Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCR8ATE6ZGQQ3B213J32CCD

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Duration:
1m 3s
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$0.094500
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Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain across the gate at Buck Street still held its padlock, and the padlock still held eighty years of rust — Quinn could see the seam of it, orange and unbroken, where the shackle met the body. She crouched, put her torch on it, and turned the beam sideways so the shadows raked out. "Nobody's touched this," she said. "Fire brigade cut the side door." DI Callum Beattie stood behind her with his hands in his coat pockets, breathing steam. "They came in that way. So did I, so did you, so did the kids who left this poor sod down there." "Which kids?" "The kids who always get in. Urban explorers. Photographers. Ket in the tunnels, always has been." He nodded at the stairwell mouth, the tiled throat of it going down into black. "You'll see." She saw. The stairs were an inch deep in dust that had gone the colour of pencil lead, and the dust carried footprints — the fire brigade's boots, the paramedics' treads, the crime scene manager's neat overshoes going down in a single disciplined file along the left-hand wall the way she'd taught them all to do. Nothing else. No trainers. No bike tyres. No dragged heels. "Down here." Beattie's voice bounced. "Mind the third step, it's gone." The platform ran off into dark in both directions, curved, tiled cream and oxblood, and it smelled of wet chalk and copper. Halfway along, in a pool of arc-light the SOCOs had rigged off a generator, a young man sat with his back against the wall and his legs straight out in front of him like a child on a beach. Quinn stopped ten feet short. Male, mid-twenties. Denim jacket, dark jeans, grey T-shirt. Hands turned palm-up in his lap. Head tipped back against the tiles, mouth slightly open, eyes open too, and the whites had gone the colour of skimmed milk. No blood. No wound she could see. Frost on his eyelashes, still, in a station that sat at eleven degrees. "Tox screen'll take three weeks," Beattie said. "But I'd put my house on it. He's come down here with mates, they've taken something dirty, he's gone into arrest, they've panicked and legged it. Happens twice a year somewhere on this network." "He's got no bag." "They took it." "His jacket's zipped." Beattie looked at her. "Somebody in arrest goes down thrashing," Quinn said. "They tear at their own collar. Somebody's mates hauling them upright, dragging, trying CPR — the jacket rides, the shirt comes untucked, the hem gets fists in it." She moved closer, careful, keeping to the taped path the CSM had laid. "His shirt's tucked. Both sides. The collar's flat. There isn't a crease in him from the neck down except the ones he ironed." "So they didn't try CPR. That's a charge, not a mystery." "Look at his shoes." Beattie crouched with a grunt. Quinn watched him look, and watched the moment he refused to see it. The soles of the man's white trainers were white. Not clean-ish. Not scuffed grey. White, with the little factory nubs still on the tread, and the dust of the platform lay right up against them in an unbroken skin, undisturbed, the way snow lies against a fencepost. "He was carried," Beattie said. "By whom? Show me their feet." The dust around the body was a page nobody had written on. Quinn tracked it out with her torch — six feet, eight, twelve — and found the CSM's overshoe prints, the wheel-track of the light stand, and then nothing. Nothing between the body and the stairwell. Nothing between the body and either mouth of the tunnel. She walked the whole taped corridor to the platform's south end, put her light down the tunnel, saw rail bed stripped for scrap and a puddle skinned with rust, and came back. "Ventilation shaft," Beattie said. "Camden's riddled. He drops through, breaks his neck—" "There's no shaft above him. There's an advert." She tipped her torch up. A poster, glued and layered and fossilised, a woman in a headscarf recommending Bovril, 1948 or thereabouts, and above that the curved ceiling, tiled, whole, no hatch, no grille, no hole, no water stain. "And he hasn't broken his neck. He's sitting like he was put on a shelf." "Harlow." Beattie stood up, knees clicking. "I've got a DCI who wants a line for the morning meeting, and the line is drugs. It's tidy, it's true nine times in ten, and it means we don't spend a fortnight—" "Ask the CSM to lift the light." "What?" "The light. Have him bring it down to a foot off the floor and swing it across the dust, left to right, slow." The CSM did it without asking why, which was one of the reasons Quinn liked him. The arc-lamp came down, the shadows lengthened, and the platform floor stopped being flat. There was an arc in the dust. It started at the wall about four feet to the left of the dead man's shoulder, swept out across the platform in a long clean curve nearly six feet deep, and came back to the wall five feet to his right. Inside the arc, the dust was thin and combed. Outside it, thick and soft. The edge of it stood up in a low ridge, the way grit ridges at the bottom of a door that's been opened and shut a hundred times. Nobody said anything for a moment. The generator hummed. "Draught," Beattie said. "From where? The gate's sealed and the tunnels are full of dead air, I've just been stood in it." Quinn walked the arc's outer edge, torch low. "That's a swing. That's the sweep of something big opening inwards and closing again. And there's no door in that wall." "There's no door in that wall," Beattie agreed, slowly, as if the repetition would make it lie down. Quinn crouched by the ridge and looked at the tiles where the arc met them. The glaze had crazed in a fan of hairlines, and the grout between three of the tiles was scorched — not smoke-black, but bleached, the pale brown of paper held near a flame. She pressed a gloved finger to it. Cold. Colder than the air, colder than the rail. Then she turned her light on the dead man's hands. Palm-up, fingers loose, and in the right one, sitting in the cup of it, a small brass compass. Verdigris crawling the casing like lichen. Sigils cut into the face, tiny, deliberate, not letters from any alphabet the Met had a form for. The needle was moving. Not settling — moving, a slow constant crawl, round and round, refusing to stop anywhere at all. "Photograph that in situ," Quinn said. "Every angle. And the ring." "What ring?" She swept the beam in a circle round the body, and it picked out what the flat overhead light had washed away: moths. Two dozen of them, maybe more, wings folded, laid out in a ring three feet across with the young man at its centre, every one of them dead and dry and perfectly spaced, like beads on a string somebody had lifted away. Quinn's own watch, the worn leather one, had stopped at 4:07. So had his.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount843
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.19
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Beattie"
discoveredNames
Buck1
Street1
Quinn10
Callum1
Beattie10
Bovril1
Met1
persons
0"Buck"
1"Street"
2"Quinn"
3"Beattie"
4"Met"
places(empty)
globalScore0.907
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.823
wordCount1215
matches
0"not smoke-black, but bleached, the pale brown of paper held near a flame"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean28.26
std26.87
cv0.951
sampleLengths
055
15
243
32
433
566
611
761
85
956
1041
114
123
133
144
1572
1611
174
1818
1947
205
216
2289
2312
2462
2539
267
271
2823
2930
3090
319
323
3348
3418
3564
3610
3763
3811
392
4065
4111
423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs128
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences91
ratio0.055
matches
0"The chain across the gate at Buck Street still held its padlock, and the padlock still held eighty years of rust — Quinn could see the seam of it, orange and unbroken, where the shackle met the body."
1"The stairs were an inch deep in dust that had gone the colour of pencil lead, and the dust carried footprints — the fire brigade's boots, the paramedics' treads, the crime scene manager's neat overshoes going down in a single disciplined file along the left-hand wall the way she'd taught them all to do."
2"Quinn tracked it out with her torch — six feet, eight, twelve — and found the CSM's overshoe prints, the wheel-track of the light stand, and then nothing."
3"The glaze had crazed in a fan of hairlines, and the grout between three of the tiles was scorched — not smoke-black, but bleached, the pale brown of paper held near a flame."
4"Not settling — moving, a slow constant crawl, round and round, refusing to stop anywhere at all."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount350
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.02857142857142857
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean13.35
std12.13
cv0.908
sampleLengths
038
117
25
321
422
52
631
72
82
954
102
112
123
133
145
156
1622
1739
185
192
206
216
2222
232
245
2513
267
2734
284
293
303
314
328
3341
3423
3511
364
375
3813
399
402
413
4233
435
446
4512
4628
477
4810
4932
89.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5824175824175825
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners53
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Then she turned her light"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences56
matches
0"She crouched, put her torch"
1"He nodded at the stairwell"
2"She moved closer, careful, keeping"
3"She walked the whole taped"
4"She tipped her torch up"
5"It started at the wall"
6"She pressed a gloved finger"
7"She swept the beam in"
ratio0.143
93.93% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences56
matches
0"The chain across the gate"
1"She crouched, put her torch"
2"He nodded at the stairwell"
3"The stairs were an inch"
4"Beattie's voice bounced"
5"The platform ran off into"
6"Halfway along, in a pool"
7"Quinn stopped ten feet short."
8"Denim jacket, dark jeans, grey"
9"Hands turned palm-up in his"
10"Head tipped back against the"
11"Beattie looked at her."
12"She moved closer, careful, keeping"
13"Beattie crouched with a grunt."
14"Quinn watched him look, and"
15"The soles of the man's"
16"The dust around the body"
17"Quinn tracked it out with"
18"Nothing between the body and"
19"Nothing between the body and"
ratio0.732
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Beattie stood up, knees clicking"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Beattie agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.056
90.2499%