| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.057 | |
| 86.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1481 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "deliberately" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 86.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1481 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "absolutely" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "perfect" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 1492 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "seen" | | 1 | "saying" | | 2 | "ahead" | | 3 | "through" | | 4 | "came" | | 5 | "old" | | 6 | "seam" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.54% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1239 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | December | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Eva | 10 | | July | 1 | | Warm | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | London | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 1 | | Varga | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Warm" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.975 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a photograph of somewhere she" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1492 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "held that minute" | | 1 | "noticed that the" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 34.7 | | std | 37.96 | | cv | 1.094 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 126 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 117 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 92 | | 12 | 56 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 138 | | 20 | 61 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 80 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 72 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 99 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 56 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 103 | | 38 | 69 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 46 |
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| 92.58% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "was frightened" | | 1 | "been told" | | 2 | "been made" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was wading" | | 1 | "was already looking" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Between them she could still see the park — grey grass, the sodium smear of the city beyond, a deer standing frozen with its head up, watching them go." | | 1 | "Cornflowers, foxgloves, poppies, and a hundred she had no names for — one that hung its head like a lantern and glowed with the soft, unbothered light of an ember; another that opened and closed, slowly, in time with something." | | 2 | "Not sun-warm — deeper, like the flank of a sleeping animal." | | 3 | "Rory heard it before she saw it — a sound like breath drawn through a keyhole." | | 4 | "Nyx unfolded upward into their solid shape — six foot two of silhouette, a man-shaped absence with two faint violet coals for eyes — and Rory watched them flinch." | | 5 | "The voice always arrived from a slightly different direction than the body; now it came from directly behind her ear, and she made herself not jump." | | 6 | "There was a path, or something that consented to be one — a trodden line through the flowers, wide enough for a single person, which Rory did not believe in at all until she noticed that the blooms leaned away from it, deliberately, the way people make room in a corridor." | | 7 | "There were bees in the foxgloves the size of her thumb, iridescent green-black, and they had five wings each; Rory counted twice to be sure." | | 8 | "The flowers changed — poppies giving way to something white and trumpet-shaped, growing thicker, until the path became a corridor with walls to Rory's shoulders and she couldn't see her own feet." | | 9 | "And then the flowers ended, all at once, in a circle of cropped green turf so perfect it looked mown, and the light in the clearing was moonlight — clean silver, cold, though there had been no moon in the violet sky a hundred paces back — and a woman was standing in the middle of it with her back to them, silver hair to her waist, absolutely still." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 485 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sun-warm — deeper, like" |
| | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.032989690721649485 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01443298969072165 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 14.35 | | std | 12.88 | | cv | 0.898 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 41 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 51 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 48 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 75.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.5192307692307693 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she reached inside her" | | 1 | "Twice she felt something move" | | 2 | "Once, in a hollow oak" |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She felt it in her" | | 1 | "It looked like a photograph" | | 2 | "It did not move on." | | 3 | "They went deeper." | | 4 | "She could no longer see" | | 5 | "She could no longer see" | | 6 | "She'd taken it at first" | | 7 | "It came from about forty" | | 8 | "She stepped over it." | | 9 | "It sat where three paths" | | 10 | "It hung there in her" | | 11 | "It had been warm three" | | 12 | "It wasn't anything the stone" | | 13 | "They went on." | | 14 | "She did not tell Eva." |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 88.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost gave out three" | | 1 | "She felt it in her" | | 2 | "The next, the ground under" | | 3 | "It looked like a photograph" | | 4 | "Rory turned around and forgot," | | 5 | "Acres of them, waist-high, in" | | 6 | "Cornflowers, foxgloves, poppies, and a" | | 7 | "The air was thick and" | | 8 | "It did not move on." | | 9 | "Rory crouched and put her" | | 10 | "Eva made a small strangled" | | 11 | "Nyx came through the stones" | | 12 | "Rory heard it before she" | | 13 | "The Shade had crossed the" | | 14 | "The violet light lay evenly" | | 15 | "Nyx unfolded upward into their" | | 16 | "The voice always arrived from" | | 17 | "A pause with an edge" | | 18 | "Nyx tipped their head at" | | 19 | "Eva was already looking at" |
| | ratio | 0.743 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "There was a path, or something that consented to be one — a trodden line through the flowers, wide enough for a single person, which Rory did not believe in at …" | | 1 | "Underfoot the ground rose and fell in long slow swells like a sea that had been told to stop moving and had mostly obliged, and when she looked back she could s…" |
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| 89.29% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "said Isolde Varga, without turning around," |
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| 92.86% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Eva laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |