Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR50JPSKK99N96PQKJVGWX

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Duration:
42.4s
Cost:
$0.064935
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and Rory had to put her shoulder into the door before it gave. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain beading on his shoulders and his cane hooked over one forearm, and he looked at her like a man checking a sum he'd already done twice. "You've lost weight." "You've lost your manners." She kept one hand on the door frame, filling the gap. Below them, the curry house extractor fan roared and the whole stairwell smelled of cumin and hot oil. "How did you get this address?" "I bought it." "From who?" "Someone who won't sell it again." He glanced past her ear, into the flat, cataloguing. "May I come in, or shall we do this where the neighbours can enjoy it?" Ptolemy chose that moment to shoulder between her ankles, tail up, and butt his head against Lucien's shin like they were old friends. Traitor. Rory stepped back. He came in the way he came into every room — slowly, taking inventory. The kitchen table under its landslide of Eva's research, three teetering stacks of library books with the spines cracked, a scroll weighted at both ends with mugs. He set his cane against the wall, and she watched him do it, because he never let go of that cane unless he intended to stay a while. "Charming," he said. "Very much a scholar's den. The smell of the curry house or a warding effect?" "Both, if you ask Eva." She shut the door. Slid one deadbolt, then the second, then caught herself reaching for the third and left it. "She's in Prague until Thursday. Which I assume you also bought." "I assumed you'd be alone. I hoped." "Don't." "Don't hope?" "Don't do the voice." She crossed to the kettle, mostly to have somewhere to put her hands. "The one that makes everything sound like a favour you're doing me." Water hissed against the element. Behind her, the floorboards creaked, and she knew exactly how far away he was without turning — three feet, maybe less, near enough that she could smell wet wool and the cedar thing he wore. "Four months," Lucien said. "Four months and eleven days. If we're counting." "Are we?" She turned round. He had one hand in his trouser pocket, the picture of a man at ease, except for the muscle at the hinge of his jaw. The amber eye caught the kitchen light. The black one drank it. "You left me on a wet pavement in Whitechapel," she said, "with a dead man's blood on my shoes and no idea whether you were coming back." "I came back." "In February." "I came back," he repeated, quieter, "and you had already changed the locks." "I changed one lock. You could have knocked." "I did knock, Aurora." He said her whole name like it cost him something. "You were standing on the other side of the door. I heard you breathing." The kettle climbed toward the boil, filling the silence with something to listen to. She got two mugs down because her hands wanted an errand. Milk from the fridge, sniffed, judged acceptable. "You didn't say anything," she said. "You just stood there and then you went away." "What would you have had me say?" "Anything. 'Sorry.' 'I'm alive.' 'I burned the body and I'm sorry you had to see it.'" The teaspoon rang against porcelain, sharper than she meant. "You speak four languages, Luc. You'd think one of them would have a word for it." "Not one that would have survived a door between us." She set the mug down in front of him hard enough to slop tea onto Eva's notes. He didn't move to save the paper. He watched her wrist instead — the small crescent scar, white and old, where a garden gate had caught her when she was seven. "You still favour that hand," he said. "You still notice everything and say nothing about the important parts." "I notice everything," he agreed. "It's how I've stayed alive. It's also how I know you haven't slept properly in a week and there's a knife under that stack of grimoires, hilt toward the door." "Two knives." "Better." Something crossed his face that might have been pride, and she hated how warm it made her. Rory leaned back against the counter, arms folded, three feet of scuffed lino between them that felt like a border crossing. "Why are you here?" "There's a name I need to give you before someone else gives it to you badly." "That's not why you're here." He picked up the tea. Held it without drinking. "No." "Then say the real thing or take your cane and go." The extractor fan below them shuddered and cut out, and the flat dropped into a silence so sudden it felt like altitude. "You should not have been on that pavement," Lucien said. "You should not have been within a mile of it. I put you there because I wanted you close and I told myself it was because you were useful." He set the mug down. "That is the real thing. I have been carrying it about for four months and eleven days and it has not got any lighter." Rory's throat did something complicated. "I'm not a liability." "I never said—" "You did, though. Not with words." She pushed off the counter, and now she was the one closing the distance, one step, two. "You said it every time you put yourself between me and a door. Every time you decided what I could survive hearing." "You were twenty-five and human and standing in an alley with a demon's blood drying on your shoes—" "And I didn't scream. Did I." He stopped. "I didn't scream, I didn't faint, I got the plates off the van, I got us out, and then you sent me home in a cab like a girl who'd had too much wine at a party." She was near enough now to see the rain still sitting in his hair, silver on platinum. "You don't get to protect me by lying to me. Pick one." "I have never lied to you." "Omission's a dialect." His mouth moved — almost a smile, killed early. "You've been reading." "I've had four months." Lucien lifted a hand. Stopped it halfway, the way a man stops at a threshold he's been told not to cross, and then finished the motion anyway, two fingers brushing the hair back from her temple. Barely a touch. She felt it in her heels. "I don't know how to want something without deciding it needs guarding," he said. "Then learn." "That is not a small ask." "It's not a small thing I'm offering." Ptolemy jumped onto the table and sat on the wet notes, and neither of them looked at him.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:41:34.941Z" 7/25/2026, 1:41:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.581
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1142
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount608
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.82
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory4
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Lucien5
Eva2
Slid1
Water1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
5"Water"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a border crossing"
1"felt like altitude"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1146
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean17.91
std17.35
cv0.969
sampleLengths
022
134
23
339
43
52
630
724
83
969
1018
1136
127
131
142
1529
1640
174
188
192
2040
2127
223
232
2413
258
2628
2732
2815
297
3041
3110
3248
337
3411
3535
362
3718
3821
394
4016
415
4210
4311
4422
4568
465
474
483
4945
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs116
matches(empty)
23.81% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences96
ratio0.042
matches
0"He came in the way he came into every room — slowly, taking inventory."
1"Behind her, the floorboards creaked, and she knew exactly how far away he was without turning — three feet, maybe less, near enough that she could smell wet wool and the cedar thing he wore."
2"He watched her wrist instead — the small crescent scar, white and old, where a garden gate had caught her when she was seven."
3"His mouth moved — almost a smile, killed early."
94.44% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount604
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.046357615894039736
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008278145695364239
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean11.94
std9.82
cv0.822
sampleLengths
022
134
23
315
418
56
63
72
815
915
1023
111
123
1314
1427
1528
163
1715
189
1916
2011
217
221
232
2417
2512
265
2735
284
298
302
313
3225
337
345
3527
363
372
3813
398
4014
4114
4214
4311
447
456
469
477
4825
4916
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4375
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners42
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Barely a touch."
ratio0.023
33.95% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences43
matches
0"She kept one hand on"
1"He glanced past her ear,"
2"He came in the way"
3"He set his cane against"
4"She shut the door"
5"She crossed to the kettle,"
6"She turned round."
7"He had one hand in"
8"he repeated, quieter"
9"He said her whole name"
10"She got two mugs down"
11"She set the mug down"
12"He didn't move to save"
13"He watched her wrist instead"
14"He picked up the tea."
15"He set the mug down"
16"She pushed off the counter,"
17"She was near enough now"
18"His mouth moved — almost"
19"She felt it in her"
ratio0.465
41.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount36
totalSentences43
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
2"She kept one hand on"
3"He glanced past her ear,"
4"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
5"Rory stepped back."
6"He came in the way"
7"The kitchen table under its"
8"He set his cane against"
9"She shut the door"
10"She crossed to the kettle,"
11"Water hissed against the element."
12"She turned round."
13"He had one hand in"
14"The amber eye caught the"
15"The black one drank it."
16"he repeated, quieter"
17"He said her whole name"
18"The kettle climbed toward the"
19"She got two mugs down"
ratio0.837
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he repeated, quieter,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.323
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.065
83.3015%