| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said faintly [faintly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.765 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 89.80% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
|
| | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "deliberately" |
| |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 83.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1471 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "footfall" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulse" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1484 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "this" | | 1 | "that" | | 2 | "acknowledgement" | | 3 | "watch" | | 4 | "out of" |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1225 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | December | 2 | | Aurora | 15 | | Ahead | 1 | | Thames | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Eva | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | London | 1 | | Kew | 1 | | Further | 1 | | Oyster | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "December" | | 3 | "Thames" | | 4 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.888 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 27.05% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like calling the Thames a puddle" | | 1 | "as though listening to something at the centre of the ring" | | 2 | "felt like walking through a slow wave," |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.674 | | wordCount | 1484 | | matches | | 0 | "not through the air but somewhere behind Aurora's ear, a whisper carried on a wind" |
| |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 30.29 | | std | 30.76 | | cv | 1.016 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 96 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 57 | | 9 | 45 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 66 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 66 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 75 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 97 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 111 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 98 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 72 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 39 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 52 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 46 |
| |
| 97.29% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "was crouched" | | 1 | "was hung" |
| |
| 5.07% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't blowing" | | 1 | "was standing" | | 2 | "was turning" | | 3 | "wasn't running" | | 4 | "was running" |
| |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.103 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora noticed it because she'd been watching her own breath — great grey plumes of it, the only warm thing in Richmond Park at four in the afternoon in December — and then, mid-step, there was nothing." | | 1 | "Now they were closer to pillars — bark gone silver-grey and smooth as poured stone, branches lopped or fallen away centuries ago, each trunk leaning inward as though listening to something at the centre of the ring." | | 2 | "From the shoulder to the left hand, Nyx was solid — a tall dark shape with the density of a man, edges holding, the faint violet coals of their eyes fixed on the clearing beyond." | | 3 | "The crimson gem lay in her palm with its inner glow banked down to nothing, cold as a coin left out overnight — colder, in fact, than the December air had any right to make it, and getting colder the closer she brought it to the stones." | | 4 | "It was full — crowded — the way a cathedral is quiet." | | 5 | "The light came from everywhere at once and cast no proper shadows; her own lay beneath her like spilled water, vague at the edges." | | 6 | "Foxglove, waist-high, spires of them, and behind that a drift of bluebells that had no business existing within four months of bluebells, and behind *that* — flowers Aurora had no words for." | | 7 | "The air was warm and thick and smelled of cut grass, crushed blackcurrant, and underneath both a dry spice she couldn't place — cardamom, maybe, or the dust off an old book." | | 8 | "It sat in the grass, mossless, grey, roughly the size of a car bonnet — and someone had worn hollows into its face." | | 9 | "Ribbons, first — hundreds, rotted to threads." | | 10 | "Aurora caught her wrist — her own crescent scar white against Eva's dark skin — and Eva blinked at her own hand as though it had moved without her." |
| |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 454 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.028634361233480177 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00881057268722467 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 13.87 | | std | 11.84 | | cv | 0.854 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 50 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 35 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
| |
| 70.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.5046728971962616 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Just wet grass, and the" | | 1 | "Then the light changed and" | | 2 | "Further on, a hawthorn stood" | | 3 | "Then a leather bootlace." |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "They had been trees once." | | 1 | "Their voice arrived the way" | | 2 | "They looked at their own" | | 3 | "She'd worn the Heartstone for" | | 4 | "It was never entirely still." | | 5 | "It was still now." | | 6 | "It was full — crowded" | | 7 | "They went deeper." | | 8 | "It sat in the grass," |
| | ratio | 0.12 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost gave out three" | | 1 | "Aurora noticed it because she'd" | | 2 | "Eva had stopped behind her," | | 3 | "They had been trees once." | | 4 | "Ivy had tried to climb" | | 5 | "The ivy lay at their" | | 6 | "Nyx stood between two of" | | 7 | "That was the only way" | | 8 | "Everything on the far side" | | 9 | "Their voice arrived the way" | | 10 | "The smoke gathered itself, condensed," | | 11 | "They looked at their own" | | 12 | "The violet eyes lifted" | | 13 | "Eva said faintly" | | 14 | "Aurora reached under her collar" | | 15 | "She'd worn the Heartstone for" | | 16 | "It was never entirely still." | | 17 | "It was still now." | | 18 | "The crimson gem lay in" | | 19 | "Nyx stepped through" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they were closer to" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 20.91% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Now they were closer to pillars — bark gone silver-grey and smooth as poured stone, branches lopped or fallen away centuries ago, each trunk leaning inward as t…" | | 1 | "Aurora looked for it and found instead a sky the colour of the inside of an oyster shell, pearl and lilac and faintly moving, as though very high up something e…" | | 2 | "The clearing ran downhill for perhaps forty yards and then stopped in a way that made her eyes hurt to follow, the far treeline soft and unfinished, a painting …" | | 3 | "Foxglove, waist-high, spires of them, and behind that a drift of bluebells that had no business existing within four months of bluebells, and behind *that* — fl…" | | 4 | "Something with petals like flakes of mica that chimed when the air stirred them." | | 5 | "Aurora counted her own pulse against the second hand of a clock that wasn't running and got seventy-two beats of nothing at all." | | 6 | "Aurora caught her wrist — her own crescent scar white against Eva's dark skin — and Eva blinked at her own hand as though it had moved without her." |
| |
| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.206 | | leniency | 0.412 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |