Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR6F9Q89MM2JNXEG044KDV

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1m 3s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stairwell smelled of iron and cold water, which was wrong for August. Quinn took the steps down slowly, one hand off the rail, her torch beam sliding over tile the colour of old teeth. Sixty-eight feet of Victorian brickwork between her and the noise of Camden High Street, and by the fortieth step the noise had stopped entirely. No traffic. No sirens. Just her boots and the drip. "Mind the ninth one from the bottom," a voice called up. "It's got a wobble on it." "Prewitt." "Guv." Detective Sergeant Ollie Prewitt stood on the platform in a paper suit two sizes too generous, hood down, hair stuck flat to his forehead. He held a clipboard like a shield. "You didn't have to come out. It's a body in a hole in the ground. We've got four of those a year." "Where is he?" "She. Northbound end, past the tunnel mouth." Prewitt fell in beside her. "Female, mid-thirties, no ID, no phone. Some kid with a GoPro found her at half four this morning, then had a crisis of conscience and rang it in from a chicken shop on Kentish Town Road. He's in the van, crying." Quinn stepped out onto the platform and let the torch travel. The station had been sealed since 1924. She'd read that on the drive over, on her phone, at a red light — South Camden, closed for low passenger numbers, the surface building converted to a sandwich shop, the shafts capped, the lift wells filled with rubble. Ninety-nine years of nothing. There should have been a carpet of dust on the platform thick enough to leave a bootprint like wet plaster. There was dust. But it lay in a strange geography, and Quinn stood at the tunnel mouth for a long moment looking at it. "Blood's minimal," Prewitt said. "There's the story right there. No arterial spray, no drag marks, nothing under her fingernails. She came down here to use, she used, her heart packed in. Happens all the time in the deep shelters. We had one in Aldwych in March." "How did she get in?" "Vent shaft on Buck Street. Grille's been cut and re-hung so it looks intact — the urbex lot do it all the time, they call it a soft lock." He tapped the clipboard. "Explorers, guv. She'll be on somebody's forum with a username." "Show me her hands." The body lay on her side in the recovery position, which was the first thing that made Quinn's jaw tighten. Nobody dies neatly. People die in the shapes their last few seconds allow — sprawled, folded, one arm trapped behind the back. This woman lay with her knees drawn up and her cheek resting on her own forearm, hair swept off her face. Quinn crouched. She didn't touch anything. She never did, not first. "Skin's cold," Prewitt offered. "Pathologist reckons ten, twelve hours." "Lividity's in her shoulder and her upper arm." "Right. She's on her side." "She's on her left side. The pooling's in her right." Quinn moved her torch along the line of the body, slow as a scanner. "She spent the first four hours after death lying on her right, somewhere else, and then someone rolled her over and arranged her here. Look at her collar." Prewitt leaned in. "It's tucked." "Someone tucked it. Someone straightened her jumper, put her hair back, and folded her hands." Quinn's beam settled on the woman's boots. "Now tell me about those." "They're boots." "They're clean, Prewitt." He stopped. He looked at his own paper overshoes, grey to the ankle, then at the sole of the dead woman's right boot — the tread packed with nothing at all. No brick dust, no rust flakes, no ninety-nine years of tunnel silt. "She could've been carried," he said. "Sixty-eight steps and a cut grille. Carried by whom? Where are their prints?" Quinn stood and swung the torch out across the platform. "Answer me that first, then answer me this." The beam picked out the floor between the tiled wall and the platform edge. In that strip of ground the dust had been scuffed to a polish — thousands of overlapping impressions, feet on feet on feet, the way the concourse at Euston looked after a wet rush hour. Boots, bare soles, something with three toes and a heel like a horse's. The traffic ran the length of the platform, a broad churned river of it. And it stopped. Nine feet from the wall at the northbound end, the churn ended in a line so clean it might have been drawn with a straight edge. Beyond that line: undisturbed dust, ninety-nine years of it, soft as fur. "Well," Prewitt said, "that's the vent shaft crowd, isn't it. They come down here for raves. There's probably a hundred kids been through in the last month." "A hundred kids who all walk up to that wall, turn around and walk out again, and none of whom step in the last nine feet of the platform." "Maybe there's a drop. A hole." "There isn't." Quinn walked the line. She kept her boots on the clean side, out of habit, out of respect, and let the torch rake the wall. Old advertising tile, cracked, a ghost of a hand-painted arrow. And low down, at knee height, a mark in chalk — not graffiti, no tag, no signature. Two arcs and a bisecting stroke, drawn with the deliberate slowness of someone who'd done it a thousand times. Fresh chalk. It smudged under her breath. "Prewitt. Get SOCO to photograph and lift this." "Lift a chalk drawing?" "Yes." He wrote it down, mouth pressed thin, the way he did when he was banking a complaint for later. Quinn came back to the body and crouched again, and this time she took a pen from her jacket and used the barrel of it to open the dead woman's right hand. The fingers had gone stiff around something, and the something had pressed a shape into the palm. Bone. A flat oval of it, yellowed, no bigger than a fifty-pence piece, drilled through at one end and carved with the same two arcs and bisecting stroke as the wall. "Token of some kind," Prewitt said. "Club entry? There's a place on the canal does bone jewellery." "Her nails are manicured. Her jumper's cashmere. She's wearing a wedding ring worth more than my car." Quinn tilted the token with the pen so the light caught the carving. "Women like this don't come to South Camden at midnight for a rave. They come because they've got an appointment." Something in the woman's coat pocket clicked when Quinn's pen touched the fabric. She eased the pocket open. Brass, green with verdigris, the size of a pocket watch. A compass, its face crowded with etched marks — the same alphabet as the chalk, the same as the bone. Quinn turned the casing so the needle sat free. The needle didn't find north. It swung a slow half-circle, hunted, and settled hard, pointing at the blank wall nine feet away. Quinn held it up. Turned her wrist ninety degrees. The needle held its bearing on the wall, quivering like a dog on a scent. "Compass is knackered," Prewitt said. "All that iron in the rails." "The rails are behind me." "Guv—" "Three years ago," Quinn said, and her voice came out flat and low, "DS Morris walked into a stairwell at Brompton Road and he came out with his hair gone white and no memory of six hours. There was chalk on his sleeve." She closed the compass. "Two arcs and a stroke. I've got the photograph in a box under my desk." Prewitt said nothing. Quinn looked from the tidy body to the tidemark of footprints, to the fresh chalk, to the nine feet of dust that a thousand feet had refused to cross. "They didn't come in through the vent," she said. "They came out of that wall. And she was the only one who came out of it dead."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.362
leniency0.723
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1337
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1337
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"churned"
count1
1
word"churn"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"churned"
1"churn"
2"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1344
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount839
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
August1
Victorian1
Camden2
High1
Street1
Detective1
Sergeant1
Ollie1
Prewitt9
Quinn16
South1
Euston1
persons
0"Sergeant"
1"Ollie"
2"Prewitt"
3"Quinn"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Euston"
globalScore0.546
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1344
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean25.36
std22.14
cv0.873
sampleLengths
013
156
217
31
454
53
653
711
870
924
1046
115
1243
134
1463
1511
169
178
185
1952
205
2127
222
233
2443
256
2631
2776
283
2938
3027
3129
326
3380
348
354
361
3719
3849
3931
4017
4150
4213
4344
4422
4524
4611
475
481
4962
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"been sealed"
1"been scuffed"
2"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences102
ratio0.059
matches
0"She'd read that on the drive over, on her phone, at a red light — South Camden, closed for low passenger numbers, the surface building converted to a sandwich shop, the shafts capped, the lift wells filled with rubble."
1"People die in the shapes their last few seconds allow — sprawled, folded, one arm trapped behind the back."
2"He looked at his own paper overshoes, grey to the ankle, then at the sole of the dead woman's right boot — the tread packed with nothing at all."
3"In that strip of ground the dust had been scuffed to a polish — thousands of overlapping impressions, feet on feet on feet, the way the concourse at Euston looked after a wet rush hour."
4"And low down, at knee height, a mark in chalk — not graffiti, no tag, no signature."
5"A compass, its face crowded with etched marks — the same alphabet as the chalk, the same as the bone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount840
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.017857142857142856
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0035714285714285713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.18
std10.8
cv0.82
sampleLengths
013
122
224
32
42
56
611
76
81
925
107
1122
123
1312
1441
1511
167
1739
184
1920
203
2121
224
2342
245
2533
2610
274
2820
293
3019
3121
322
334
345
354
365
378
385
3924
4028
413
422
4322
445
452
463
472
4829
4912
86.27% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5588235294117647
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners57
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"Just her boots and the"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences59
matches
0"He held a clipboard like"
1"She'd read that on the"
2"He tapped the clipboard"
3"She didn't touch anything."
4"She never did, not first."
5"He looked at his own"
6"She kept her boots on"
7"It smudged under her breath."
8"He wrote it down, mouth"
9"She eased the pocket open."
10"It swung a slow half-circle,"
ratio0.186
87.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences59
matches
0"The stairwell smelled of iron"
1"Quinn took the steps down"
2"a voice called up"
3"Detective Sergeant Ollie Prewitt stood"
4"He held a clipboard like"
5"Prewitt fell in beside her"
6"Quinn stepped out onto the"
7"The station had been sealed"
8"She'd read that on the"
9"There should have been a"
10"He tapped the clipboard"
11"The body lay on her"
12"Nobody dies neatly."
13"People die in the shapes"
14"This woman lay with her"
15"She didn't touch anything."
16"She never did, not first."
17"Quinn moved her torch along"
18"Prewitt leaned in."
19"Quinn's beam settled on the"
ratio0.746
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Two arcs and a bisecting stroke, drawn with the deliberate slowness of someone who'd done it a thousand times."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.298
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.6741%