Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR49Q20HT4EM3BBNK90JW9

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Duration:
46.5s
Cost:
$0.067910
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and Rory had to lean her shoulder into the door to get the last one clear. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor with rain flattening his platinum hair against his forehead, which she had never seen before, not once in the eight months she'd known him. The cane hung from his left hand. His right pressed a folded handkerchief against his ribs, and the handkerchief had stopped being white some time ago. "You," she said. "You have not changed the locks." He said it like a criticism. "I've added two." "Three deadbolts on a door that opens outward." He tipped his head toward the hinges. "One good shove and the frame gives. But it is a comfort, I imagine." She didn't move out of the doorway. Below them, the curry house was frying onions in ghee, and the smell climbed the stairwell and settled over both of them like a blanket that wasn't theirs. "It's two in the morning, Lucien." "Yes." His mismatched eyes came up, the amber one catching the bulb over the landing, the black one swallowing it. "May I come in, or shall we discuss the locks until I fall over?" She stepped back. He came in slower than he wanted to — she watched him manage it, the small negotiation between his ribs and the doorframe — and Ptolemy shot out from under Eva's research table, took one look at him, and vanished into the bedroom. "Your cat hates me." "Eva's cat. And he's got taste." She shut the door. Slid one bolt, then stopped, then slid the other two, because whatever had opened him up out there might still be walking around Brick Lane. "Sit down before you bleed on the scrolls. Eva will have your skin for a bookmark." He lowered himself onto the arm of the sofa instead of the cushions, which meant he intended to leave soon, which meant he was lying about something. She'd learned that much in eight months. She went to the kitchen, pulled the tin down from above the sink, and came back with iodine, gauze, and the good scissors. "Jacket off." "Aurora—" "Don't." She set the tin on a stack of Eva's photocopied grimoire pages. "You don't get to say my name like that and then ask me for a favour. Pick one." He was quiet. Rain ticked at the window over the desk. Then, one-handed, he shrugged out of the charcoal jacket, and she saw the shirt underneath and stopped pretending to be calm about it. "Christ." "It looks worse than it is." "It looks like someone tried to unzip you." "Someone did." He folded the jacket over his knee, careful about the lining, as though the ruined silk were the tragedy here. "Three of them. Outside the Whitechapel bridge. They were waiting, which is interesting, because only four people knew I would be there." "And you came to the flat of one of them." "I came to the flat of the one who would not have needed three men." Something moved at the corner of his mouth. "You would have done it yourself, and neatly, and I would not have seen you coming." She knelt on the floorboards in front of him and started cutting the shirt away from the wound, and neither of them said anything for a while, and the not-saying got louder. The gash ran diagonally under his ribs, deep at the top, shallowing out towards his hip. Already knitting at the edges — the demon half doing its work — but slowly, and dirty, and he'd let it go too long. "You should have gone to Silas." "Silas would have talked." "Silas is a bartender." "Silas is a bartender who talks." His breath hitched when she pressed the iodine in, and he swallowed it down, and his hand came to rest on the sofa arm an inch from her shoulder. Didn't touch. Just rested there. "Also, you live above his bar." "I don't." She kept her eyes on the gauze. "Not since March." "I know." "Then why'd you say it?" "Because I wanted to hear how you would say it." She set the gauze down. Sat back on her heels. Looked up at him properly for the first time since the door had opened, and there he was, hair wrecked, shirt ruined, thirty-two years of careful surface stripped off him by rain and a knife and whatever had made him walk east instead of west. "You didn't come for the bandage." "No." "You've got a woman in Hoxton who stitches people for cash. You told me about her. You *bragged* about her." "Vasilisa. Yes." "So." "So Vasilisa would have asked me nothing, and I have found, tonight, walking with my hand in my side, that I did not want to be asked nothing." He turned his head. The lamp caught the black eye this time and did nothing to it at all. "I wanted to be asked something." "Then here's something." She stood up. Her knees ached from the boards. "Why did you tell Eva to send me away?" He didn't flinch. She'd have preferred a flinch. "Because the Ashcroft woman put my name in a ledger next to yours," he said. "And ledgers are read. And I have buried two people who were read about." "You could have told me that in February." "You would have stayed." "That was mine to decide." "Yes." His fingers curled once against the sofa arm, then flattened. "It was. That is the part I have been carrying up and down this city for four months, Aurora. Not the ledger. The deciding." The onion smell had thickened. Somewhere under the floor a fan kicked on, and the whole flat hummed with it, and Rory stood in the middle of Eva's paper-choked front room with iodine on her fingers and found she couldn't look at him and couldn't look away either, and settled for the ceiling. "I hated you for it," she said. "Good." "Don't do that. Don't be gracious. You're not allowed to be gracious about it." "Then hate me and hold the gauze," Lucien said, "because I am going to be sick otherwise, and I would rather not do that in front of you as well." She got a hand under his elbow. Got him off the sofa arm and onto the cushions, which he permitted, which told her exactly how bad it was, and his weight came against her shoulder for three seconds and she felt every one of them. "Head down. Breathe." "I am breathing." "You're negotiating." She pressed the fresh pad against his side and held it, palm flat, the heat of him coming through the cotton, and his hand came up and closed over her wrist — over the small crescent scar, the way he had once before, in a stairwell in Camden, before anything had been ruined. He didn't grip. He just held it there, thumb over the old mark, like a man keeping his place in a book. "Four months," he said, eyes shut. "You did not come to the bar." "You told Eva to send me away." "I know what I told her." His thumb moved once. "I am asking whether you came anyway." Rory looked at the rain on the window and the three shut bolts and the cat's eyes glinting from the bedroom doorway. "Twice," she said.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:41:11.536Z" 7/25/2026, 1:41:11 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His fingers curled once [once]"
1"His thumb moved once [once]"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.065
95.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
87.86% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1236
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"weight"
2"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1241
ratio0.001
matches
0"bragged"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount781
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory3
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Eva3
Slid1
Brick1
Lane1
Didn1
Lucien2
Camden1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1241
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"learned that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.02
std19.18
cv0.958
sampleLengths
025
156
23
312
43
529
635
76
834
93
1043
114
1251
1357
142
151
1631
1734
181
196
208
2144
2210
2339
2432
2540
266
274
284
2946
3012
312
325
3310
3455
356
361
3720
382
391
4053
4121
428
4329
448
454
465
4735
4853
497
98.77% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"been ruined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was frying"
1"was lying"
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences96
ratio0.031
matches
0"He came in slower than he wanted to — she watched him manage it, the small negotiation between his ribs and the doorframe — and Ptolemy shot out from under Eva's research table, took one look at him, and vanished into the bedroom."
1"Already knitting at the edges — the demon half doing its work — but slowly, and dirty, and he'd let it go too long."
2"\"You're negotiating.\" She pressed the fresh pad against his side and held it, palm flat, the heat of him coming through the cotton, and his hand came up and closed over her wrist — over the small crescent scar, the way he had once before, in a stairwell in Camden, before anything had been ruined."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount780
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.035897435897435895
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005128205128205128
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.93
std11.61
cv0.898
sampleLengths
025
130
27
319
43
512
63
715
814
97
1028
116
1220
1314
143
1543
164
1710
1825
1916
2027
217
2223
232
241
2513
2618
273
288
2923
301
316
328
3322
3422
3510
3623
3716
3832
3916
4024
416
424
434
4435
452
463
476
489
493
71.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4895833333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then, one-handed, he shrugged out"
1"Already knitting at the edges"
2"Just rested there."
3"Somewhere under the floor a"
ratio0.083
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences48
matches
0"His right pressed a folded"
1"He said it like a"
2"He tipped his head toward"
3"She didn't move out of"
4"His mismatched eyes came up,"
5"She stepped back."
6"He came in slower than"
7"She shut the door"
8"He lowered himself onto the"
9"She'd learned that much in"
10"She went to the kitchen,"
11"She set the tin on"
12"He was quiet."
13"He folded the jacket over"
14"She knelt on the floorboards"
15"His breath hitched when she"
16"She kept her eyes on"
17"She set the gauze down."
18"He turned his head"
19"She stood up"
ratio0.625
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences48
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"The cane hung from his"
3"His right pressed a folded"
4"He said it like a"
5"He tipped his head toward"
6"She didn't move out of"
7"His mismatched eyes came up,"
8"She stepped back."
9"He came in slower than"
10"She shut the door"
11"He lowered himself onto the"
12"She'd learned that much in"
13"She went to the kitchen,"
14"She set the tin on"
15"He was quiet."
16"Rain ticked at the window"
17"He folded the jacket over"
18"Something moved at the corner"
19"She knelt on the floorboards"
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Below them, the curry house was frying onions in ghee, and the smell climbed the stairwell and settled over both of them like a blanket that wasn't theirs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, eyes shut"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"His breath hitched (hitch)"
1"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.29
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.065
88.7029%