Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRDJMS6M5HBBK6JFP91DDW

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58.4s
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain came in off Wardour Street with her, gusting through the door before she could shoulder it shut, and the green neon threw its sick light across the wet shoulders of her jacket. Rory dumped the empty insulated bag by the coat hooks and shook her hair out like a dog. "Yu-Fei says you owe her for three weeks of prawn crackers," she called down the bar. "Yu-Fei says a lot of things." Silas didn't look up from the glass he was drying. "Towel's under the sink. You're dripping on my floor." "Your floor's been sticky since March." She was halfway to the sink when a voice came out of the crowd at the end of the bar, from a knot of people in good coats who had already pushed two tables together and taken the best lamp. "Aurora?" Nobody called her that. Not for years. She turned with the towel still in her hand. The woman had stood up. Grey suit, the kind with a lining that cost more than the suit, hair cut to the jaw and the colour of nothing in particular. A glass of white wine held by the stem. It took Rory three full seconds, and the recognition came in from the edges — the way the woman stood with her weight all on one hip, the small overlap of her front teeth. "Nia." "Oh my God." Nia set the wine down on somebody else's coaster. "Oh my *God*." They met in the gap between the tables and there was that awful half-second of negotiation, hug or handshake, and they landed on a hug that was mostly shoulders. Nia held her out at arm's length. "You look exactly the same." "You don't." "No." Nia laughed, and there it was, the laugh, unchanged, too loud for the room, a bark that used to get them thrown out of the Woodville at half eleven. "No, I bloody don't." "Your hair was pink." "My hair was pink for two years and I have spent eight years paying for it." She touched the ends of it, self-conscious. "There's a photo of me at the Cathays sit-in that a pupil supervisor found on Facebook. I had to explain a police caution to a man called Rupert." "What did you tell him?" "That it demonstrated commitment to justice." Nia's mouth twitched. "He wrote it down." Rory looked past her at the table. A man in a striped shirt was telling a story with both hands. Someone had ordered a bottle of something with a foil neck. "Chambers do?" "Leaving drinks for a clerk. We had dinner at the Thai place and someone said there was a bar with a green sign." Nia's eyes went up over the walls, over the maps, the brown photographs of men on airfields. "This is a strange place." "It's a good place." "I didn't say it wasn't." She looked back. "What are you doing here? Are you — do you live in London?" "Upstairs." "Upstairs. Of this." "Above the bar. Two rooms and a boiler that screams." Nia's gaze dropped, took in the wet jacket, the bag by the coat hooks with GOLDEN EMPRESS across it in red vinyl, the towel. She was very good, Rory noticed. She did it fast, and she didn't let anything settle on her face. "Right," Nia said. "Say it." "I wasn't going to say anything." "You were going to say something and then you were going to say *sorry, that came out wrong*." Nia laughed again, but shorter this time. "I was going to ask if you finished." "No." "No?" "Third year. Two terms in." Rory folded the towel over her forearm because her hands wanted something. "I went to a tutorial on the doctrine of precedent and I walked out at the interval and got a coffee and then I got on a train." "To where?" "Anywhere. Newport, first. Which is not anywhere, it's Newport." She shrugged. "Then here." "Your dad must have —" "He sent me an email with the subject line *Options*. Bullet points. Alignment." "That's very Brendan." "It was thorough." Rory turned to the bar. "Si, can I get a lime and soda. And whatever she's drinking, on my tab." "You don't have a tab," Silas said. "I have a rich verbal history of a tab." He poured the soda anyway and put the lime on the rim like it mattered, and set a fresh glass of the white in front of Nia without being asked, and moved away down the bar to a couple who wanted the food menu. Nia watched him go. "He looks after you." "He looks after everyone. It's a condition." They took two stools at the corner where the bar bent. Nia crossed her ankles, and her shoes were the sort with a red sole, and she kept them tucked under the rail as if she'd rather Rory hadn't seen. "So you're a — " Nia gestured, minutely, at the delivery bag. "Part-time. Four evenings and Sundays. I know every one-way system between here and Camden." "And the rest of it?" "The rest of it is my business." "Fair." Nia drank. "God, you were always like that. Nobody ever knew where you'd been." "I was nineteen and I was in the library." "You were not in the library." "I was in the library ninety per cent of the time, Nia, that was the problem. The ten per cent got the press coverage." Rory pushed the lime under with her straw. "Are you married?" Nia turned the ring with her thumb. "Two years. Ffion. She's a paediatric registrar, she works nights, we communicate by post-it." "That's —" Rory stopped, and started again, quieter. "That's really good. I'm glad." "You'd like her. She thinks I'm a sell-out." "You are a sell-out." "I do housing. Possession lists. I stand in a corridor in Bromley every Tuesday and I tell people whose landlord has done everything right that they have to leave in fourteen days." She said it flat, the way you'd read a bus timetable. "So I'm a sell-out with a conscience, which is worse, because it means I've thought about it." The rain came harder against the window. Somebody at the long table shouted about a taxi. "You didn't call," Rory said. Nia stopped with the glass halfway. "After. When I left." Rory kept her eyes on the maps, on a coastline she couldn't place. "Eva called. Two girls from the netball team I'd never spoken to properly called. Not you." "I know." "That's it? You know?" "I wrote to you." Nia set the glass down carefully, as if it were somebody else's. "Not an email. An actual letter, six pages, I did it in the union bar and I bought a stamp and then I put it in my coat pocket and I carried it around until the ink went and then I put it in a box." She turned her head. "It's still in the box. It's in a flat in Herne Hill in a box marked *uni*." "Why didn't you send it?" "Because the first two pages were about how sorry I was and the other four were about me." Rory said nothing. Under the bar, without meaning to, her thumb found the small crescent on her left wrist and pressed it, the way she had since she was nine years old. "I saw it, Rory," Nia said. "Evan. The way he stood in your kitchen. I saw it about eight months before you left and I told myself it wasn't my business, and I said something once — do you remember — I said *he's a lot*, and you said *he's fine*, and I let you say it, because it was easier to be let off." "You were twenty-one." "So were you." "I was there. It's different when you're the one in the room." "That's not absolution," Nia said. "That's just geography."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nia gestured minutely [minutely]"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.28
leniency0.561
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.024
84.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"really"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1317
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords13
totalWords1323
ratio0.01
matches
0"God"
1"sorry, that came out wrong"
2"Options"
3"uni"
4"he's a lot"
5"he's fine"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount615
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.93
worstName"Nia"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Nia"
discoveredNames
Wardour1
Street1
Silas2
Rory11
Woodville1
Nia18
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Nia"
places
0"Wardour"
1"Street"
globalScore0.037
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences35
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1323
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"lining that cost"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean17.64
std18.62
cv1.055
sampleLengths
051
116
225
36
440
51
616
773
81
915
1029
1112
122
1334
144
1551
165
1713
1831
192
2045
214
2221
231
243
2510
2643
273
282
296
3018
3115
321
331
3445
352
3613
375
3813
393
4023
417
429
4348
444
457
4640
4712
4814
495
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"being asked"
67.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was drying"
1"was telling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences111
ratio0.009
matches
0"It took Rory three full seconds, and the recognition came in from the edges — the way the woman stood with her weight all on one hip, the small overlap of her front teeth."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount627
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.019138755980861243
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.003189792663476874
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.92
std11.5
cv0.965
sampleLengths
033
118
216
316
49
56
640
71
84
93
109
115
1225
139
1434
151
1612
173
1829
197
205
212
2230
234
244
2523
2628
275
289
294
307
3113
3211
332
3440
355
364
378
3813
391
403
4110
4224
436
4413
453
462
476
4818
497
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences45
matches
0"she called down the bar"
1"She was halfway to the"
2"She turned with the towel"
3"It took Rory three full"
4"They met in the gap"
5"She touched the ends of"
6"She looked back"
7"She was very good, Rory"
8"She did it fast, and"
9"He poured the soda anyway"
10"They took two stools at"
11"She said it flat, the"
12"She turned her head"
ratio0.289
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"Rain came in off Wardour"
1"Rory dumped the empty insulated"
2"she called down the bar"
3"Silas didn't look up from"
4"She was halfway to the"
5"Nobody called her that."
6"She turned with the towel"
7"The woman had stood up."
8"A glass of white wine"
9"It took Rory three full"
10"Nia set the wine down"
11"They met in the gap"
12"Nia held her out at"
13"Nia laughed, and there it"
14"She touched the ends of"
15"Nia's mouth twitched"
16"Rory looked past her at"
17"A man in a striped"
18"Someone had ordered a bottle"
19"Nia's eyes went up over"
ratio0.933
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"They met in the gap between the tables and there was that awful half-second of negotiation, hug or handshake, and they landed on a hug that was mostly shoulders…"
1"He poured the soda anyway and put the lime on the rim like it mattered, and set a fresh glass of the white in front of Nia without being asked, and moved away d…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nia set, as if it were somebody else's"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nia laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences82
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.171
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.024
81.8334%