Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR63G8G4ANCQGGSXDJY8WZ

Run Details

Duration:
56.2s
Cost:
$0.083840
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had come in sideways off Old Compton Street, and Rory shouldered through the door of the Nest with two carrier bags of Yu-Fei's food held above her head like a man fording a river. "Bar," Silas called from the back, "not the flat." "I know where the bar is." She set the bags down on the counter, and the green light off the sign outside slid across the wet shoulders of her jacket. "Duck for six, no plum sauce, because apparently your poker friends have opinions now." "Kenneth has opinions. The rest just nod." She was unknotting the plastic when the door went again, and a woman came in stamping water off a pair of heeled boots that had never been intended for weather. "God, this city," the woman said, to no one, to the room. Then she looked up. Rory's hands stopped inside the bag. The woman had a camel coat, belted, and hair the colour of good whisky where it used to be black with a streak of green through the front. Fifteen stone of confidence in a nine-stone frame. Her mouth opened, and for a second nothing came out of it, which was itself remarkable. "Aurora Carter." "Nia." "Aurora *Carter*." Nia crossed the floor with her hand out, then didn't shake, just took Rory's wrist and turned it over, thumb finding the small white crescent there like a coin in a pocket. "You still have it." "Scars are permanent. It's sort of the point." "Off the wall at your nan's. You went over the top of it because Rhys said you wouldn't." Nia let go. Her nails were the colour of a nude lipstick, filed square. "Eight years." "Seven." "Seven, then. You're counting." "I'm good with numbers." Rory pulled out the foil trays and stacked them, four, five, six. Behind her Silas had found something to polish that did not need polishing. Nia looked around the bar — at the maps furred with damp, the photographs of men in overcoats standing beside cars that no longer existed. "This is a *place*, isn't it. I'm meeting a client at half eight and I thought I'd sit somewhere with no exposed filament bulbs. Look at that. First time in years I've got something right." "You're a client-meeting person now." "Rees Hallam. Property. I do the bit where the money moves." She smiled and it was a whole thing, practised, expensive. "Don't look at me like that." "Like what?" "Like I've sold something." Nia hitched onto the stool beside the food, coat still belted. "You want a drink? I'm buying, you're — what are you, waitressing?" "Delivering." "Delivering." "Golden Empress. Wardour Street." Rory tore the receipt off the top bag and set it flat under the pepper grinder so it wouldn't lift. "Twenty minutes door to door. I'm very fast." Nia didn't say anything. She unbelted her coat, which was a way of not saying anything, and shrugged out of it, and underneath she was in a grey dress that had been chosen by a person with a mirror and time. "Two of whatever's not terrible," she said to Silas. "I'll pick," Silas said, and set the glasses down and moved to the other end of the bar with his limp doing its slow work, far enough to be gone, near enough to hear. Nia turned the glass a quarter turn without drinking. "Your dad's still at the Bar." "Silks last year." "Christ, and he told you." "My mother told me. He sent a photograph of himself in the wig." Rory finally sat, one stool's distance, coat dripping onto the boards. "I did tell him it was very fetching." "You didn't go." "There was a lunch. There were a hundred and forty barristers at the lunch. I didn't think anyone would miss the daughter who dropped out." "*I* missed you." It came out too fast and too flat, and Nia heard it herself, and drank to cover it. "That's a thing I've wanted to say for a while and it sounded better in my head." "Most things do." "You didn't leave a number." "I left a country." "You left in the middle of a *Tuesday*, Rory. Your kettle was still warm. Eva rang me and said don't ask, and I said don't be ridiculous, and she said don't *ask*, and so I didn't ask, and I've been not asking for seven years." Nia set the glass down. "So. There. I'm asking." Behind them, one of Silas' clocks made a small effortful noise. "You know already," Rory said. "I know some." "Then you know." "I want you to say it, because if you say it I'm allowed to be sorry properly, and if you don't say it I have to keep being sorry in the abstract, and it's exhausting, and honestly, Rory, it's been very bad for my skin." Nia laughed at herself, once, and it broke somewhere in the middle. "He was my cousin's mate. I brought him to the thing at the boathouse. I put a drink in his hand and I said, this is Aurora, be nice, she's clever, she'll eat you alive." "You did say that." "I remember exactly what I said. That's the trouble with me." Nia's thumb went round the rim of the glass. "You had the mark on your jaw at Bethan's twenty-first and you said hockey and I said, oh, right, hockey." "You did." "Because it was easier." "Because I'd have denied it," Rory said. "If you'd pushed, I'd have gone cold and I'd have been fine for six weeks and then I'd have stopped answering. That's what I did to Eva. Twice. She only got me out because she stopped asking questions and turned up with a van." "So it wouldn't have mattered." "I didn't say that." Rory looked at her then, straight on. "It would have mattered. It just wouldn't have worked." Nia sat with that. Somewhere out on the street a taxi laid on its horn and a group of men laughed the way men laugh in the rain, and the green sign hummed above the door. "You've changed," Rory said. "I've got a mortgage and a hairdresser." "That's not what I meant." "I know what you meant." Nia straightened a fork that didn't need straightening. "I used to be the brave one. Do you remember? I got us into Clwb at sixteen. I told your father to his face that pre-law would kill you, at his own table, over his own lamb." "You did." "And then the one time it counted I said *oh, right, hockey*, and went and got another drink." She looked up. "Now I'm the person who makes money move. It's a very clean job. Nobody bleeds." Rory reached over and took Nia's glass, and drank from it, and put it back down in the wet ring it had left. "That was mine." "You weren't using it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.328
leniency0.657
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count4
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1151
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"remarkable"
count1
highlights
0"remarkable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1153
ratio0.007
matches
0"Carter"
1"place"
2"I"
3"Tuesday"
4"ask"
5"oh, right, hockey"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount531
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Old1
Compton1
Street1
Rory11
Nest1
Yu-Fei1
Nia13
Silas4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Nia"
3"Silas"
places
0"Old"
1"Compton"
2"Street"
globalScore0.276
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences27
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1153
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.22
std19.59
cv1.019
sampleLengths
036
19
244
37
430
516
66
752
82
91
1038
118
1234
131
144
1529
1660
175
1827
192
2027
211
221
2332
2441
259
2634
2715
283
295
3032
313
3225
3338
343
355
364
3754
3811
395
403
413
4292
434
4440
452
464
4751
485
4920
87.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences39
matches
0"been intended"
1"been chosen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs92
matches
0"was unknotting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences84
ratio0.012
matches
0"Nia looked around the bar — at the maps furred with damp, the photographs of men in overcoats standing beside cars that no longer existed."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount674
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.037091988130563795
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00741839762611276
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.73
std12.65
cv0.921
sampleLengths
036
19
230
314
47
530
612
74
86
928
108
1116
122
131
1434
154
168
1721
1811
192
201
214
2216
2313
2425
2535
265
2721
286
292
3015
3112
321
331
3424
358
364
3737
389
3934
409
416
423
435
4424
458
463
4725
4821
4917
76.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences36
matches
0"Then she looked up."
1"Somewhere out on the street"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences36
matches
0"She set the bags down"
1"She was unknotting the plastic"
2"Her mouth opened, and for"
3"Her nails were the colour"
4"She smiled and it was"
5"She unbelted her coat, which"
6"she said to Silas"
7"It came out too fast"
8"She looked up"
ratio0.25
29.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences36
matches
0"The rain had come in"
1"Silas called from the back"
2"She set the bags down"
3"She was unknotting the plastic"
4"the woman said, to no"
5"Rory's hands stopped inside the"
6"The woman had a camel"
7"Her mouth opened, and for"
8"Nia crossed the floor with"
9"Nia let go"
10"Her nails were the colour"
11"Rory pulled out the foil"
12"Nia looked around the bar"
13"She smiled and it was"
14"Nia hitched onto the stool"
15"Rory tore the receipt off"
16"Nia didn't say anything."
17"She unbelted her coat, which"
18"she said to Silas"
19"Silas said, and set the"
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She unbelted her coat, which was a way of not saying anything, and shrugged out of it, and underneath she was in a grey dress that had been chosen by a person w…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nia laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences67
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.239
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.03
89.0067%