her teeth like a cigarette — so that when she saw who was standing in the stairwell she nearly swallowed it. Lucien Moreau, dripping. Rain had done something obscene to the platinum slick of his hair; a piece of it had come loose and hung over his forehead, and the charcoal suit was three shades darker down the left side, clinging. He had the cane in his right hand, the ivory handle catching the bad light of the landing bulb, and he was holding himself the way people held themselves when they were deciding, second by second, not to fall over. "Aurora," he said. She took the Sharpie out of her mouth. Below them, the curry house was in full evening roar — cumin and hot ghee coming up through the floorboards, someone shouting an order in Sylheti, the extractor fan grinding away like a dying animal. Ptolemy appeared at her ankle, took one look at the man in the doorway, and vanished under the sofa. "No," Rory said, and shut the door. She stood with her palm flat against it. Her heart was going stupidly, which she resented more than anything else about the last eleven weeks. "That's fair," he said, muffled through the wood. His voice was very level. It was always very level; it was the thing she'd first noticed about him and the thing she now wanted to take a hammer to. "Entirely fair. Might I ask a single question through the door, and then I'll go?" "Ask it." "Is there iron in this building?" Rory's palm went cold. She opened the door. He hadn't moved, which was itself an answer. Up close she could see what the rain had been hiding: the black seep along his ribs where the wet wool had gone glossy, the tremor in the hand on the cane, the grey pull under his eyes. One amber eye, one black. The amber one was blown wide and the black one wasn't, and she didn't know what that meant except that it wasn't good. "Iron filings," he said. "In the wound. I can't get them out myself, my hands aren't—" He stopped. Adjusted. "My hands aren't cooperating. Eva keeps salt, cold iron tongs, and a very sharp pair of tweezers in a biscuit tin on the second shelf. I'd hoped she'd be home." "She's in Prague until Thursday." "Ah." Something in his face moved and then didn't. "Then I've made an error. Forgive me. I'll—" "Get in," Rory said. "Aurora—" "Lucien, so help me God, if you die on Eva's stairs she'll never forgive me, and I'm the one who has to feed her cat." She caught his sleeve. It was like holding a wrung-out towel. "In." He came in. He did it beautifully — you'd almost not notice that she was taking a third of his weight — and she steered him past the tower of grimoires by the radiator, past the drying rack draped with printouts, and put him down on the one clear end of the sofa, which she'd cleared four hours ago for herself. She got the biscuit tin. She got the good lamp, the one with the bendy neck, and a tea towel, and the bottle of vodka Eva kept for emergencies and never for drinking. Then she stood over him and said, "Jacket." "I'm capable of—" "You're not." He looked up at her. Rain was running from his hair down the side of his throat and into his collar, and for a moment he just looked, and the flat got smaller, the way it always had, the way she'd promised herself she'd stopped noticing. "No," he agreed. "I'm not." She got the jacket off him. Then the waistcoat, then the shirt, three buttons at a time, and she kept her eyes on the buttons because the alternative was his face. Under the shirt: a mess. A gash under the left ribs, four inches, edges blackened and weeping, the flesh around it webbed with grey lines like frost on glass. She'd seen him bleed once before, and it hadn't looked like this. "Cold iron," she said. "Powdered. Loaded into a shell, which is a new and irritating fashion." He tipped his head back against the sofa. "The Bellweather brothers have decided I am unreliable." "Are you?" "Notoriously." She knelt. She got the tongs out of the tin — dull, heavy, cold — and the tweezers, and doused them both with vodka, and set the lamp so it burned white across his skin. The first fragment came out the size of a grain of sugar and he made no sound at all, just gripped the arm of the sofa until the tendons stood up. "Talk," she said. "Distract yourself. Or me." "What would you like?" "Four languages. Pick one I don't speak and complain." So he did. Low, unhurried French, then something that must have been the other one — the one with too many consonants, the one from the place he'd never named to her — and she worked the iron out of him piece by piece while the extractor fan whined and the rain hit the window in handfuls. Nine fragments. Eleven. The grey webbing began to retreat from each hole as she emptied it, skin knitting stubbornly closed, and by the fifteenth he'd stopped shaking and started, quietly, to sweat. "Two more," she said. "I can see them." "Take your time." "I'm not being gentle for your benefit. I don't want to touch the wrong thing." "Aurora." His hand came down and closed around her left wrist — not hard, not stopping her, just resting there, his thumb landing exactly on the little crescent scar the way it had once before, in a car park in Deptford at four in the morning, before everything. "You are being gentle." She held very still. "Let go." He let go. Fragment sixteen. Seventeen. She dropped them into the biscuit tin lid, where they lay looking like nothing, like grit from a shoe, and she pressed the tea towel over the closing wound harder than strictly necessary and said, to the tea towel, "You didn't call." "No." "Eleven weeks. You had my number, you had my landlord, you have a boy who watches the Golden Empress and reports on my delivery route, don't pretend you don't—" "Eight quid a week and he's worth every penny." "Then don't tell me you couldn't find me." She looked up. His face was so close and so tired. "You came here tonight bleeding out of your ribs, Lucien. You found me fine." He was silent long enough that the fan filled the room. "I gave the Bellweathers a name," he said. "In March. They wanted yours. They wanted the woman who took the box out of Ashgrove, and I told them it was a man called Cormac who had already left the country and could not be asked about it, and in exchange I promised them a favour to be named later." He looked at the ceiling. "Tonight they named it. I declined. And so." A small gesture at his own side, elegant, dismissive, as though it were a wine list. Rory's hands had stopped. "You could have told me." "You would have argued." "Yes! That's the whole—" She sat back on her heels, furious, and her voice cracked in the middle, which ruined it. "That's the entire point of me, Lucien. I argue. I find another way. That's what I'm for. And instead you decided all by yourself what I could carry, and then you disappeared, and I spent eleven weeks thinking that the night in Deptford was—" She stopped. "Was what?" "A transaction," she said. "That you'd got what you wanted and moved on. Because that's what people say about you, and I let them, because you never gave me anything better to believe." Something went through him then that had nothing to do with iron. The amber eye held her; the black one did too, unreadable, endless. "It was not a transaction," he said. Quietly, in English, plainly, with none of the polish on it. "It was the only unwise thing I have done in nine years. I have thought about it every day since, which is inconvenient, and I stayed away because I have a great many enemies and you have a life — a flat, a cat you feed, a Chinese restaurant that overworks you, a father who thinks you'll go back to law." His mouth moved, not quite a smile. "I decided that I loved that more than I wanted to be in it. That was arrogant. I know." The rain went on. Ptolemy came out from under the sofa, thought about it, and sat down on Lucien's discarded, ruined jacket. Rory lifted the tea towel. Under it, the skin was pink and whole and furious-looking, and nothing was bleeding at all. "Say the last part again," she said. "Which part?" "You know which part." Lucien Moreau, information broker, four languages, notoriously unreliable, looked at her from six inches away with his ridiculous hair in his eyes and said it again, in French this time — and she understood every word, because she'd spent eleven weeks and forty quid on an app learning them. "Right," Rory said, unsteadily. "Well. You're not going out in that rain."
created_at"2026-07-25T13:40:51.261Z" 7/25/2026, 1:40:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She sat back [back]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.426
leniency0.852
rawRatio0.038
effectiveRatio0.033
87.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1584
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"blown wide"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
highlights
0"blown wide"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1596
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1075
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Sharpie2
Moreau2
Sylheti1
Adjusted1
Rory7
Eva1
French2
Deptford1
Quietly1
English1
Lucien3
persons
0"Sharpie"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Sylheti"
1"French"
2"Deptford"
3"English"
globalScore1
windowScore1
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like this"
1"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1596
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"notice that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean26.16
std27.58
cv1.054
sampleLengths
059
13
277
33
462
57
625
753
82
96
108
1174
1249
135
1417
154
161
1737
1861
1941
203
212
2246
235
2472
254
2628
272
281
2966
307
314
329
3389
348
353
3615
3752
386
393
4045
411
4229
439
4433
4511
4688
479
484
4967
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"was blown"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs180
matches
0"was standing"
1"was holding"
2"were deciding"
3"was going"
4"was like holding"
5"was taking"
6"was running"
7"was bleeding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences115
ratio0.087
matches
0"Rory had to shove her shoulder into the door to work it free, and that was how she opened it — off balance, hair falling out of its knot, a Sharpie clamped between her teeth like a cigarette — so that when she saw who was standing in the stairwell she nearly swallowed it."
1"Rain had done something obscene to the platinum slick of his hair; a piece of it had come loose and hung over his forehead, and the charcoal suit was three shades darker down the left side, clinging."
2"Below them, the curry house was in full evening roar — cumin and hot ghee coming up through the floorboards, someone shouting an order in Sylheti, the extractor fan grinding away like a dying animal."
3"It was always very level; it was the thing she'd first noticed about him and the thing she now wanted to take a hammer to."
4"He did it beautifully — you'd almost not notice that she was taking a third of his weight — and she steered him past the tower of grimoires by the radiator, past the drying rack draped with printouts, and put him down on the one clear end of the sofa, which she'd cleared four hours ago for herself."
5"She got the tongs out of the tin — dull, heavy, cold — and the tweezers, and doused them both with vodka, and set the lamp so it burned white across his skin."
6"Low, unhurried French, then something that must have been the other one — the one with too many consonants, the one from the place he'd never named to her — and she worked the iron out of him piece by piece while the extractor fan whined and the rain hit the window in handfuls."
7"\"Aurora.\" His hand came down and closed around her left wrist — not hard, not stopping her, just resting there, his thumb landing exactly on the little crescent scar the way it had once before, in a car park in Deptford at four in the morning, before everything."
8"The amber eye held her; the black one did too, unreadable, endless."
9"Lucien Moreau, information broker, four languages, notoriously unreliable, looked at her from six inches away with his ridiculous hair in his eyes and said it again, in French this time — and she understood every word, because she'd spent eleven weeks and forty quid on an app learning them."
98.88% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1066
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04127579737335835
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010318949343339587
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean13.88
std15.2
cv1.096
sampleLengths
05
154
23
337
440
53
68
735
819
97
108
1117
128
135
1425
1515
162
176
184
194
208
2138
225
2323
244
2514
261
2730
285
299
308
314
321
3329
347
351
363
3758
385
3928
408
413
422
435
4441
453
462
476
4825
495
79.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4956521739130435
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then she stood over him"
1"Then the waistcoat, then the"
2"Quietly, in English, plainly, with"
ratio0.048
26.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences62
matches
0"He had the cane in"
1"She took the Sharpie out"
2"She stood with her palm"
3"Her heart was going stupidly,"
4"he said, muffled through the"
5"His voice was very level."
6"It was always very level;"
7"She opened the door."
8"He hadn't moved, which was"
9"She caught his sleeve"
10"It was like holding a"
11"He came in."
12"He did it beautifully —"
13"She got the biscuit tin."
14"She got the good lamp,"
15"He looked up at her."
16"She got the jacket off"
17"She'd seen him bleed once"
18"He tipped his head back"
19"She got the tongs out"
ratio0.484
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences62
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory had to shove her"
2"Lucien Moreau, dripping."
3"Rain had done something obscene"
4"He had the cane in"
5"She took the Sharpie out"
6"Ptolemy appeared at her ankle,"
7"Rory said, and shut the"
8"She stood with her palm"
9"Her heart was going stupidly,"
10"he said, muffled through the"
11"His voice was very level."
12"It was always very level;"
13"Rory's palm went cold."
14"She opened the door."
15"He hadn't moved, which was"
16"The amber one was blown"
17"Something in his face moved"
18"She caught his sleeve"
19"It was like holding a"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Low, unhurried French, then something that must have been the other one — the one with too many consonants, the one from the place he'd never named to her — and…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"His mouth moved, not quite a smile"
1"Rory said, unsteadily"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she stood (stand)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.246
leniency0.492
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.066
81.3502%