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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck, the way it always did, and I shouldered the door open with a curse already in my mouth. Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's landing with rain in his hair. Not the slicked-back platinum I remembered. Wet, loose, a strand of it stuck to his temple like something the storm had signed its name with. Charcoal suit soaked through at the shoulders. Ivory cane hooked over one wrist. He looked at me with both eyes, amber and black, and neither of them apologised. "Bonsoir, Aurora." I shut the door. Two deadbolts went home before he spoke again, and the wood muffled him into something almost polite. "You've cut your hair." "You've found my friend's address." "I've always known your friend's address." I pressed my forehead to the door. Downstairs, the curry house was in full cry, cumin and frying onions coming up through the floorboards, the clang of a pan, someone shouting about table six. Ptolemy wound between my ankles and yowled at the letterbox like a traitor. "Go away, Luc." "Nine minutes." His voice stayed level. "Then I walk down those stairs and you never see me again. You may time me." "That's what you said in Southwark." Silence. Rain hammering the stairwell window. I counted my own heartbeat and hated that I could hear it. "Six minutes, then," he said. "I've had to revise the estimate." I opened the door. He came in the way he came into everywhere, as though he'd paid the rent on it, and stopped dead in the middle of Eva's living room because there was nowhere else to stop. Books to the ceiling. Scrolls stacked in a milk crate. Research notes fanned across the sofa like a hand of cards nobody had dared to play. He turned in a slow circle, taking it all in, and I watched his shoulders and waited for the joke. He didn't make one. That was the first thing that scared me. "Sit down," I said. "I'd ruin the upholstery." "That sofa was in a skip on Cheshire Street. Sit down." He sat. The cane went across his knees, and his hands settled over it, and I noticed that his knuckles were white. I stayed standing. The kettle was behind me and the knife block was behind that, and I made no move towards either, because moving would mean choosing, and I hadn't decided yet which one I wanted. "You're wet." "It's raining." "You hate rain." "I hate a great many things I keep company with." He tipped his head towards the window, where Brick Lane ran silver and orange under the streetlamps. "Your wards are excellent, by the way. Whoever laid them knew what they were doing." "Eva." "Eva." He tasted the name. "She hasn't invited me across the threshold." "She's got sense. It's why we're friends." "And yet you have." "I've invited you into her living room. There's a difference." I folded my arms. "Five minutes." Lucien Moreau smiled, and it was the small one, the one that didn't sell anything. That was the second thing that scared me. "Someone bought your name," he said. The onions downstairs hissed. Ptolemy jumped onto the arm of the sofa and Lucien, without looking, ran two fingers down the cat's spine. "Bought," I said. "Paid. In coin that clears. Last night, in a room above a bookmaker's on Green Lanes, a man I have known for eleven years took an envelope and wrote down where you sleep." "Above Silas' bar." "Above Silas' bar." "So I don't sleep there tonight." I shrugged, and the shrug cost me something. "Fine. Thanks. You could have texted." "I did." "I blocked you." "Yes." His thumb moved on the cane's ivory head, back and forth, a habit I had spent six weeks not thinking about. "That was clever of you. Extremely inconvenient." "You said extremely." "I'm tired." "You don't get tired. You get bored, and you sell whoever's nearest." The words came out flatter than I'd rehearsed them, and I'd rehearsed them plenty, in the shower, on my delivery route, at three in the morning with Yu-Fei's cold noodles congealing in my lap. "You told them my name in Southwark, Luc. On the roof. I heard you." "You heard part of it." "I heard you say Aurora Carter to a thing with no face." "I said a name." He looked up. Amber and black, and the amber one caught the lamplight like something poured. "It was not yours." The room went very small. "What?" "Malphora." He said it softly, the way you say a word you don't want the walls to learn. "The thing with no face went hunting a woman called Malphora, in Prague, for three weeks, and came back with nothing, and I have spent every day since paying for that in ways I will not describe to you at eight in the evening in a room that smells of onions." "You lied to a demon." "I brokered." A flicker of the old arrogance, then gone. "There is a difference. The difference is roughly the width of a hair, and I have been standing on it since March." "You let me think-" "You left before I could correct the impression." His hands tightened. "You were on the fire escape in nine seconds. I counted. It was, in its way, magnificent." I sat down. Not next to him. The floor, back against Eva's bookcase, knees up, because my legs had made the decision without consulting me. "Why now," I said. "Because the envelope means the fiction has expired. Because someone in this city has worked out that Malphora and Aurora share more than a rhyme." He leaned forward, and there was rain still running from his hairline down his jaw, and I watched it go and did not offer him a towel, because a towel would have been a whole conversation. "And because I discovered, at some point between then and now, that I am not able to be the man who let it happen. It's very tiresome. I've had it looked at." "Luc." "Aurora." "Don't be charming. Not tonight." "I'm not being charming." He said it almost with irritation. "If I were being charming, you'd have already forgiven me. This is the other thing, and I'm making a mess of it, and I have four minutes." The kitchen clock ticked. The pan downstairs went quiet, which I noticed and didn't understand yet. "You could have written to me," I said. "One line. Anything." "And put your name in ink." He shook his head. "No." "Then you could have come here in March." "Yes." His mouth moved. "That one I have no answer for." I looked at him properly for the first time since the door. At the way he sat, weight all on his left hip. At the cane held not lightly, the way he always held it, but gripped, like a rail on a boat. At the sofa cushion under his right thigh, where the grey had gone dark and glossy and was still spreading. "You're bleeding." "A little." "You're bleeding on Eva's skip sofa." "Then she has lost nothing." He tried to stand and didn't manage it, and I was across the room and on my knees in front of him before I could remember to be angry. His hand caught my wrist. Cold. His thumb landed on the crescent scar there like it had a map. "Aurora." Very quiet. "Listen to me. When I said nine minutes, I did not choose the number for effect." Downstairs, the kitchen radio cut out. The lamp beside the sofa browned, guttered, and died. Every book in the room threw its shadow up the wall and then the shadows went too. Ptolemy's growl came from somewhere near the window, low and inhuman, a sound I'd never heard a cat make. Then the wards hit, all of Eva's careful ink and salt, and the whole flat rang like a struck glass. Something knocked on the door. Politely. Three times.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.284
leniency0.568
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"softly"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1338
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flicker"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen61
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1338
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount807
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Eva4
Silence1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien3
Yu-Fei1
Amber1
Downstairs2
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Amber"
5"Downstairs"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.747
wordCount1338
matches
0"not lightly, the way he always held it, but gripped, like a rail on a boat"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"hated that I"
1"noticed that his"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean16.94
std19.12
cv1.129
sampleLengths
022
111
253
32
44
517
64
75
86
947
103
1122
126
1318
1411
154
1680
1712
184
194
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2236
232
242
253
2642
271
2812
297
304
3116
3223
336
3423
353
3633
373
383
3920
402
413
4229
433
442
4560
465
4712
4824
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was still spreading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount809
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02843016069221261
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004944375772558714
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.54
std10.39
cv0.986
sampleLengths
022
111
26
319
47
56
615
72
84
917
104
115
126
137
1427
1513
163
176
1816
196
201
215
2212
235
246
254
2634
274
286
2916
3020
314
328
334
344
3511
362
3720
383
3933
402
412
423
4327
4415
451
465
477
487
494
63.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.4566929133858268
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners58
52.08% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then the wards hit, all"
ratio0.016
51.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences64
matches
0"He looked at me with"
1"I shut the door."
2"I pressed my forehead to"
3"His voice stayed level"
4"I counted my own heartbeat"
5"I opened the door."
6"He came in the way"
7"He turned in a slow"
8"He didn't make one."
9"I stayed standing."
10"He tipped his head towards"
11"He tasted the name"
12"I folded my arms"
13"I shrugged, and the shrug"
14"His thumb moved on the"
15"He looked up"
16"He said it softly, the"
17"His hands tightened"
18"I sat down."
19"He leaned forward, and there"
ratio0.422
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences64
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck, the"
1"Lucien Moreau stood on Eva's"
2"Charcoal suit soaked through at"
3"Ivory cane hooked over one"
4"He looked at me with"
5"I shut the door."
6"I pressed my forehead to"
7"Downstairs, the curry house was"
8"Ptolemy wound between my ankles"
9"His voice stayed level"
10"I counted my own heartbeat"
11"I opened the door."
12"He came in the way"
13"Books to the ceiling."
14"Scrolls stacked in a milk"
15"He turned in a slow"
16"He didn't make one."
17"That was the first thing"
18"The cane went across his"
19"I stayed standing."
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"The words came out (come out)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.243
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.027
89.1693%