Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRC463MG66X7FYYP9MG663

Run Details

Duration:
57.9s
Cost:
$0.080620
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain had been falling for six hours and Quinn had been watching the green neon for five of them, long enough that the letters had burned themselves onto the back of her eyes. THE RAVEN'S NEST. The V flickered on a bad ballast, off-beat, like a pulse skipping. She sat in the doorway of a shuttered print shop across Meard Street with her collar up and her hands in her pockets and water finding the gap between her boot and her sock, and she did not move, because eighteen years had taught her that the moment you shift your weight is the moment the door opens. The door opened. Tomás Herrera came out of the bar sideways, the way men come out when they're watching the room behind them. Black jacket, dark curls flattened by the rain in the first two seconds, a canvas satchel held against his ribs like a wound he was keeping pressure on. He didn't look left. He didn't look right. He turned north and walked fast, and Quinn gave him nine seconds and then peeled out of the doorway after him. She knew Herrera the way she knew a rash. Twenty-nine, Seville-born, struck off the paramedic register two years ago for administering treatments that existed on no formulary in Europe. Interviewed twice. Charged never. Both times he had sat across from her with those warm brown eyes and a hand at his throat, fingers worrying a Saint Christopher medal, and told her polite, complete, useless lies. Patron saint of travellers. She'd looked it up. Wardour Street. He crossed against the light and a black cab laid on the horn and he didn't flinch, which meant he was listening for footsteps and not traffic. Quinn dropped back, put a bus between them, let the crowd outside a karaoke place swallow her outline. Her watch strap had gone soft and dark with rain against her wrist. Twenty past midnight. Somewhere above the sodium haze there was a full moon, and she had reason now — she hated that she had reason — to care about that. He broke into a run at Oxford Street. That was fine. She'd been waiting for it since the doorway. She went after him and the city came apart into wet noise: the slap of her soles, a nightbus sighing at its stop, somebody shouting *oi* as Herrera clipped their shoulder, the rain hissing on the road like fat in a pan. He was quick and he was young and he had eleven years on her, but he ran like a man who'd never had to catch anything, all sprint, no economy. She ran the way she'd been taught at Hendon and never unlearned: chin down, arms tight, breathing in fours. "Herrera!" She didn't expect it to stop him. It never stopped them. But it made them look, and looking cost. He looked. He lost half a stride. Then he went down the steps of Tottenham Court Road station three at a time. Quinn hit the steps eight seconds behind and shouldered through the last dregs of the Friday crowd, and the station's warm dead breath came up at her, that smell of brake dust and wet wool. She saw the satchel go over the barrier. Then Herrera went after it, vaulting, and a station assistant in orange high-vis shouted something and Quinn had her warrant card out and up and was over the gate herself before she'd finished the sentence, "Police — get control, get your supervisor —" Escalator. He was running down the left and people were flattening against the right and she was gaining, actually gaining, close enough to hear his breath tearing. Northern line, southbound platform. The train was in. The doors were doing their two-note complaint. Herrera threw himself sideways through the closing gap of the second carriage and turned to face her through the glass and Quinn made the last four metres and got her hand into the door of the third and the rubber bit her fingers and then relented. Then she was inside, in the too-bright light, dripping on the floor of a carriage full of people who had decided very carefully to look at nothing. Through two sets of glass at the end of the car, Herrera stood with his back against the pole, chest heaving, watching her. He didn't try to move down the train. There was nowhere for either of them to go for four minutes and both of them knew it. He raised one hand — not a wave. Something more like an apology. Quinn didn't move. She kept her eyes on him and let her breathing come back down and used the time. *He's not running home. He's not running to a lawyer.* He'd come out of Silas's bar with a satchel and he was running north on the night of a full moon, and three years of paperwork she'd never filed came together in her chest with an audible click. DS Morris had gone north on a full moon too. In February, in the rain, in a coat she'd later carried out of a mortuary in a paper sack. In the left pocket of that coat there'd been a thing she'd told the coroner's officer was a button. Goodge Street. Warren Street. Euston, and the carriage emptied and filled. Mornington Crescent went by dark, and then the platform lights came up and it was Camden Town, and Herrera was out of the doors before they'd fully opened. Up the tunnel, up the stairs. He didn't go for the street exit. He went left, through a gap in the tiling where a temporary hoarding said STATION IMPROVEMENT WORKS in cheerful blue, and the hoarding swung on a hinge somebody had fitted by hand, and Quinn arrived at it with her lungs burning and one arm braced on the wall. Beyond it: a passage. Old tile, cream and oxblood, a colour scheme retired before her mother was born. Cable trays sagging off the walls. A wooden staircase going down, disappearing after a dozen steps into a light that was not electric. It was warmer than electric. It moved. She could hear things. That was the part that got into her spine. Not machinery — voices. Dozens of them, layered and low, and under them a sound like glass beads being poured from hand to hand, and something that might have been an animal or might have been someone singing very quietly, very far off, in a language with too many vowels. She stood at the top of the stairs with the rain still running out of her hair and did the arithmetic. No signal down there; she'd bet her pension on it. No support. No plan of the structure, no second exit she knew about, no idea what was at the bottom other than the fact that a struck-off paramedic had run into it rather than face an interview under caution. Everything she had ever been taught said: mark the location, back out, call it in, get bodies and lights and a proper cordon and take the place apart at eight in the morning. And by eight in the morning it wouldn't be there. She knew that. She didn't know how she knew it, and that was the whole problem, that was the thing that had been eating her from the inside out for three years — the way she kept knowing things she hadn't been told. Quinn reached into her inside pocket and took out the evidence bag she hadn't logged. It had gone yellow at the seal. Inside it, the button that wasn't a button: a flat oval of something ivory-pale, drilled once, incised with a mark like a bird's footprint. Bone. She'd known it was bone the first time she'd held it through the plastic. Morris's, out of Morris's coat, and Morris had gone north on a full moon and come back on a trolley and nobody in eighteen years of decorated service had ever given her a reason that made sense. Down the stairs, somebody laughed. It was a perfectly ordinary laugh. That was almost the worst of it. She tore the bag open and let it fall, and the token was cold in her palm and then, disconcertingly, wasn't. "Right," Quinn said, to nobody, to the tiles, to Morris. "Right." She went down.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:45:28.011Z" 7/25/2026, 1:45:28 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.05% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
71.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1393
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"electric"
count2
6
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"charged"
4"footsteps"
5"electric"
6"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords11
totalWords1399
ratio0.008
matches
0"oi"
1"He's not running home. He's not running to a lawyer."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1388
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Morris"
discoveredNames
Quinn10
Meard1
Street5
Herrera7
Seville-born1
Europe1
Saint1
Christopher1
Oxford1
Hendon1
Tottenham1
Court1
Road1
Friday1
Escalator1
Silas1
Morris5
February1
Crescent1
Camden1
Town1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Herrera"
2"Saint"
3"Christopher"
4"Silas"
5"Morris"
places
0"Meard"
1"Street"
2"Seville-born"
3"Europe"
4"Oxford"
5"Hendon"
6"Tottenham"
7"Court"
8"Road"
9"February"
10"Crescent"
11"Camden"
12"Town"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1399
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean49.96
std32.61
cv0.653
sampleLengths
0107
13
277
373
490
58
6102
720
822
986
1088
1176
1213
1368
1448
1539
1661
1748
1863
1921
2082
2153
2215
2383
2418
2521
2611
273
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences94
matches
0"been taught"
1"being poured"
2"been taught"
3"been told"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was keeping"
1"was listening"
2"was running"
3"were flattening"
4"was gaining"
5"were doing"
6"was running"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences95
ratio0.053
matches
0"Somewhere above the sodium haze there was a full moon, and she had reason now — she hated that she had reason — to care about that."
1"He raised one hand — not a wave."
2"Not machinery — voices."
3"No signal down there; she'd bet her pension on it."
4"She didn't know how she knew it, and that was the whole problem, that was the thing that had been eating her from the inside out for three years — the way she kept knowing things she hadn't been told."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount581
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"polite, complete, useless lies."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.01721170395869191
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean14.73
std13.55
cv0.92
sampleLengths
034
13
212
358
43
520
628
74
84
921
109
1120
122
132
1432
154
164
172
1827
1918
2013
213
2227
238
243
258
2642
2730
2819
298
304
318
322
335
3415
3535
368
3743
381
3926
404
414
427
4346
4427
4523
468
4718
488
495
63.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.47368421052631576
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences84
matches
0"Somewhere above the sodium haze"
1"Then he went down the"
2"Then Herrera went after it,"
3"Then she was inside, in"
ratio0.048
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences84
matches
0"She sat in the doorway"
1"He didn't look left."
2"He didn't look right."
3"He turned north and walked"
4"She knew Herrera the way"
5"She'd looked it up."
6"He crossed against the light"
7"Her watch strap had gone"
8"He broke into a run"
9"She'd been waiting for it"
10"She went after him and"
11"He was quick and he"
12"She ran the way she'd"
13"She didn't expect it to"
14"It never stopped them."
15"He lost half a stride."
16"She saw the satchel go"
17"He was running down the"
18"He didn't try to move"
19"He raised one hand —"
ratio0.417
90.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences84
matches
0"The rain had been falling"
1"THE RAVEN'S NEST."
2"The V flickered on a"
3"She sat in the doorway"
4"The door opened."
5"Tomás Herrera came out of"
6"He didn't look left."
7"He didn't look right."
8"He turned north and walked"
9"She knew Herrera the way"
10"Both times he had sat"
11"Patron saint of travellers."
12"She'd looked it up."
13"He crossed against the light"
14"Quinn dropped back, put a"
15"Her watch strap had gone"
16"He broke into a run"
17"That was fine."
18"She'd been waiting for it"
19"She went after him and"
ratio0.738
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Twenty-nine, Seville-born, struck off the paramedic register two years ago for administering treatments that existed on no formulary in Europe."
1"He crossed against the light and a black cab laid on the horn and he didn't flinch, which meant he was listening for footsteps and not traffic."
2"He was running down the left and people were flattening against the right and she was gaining, actually gaining, close enough to hear his breath tearing."
3"Then she was inside, in the too-bright light, dripping on the floor of a carriage full of people who had decided very carefully to look at nothing."
4"He went left, through a gap in the tiling where a temporary hoarding said STATION IMPROVEMENT WORKS in cheerful blue, and the hoarding swung on a hinge somebody…"
5"A wooden staircase going down, disappearing after a dozen steps into a light that was not electric."
6"Dozens of them, layered and low, and under them a sound like glass beads being poured from hand to hand, and something that might have been an animal or might h…"
7"She didn't know how she knew it, and that was the whole problem, that was the thing that had been eating her from the inside out for three years — the way she k…"
8"Inside it, the button that wasn't a button: a flat oval of something ivory-pale, drilled once, incised with a mark like a bird's footprint."
9"Morris's, out of Morris's coat, and Morris had gone north on a full moon and come back on a trolley and nobody in eighteen years of decorated service had ever g…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.4126%