Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRDG48GA3D0HTAEVJRKDYP

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51.1s
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$0.073435
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Amazon Bedrock

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt always stuck, so by the time Rory got the door open she'd already lost whatever cool she'd been assembling on the other side of it. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor with rain still beading on the shoulders of his charcoal suit, holding a paper bag from the curry house downstairs like a man delivering a subpoena. The stairwell light buzzed above him, catching the platinum of his hair, throwing one half of his face into shadow so that only the amber eye showed, warm and awful and steady. "You're wet," Rory said. "It's February in London." He tipped his head. "You look well, chérie." "Don't." "Don't what?" "That. The endearment. You only use it when you want something." Something flickered across his mouth — not a smile, the ghost that a smile leaves behind. "That's not true. But I'll grant that it's often true." She didn't move out of the doorway. Behind her, Eva's flat exhaled its usual smell: old paper, cardamom bleeding up through the floorboards, the faint singed-copper tang of whatever ward Eva had chalked on the windowsill before she left for Prague. Ptolemy had already appeared at Rory's ankle, tail up, betraying her utterly. "How did you know I was here?" "You've been staying here for eleven days." He said it the way other people said *the weather's turned*. "You haven't been to your flat above Silas' since the twenty-ninth. Silas is worried, though he'd rather swallow glass than say so. You've been buying tea in bulk from the Bangladeshi grocer on the corner, which suggests you intend to stay a while, and you've stopped taking shifts at the Golden Empress, which suggests Yu-Fei has told you not to. I put it together. It isn't sorcery, Aurora, it's paying attention." "That's the problem with you." She crossed her arms. "You pay attention to everything except the thing in front of you." The amber eye didn't waver. The black one, when he shifted, caught nothing at all — light went into it and simply declined to come back. She'd once told him it was the more honest of the two. He hadn't liked that. "May I come in? The bag is getting soft and I have no intention of eating an entire lamb bhuna alone on your stairs." "You bought me food." "I bought myself food and ordered too much, which is a distinction I'd like to preserve for the sake of my dignity." Rory stepped back. It was a mistake and she knew it was a mistake and she made it anyway, and Lucien came in past her with that particular economy of movement he had, the cane tucked against his forearm so it never quite touched the ground. He set the bag on the one clear inch of the kitchen counter and looked around at the flat — the towers of books, the scrolls unrolled and weighted down with mugs, the string of index cards Eva had pinned along the wall like a washing line of madness. "She's escalating," he observed. "She's *researching*." "Mm. In my experience the two are indistinguishable in her case." He turned. "You're helping." "I'm reading." "You're reading demonology in a flat with three deadbolts and a salt line under the rug you've stepped over twice since I arrived." He leaned the cane against the counter. "Aurora." "Don't say my name like that either." "I've run out of ways to say it that you'll permit." "Then stop saying it." The silence that followed had texture. It filled the room the way water fills a boot — slowly, and then all at once, and then it was in everything. Rory busied her hands with plates. There were only two clean ones and one of them had a chip like a bite taken out of it. She gave him that one out of spite and he accepted it with a courtesy so precise it circled back around to insolence. "You didn't come here about Eva's research," she said. "No." "You didn't come here for the bhuna." "No." He didn't sit. He stood on the other side of the counter with his hands flat on the laminate, and for the first time she noticed that his cuffs weren't quite right — the left one turned back, hastily, the way a man does when he's washed something off his skin in a hurry. "I came because I owe you something, and I have been putting it off for four months, and last night I nearly didn't survive a conversation in Bethnal Green, and it occurred to me on the walk home that I'd very much prefer not to die still owing it." Her stomach dropped through the floor and into the curry house. "What happened in Bethnal Green?" "That's not the debt." "Lucien—" "That's not the *debt*, Rory." He'd used the short name. He almost never did — he liked the whole thing, liked the shape of the vowels, liked stretching it out like a man testing the give in a rope. The short name landed between them like something dropped. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the counter, and Lucien caught him with one hand and set him down on the floor again without ever breaking eye contact, and Rory hated how much she wanted to laugh. "Fine," she said. "Say it." "I lied to you." "You lie to everyone. It's practically a trade licence." "I lied to you about the Southwark job." A muscle moved in his jaw. "I knew what Marchetti wanted from you before I brought you to him. I knew the whole of it. I told myself I'd get you out before it mattered and I told you a version of the truth that was small enough for you to swallow, and then it did matter, and you nearly—" He stopped. He looked, briefly, at her left wrist, at the small crescent scar there, and away again. "You have never once asked me why I didn't come after you when you left that night." "I didn't need to ask. I know why." "Do you." "You had a client." Her voice came out flatter than she meant. "You always have a client. And I was the thing that could wait." "No." The word had an edge she hadn't heard from him before — not the polished blade in the cane but something rougher, something with rust on it. "You were the thing I was afraid of. There's a difference, and I've had four months to learn it, and I resent every hour." The rain picked up against the window. Somewhere below, the curry house extractor fan changed pitch, and the whole building seemed to lean into the sound. Rory set down the chipped plate. Her hands weren't quite steady and she despised them for it. "You don't get to do this," she said quietly. "You don't get to stand in my friend's kitchen, with your cufflinks off and your bad news in your pocket, and be *honest* at me. Do you know how long I waited for that? I sat in that flat above the bar for six weeks with my phone face-up on the table." "I know." "You *knew*?" "Silas told me. Repeatedly. With adjectives." He exhaled, and something in the line of his shoulders gave way, and for one unguarded second he looked thirty-two years old and tired instead of ageless and expensive. "I am half a thing that ruins what it touches, Aurora. My father's realm has a word for people like me — it doesn't translate well, but the nearest is *borrowed*. I have spent my entire life being extremely careful about what I borrow, because I have always intended to give it back." "And?" "And I don't want to give you back." The kettle wasn't on. Rory turned and switched it on anyway, just to have somewhere to put her face, and stood there watching the element flush orange, feeling him behind her, four feet and four months away. "The bhuna's going cold," she said. "Yes." "You should sit down." A pause. Then the drag of a chair on lino, careful, unhurried, a man who understood exactly how much he had just been given and had the sense not to name it out loud. Rory got out a third mug she didn't need, and let herself smile at the wall where he couldn't see it.
created_at"2026-07-25T13:46:13.009Z" 7/25/2026, 1:46:13 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.293
leniency0.586
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.034
89.25% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
89.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"silence"
2"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen73
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords8
totalWords1403
ratio0.006
matches
0"the weather's turned"
1"researching"
2"debt"
3"honest"
4"knew"
5"borrowed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
92.75% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount786
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Moreau1
Eva3
Prague1
Lucien3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.927
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite right — the left one turned back, hastily, the way a man does when he's washed something off his skin in a hurry"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.713
wordCount1403
matches
0"not the polished blade in the cane but something rougher, something with rust on it"
94.98% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"noticed that his"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean23
std27.11
cv1.179
sampleLengths
028
164
24
312
41
52
611
726
853
97
1089
1121
1242
1324
144
1522
163
1792
184
192
2015
212
2231
237
2411
254
2629
2749
289
291
307
31104
3211
335
344
351
365
3743
3838
395
404
419
42103
438
442
4525
4652
4726
4817
4961
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs136
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences93
ratio0.075
matches
0"Something flickered across his mouth — not a smile, the ghost that a smile leaves behind."
1"The black one, when he shifted, caught nothing at all — light went into it and simply declined to come back."
2"He set the bag on the one clear inch of the kitchen counter and looked around at the flat — the towers of books, the scrolls unrolled and weighted down with mugs, the string of index cards Eva had pinned along the wall like a washing line of madness."
3"It filled the room the way water fills a boot — slowly, and then all at once, and then it was in everything."
4"He stood on the other side of the counter with his hands flat on the laminate, and for the first time she noticed that his cuffs weren't quite right — the left one turned back, hastily, the way a man does when he's washed something off his skin in a hurry."
5"He almost never did — he liked the whole thing, liked the shape of the vowels, liked stretching it out like a man testing the give in a rope."
6"\"No.\" The word had an edge she hadn't heard from him before — not the polished blade in the cane but something rougher, something with rust on it."
89.07% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount781
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.052496798975672214
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011523687580025609
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.09
std15.22
cv1.009
sampleLengths
028
132
232
34
48
54
61
72
811
916
1010
117
1234
1312
147
1518
1671
179
1812
195
2021
2112
224
2324
244
2522
263
2743
2849
294
302
3113
322
332
3430
351
367
3711
384
396
4023
416
4220
4323
449
451
467
474
4851
4949
44.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3225806451612903
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences44
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
1"Then the drag of a"
ratio0.045
29.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences44
matches
0"He tipped his head"
1"She didn't move out of"
2"He said it the way"
3"She crossed her arms"
4"She'd once told him it"
5"He hadn't liked that."
6"It was a mistake and"
7"He set the bag on"
8"He leaned the cane against"
9"It filled the room the"
10"She gave him that one"
11"He didn't sit"
12"He stood on the other"
13"Her stomach dropped through the"
14"He'd used the short name."
15"He almost never did —"
16"He looked, briefly, at her"
17"Her voice came out flatter"
18"Her hands weren't quite steady"
19"she said quietly"
ratio0.477
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences44
matches
0"The third deadbolt always stuck,"
1"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
2"The stairwell light buzzed above"
3"He tipped his head"
4"Something flickered across his mouth"
5"She didn't move out of"
6"Ptolemy had already appeared at"
7"He said it the way"
8"She crossed her arms"
9"The amber eye didn't waver."
10"The black one, when he"
11"She'd once told him it"
12"He hadn't liked that."
13"Rory stepped back."
14"It was a mistake and"
15"He set the bag on"
16"He leaned the cane against"
17"The silence that followed had"
18"It filled the room the"
19"Rory busied her hands with"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The stairwell light buzzed above him, catching the platinum of his hair, throwing one half of his face into shadow so that only the amber eye showed, warm and a…"
1"Then the drag of a chair on lino, careful, unhurried, a man who understood exactly how much he had just been given and had the sense not to name it out loud."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.121
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.034
83.0585%