Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCRFJ5AV9256KP279VNTXXY

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58.2s
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$0.089415
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon buzzed like a trapped wasp, and Rory came down the back stairs into it with her hair still damp, three quid in her pocket and a hunger for chips she had no intention of satisfying. Wednesday. The Nest held six people and a smell of wet wool. Silas stood at the taps with a cloth in one hand and a glass in the other, working them together the way other men worked worry beads. "Someone's been asking after you," he said, without looking up. "Asking how?" "By name. Both of them." He tipped his chin toward the far end, past the framed map of the Danube with the pin holes in it. "Sat down at half five and hasn't touched the second one." The woman on the last stool had her back to the room. Camel coat folded over her knees like something she'd been asked to mind. Blonde gone honey-dark at the roots, cut blunt at the jaw. She turned, and Rory's stomach dropped through the floorboards and into the cellar. "There she is," Delyth said. "Aurora bloody Carter." "Del." "I nearly walked past. I thought, no, that's not her, she'd never live above a pub." Delyth stood, then didn't seem to know what to do with her arms, so she put one around Rory's shoulders and squeezed like she was testing fruit. She smelled of something expensive and clean. "You're thinner." "You're a blonde." "I was a blonde. I'm a woman with a bad hairdresser in Pontcanna." She sat back down and pushed the untouched gin along the bar. "That's yours if you want it. I ordered it out of habit and then remembered." "Remembered what?" Delyth put her hand flat on her stomach, under the swell of a jumper Rory had taken for a jumper. "Nineteen weeks." Rory looked at the hand. The ring on it. Two rings. "Right," she said. "That's it? Right?" "Congratulations." She pulled out the stool and sat, and the gin stayed where it was, between them, sweating. "Who is he?" "Owen. Owen Hughes. He does something with wind farms that I've stopped pretending to understand." Delyth's mouth twisted. "You met him. At Jules' thing. He had a shaved head and a bad shirt." "I don't remember Jules' thing." "No," Delyth said. "You wouldn't." Silas set a glass of tap water down at Rory's elbow without a word and moved off to the other end of the bar, where he became a man very interested in a broken till. Rory drank half of it. The room's low light did something kind to Delyth's face and something less kind to the silence. "I'm here for a conference," Delyth said. "Employment law. Three days of men in Farah trousers explaining tribunals to me. I walked out of the hotel and I thought, I'll get lost in Soho, that's a thing people do. And then I saw the sign. Green. Like a chemist's." "And you asked for me by name." "I asked the bloke if a Welsh girl lived upstairs. He said no. Then he said, an Irish-Welsh girl, maybe." She smiled at the bar. "That's very Rory, that. Splitting the difference so nobody can hold you to it." "He's careful." "He's a doorman with a signet ring." Delyth traced the rim of the gin she wasn't drinking. "You went dark. Your hair, I mean. And everything else. Six years, Aurora. I sent letters to your mam's." "She gave them to me." "You didn't open them." "I opened them." Delyth waited. "I opened them and I put them in the drawer with the bank stuff," Rory said. "That's not the same as reading them, I know. Don't look at me like a jury." "I don't have a jury face." "You've had a jury face since second year." That got a laugh out of Delyth, short and unwilling, and for a second she was twenty and standing on a table in the Woodville with somebody's tie round her head. Then the laugh went out of her the way a match goes out and she was a solicitor from Pontcanna with a mortgage and nineteen weeks. "I made partner," she said. "Junior partner. There's a photograph of me on a wall in Cathedral Road with my chin up like a bloody figurehead." "You wanted that." "I wanted to be Erin Brockovich. I settle car park disputes for a supermarket chain." Delyth turned on the stool to face her properly. "What do you do?" "Deliveries." "Deliveries." "Chinese food. Golden Empress, Gerrard Street. Yu-Fei pays cash and doesn't mind if I'm late." Rory kept her voice flat and let it sit there in the open, a small ugly object on the bar between them. "Evenings mostly. Bike's out back with a milk crate zip-tied to it." Delyth's throat moved. "You were top of the year." "I was second." "You were top of the year and you sat in the Aberdare with a highlighter and told me the whole of Donoghue v Stevenson from memory to win a pint." "And I lost the pint because I got the year wrong." "1932." "1932." Rory smiled at the water glass. "There you go." "Don't do that." Delyth's voice came out sharper than the room, and two of the six people looked over. She dropped it. "Don't be charming at me. I've come a hundred and fifty miles to sit in a bar that smells like a coat, and you're being charming at me." "What do you want, Del?" "I want to know why you didn't ring me." "You know why." "I don't." "You do." Rory turned her water glass a quarter turn on the wood. "August. The garden at Fiona's. You had a bottle of white in your hand and I told you what he did to my arm and you said—" "Don't." "You said, everyone rows." Delyth looked at the taps. The neon lay green along the side of her face and made her look drowned. "I know what I said." "You said it kindly," Rory said. "That's the part I couldn't get past. You said it like you were doing me a favour. Like I'd embarrassed myself and you were helping me tidy it up." "I was twenty-three." "So was I." "I've thought about it—" Delyth stopped and started again, lower. "There's a version of that night where I put the bottle down. I've had it in my head for six years. I put the bottle down and I say, right, we're going, get your bag. And you're a solicitor now and I'm the one on a bike." "That's not how it went." "No." Delyth pressed her thumb hard into the base of her own palm. "You went to London and Eva found you a room and nobody told me where. Your mam wouldn't say. I stood in her kitchen and she gave me a Welsh cake and she wouldn't say." "I asked her not to." "I know." "It wasn't punishment." "It felt like one." Delyth's eyes were wet and she didn't wipe them, which was new; the old Delyth would have made a production of it, would have got everyone in the bar involved. "I'd have taken punishment. Punishment's a conversation." Rory pushed her sleeve up without deciding to. The crescent on her left wrist, white as a nail paring, older than either of them — the coal bunker, age seven, her mother's scream from the back step. "That's the wrong one," Delyth said. "I know which one it is." "I meant—" "I know what you meant." Silas came past with a crate of empties, his weight going down and up on the bad knee, and set two clean glasses in front of them without asking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Delyth stood then [then]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.289
leniency0.578
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.024
92.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
80.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1288
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1289
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions25
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount600
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.17
worstName"Delyth"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Delyth"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Nest1
Danube1
Delyth19
Silas3
Woodville1
Pontcanna1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nest"
2"Delyth"
3"Silas"
places
0"Danube"
1"Woodville"
2"Pontcanna"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1289
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean18.15
std19.33
cv1.065
sampleLengths
077
110
22
337
449
58
61
752
83
940
102
1122
1211
133
143
1521
1633
175
185
1957
2049
217
2239
232
2436
255
264
273
282
2932
306
318
3257
3326
343
3528
361
371
3849
399
403
4130
4211
431
4410
4550
465
479
483
492
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"been asked"
62.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs97
matches
0"was testing"
1"wasn't drinking"
90.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences109
ratio0.018
matches
0"\"It felt like one.\" Delyth's eyes were wet and she didn't wipe them, which was new; the old Delyth would have made a production of it, would have got everyone in the bar involved."
1"The crescent on her left wrist, white as a nail paring, older than either of them — the coal bunker, age seven, her mother's scream from the back step."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount600
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.015
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033333333333333335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.83
std11.26
cv0.952
sampleLengths
038
11
211
327
410
52
626
711
812
913
1011
1113
125
133
141
1543
167
172
183
1925
2015
212
2220
232
245
254
262
273
283
2918
303
3118
3215
335
343
352
3635
375
3817
397
4042
417
4225
4314
442
4517
4619
475
484
493
53.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3611111111111111
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners39
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences39
matches
0"Then the laugh went out"
ratio0.026
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences39
matches
0"he said, without looking up"
1"He tipped his chin toward"
2"She turned, and Rory's stomach"
3"She smelled of something expensive"
4"She sat back down and"
5"She pulled out the stool"
6"She smiled at the bar"
7"She dropped it."
ratio0.205
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount38
totalSentences39
matches
0"The green neon buzzed like"
1"The Nest held six people"
2"Silas stood at the taps"
3"he said, without looking up"
4"He tipped his chin toward"
5"The woman on the last"
6"Camel coat folded over her"
7"Blonde gone honey-dark at the"
8"She turned, and Rory's stomach"
9"Delyth stood, then didn't seem"
10"She smelled of something expensive"
11"She sat back down and"
12"Delyth put her hand flat"
13"Rory looked at the hand."
14"The ring on it."
15"She pulled out the stool"
16"Delyth's mouth twisted"
17"Silas set a glass of"
18"Rory drank half of it."
19"The room's low light did"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas came past with a crate of empties, his weight going down and up on the bad knee, and set two clean glasses in front of them without asking."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, without looking up"
1"She pulled out, and the gin stayed where it was, between them, sweating"
2"Delyth stopped, lower"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Delyth pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.241
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.024
83.5558%