"A stag lifted its head as they passed — a great grey ruin of a thing, antlers furred with moss — and watched them with an attention that Aurora didn't like."
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"Nine trunks of oak, thick as barrels, standing in a rough ring on the crown of the slope — not trees, because they had no branches and no bark, only grain like grey silk, worn smooth and hard as stone by a wind that hadn't blown here in centuries."
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"Aurora had one foot in Richmond Park, with a plane grinding somewhere overhead towards Heathrow and a dog barking a field away, and then her other foot came down and all of it was gone — not muffled, not faded, gone, snipped off clean as a thread."
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"Not a meadow — a riot."
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"There was light — golden, generous, coming from everywhere and nothing, the light of six o'clock on a July evening — but the sky was a soft depthless white, and when she looked up too long she had the sudden vertiginous sense that she was looking down."
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"Not fallen — arranged, the ribs opened out flat in a fan, the small skull set upright in the centre facing uphill, every vertebra spaced an even finger-width from the next."
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"Jennifer Carter, calling up the stairs of a house in Cardiff, that exact fond exasperated lilt on the second syllable — *Aurora* — and Aurora's whole body turned towards it before her mind caught up and slammed the door."
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"The stream turned, and the roses gave way, and ahead of them the flowers had been pressed flat into a path — a clear, curving path of bent grass leading up between two more oaks, and the grass was rising slowly behind whoever had made it, blade by blade, standing itself back up as though nothing had passed."
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"Nine trunks of oak, thick as barrels, standing in a rough ring on the crown of the slope — not trees, because they had no branches and no bark, only grain like …"
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"Bluebells rubbing shoulders with foxgloves that had no business in the same month, poppies, cow parsley, wild roses, snowdrops pushing up through them all as if…"
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"She knelt and held her palm an inch above the surface and felt the cold coming off it and wanted, with a want that arrived from somewhere else entirely and sat …"
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"A hawthorn hung with hundreds of ribbons, silk and wool and one strip of yellow polyester that had certainly come off a hi-vis vest, all of them faded, all of t…"
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"The stream turned, and the roses gave way, and ahead of them the flowers had been pressed flat into a path — a clear, curving path of bent grass leading up betw…"