Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR785F17TD2NX3S8A37SGH

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Duration:
54.2s
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$0.074785
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck. Rory shouldered the door while she worked it, swearing under her breath at the cheap brass, and when it finally gave she was already halfway through an apology to whoever from the curry house downstairs had come up to complain about Ptolemy howling at four in the morning. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing with rain in his hair. Not slicked back. That was the first thing she noticed — the platinum blond fell loose over his forehead, darkened at the ends, and a drop of water hung off his jaw like it had been waiting there for permission. Charcoal suit soaked through at the shoulders. Cane in his left hand, tip resting against the skirting board. "You're not the delivery boy," she said. "I passed him on the stairs. He asked me to tell you the sag aloo is on the house." Lucien's mouth moved, not quite a smile. "I told him you'd finished with free things." "Did you." "It seemed accurate." Rory didn't move out of the doorway. Behind her the kettle clicked off, and the flat breathed out its usual fug of cumin and old paper. Eva's research had colonised the hall table, the shoe rack, the top of the radiator. Somewhere under it all, Ptolemy started grumbling. "Four months," she said. "Four months and eleven days." "You counted." "I count everything. It's how I stay useful." He shifted his weight, and she caught the flinch he tried to bury in it — right leg, high up, the hitch of a man who'd learned a new way to stand. "You're leaning on that thing properly now," she said. "You used to carry it like a prop." "Yes." "That happen in Avaros?" "It happened on the way back." He looked past her, into the flat, and something in his face changed — went smoother, which was worse. "May I come in, Aurora?" "Nobody calls me that." "I do." Rain hammered the skylight over the stairwell. She thought about the last time she'd seen him: the back of his coat, the wet street outside Silas' bar, the way he'd said *it's better if you don't know* with the absolute calm of a man closing a ledger. She'd thrown a glass. He hadn't ducked. That was the part that still got under her ribs — he'd stood there and let it break against the wall behind him, because he'd already decided what she was owed. She stepped back. He came in slowly, hooking the cane over his forearm to ease the door shut behind him, and she watched him take inventory of the room the way he took inventory of everything. Three deadbolts, noted. Salt line along the window, noted. The kitchen knife on the coffee table next to a mug of cold tea, definitely noted. "You've been sleeping out here," he said. "Eva snores." "Eva's been in Prague since Tuesday." Rory turned. "How do you know that?" "Because I put her on the train." He set the cane against the arm of the sofa. "She asked me not to tell you. She thought you'd take it as interference." "It *is* interference." "It's both." He peeled off his jacket, and the shirt underneath clung, and she made herself look at the bookcase instead. "She also asked me to check on you, which I have been doing from the pavement for the last three nights, and which is, I'm told, the sort of thing that gets a man arrested in this country." "Three nights." Her voice came out flatter than she wanted. "You've been standing outside for three nights." "There's a doorway across from the curry house. Reasonable sightlines." "You could have knocked." "I could have." "So why now?" Lucien looked at her then — properly, both eyes, amber and black, and the black one always felt like the one doing the actual seeing. "Because it rained," he said. "And I discovered I'm no longer the sort of man who can stand in it." Ptolemy chose that moment to arrive, shouldering out from under an armchair, and went straight for Lucien's shins with the enthusiasm of a traitor. Lucien bent — carefully, weight on the good leg — and let the cat headbutt his knuckles. "Even the cat," Rory said. "The cat has no principles." "The cat has *excellent* principles. He bit Silas." "Silas deserves it." Lucien straightened. Water ran from his hair down his neck and disappeared into his collar, and Rory's whole body registered it, uninvited, a small hot flare behind her sternum that she resented on sight. Four months. Eleven days. Apparently the body kept its own ledger. She went to the airing cupboard and threw a towel at his chest. He caught it one-handed. "Dry off," she said. "Then say whatever it is." "There's a great deal of it." "Start with the worst." He didn't dry off. He held the towel and stood there in her friend's cramped hall with rain pooling on the lino, and said, "The reason I didn't tell you what your ex-husband's family paid for your name — " "He wasn't my husband." " — the reason wasn't protection." He said it evenly. "I want that clear before anything else. I told myself it was protection. It was leverage. If you didn't know what you were worth, you'd stay where I could reach you." The kettle ticked as it cooled. Rory found she'd folded her arms without deciding to. "Say that again," she said. "I used your ignorance to keep you close." He met her eyes. "I'm a broker, Aurora. I don't know another way to hold on to a thing except by owning the information about it. I'm telling you now because in Avaros I had eleven days in a room with no light and nothing to trade, and I found out what I am when the trading stops." "And what's that?" "Someone who thinks about you," he said, "in a way that has no market value at all." She laughed — one sharp note, nothing funny in it. "That's a hell of a line." "It's not a line. Lines are shorter." He finally lifted the towel to his face, dragged it back through his hair, and when he lowered it the platinum stood up in ridiculous soft spikes, and he looked thirty-two and human and tired. "You threw a glass at me." "I missed on purpose." "You didn't." "No," she admitted. "I didn't." "Good." Something eased at the corner of his mouth. "I'd hate to think you'd gone soft." Rory crossed to the coffee table, moved the knife two inches to the left, and stopped with her back to him because it was easier to say things to a wall of Eva's stacked grimoires. "You don't get to come here and be honest at me," she said. "You had four months. You had the whole night in the bar. You could've said one true sentence and I'd have — " She stopped. "You'd have what?" "Don't." "Aurora." "I said don't." She turned. He hadn't moved closer. That was the infuriating part, how he held his ground and let her come to the edge of it herself, every single time. "You want the receipt? Fine. I'd have stayed. I'd have said stay. I stood in that street for twenty minutes after you walked off, in February, like an idiot, waiting for you to come back and be a person about it." The rain filled the silence for them. "I went back," Lucien said. "At two. You'd gone up." "You didn't knock." "No." He turned the towel over in his hands. "I've been standing outside your doors for a long time. I'm told it's a pattern."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.389
leniency0.778
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1274
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
99.57% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords8
totalWords1288
ratio0.006
matches
0"it's better if you don't know"
1"is"
2"excellent"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount724
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Moreau1
Lucien7
Rory7
Rain1
Water1
Eva2
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
4"Rain"
5"Water"
6"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile"
1"felt like the one doing the actual seei"
2"Apparently the body kept its o"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1288
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean19.22
std21.12
cv1.099
sampleLengths
053
111
258
37
434
52
63
748
84
95
102
1140
1217
131
144
1530
164
172
1885
193
2058
217
222
236
247
2531
263
2759
2817
2910
304
313
323
3345
3441
355
365
378
3848
3917
409
416
424
4340
444
4541
4615
475
4866
493
99.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"was owed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences111
ratio0.063
matches
0"That was the first thing she noticed — the platinum blond fell loose over his forehead, darkened at the ends, and a drop of water hung off his jaw like it had been waiting there for permission."
1"\"I count everything. It's how I stay useful.\" He shifted his weight, and she caught the flinch he tried to bury in it — right leg, high up, the hitch of a man who'd learned a new way to stand."
2"\"It happened on the way back.\" He looked past her, into the flat, and something in his face changed — went smoother, which was worse."
3"That was the part that still got under her ribs — he'd stood there and let it break against the wall behind him, because he'd already decided what she was owed."
4"Lucien looked at her then — properly, both eyes, amber and black, and the black one always felt like the one doing the actual seeing."
5"Lucien bent — carefully, weight on the good leg — and let the cat headbutt his knuckles."
6"She laughed — one sharp note, nothing funny in it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount595
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.021848739495798318
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033613445378151263
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.6
std11.91
cv1.027
sampleLengths
05
148
211
33
437
57
611
77
826
98
102
113
127
1319
1415
157
164
175
182
1940
209
218
221
234
2425
255
264
272
287
2940
304
313
3231
333
3433
353
366
3716
387
392
406
412
425
4317
4414
453
4621
4738
4810
497
55.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3963963963963964
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"Somewhere under it all, Ptolemy"
1"Apparently the body kept its"
ratio0.042
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences48
matches
0"He shifted his weight, and"
1"He looked past her, into"
2"She thought about the last"
3"She'd thrown a glass."
4"He hadn't ducked."
5"She stepped back."
6"He came in slowly, hooking"
7"He set the cane against"
8"He peeled off his jacket,"
9"Her voice came out flatter"
10"She went to the airing"
11"He caught it one-handed."
12"He didn't dry off."
13"He held the towel and"
14"He said it evenly"
15"He met her eyes"
16"She laughed — one sharp"
17"He finally lifted the towel"
18"He hadn't moved closer."
19"He turned the towel over"
ratio0.417
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences48
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck."
1"Rory shouldered the door while"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"That was the first thing"
4"Charcoal suit soaked through at"
5"Cane in his left hand,"
6"Lucien's mouth moved, not quite"
7"Rory didn't move out of"
8"Eva's research had colonised the"
9"He shifted his weight, and"
10"He looked past her, into"
11"She thought about the last"
12"She'd thrown a glass."
13"He hadn't ducked."
14"That was the part that"
15"She stepped back."
16"He came in slowly, hooking"
17"Salt line along the window,"
18"The kitchen knife on the"
19"He set the cane against"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien's mouth moved, not quite a smile"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences72
tagDensity0.181
leniency0.361
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.028
83.6993%